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Vivyanne

Joined December 2013

2017-02-01 21:24 HighTec: top dif fya
2017-02-01 21:25 Log Off Now: yeye
2017-02-01 21:25 HighTec: 00:15:865 (3,1) - idk about this timing gap, i understand that there isnt rly anything playing here
2017-02-01 21:25 HighTec: but leaving out even a chance of a slider to emphasise the flute thing
2017-02-01 21:25 HighTec: makes it feel really empty and kinda suprising as sudden break
2017-02-01 21:25 Log Off Now: doing that would feel strange though because the previous 1/1 sliders are following the bell
2017-02-01 21:26 HighTec: was thinking of perhaps
2017-02-01 21:26 HighTec: a kickslider or 1/2
2017-02-01 21:26 HighTec: having the break in is fine but it still feels kin d a long
2017-02-01 21:26 Log Off Now: ands only following half the flute doesnt make sense to me
2017-02-01 21:26 Log Off Now: i think its ok as it is atm
2017-02-01 21:26 HighTec: uwu
2017-02-01 21:27 HighTec: 00:16:976 (4,1,2,3,4) - where is my big spacing change compared to before since the drums are kicking in ?? ? ?
2017-02-01 21:27 Log Off Now: o
2017-02-01 21:27 Log Off Now: ye
2017-02-01 21:28 Log Off Now: i got told the star looked shit
2017-02-01 21:28 HighTec: ya
2017-02-01 21:28 Log Off Now: and totally forgot spacing is important
2017-02-01 21:28 HighTec: it doesnt look like a star LOL
2017-02-01 21:28 Log Off Now: fixing lmao
2017-02-01 21:28 HighTec: Thanks
2017-02-01 21:28 Log Off Now: fk sake
2017-02-01 21:28 HighTec: kd earned ye bb
2017-02-01 21:28 Log Off Now: ok if anyone calls it a star
2017-02-01 21:28 Log Off Now: its not
2017-02-01 21:28 Log Off Now: from now onm
2017-02-01 21:28 HighTec: g.
2017-02-01 21:28 HighTec: "ye but hitec told me it no look liek star so it no star !"
2017-02-01 21:29 Log Off Now: now it looks like a dumb star
2017-02-01 21:29 Log Off Now: but its ok because its not a star
2017-02-01 21:29 HighTec: lmao
2017-02-01 21:29 Log Off Now: ok i increased the spacing on 4/triple
2017-02-01 21:29 HighTec: yay
2017-02-01 21:30 Log Off Now: ezpz
2017-02-01 21:30 HighTec: 00:29:939 (1) - note feels like its missing emphasis from drum b eat
2017-02-01 21:31 Log Off Now: uh idk what i can rly do about that one without making an ugly overlap on the 3 slider end
2017-02-01 21:31 Log Off Now: nvm i lowered 6
2017-02-01 21:31 Log Off Now: so a bit bigger spacing
2017-02-01 21:31 HighTec: https://gabepower.s-ul.eu/yIPhsmeO quick idea
2017-02-01 21:32 Log Off Now: 00:30:680 (3,1) - that makes the flow into this wonky af tho
2017-02-01 21:32 HighTec: ya i just realised
2017-02-01 21:32 HighTec: fUK
2017-02-01 21:32 HighTec: o welL
2017-02-01 21:32 Log Off Now: i just lowered 6 for a bit more spacing
2017-02-01 21:32 HighTec: ya sounds goo d
2017-02-01 21:33 HighTec: 00:38:828 (1,2) - i think u might wanna increase spacing here as it might be confused with 00:38:087 (4,5) - spacing
2017-02-01 21:33 HighTec: also strong sound thing
2017-02-01 21:33 HighTec: i mean u have that weird bell thing so why not tell the player its shit
2017-02-01 21:33 HighTec: \o
2017-02-01 21:33 HighTec: 00:41:606 (6,2) - fix stack
2017-02-01 21:33 Log Off Now: rofl
2017-02-01 21:33 Log Off Now: oops
2017-02-01 21:33 Log Off Now: ty
2017-02-01 21:34 Log Off Now: 00:39:569 (2) - tbh i think the spacing on here is ok because of how previous 00:37:347 (3,4) - was spaced
2017-02-01 21:34 HighTec: tru
2017-02-01 21:34 Log Off Now: havent had anyone have any reading issues with it yet
2017-02-01 21:34 HighTec: ok then well skip
2017-02-01 21:35 HighTec: 00:48:458 (3,4) - i feel like u couldve done more with vocal here that is on blu tick
2017-02-01 21:35 HighTec: since now ur ignoring vocal chan ge
2017-02-01 21:35 Log Off Now: vocal on blue?
2017-02-01 21:35 HighTec: ya
2017-02-01 21:35 Log Off Now: the main impact of the vocal is on white/red
2017-02-01 21:35 HighTec: i hear be at there
2017-02-01 21:35 HighTec: no lies
2017-02-01 21:36 Log Off Now: oh 3/4
2017-02-01 21:36 Log Off Now: not 2/3
2017-02-01 21:36 Log Off Now: LUL
2017-02-01 21:36 HighTec: d
2017-02-01 21:36 Log Off Now: i was listening at the wrong thing
2017-02-01 21:36 HighTec: ggg
2017-02-01 21:36 Log Off Now: i guess, but i also want to hit the switch on the red tick aswell at least passively
2017-02-01 21:37 HighTec: do what u feel like
2017-02-01 21:37 Log Off Now: think ill leave that one, cus its not super noticeable
2017-02-01 21:37 HighTec: i just thought itd be fun to emphasise the change in vocals ya
2017-02-01 21:37 Log Off Now: yeye i getchu
2017-02-01 21:38 HighTec: 01:06:606 (1,3) - wai t y didnt u stack dis
2017-02-01 21:38 HighTec: is no visible overlap for mi
2017-02-01 21:38 HighTec: so would b better 2 stack imo o
2017-02-01 21:39 Log Off Now: o
2017-02-01 21:39 Log Off Now: i fukd up the stack
2017-02-01 21:39 Log Off Now: xd
2017-02-01 21:39 Log Off Now: fix
2017-02-01 21:39 HighTec: 01:16:421 (2,3,4,5,6) - star pls ok tha nk
2017-02-01 21:39 HighTec: 2 is off for the star ):
2017-02-01 21:39 Log Off Now: breh
2017-02-01 21:39 Log Off Now: its not a star
2017-02-01 21:39 HighTec: LOL
2017-02-01 21:39 Log Off Now: LUL
2017-02-01 21:40 Log Off Now: its two trianglesd
2017-02-01 21:40 Log Off Now: hehe xd
2017-02-01 21:40 HighTec: 01:21:421 (4) - different shape than 01:20:680 (2,3) - but no big change in song :thinking:
2017-02-01 21:40 HighTec: but 2 triangles make hexagon not pentagon z
2017-02-01 21:40 Log Off Now: wait was i consistent in my aesthetics up until that point?
2017-02-01 21:40 HighTec: ya
2017-02-01 21:40 Log Off Now: holy shit
2017-02-01 21:40 HighTec: otherwise i wouldve complained
2017-02-01 21:41 Log Off Now: my subconcious be like woaaaa
2017-02-01 21:41 Log Off Now: i didnt even notice
2017-02-01 21:41 Log Off Now: lmfao
2017-02-01 21:41 HighTec: wooa
2017-02-01 21:42 Log Off Now: ok changed
2017-02-01 21:42 HighTec: meh nothing esle that trigers me
2017-02-01 21:42 HighTec: o wait
2017-02-01 21:42 HighTec: i see the ar now
2017-02-01 21:42 HighTec: T R I G R D
2017-02-01 21:42 Log Off Now: d e n s i t y
2017-02-01 21:42 Log Off Now: this is precious wing v2
2017-02-01 21:42 HighTec: d
2017-02-01 21:42 Log Off Now: but with less triples
2017-02-01 21:43 HighTec: can i just say one thing about the song itself
2017-02-01 21:43 Log Off Now: ye?
2017-02-01 21:43 Log Off Now: apart from boring i already know that one
2017-02-01 21:43 HighTec: there is a reason to where i dont map most anime songs
2017-02-01 21:43 HighTec: :^)
2017-02-01 21:43 Log Off Now: xd
2017-02-01 21:43 Log Off Now: this song is probably the most boring one i've mapped
2017-02-01 21:44 HighTec: how do u even last
2017-02-01 21:44 HighTec: anywyaz want me to post loggo or
2017-02-01 21:44 HighTec: nah
2017-02-01 21:44 Log Off Now: yeye ofc

changes to some patterning and some emphasising things

Dilectus

1,727 posts

Joined April 2014

Dilectus 8 years ago

iPhone 7 wrote:
DavidEd's Hard

00:05:124 (1,2,3) - Bit of an uneven triangle, OCD comes in. Move them a little to make an equilateral triangle? sure

00:06:235 (1) - Regarding that^ maybe if an equilateral triangle was there, this note could be spaced out a little bit farther away from the sliders? i dont on this pattern 01:35:495 (7,8,9,1) - so ill keep consistency. i keep the same spacing to not throw people off rhythm

00:21:976 (3,4,6,7) - Maybe just me again, but this threw me off a little bit. Maybe a bit higher? could you perhaps elaborate as to how it threw you off? (if you read this that is)

00:47:532 (10,1) - Looks ugly. New combo instead of that color changing? i have to keep nc consistent unfortunally

Thank you

@iphone apparently widescreen was off when i updated to i think lon fixed that for me. you sneaky, gurl

fixes

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Garven

osu! Alumni

5,857 posts

Joined January 2010

Garven 8 years ago

Did some IRC modding on the Normal and Insane.

Quick summary: Combo colors were blendy against the video, slider style usage is really inconsistent (linear vs. curved), patterns are forgettable, spacing is inconsistent in the highest diff and doesn't really represent the music well.

Good luck!

Melter

534 posts

Joined October 2014

Melter 8 years ago

SrSkyPlayer wrote:
General
fine

frost's Insane
disable widescreen support wowo
00:11:050 (2) - I don't know what are you trying to emphasize here but it's kinda out of place, I mean it's not covering anything here and if you were trying to follow that flute sound you did it wrong. You can replace that for 2 1/2 circles without any problems tho was not trying to emphasize the flute, the background rhythm was composed similar to 00:05:124 (1,2,3) -
01:04:384 (3) - it somehow doesn't make the next slider 01:04:754 (1) - very clickable, should be because you did that reverse slider one tick more than enough, trying to make it finishes here 01:04:569 - would be fine i see!

Really cool set, good luck~

Frost's Insane
00:38:828 (1,2) - Slider hidden, threw me off a lil bit. Move it to the left a tad bit so it doesn't mistake for a single note? nah its good
00:40:217 (5,1) - Oddly placed note on slider. Switch to the opposite side or somewhere on the other side but closer maybe? nah its good not everything has to be normal

01:04:013 (1,2,3) - ODC kicked in with the slider not leading into a straight line. i like it better tilted
01:22:902 (4,1) - Kinda far spacing for this sort of difficulty, no? i usually put object on downbeats far away from previous objects, ive done it for most objects in kiai that consist of intense/new lyrics

diff: http://puu.sh/tL0jM/c90be5044f.osu

Starset

652 posts

Joined April 2015

Starset 8 years ago

cringy mod on a cringy song of a cringy mapper

[Winter Jake]
-00:07:532 (1) - id convert to circles
-00:08:458 (4) - why u make the vocals unclickable now skrub? if u ever choose to make a 1/1 slider it should be here 00:09:939 - instead of that non-sense repeat slider
-00:14:384 (4) - NO, no no no no, i hate this slider shape, its sotarks' trademark aaaaaa it looks untidy and bad with that transition after
-00:18:087 (1) - u are not sotarks just stack the damn thing on 00:17:161 (1) -
-00:20:865 (6) - dem overlaps kill meeeeeeeeeeee
-00:23:828 (5) - eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
-00:28:458 (1,3) - in the end, u are not better then him... http://puu.sh/tLcpK/e585382479.jpg
-00:30:680 (3) - eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
-00:35:680 (4) - wtf stack it S T A C K I T
-00:41:791 (1) - id make this rythme http://puu.sh/tLcDA/8aac387176.jpg
-00:44:569 (5) - no no no u cant make a big downbeat like that unclickable jake. just convert the damn thing in circles
-00:50:495 (1) - NO
-00:58:643 - id make triplet here
-01:00:309 (2) - #sotarks
-01:12:161 (4) - sssssssssssssssssssstack
-01:19:939 (4,5) - u following vocals so ctrl+g for rythm skrub
-01:30:680 (1) - the tail should be clickable

[Insane Jake]
-00:05:124 (1,3) - no need for claps
-00:11:050 (2) - nothing is on 1/6 u fgt, its all on 1/2 both melody and flute
-00:09:939 (3,1) - i dont get why put anchor when curve isnt noticable
-00:35:495 (3) - this overmap
-00:39:291 (2) - are u skystar? why overmapping dude
-00:45:124 (2) - more shap pls like this http://puu.sh/tLdEB/8b290281a2.jpg
-00:47:717 (1,4) - parallel when http://puu.sh/tLdGE/ef0a4f0edb.jpg
-00:57:717 (1) - curve the last part like this http://puu.sh/tLdcK/23c5c4179d.jpg
-01:11:235 (1) - 01:11:791 (2) - 01:12:902 (1) - 01:12:532 (5) - curve more or just remove anchor
-01:36:235 (4,5) - 1/3

[Hard Jake]
pls just combo every big downbeat i dont wanna see 13 combo lol
-00:21:976 (3) - feels overmapped
-00:27:902 (3) - ^
-00:31:606 (5) - ^
-01:06:050 (2,3) - no need to increase spacing for those

cringe cringe cringe

Dilectus

1,727 posts

Joined April 2014

Dilectus 8 years ago

HB24 wrote:
[Hard Jake]
pls just combo every big downbeat i dont wanna see 13 combo lol yup
-00:21:976 (3) - feels overmapped if i find a way to replace it with something better, i will. its decent atm
-00:27:902 (3) - ^ ^
-00:31:606 (5) - ^ ^
-01:06:050 (2,3) - no need to increase spacing for those true

i seriously cringed so hard at this mod. so cringe...

thanks!

fixes

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: privatesky.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 66976
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 6235,18087,35865,40124,41791,59569,62532,65124,66976,98272,98365,98458,100680,105495
DistanceSpacing: 1.8
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.6

[Metadata]
Title:PrivateSky
TitleUnicode:PrivateSky
Artist:Hoshizaki Iria
ArtistUnicode:星咲 イリア
Creator:Log Off Now
Version:DavidEd's Hard
Source:この大空に、翼をひろげて SNOW PRESENTS
Tags:if my heart had wings Kono Oozora ni Tsubasa wo Hirogete pulltop eroge visual novel expansion opening short version davided frostwich
BeatmapID:1188944
BeatmapSetID:558107

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.25
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
Video,0,"SnowPresent.avi"
0,0,"privateskybg.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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116,268,79384,2,0,L|44:252,1,62.5,10|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,168,79754,1,2,0:0:0:0:
252,180,79939,6,0,P|313:180|368:152,1,125,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,88,80495,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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376,332,81050,2,0,L|358:272,1,62.5,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,124,81421,2,0,L|284:141,1,62.5,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,240,81791,6,0,P|140:188|140:108,1,125,10|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
220,68,82347,2,0,L|279:50,1,62.5,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,24,82717,1,10,0:0:0:0:
472,140,82902,1,2,1:2:0:0:
472,140,83087,6,0,P|428:168|348:172,1,125,10|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,152,83643,2,0,L|201:170,1,62.5,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,244,84013,1,10,0:0:0:0:
64,172,84198,1,2,1:2:0:0:
132,100,84384,1,10,0:0:0:0:
200,170,84569,1,2,0:0:0:0:
300,284,84754,6,0,P|360:308|424:288,1,125,14|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
492,228,85309,1,10,0:0:0:0:
492,228,85495,2,0,L|484:160,1,62.5,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,116,85865,2,0,L|392:184,1,62.5,0|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,220,86235,6,0,L|160:128,1,125,2|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
96,52,86791,1,8,0:0:0:0:
64,148,86976,1,10,0:0:0:0:
161,129,87161,1,2,0:0:0:0:
200,36,87347,1,2,1:2:0:0:
300,20,87532,1,2,0:0:0:0:
428,100,87717,6,0,P|448:156|440:232,1,125,10|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
376,292,88272,1,10,0:0:0:0:
376,292,88458,2,0,L|300:296,1,62.5,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,300,88828,1,0,1:0:0:0:
256,208,89013,1,8,0:0:0:0:
140,44,89384,5,8,0:0:0:0:
140,44,89569,2,0,L|112:104,1,62.5,12|8,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
44,172,89939,2,0,L|-12:176,2,31.25,8|0|4,0:3|0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
116,240,90309,1,4,0:3:0:0:
184,168,90495,1,2,0:0:0:0:
316,240,90680,5,14,0:0:0:0:
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212,100,91976,6,0,L|140:92,1,62.5,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,168,92347,2,0,L|32:160,1,62.5,10|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
56,248,92717,1,10,0:0:0:0:
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256,64,94198,1,10,0:0:0:0:
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400,84,94754,1,0,1:0:0:0:
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408,308,95309,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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212,116,100495,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,244,100680,1,12,0:0:0:0:
256,192,100865,12,0,105495,0:0:0:0:

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HB24 wrote:
cringy mod on a cringy song of a cringy mapper

[Winter Jake]
-00:07:532 (1) - id convert to circles would be inconsistent with previous pattern
-00:08:458 (4) - why u make the vocals unclickable now skrub? if u ever choose to make a 1/1 slider it should be here 00:09:939 - instead of that non-sense repeat slider the bell
-00:14:384 (4) - NO, no no no no, i hate this slider shape, its sotarks' trademark aaaaaa it looks untidy and bad with that transition after lol i think its ok
-00:18:087 (1) - u are not sotarks just stack the damn thing on 00:17:161 (1) - but then i lose blanket
-00:20:865 (6) - dem overlaps kill meeeeeeeeeeee
-00:23:828 (5) - eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
-00:28:458 (1,3) - in the end, u are not better then him... http://puu.sh/tLcpK/e585382479.jpg ok ok ok ok ok relax breh
-00:30:680 (3) - eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
-00:35:680 (4) - wtf stack it S T A C K I T
-00:41:791 (1) - id make this rythme http://puu.sh/tLcDA/8aac387176.jpg maybe if more people suggest, i think its ok atm
-00:44:569 (5) - no no no u cant make a big downbeat like that unclickable jake. just convert the damn thing in circles following vocals, and is consistent with the echo i follow in the bar after
-00:50:495 (1) - NO yes
-00:58:643 - id make triplet here theres nothing to make a triplet for tho
-01:00:309 (2) - #sotarks breh this slider look ok :thinking:
-01:12:161 (4) - sssssssssssssssssssstack
-01:19:939 (4,5) - u following vocals so ctrl+g for rythm skrub ye
-01:30:680 (1) - the tail should be clickable i think its ok, it follows the extended vocal

cringe cringe cringe

this mod

cringe

i left all the overlaps because they dont look shit and make it easier to read whats next
thanks xd

Melter

534 posts

Joined October 2014

Melter 8 years ago

HB24 wrote:
cringy mod on a cringy song of a cringy mapper

[Insane Jake]
-00:05:124 (1,3) - no need for claps it sounds cool
-00:11:050 (2) - nothing is on 1/6 u fgt, its all on 1/2 both melody and flute im 99% sure melody 1/3 but if i get more mods about it will chane
-00:09:939 (3,1) - i dont get why put anchor when curve isnt noticable my mapping style noob
-00:35:495 (3) - this overmap no its not theres a guitar scratch there
-00:39:291 (2) - are u skystar? why overmapping dude theres sounds all on those ticks which are mappable but eh
-00:45:124 (2) - more shap pls like this http://puu.sh/tLdEB/8b290281a2.jpg no
-00:47:717 (1,4) - parallel when http://puu.sh/tLdGE/ef0a4f0edb.jpg ok
-00:57:717 (1) - curve the last part like this http://puu.sh/tLdcK/23c5c4179d.jpg i like it now
-01:11:235 (1) - 01:11:791 (2) - 01:12:902 (1) - 01:12:532 (5) - curve more or just remove anchor no no no no
-01:36:235 (4,5) - 1/3 i will consider thise

cringe cringe cringe

diffff: http://puu.sh/tLwWd/c201570d29.osu

Shurelia

Global Moderator

2,813 posts

Joined December 2013

Shurelia 8 years ago

3d kotori ready to...
things

[GeneraL]

y u didn't add Kotori to the tag even though SHE is the one who's doing the perfomance of this song ? ? "羽々音小鳥" "Habane Kotori"
silence the slider-slide's sound please. It doesn't really fit in this kind of song.

[Normal]

00:10:495 (3) - since the tail ended up on a downbeat probably it'll be mucho better if you change this into 2 cirlces instead. It also able to emphasize the drum on the bgm.
00:11:050 (1) - naah, not really necessary to do NC on this.
00:16:421 (3) - same
00:16:976 (1) - same
00:18:458 - why no map this ;;
00:29:939 (1) - but yeah seriously you really should map the break since it's awkward for me to resuming on the middle of a section (Highly suggested)
tbh I don't understand about your NC concept at here. Sometimes you did NC on new vocal section sometimes you aren't. plesae re-check

[Hard]

00:17:161 (7,8,9) - probably shouldn't stack these since the other stack that I found on this map are on 1/2 rhythm while this one have 1/4. It can confuse players.
00:55:680 (7,8,9) - same thing like the previous stacks

[Insane]

00:40:217 (5,1) - nice idea but this is kinda awkward to play so yeah but just stack it with instead.

[Winter Break]

fine, i guess

Where's the Easy ? ?

BeatofIke

Beatmap Nominator

4,176 posts

Joined September 2011

BeatofIke 8 years ago

Mod from my queue! I have not modded maps for a while, so I'm a bit rusty lol.

[Normal]

Wow! The break time is a really good spot here. Nice shot! owo=b

[Hard]

01:35:495 (7,8,9) - I don't hear 1/3 beats at the first 2 sliders (the last one is fine though). I would just use 1/2 sliders just like the Insane difficulty has done owo

[Insane]

00:11:050 (2) - Where's the 1/3 beats at? I can't hear it anywhere ._.
00:39:291 (2) - Ghost note. I hear no sounds here o3o
01:35:495 (2) - Same as 00:11:050 (2) lol.
01:36:235 (4,5) - These notes should be in 1/3, not 1/4. Alternately, you could just use 1/2 notes for this part if you like :3

[Winter Break]

Good ^-^

This song takes me back to 2014. Glad that some of the songs I mapped a few years ago are getting re-mapped haha.

Dilectus

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Joined April 2014

Dilectus 8 years ago

Shurelia wrote:
00:17:161 (7,8,9) - probably shouldn't stack these since the other stack that I found on this map are on 1/2 rhythm while this one have 1/4. It can confuse players. gonna answer below

00:55:680 (7,8,9) - same thing like the previous stacks delete the notes and listen to it again. it is 1/4 but a different sound (1st one being snare triple and 2nd being tom triple)

BeatofIke wrote:
01:35:495 (7,8,9) - I don't hear 1/3 beats at the first 2 sliders (the last one is fine though). I would just use 1/2 sliders just like the Insane difficulty has done its the same rhythm used at 00:05:124 (1,2,3) - so it shouldnt come as a suprise to anyone. idk why the insane decided to ignore these beats as there are nothing else worthy of emphasizing here but i may be using NC on the beginning of these just for readability

Appreciate the help guys

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Shurelia wrote:
3d kotori ready to...
things

[GeneraL]
y u didn't add Kotori to the tag even though SHE is the one who's doing the perfomance of this song ? ? "羽々音小鳥" "Habane Kotori" i never really thought of that xd, added both tags
silence the slider-slide's sound please. It doesn't really fit in this kind of song. eeeee maybe if more people suggest

[Normal]
00:10:495 (3) - since the tail ended up on a downbeat probably it'll be mucho better if you change this into 2 cirlces instead. It also able to emphasize the drum on the bgm. since this is lowest diff i'm trying to make it as easy as possible whilst still maintaining all of the main beats
00:11:050 (1) - naah, not really necessary to do NC on this.
00:16:421 (3) - same
00:16:976 (1) - same
00:18:458 - why no map this ;; give players a bit of a break since it's the easiest diff, and trying to not overmap the vocals (since thats all there really is to follow) whilst maintaining the easiest diff is a bit difficult
00:29:939 (1) - but yeah seriously you really should map the break since it's awkward for me to resuming on the middle of a section (Highly suggested) i kinda disagree here, i think there is a transition in the two bars before the break ends that is a clear indicator that there is a change in the music incoming
tbh I don't understand about your NC concept at here. Sometimes you did NC on new vocal section sometimes you aren't. plesae re-check ye i reworked nc's again xd

Where's the Easy ? ? i think the normal is easy enough, and making an easy diff for this song whilst still making it fun to play is difficult, as the song focuses a lot on the offbeat and using lots of 1/2 in easy diffs isn't allowed, maybe if a bn thinks the spread needs it i'll try map an easy again, but i think the normal is passable for lowest diff in the set

BeatofIke wrote:
Mod from my queue! I have not modded maps for a while, so I'm a bit rusty lol.

[Normal]
Wow! The break time is a really good spot here. Nice shot! owo=b thanks ^^

[Winter Break]
Good ^-^
This song takes me back to 2014. Glad that some of the songs I mapped a few years ago are getting re-mapped haha. i recently played the android version of this game and it was my first vn i've actually played, the music was pretty good and it turns out there are two more expansions to the game, so i wanted to map the op to each one, then it turns out you've done the same thing but a loooong time ago, i promise im not stealing the songs you map xd

thanks for the mods!

Aniviuh

216 posts

Joined January 2015

Aniviuh 8 years ago

Consider compressing the video. The filesize exceeds the 24mb file limit. (According to the OpenAi Mod)

- Normal -
00:53:643 (1) - Why is this slider so complex? Compared to the other sliders in the map it feels out of place.
00:13:457 (4,5) - DS seems a bit too high. (1.06)
00:34:013 (3) - DS seems to high. (1.11)
00:38:087 (5) - ^
00:49:198 (3) - DS seems too low (.93)

They're minor but it would be nice to fine tune them.

I can't really find anything wrong with the other maps because I avoid mapping them.

I hope this helps! GL!

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ViolentBoo wrote:
Consider compressing the video. The filesize exceeds the 24mb file limit. (According to the OpenAi Mod) its fine, mapset is under 30mb

- Normal -
00:53:643 (1) - Why is this slider so complex? Compared to the other sliders in the map it feels out of place. give visual emphasis on the drum fill, the second slider 00:56:606 (1) - doesn't because there are only hihats in the drums
00:13:457 (4,5) - DS seems a bit too high. (1.06) fix as best as i could (its higher because stack)
00:34:013 (3) - DS seems to high. (1.11) ^
00:38:087 (5) - ^ ^
00:49:198 (3) - DS seems too low (.93) fix, this was my error :p

They're minor but it would be nice to fine tune them.

I can't really find anything wrong with the other maps because I avoid mapping them.

I hope this helps! GL!

thanks for the mod!

Hekireki

132 posts

Joined October 2013

Hekireki 8 years ago

Hi! Coming from my queue

[Winter Break]

An AR9> Insane in 2017? Is this a dream?

00:18:087 (1) - I don't use a microscope to scan every blankets there is in a map but this one is pretty off just by briefly looking at it
00:31:050 (1) - Hmm i don't really understand the wave here because you have a symmetric pattern right next, what about straightening this slider or reduce the curves on both sides?
00:33:458 (4,5,1) - Looks rather cramped compared to the visual spacing you used during this section, try spreading it out a little bit
00:41:421 (5) - I think this would look more structured if you used it as the symmetry axis for the rest of the pattern, placing it at around x:440 y:142 works well
00:46:976 (4) - I would reverse this instead of having 00:47:347 (5) - as a circle, to fit the fading out feel in the song/the transition
01:04:384 (3,7) - Fully stack these?
01:28:828 (5) - I think you could place this at x:67 y:213 to make it the center of the whole 01:27:717 (1,2,3,4) - pattern, i also think decreasing ds here works well to emphasize to contrast better with how 01:29:013 (6,7,8) - are spaced out

Clean diff, good shit

[frost's Insane]

00:12:532 (2,3,1) - Would look better if you made the blankets consistent here
00:39:291 (2) - I really can't hear anything here but tbh even if there is (pretty sure there's not) i don't think it's appropriate to map them here considering it's a really calm part
01:05:495 - I'd suggest to add a note here, there's no reason to end the stream on the blue tick imo. Yes, drums end at that point but it's a lot more intuitive if you add the note for vocals so it ends on the white tick instead
01:27:717 (1,2,3) - Same as my first point
01:33:087 (4,1) - Any reason of why you changed the overlap pattern from 01:31:976 (1,2) - and 01:32:902 (3,5) - ?
01:36:235 (4,5,1) - Isn't this 1/3? I didn't point it out for 00:11:791 (4,5,1) - but i think they sound slightly different

Clean diff aswell

Hope any of this helped, good luck

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LeeSinOrAfk wrote:
Hi! Coming from my queue

[Winter Break]

An AR9> Insane in 2017? Is this a dream? wew
00:18:087 (1) - I don't use a microscope to scan every blankets there is in a map but this one is pretty off just by briefly looking at it fix
00:31:050 (1) - Hmm i don't really understand the wave here because you have a symmetric pattern right next, what about straightening this slider or reduce the curves on both sides? represents the wave like motion in the pitch of the bass
00:33:458 (4,5,1) - Looks rather cramped compared to the visual spacing you used during this section, try spreading it out a little bit moved 4 a bit for even spacing on both sides of (1)
00:41:421 (5) - I think this would look more structured if you used it as the symmetry axis for the rest of the pattern, placing it at around x:440 y:142 works well did something a bit different
00:46:976 (4) - I would reverse this instead of having 00:47:347 (5) - as a circle, to fit the fading out feel in the song/the transition i disagree, the red tick here is the weakest between these two white ticks, so it shouldn't be clickable imo
01:04:384 (3,7) - Fully stack these? oops, fix
01:28:828 (5) - I think you could place this at x:67 y:213 to make it the center of the whole 01:27:717 (1,2,3,4) - pattern, i also think decreasing ds here works well to emphasize to contrast better with how 01:29:013 (6,7,8) - are spaced out did something a little different, good idea though

Clean diff, good shit
Hope any of this helped, good luck

thanks for the mod!

Melter

534 posts

Joined October 2014

Melter 8 years ago

00:40:217 (5,1) - nice idea but this is kinda awkward to play so yeah but just stack it with instead. ok

00:11:050 (2) - Where's the 1/3 beats at? I can't hear it anywhere ._. i will attempt to fix
00:39:291 (2) - Ghost note. I hear no sounds here o3o fix
01:35:495 (2) - Same as 00:11:050 (2) lol. this 01:35:495 (2) - is essentially the same rhythm like 00:05:124 (1,2,3) - , it's 1/3
01:36:235 (4,5) - These notes should be in 1/3, not 1/4. Alternately, you could just use 1/2 notes for this part if you like :3 1/3 it is ;3

difff + hitsounds: http://puu.sh/tN8Rd/f93f7bd61e.rar

HappyRocket88

4,322 posts

Joined May 2014

HappyRocket88 8 years ago

Ohayo~ As requested in exchange of a GD that I should've made ages ago >w<!!

Normal
Comment: This is a really pleasant and lovely difficulty to read and play! >w< Most of the patterns are catchy and the flows can be easily handle along with the structure of the note-placement. Good job! \o3o/ Some minor concerns:

00:34:013 (3) - In terms of beat-emphasis, this slider skips a very important sound 00:35:309 - which I think it would be cool if it were emphasized. As it is now it feels rather flat than actually providing feedback with the slider-reverse.
00:39:939 - This might have probably been suggested before and I'm totally against the idea of ignoring such as a great sound here. While I find the rhythm of emphasizing only the bell-sound somewhat reasonable, I strongly disagree with giving emphasis ONLY to that hitsounds. Hence, I do believe that, while adding a circle 00:39:939 - here, stressing that instrument up would feel way more intuitive to players. Just as well as you did here 00:41:050 (4) - with the slider-end.
00:41:050 (4) - This is only a reference, but I think it would hurt no one if you could use a 1/2 slider+reverse instead here to accentuate better the instruments. Might be somehow subjective, but worth to give it a try. /w\
01:30:680 - Quite interesting way to map this section, which really differs from the one you've mapped here 00:06:235 - Variation is important but I'm not sure is a good idea to map these section entirely different from each other. The way I see things, I think it would be more pleasant to players if you could avoid using 1/2 sliders as 00:09:754 (2,3) - 00:15:680 (2,3) - since it becomes unexpectedly harder from players to get the timing of them.

Since I was supposed to map a GD, here I only modded one diff as the deal. >w< Best of success with ranking! :3

Affirmation

2,551 posts

Joined March 2015

Affirmation 8 years ago

Q

[Normal]
00:06:606 (2,5,6) - stack?
00:24:752 - I recommend you map this break.
01:17:717 (1) - Nc doesn't necessary imo

[Winter break]
00:26:421 (4,6,2) - looks overlap not so good for me.
00:40:217 (5,6,1,4,6) - make triangle? could be bettter.
01:06:606 (1) - ctrl G, looks weird pattern.
01:32:902 (4,1) - make blanket?

GL

Left

2,163 posts

Joined October 2014

Left 8 years ago

M4M~

[Normal]
00:44:754 (5) - NC 00:46:235 (1) - off
00:50:680 (5) - NC 00:52:161 (1) - off but maybe you have intention here?
00:52:532 (2,3,1) - maybe can make perfect triangle
01:34:384 (4) - only didn't stack with 3 here. reason?

all minor things, nice rhythm choice lol

[DavidEd's Hard]
used NC every 2dowbeats, but I felt it's too long often. at least you can use NC per 1 downbeat in Kiai part

00:16:976 (6) - I think NC here would be better since sound became stronger obviously. and number is too high

00:28:087 (4) - no obvious sound, I think just 1/2 slider from 00:27:902 (3) - would be better
00:48:643 (4,5) - improve blanket if you intended
01:16:606 (3,4,5,6) - can make square? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7239296

[frost's Insane]
00:16:976 (2,3,4) - strong sounds here, maybe at least can use drum addition sounds or normal sampleset to show it
00:55:495 (3,7) - minor one, this two is too close. maybe can lower circle6 to improve it like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7239331
01:06:606 (1) - this nc really necessary
01:17:161 (1,2,3) - can make more linear from red tick of that slider?

your pattern use was quite interesting

[Winter Brake]
00:40:680 (1,2,3,4,6) - can make it better shape? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7239365
00:44:939 (6) - NC 00:45:124 (1) - off
01:01:976 - maybe I can see your intention of 01:01:421 (1,2,3) - but missed this sound felt slightly uncomfortable.
01:05:124 (7,8,9,10,1) - stream-slider flow isn't nice. intentional?
01:22:347 (2,3,4,1) - make overlap degree same
01:40:680 (1) - can use more distance here?

ahh song is too nice..call me when you map nice song like this later...
good luck with your rank!

Osu Tatakae Ouendan

osu! Alumni

333 posts

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Osu Tatakae Ouendan 8 years ago

From World's Largest M4M Queue

('w')
[Normal]
00:10:495 (3) - My suggestion is to have it facing to the right like this: http://puu.sh/tOOKY/d744cb0f5c.jpg Reason is that with the slider end pointing upward, it feels like the gap of time between 00:09:754 (2,3) - is not obvious enough (i.e. it's not easy to tell they are 3/2 apart at first glance) because there's "more objects" in the space between them if the slider points upward. Having it face to the right opens up the space between them and makes the time gap more apparent. See 00:15:124 (1,2,3) - for example, where 2 and 3 are not bounded by any other hitobjects around them, and so the rhythm is easier to tell

At the kiai: I think you should map to vocals more. First half of the map maps to strong sounds: 00:06:235 - 00:18:087 - vocals are the dominant strong sound, with those bass sounds on 1/2s every now and again. Post break, strong bell sounds or bass, but thanks to vocals being on white ticks they're also mapped to vocals, with rhythm choices actually emphasizing vocals. On the kiai, vocals are the loudest parts of the song, so I think you should change the following parts:
01:06:976 (1,2,3) -
01:12:902 (1,2,3) -
01:18:828 (1,2,3) -
Rhythm should go something like this: http://puu.sh/tOVvK/7012cbb9ef.jpg

01:32:532 (4) - I think this should be on 01:32:717 - to mirror previous mapping at the intro, and the fact that the vocals are the strongest part here with not much to map to on 01:32:532 -
01:32:902 (1) - Re:move NC and NC this 01:33:643 - instead.

[davided's Hard]
My general opinion is that since you have some 1/2 jumps here and there, any 1/1s should be spaced out a bit more so that they're easier to distinguish, these notes in particular:
00:16:976 (6) -
00:22:532 (5) -
00:34:013 (4) -
00:52:347 (5) -

Sorry I can't really find something else to point out without affecting the map style

[frost's Insane]
00:11:050 (2) - not sure why this is 1/3, since doesn't sound like there's something to map to 1/3 here.
00:39:291 (2) - not sure why this is here either, there's nothing to map to here, it's not easy to guess the slider is actually on blue tick, and the 1/4 transition to 00:39:569 (3) - is hard to read as well.

[Winter Brake]
00:54:013 (2,3,4,5) - It's in my opinion that you should space them like this (what is this called, anti-jumps? idk the term), specially since most of the map has spaced out 1/2s and i don't think this portion here warrants something like this

Hope this helps (/w\)

Dilectus

1,727 posts

Joined April 2014

Dilectus 8 years ago

Left wrote:
used NC every 2dowbeats, but I felt it's too long often. at least you can use NC per 1 downbeat in Kiai part lon didnt update my latest changes
00:16:976 (6) - I think NC here would be better since sound became stronger obviously. and number is too high fix
00:28:087 (4) - no obvious sound, I think just 1/2 slider from 00:27:902 (3) - would be better stacked
00:48:643 (4,5) - improve blanket if you intended fix
01:16:606 (3,4,5,6) - can make square? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7239296 i think this arrowhead pattern looks good

Osu Tatakae Ouendan wrote:
My general opinion is that since you have some 1/2 jumps here and there, any 1/1s should be spaced out a bit more so that they're easier to distinguish, these notes in particular:
00:16:976 (6) -
00:22:532 (5) -
00:34:013 (4) -
00:52:347 (5) -

Some of these got fixed anyways because of Left's mod (2nd mention)

Lon didnt update my last changes so NC was messed up.

Thanks for the mods!

FIXES

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Melter

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frost's Insane
00:16:976 (2,3,4) - strong sounds here, maybe at least can use drum addition sounds or normal sampleset to show it ok!
00:55:495 (3,7) - minor one, this two is too close. maybe can lower circle6 to improve it like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7239331 , i think its fine, the distance spacing emphasis is ok and that part is more intense compared to that section of the song
01:06:606 (1) - this nc really necessary ok change
01:17:161 (1,2,3) - can make more linear from red tick of that slider? yes

your pattern use was quite interesting thanks i guess

frost's Insane
00:11:050 (2) - not sure why this is 1/3, since doesn't sound like there's something to map to 1/3 here. already changed it
00:39:291 (2) - not sure why this is here either, there's nothing to map to here, it's not easy to guess the slider is actually on blue tick, and the 1/4 transition to 00:39:569 (3) - is hard to read as well. already changed it

dif: http://puu.sh/tPUel/3e36b2eb31.osu

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HappyRocket88 wrote:
Ohayo~ As requested in exchange of a GD that I should've made ages ago >w<!!

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Comment: This is a really pleasant and lovely difficulty to read and play! >w< Most of the patterns are catchy and the flows can be easily handle along with the structure of the note-placement. Good job! \o3o/ Some minor concerns:
00:34:013 (3) - In terms of beat-emphasis, this slider skips a very important sound 00:35:309 - which I think it would be cool if it were emphasized. As it is now it feels rather flat than actually providing feedback with the slider-reverse. since this is the lowest difficulty in the set, and i didn't make the previous sound here 00:32:161 (4) - clickable either i left them both out for consistency and ease of playability
00:39:939 - This might have probably been suggested before and I'm totally against the idea of ignoring such as a great sound here. While I find the rhythm of emphasizing only the bell-sound somewhat reasonable, I strongly disagree with giving emphasis ONLY to that hitsounds. Hence, I do believe that, while adding a circle 00:39:939 - here, stressing that instrument up would feel way more intuitive to players. Just as well as you did here 00:41:050 (4) - with the slider-end. good idea, made this clickable aswell
00:41:050 (4) - This is only a reference, but I think it would hurt no one if you could use a 1/2 slider+reverse instead here to accentuate better the instruments. Might be somehow subjective, but worth to give it a try. /w\ will consider this, it works pretty nice both ways, will wait for more feedback
01:30:680 - Quite interesting way to map this section, which really differs from the one you've mapped here 00:06:235 - Variation is important but I'm not sure is a good idea to map these section entirely different from each other. The way I see things, I think it would be more pleasant to players if you could avoid using 1/2 sliders as 00:09:754 (2,3) - 00:15:680 (2,3) - since it becomes unexpectedly harder from players to get the timing of them. again will consider, i'm pretty sure i'm going to change a least a little bit of this section for more visual consistency, i'm not sure about removing the 1/2 sliders since i don't know how else to map the dodo/bass kicks without having to use needless 1/1 sliders or harder circles
Since I was supposed to map a GD, here I only modded one diff as the deal. >w< Best of success with ranking! :3

Neoskylove wrote:
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00:06:606 (2,5,6) - stack? can't stack without breaking ds/visual consistency
00:24:752 - I recommend you map this break. i think its ok, the part where it jumps back in is after a clear 1 bar transition
01:17:717 (1) - Nc doesn't necessary imo maybe change, i think it works well to accent the drum part and show a change in rhythm, but will change based on more feedback

[Winter break]
00:26:421 (4,6,2) - looks overlap not so good for me. moved 6 a bit
00:40:217 (5,6,1,4,6) - make triangle? could be bettter. fixed i think
01:06:606 (1) - ctrl G, looks weird pattern. no thanks, doing this gives weird flow onto 01:06:976 (1) -
01:32:902 (4,1) - make blanket? i think its ok, doing this would give 4 too much spacing emphasis

GL

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M4M~

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00:44:754 (5) - NC 00:46:235 (1) - off
00:50:680 (5) - NC 00:52:161 (1) - off but maybe you have intention here? didn't nc these because the nc would cut off halfway through the vocal line which is what i'm following here, the ncs are where they are because it follows a different section momentarily whilst the vocals are out
00:52:532 (2,3,1) - maybe can make perfect triangle fix
01:34:384 (4) - only didn't stack with 3 here. reason? it's harder to read when stacked at this low difficulty

all minor things, nice rhythm choice lol

[Winter Brake]
00:40:680 (1,2,3,4,6) - can make it better shape? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7239365 thats the shape i was going for xd, fixed
00:44:939 (6) - NC 00:45:124 (1) - off fix
01:01:976 - maybe I can see your intention of 01:01:421 (1,2,3) - but missed this sound felt slightly uncomfortable. maybe changed based on more feedback, this would fit into 1/2 pretty easy but the vocal switches are a bit late so i wanted to try hit that by having sliders on blue tick
01:05:124 (7,8,9,10,1) - stream-slider flow isn't nice. intentional? ye its intentional, i wanted to slow down the players movement here
01:22:347 (2,3,4,1) - make overlap degree sameoops, fix
01:40:680 (1) - can use more distance here? ok

ahh song is too nice..call me when you map nice song like this later... i might already have a song if you're interested ^^
good luck with your rank!

Osu Tatakae Ouendan wrote:
From World's Largest M4M Queue

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00:10:495 (3) - My suggestion is to have it facing to the right like this: http://puu.sh/tOOKY/d744cb0f5c.jpg Reason is that with the slider end pointing upward, it feels like the gap of time between 00:09:754 (2,3) - is not obvious enough (i.e. it's not easy to tell they are 3/2 apart at first glance) because there's "more objects" in the space between them if the slider points upward. Having it face to the right opens up the space between them and makes the time gap more apparent. See 00:15:124 (1,2,3) - for example, where 2 and 3 are not bounded by any other hitobjects around them, and so the rhythm is easier to tell
yup, good idea, fix
At the kiai: I think you should map to vocals more. First half of the map maps to strong sounds: 00:06:235 - 00:18:087 - vocals are the dominant strong sound, with those bass sounds on 1/2s every now and again. Post break, strong bell sounds or bass, but thanks to vocals being on white ticks they're also mapped to vocals, with rhythm choices actually emphasizing vocals. On the kiai, vocals are the loudest parts of the song, so I think you should change the following parts:
01:06:976 (1,2,3) -
01:12:902 (1,2,3) -
01:18:828 (1,2,3) -
Rhythm should go something like this: http://puu.sh/tOVvK/7012cbb9ef.jpg i kinda disagree here, i wanted to map the vocals passively and focus on the main drum beat since thats much easier for newer players to play as it's consistent, which is especially important in the lowest diff of a set. i focused more on the vocals earlier in the song because thats the only thing that you realistically can map without having really long sliders

01:32:532 (4) - I think this should be on 01:32:717 - to mirror previous mapping at the intro, and the fact that the vocals are the strongest part here with not much to map to on 01:32:532 - maybe, since the snare is a lot more pronounced in the outro compared to the intro i wanted to give it proper emphasis, maybe change based on more feedback
01:32:902 (1) - Re:move NC and NC this 01:33:643 - instead. fix + 1 removed another nc a bit later for consistency

[Winter Brake]
00:54:013 (2,3,4,5) - It's in my opinion that you should space them like this (what is this called, anti-jumps? idk the term), specially since most of the map has spaced out 1/2s and i don't think this portion here warrants something like this
these are spaced like this because the tom toms play in groups of two, to represent that better than having individual jumps between each tom tom hit, i had jumps between each group of tom tom hits
Hope this helps (/w\)

thanks for the mods! updated all diffs

Dawns

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I'll edit this post into a mod eventually

Monstrata

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Monstrata 8 years ago

Winter Break

00:10:495 (4,1,2,3,4) - This could be arranged more structurally imo. The triangle makes it look like its trying to be structured, but then the sliders mess it up.
00:15:124 (1,2,3) - These jumps really don't feel necessary here. Theyre really big but don't reflect any especially strong notes in the song ;p
00:18:087 - 00:40:309 - This whole section is really quiet. I feel you've overmapped this section and used too many jumps and circles xP.
00:35:865 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - Something like this would be a much better rhythm. Though i think the jump from 4>5>1 is still too big for the section.
00:41:791 - This section onward the music picks up and you hear more instruments int he background and theres a more frequent drum beat. But right now because of the overmap on the previous section you don't really get to appreciate that increase in density and tempo.
01:06:513 - No triplet?

frost's Insane

00:11:421 (3) - 1/2 slider? Theres definitely a note on the red tick
00:14:569 (4) - This note is barely audible i don't think it deserves a jump like this xP
00:27:902 (3) - Quite overmapped, Just do a 1/1 gap here?
00:39:384 (2) - ^
00:59:198 (6,1,2) - This is easily misread because 6>1 is a 1/2 jump but 1>2 is a 1/1 gap.

DavidEd's Hard

00:31:606 (2) - Sounds overmapped here. 1/1 gap?
00:34:569 (2) - ^

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00:16:421 (3) - I woudl extend this to a 1/1 slider instead because mapping 00:16:791 - leads into the next few notes better.
00:35:680 (4,1) - Use a 1/2 slider instead. two clicks is really dense here for a section thats supposed to be quiet. You could do a 1/1 rhythm here too
00:41:791 (1,2,3,4) - Weird that you're beginning a section thats more upbeat with such simple rhythms.
01:19:569 (2,3) - Moving these back 1/2 a beat sounds better with vocals.

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Monstrata wrote:
Winter Break

00:10:495 (4,1,2,3,4) - This could be arranged more structurally imo. The triangle makes it look like its trying to be structured, but then the sliders mess it up. i don't really understand what you mean here?
00:15:124 (1,2,3) - These jumps really don't feel necessary here. Theyre really big but don't reflect any especially strong notes in the song ;p reduced and changed following pattern a little bit
00:18:087 - 00:40:309 - This whole section is really quiet. I feel you've overmapped this section and used too many jumps and circles xP. i think i'll get some more opinions on this first, i wanted to make sure that i hit the vocals/occasional piano and emphasise them because there really isn't anything else in this section to do, over simplifying it wouldn't feel right for top diff either, so i'm not sure what i can really do apart from reduce the overall spacing
00:35:865 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - Something like this would be a much better rhythm. Though i think the jump from 4>5>1 is still too big for the section. nerfed the jump
00:41:791 - This section onward the music picks up and you hear more instruments int he background and theres a more frequent drum beat. But right now because of the overmap on the previous section you don't really get to appreciate that increase in density and tempo. i see what you mean, will ask for more opinions
01:06:513 - No triplet? no, i think the spacing emphasis between the bass kick and the rest of the music kicking in is more important hitting the piano scale

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00:16:421 (3) - I woudl extend this to a 1/1 slider instead because mapping 00:16:791 - leads into the next few notes better. i agree
00:35:680 (4,1) - Use a 1/2 slider instead. two clicks is really dense here for a section thats supposed to be quiet. You could do a 1/1 rhythm here too removed a circle since 1/2 slider would make the downbeat unclickable
00:41:791 (1,2,3,4) - Weird that you're beginning a section thats more upbeat with such simple rhythms. changed up this section a little bit by adding in more sliders and repositioned a few things
01:19:569 (2,3) - Moving these back 1/2 a beat sounds better with vocals. doing this would be inconsistent with the rest of the kiai, and since i'm focusing more on the simple drum beat i think it's ok as it is

thanks for the mod!

Miquella

462 posts

Joined September 2015

Miquella 8 years ago

frost insane,

00:11:791 (4,5) - feel like you kinda losed the priveledge for this rhythm after you made the whistle land on a sliderend 00:11:050 (2) -
follow something consistently please

winterbreak

00:10:865 (1,2,3) - He means that your triangle looks bad?, i think rhythm sucks instead because the whistle that comes here is more prominent, and you just ignore it at first and then map to it :/, normal-hitwhistle also fit on these sliderbodies+sliderheads as a small suggestion

SPOILER

00:15:124 (1) - copy this slider and paste it 00:15:680 (2) - there

01:04:569 (4,5,6) - vocals stop there so i woudn't keep expanding that jump there

01:38:643 (4,5,6,7,8) - your star is uneven

SPOILER

_Meep_

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Joined April 2014

_Meep_ 8 years ago

There is a space between private and sky ._. Its been ranked b4

Log Off Now

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Joined May 2014

Topic Starter

Log Off Now 8 years ago

_Meep_ wrote:
There is a space between private and sky ._. Its been ranked b4

Precious Wing was ranked before but the metadata is movie ver, the tracklist on the official website lists it without the space (seen in the screenshot, can't link cuz nsfw) so I think its ok

Log Off Now

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Joined May 2014

Topic Starter

Log Off Now 8 years ago

zev wrote:
winterbreak

00:10:865 (1,2,3) - He means that your triangle looks bad?, i think rhythm sucks instead because the whistle that comes here is more prominent, and you just ignore it at first and then map to it :/, normal-hitwhistle also fit on these sliderbodies+sliderheads as a small suggestion
SPOILER

the rhythm is fine imo, the bell on the 00:11:421 (4) - is extremely important compared to the rest of the sounds here, so i changed it into a slider, copy pasted it because having another 2 circles for a less intense sound compared to the rest of the bar doesn't make sense to me, i could change all of it into circles, but i feel like that would be overmapping it

00:15:124 (1) - copy this slider and paste it 00:15:680 (2) - there ?? why

01:04:569 (4,5,6) - vocals stop there so i woudn't keep expanding that jump there these jumps don't follow the vocal they follow the rising pitch and intensifying snare roll

01:38:643 (4,5,6,7,8) - your star is uneven it wasn't meant to be a star, but i changed the pattern now :p
SPOILER

thanks for the mod!
oops double post sorry

_Meep_

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Joined April 2014

_Meep_ 8 years ago

Log Off Now wrote:
_Meep_ wrote:
There is a space between private and sky ._. Its been ranked b4
Precious Wing was ranked before but the metadata is movie ver, the tracklist on the official website lists it without the space (seen in the screenshot, can't link cuz nsfw) so I think its ok

I meant that this private sky song was ranked before

iYiyo

1,107 posts

Joined January 2014

iYiyo 8 years ago

hello there

m4m

[Winter Break]

00:39:569 (2,3,4) - feels like you could increase 00:39:569 (2,3) - distance a bit so the short time-distance 00:39:939 (3,4) - here is more noticeable
00:58:828 (2,3,4) - idk but this pattern here feels a bit messy in terms of DS. maybe you can do some symmetry copying 00:59:198 (4,5) - instead of the actual 00:58:828 (2,3) - ?
01:38:458 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - from the whole diff, i'd say that this is the only pattern that is messy, maybe you could try with some big triangle and then a mini triangle inside? idk but 01:38:828 (5,7,8) - it looks like random to me x.x

[frost's]
00:31:050 (1,1) - maybe you can do some color hax here and make both have same color? since they have same DS change and it's very noticeable I think it would fit quite good.
[DavidEd's]
since normal has ar4 and insane 8.5 I think that reducing the AR a bit would fit better for the mapset. maybe ar 6? 6.5? 7? idk xD but you get the idea
01:17:347 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - idk but spacing here feels a bit messy D: specially for 01:17:902 (3,4,5,1) - I think you could try with more similar DS for these? the music isn't that intense for those mini jumps imo

[normal]
00:15:124 (1) - why not making this a 1/1 slider just like u did 00:09:198 (1) - here?
00:40:680 - mmm I feel like you should map this beat, it might be a normal diff but still missing noticeable beats aren't good imo
00:44:754 (5) - since you were doing a NC every 2 downbeat, this should have a nc no? and so on..
01:23:272 - missing hitsound? maybe clap?

Ok that's all from me. Couldn't say much cause the set is already fine, you should call a BN D:

GL!

Log Off Now

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Topic Starter

Log Off Now 8 years ago

iYiyo wrote:
hello there

m4m

[Winter Break]
00:39:569 (2,3,4) - feels like you could increase 00:39:569 (2,3) - distance a bit so the short time-distance 00:39:939 (3,4) - here is more noticeable increase a little
00:58:828 (2,3,4) - idk but this pattern here feels a bit messy in terms of DS. maybe you can do some symmetry copying 00:59:198 (4,5) - instead of the actual 00:58:828 (2,3) - ? good idea, changed
01:38:458 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - from the whole diff, i'd say that this is the only pattern that is messy, maybe you could try with some big triangle and then a mini triangle inside? idk but 01:38:828 (5,7,8) - it looks like random to me x.x i fixed the aesthetics a little but i think the jump as a whole is ok, the ds changes represent the different tones in the drum fill

[normal]
00:15:124 (1) - why not making this a 1/1 slider just like u did 00:09:198 (1) - here? ye
00:40:680 - mmm I feel like you should map this beat, it might be a normal diff but still missing noticeable beats aren't good imo changed pattern to hit this
00:44:754 (5) - since you were doing a NC every 2 downbeat, this should have a nc no? and so on.. this is nc'd because the nc patterning changes to follow the end of each verse to better match the music
01:23:272 - missing hitsound? maybe clap? added, there wasn't anything i really wanted to hitsound but agree it feels empty and weird without one so added clap

Ok that's all from me. Couldn't say much cause the set is already fine, you should call a BN D:

GL!

thanks for the mod!

Dilectus

1,727 posts

Joined April 2014

Dilectus 8 years ago

iYiyo wrote:
since normal has ar4 and insane 8.5 I think that reducing the AR a bit would fit better for the mapset. maybe ar 6? 6.5? 7? idk xD but you get the idea 7.5

01:17:347 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - idk but spacing here feels a bit messy D: specially for 01:17:902 (3,4,5,1) - I think you could try with more similar DS for these? the music isn't that intense for those mini jumps imo formed an M for Misaka

Thanks

fixes

osu file format v14

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Creator:Log Off Now
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Kyuukai

Beatmap Nominator

1,536 posts

Joined December 2014

Kyuukai 8 years ago

very late NM LOL

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00:06:606 (2,6) - dat overlap looks bad D:
00:10:495 (3) - a copy/paste CTRL+J of 00:09:754 (2) - would look better imo, check this
00:32:161 (4,1,2,3) - something like this would look better tho

Winter Break

00:14:384 (4,5,1) - RIP flow, something like this would be better I guess ?
00:55:680 (2,3,4) - it is not a straight triple, idk if it's made on purpose tho D:
01:05:124 (7,8,9,10) - Stream starts here 01:04:939 (6) -
01:11:606 (2,4) - stack em' I guess, would look better

Rip mod D:

GL

Melter

534 posts

Joined October 2014

Melter 8 years ago

frost's
00:31:050 (1,1) - maybe you can do some color hax here and make both have same color? since they have same DS change and it's very noticeable I think it would fit quite good. sure!

00:11:791 (4,5) - feel like you kinda losed the priveledge for this rhythm after you made the whistle land on a sliderend 00:11:050 (2) -
follow something consistently please k i changed it

frost's Insane

00:11:421 (3) - 1/2 slider? Theres definitely a note on the red tick ok
00:14:569 (4) - This note is barely audible i don't think it deserves a jump like this xP i wanted to stay consistent with the rhythm ive used throughout the song
00:27:902 (3) - Quite overmapped, Just do a 1/1 gap here? ok
00:39:384 (2) - ^ ok
00:59:198 (6,1,2) - This is easily misread because 6>1 is a 1/2 jump but 1>2 is a 1/1 gap. ok

diff: http://puu.sh/uap5Y/66c3943171.rar

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Joined May 2014

Topic Starter

Log Off Now 8 years ago

yaleufeu wrote:
very late NM LOL

Normal
00:06:606 (2,6) - dat overlap looks bad D: doesnt show up in gameplay so i think its ok
00:10:495 (3) - a copy/paste CTRL+J of 00:09:754 (2) - would look better imo, check this ye
00:32:161 (4,1,2,3) - something like this would look better tho
loses slider shape consistency with previous bar

Winter Break
00:14:384 (4,5,1) - RIP flow, something like this would be better I guess ? uh they look the same lo
00:55:680 (2,3,4) - it is not a straight triple, idk if it's made on purpose tho D: ye its meant to be at that angle
01:05:124 (7,8,9,10) - Stream starts here 01:04:939 (6) - i cant hear it, and even if it did, i would probably leave it out because the rising pitch in the violin is what i feel has more emphasis at this note
01:11:606 (2,4) - stack em' I guess, would look better ok

Rip mod D:

GL

thanks for the mod!

edit: also ya meep there is a space in title, i kinda dun gufd and took track name and didnt chek metadata when i saw it had no space on website xd ty

Logic Agent

483 posts

Joined April 2015

Logic Agent 8 years ago

[General]

resize ur bg
inconsistent tags

[Winter Break]

00:07:532 (1,2) - you could bring the red nodes further out more if you think it looks better apply that everywhere you think it fits
00:09:939 (3) - flip the gray node the other way so it follows implied motion better
00:10:865 (1,2,3) - could make this a perfect triangle
00:14:384 (4) - red node thing
00:20:124 (3) - if you made this slider straight the change in direction would feel less harsh
00:22:902 (2,3,4) - could make visual distance between these more consistent
00:28:272 (3,4,1) - this is 1/6th
00:32:902 (3) - sharper red node pls
00:38:643 (5,1) - could space this out more
00:40:124 (4,5,6) - this might be 1/6 as well
01:20:495 (2,3) - motion between these is pretty sharp, i'd make it more wide

[Normal]

00:33:643 (2,3) - could make this a wider angle, easier to read and more comfortable for new players
00:36:976 (3,4) - same
00:40:309 (4) - can nc if you want
00:52:161 (1,2) - same as earlier
01:39:569 - could do 2 1/1 sliders and a circle to make the outtro different from the rest of the map.

short mod gl

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Log Off Now 8 years ago

Logic Agent wrote:
[General]
resize ur bg thnx waifu
inconsistent tags fix
[Winter Break]
00:07:532 (1,2) - you could bring the red nodes further out more if you think it looks better apply that everywhere you think it fits yes
00:09:939 (3) - flip the gray node the other way so it follows implied motion better yes
00:10:865 (1,2,3) - could make this a perfect triangle yes
00:14:384 (4) - red node thing yes
00:20:124 (3) - if you made this slider straight the change in direction would feel less harsh did that slight curve thing instead
00:22:902 (2,3,4) - could make visual distance between these more consistent yes
00:28:272 (3,4,1) - this is 1/6th i need to double check this one because on 25% it fits 1/4 but idk
00:32:902 (3) - sharper red node pls yes
00:38:643 (5,1) - could space this out more did a bit more
00:40:124 (4,5,6) - this might be 1/6 as well finally got a right snap on this w e w
01:20:495 (2,3) - motion between these is pretty sharp, i'd make it more wide tbh i think this plays ok, since its a totally different sound and tone in the vocal compared to the previous one

[Normal]
00:33:643 (2,3) - could make this a wider angle, easier to read and more comfortable for new players yes
00:36:976 (3,4) - same yes
00:40:309 (4) - can nc if you want idk if its needed, will wait if its suggested again
00:52:161 (1,2) - same as earlier yes
01:39:569 - could do 2 1/1 sliders and a circle to make the outtro different from the rest of the map. yes

short mod gl

thanks for mod! :d

Seolv

847 posts

Joined March 2016

Seolv 8 years ago

M4M ~~from my queue~~ kek

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Eh, why isn't the first 5 seconds mapped, it wouldn't make sense for 00:05:124 (1) - to be there. Either map the first 5 seconds, or remove the object.
00:32:902 (1,2,3) - This is the same melody as 00:29:939 (1,2,3,4) - so it would make sense to map the parts same way.
01:06:976 (1,2,3) - Rhythm isn't good, try this
01:12:902 (1,2,3) - Same
01:27:717 (1) - Shorten this slider by two ticks
01:28:643 (2) - Move this to 01:28:458 -

Hard

00:05:124 (1,2,3,1) - This might be hard for some players since you can't really hear the melody that good. Delete that
00:07:532 (1) - Double the slider for better rhythm following.
00:11:050 (2,3,4) - Jumps in Hard diffs aren't very suitable. Keep the spacing consistent.
00:24:013 (1) - Same, this bit is calm and it cant have big spacing emphasis.
00:26:791 (5) - Same
00:29:754 (6) - Don't overlap.
00:29:939 (1) - Big spacing
00:32:902 (1) - Same
00:35:309 (5) - Same, this doesn't even have emphasis so it makes even less sense
Since it's just repeating same thing over and over, I just want you to remap this with more consistent spacing, since it appears to be too hard and unpredictable.

Insane

Nice Diff

Spring Break

Nice Diff

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Log Off Now 8 years ago

[ L u k a s ] wrote:
M4M ~~from my queue~~ kek

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Eh, why isn't the first 5 seconds mapped, it wouldn't make sense for 00:05:124 (1) - to be there. Either map the first 5 seconds, or remove the object. the first 5 seconds is really hard to map because of how the main note is just one held note, and the guitar isn't really worth mapping, so i map when the first 'important' instrument plays
00:32:902 (1,2,3) - This is the same melody as 00:29:939 (1,2,3,4) - so it would make sense to map the parts same way. there is a definite difference the second time around because of the piano, there is a repeat slider there because there is a strong note on the repeat, if i just ended the slider their i would have to make a weird and slightly overmapped slider on the red tick to follow the piano
01:06:976 (1,2,3) - Rhythm isn't good, try this
01:12:902 (1,2,3) - Same these are mapped as 1/1 because its the lowest diff in the set and i dont want to overdo it on 1/2, the bass/drums also follow a 1/1 pattern here, so i think its fine, maybe if more people suggest
01:27:717 (1) - Shorten this slider by two ticks what for? i think the bell on the white tick is more more important here
01:28:643 (2) - Move this to 01:28:458 - same reasoning as above, i prefer the current emphasis

Spring Break

Nice Diff

thanks for the mod!

Dilectus

1,727 posts

Joined April 2014

Dilectus 8 years ago

[ L u k a s ] wrote:
00:05:124 (1,2,3,1) - This might be hard for some players since you can't really hear the melody that good. Delete that i don't think people are THAT deaf.
00:07:532 (1) - Double the slider for better rhythm following. i'd rather put heavy emphasize on the vocals as ive done so for the entirety of the intro
00:11:050 (2,3,4) - Jumps in Hard diffs aren't very suitable. Keep the spacing consistent. with the current bpm, players at this level should be able to handle it. its not like the rc is against jumps in hard difficulties.
00:24:013 (1) - Same, this bit is calm and it cant have big spacing emphasis. new vocal section so spacing increase,
00:26:791 (5) - Same intense beat so spacing increase
00:29:754 (6) - Don't overlap. it wont be visual during gameplay so it shouldnt be a problem
00:29:939 (1) - Big spacing beginning of new section so spacing increase
00:32:902 (1) - Same same
00:35:309 (5) - Same, this doesn't even have emphasis so it makes even less sense polished a bit
Since it's just repeating same thing over and over, I just want you to remap this with more consistent spacing, since it appears to be too hard and unpredictable. i think i've followed the song properly with emphasize and rhythm, so idk what the problem is. a hard is supposed to be hard.

Thanks!

UPDATE

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Artist:Hoshizaki Iria
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Creator:Log Off Now
Version:DavidEd's Hard
Source:この大空に、翼をひろげて SNOW PRESENTS
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Sotarks

3,552 posts

Joined May 2014

Sotarks 8 years ago

m4m

winter break
00:13:458 (1,2) - i'll recommand you to use the same spacing as you are using 00:06:606 (2,3) - here for consistency, atm it's too close spacing.

00:27:347 (2) - that reverse is kinda out of place like theres no sound on 00:27:717 -

00:54:013 (2,3,4,5) - those are really unconfortable to play, and according to the drum snare a regular jump could've been better.

01:01:421 (1,2) - muting those slider ends could be a good solution

01:06:976 (1) - spacing with 01:06:606 (1) - is a bit too far, consider stacking 01:06:976 (1) - on 01:06:606 (1) - 's head ?

01:36:235 (3) - why this is 1/3 ??
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frost
01:18:180 - can you avoid mapping that note here, there's no sound..

01:18:643 (9,1) - spacing too missreading i almost thought it was a jump stream

01:31:976 (1,2) - overlap kinda triggers me 'cause poeple will think 01:32:347 (2) - this is 1/2 slider since it's covered by previous one, consider unstack?
good diff, but please your hitsounds make me puke just copy log's one.
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my angel devidad
00:11:050 (2,3,4) - you don't wanna keep ds here dud?

00:35:309 (5) - stack this on 00:34:013 (1) - 's end it's pretty nice structure !

00:59:198 (6,7) - kinda dense rythmn here how about replacing this by a 1/2 slider ?

01:40:680 (4) - nc xd
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normal
00:05:124 (1) - imo you can delete that safely, it's not really needed

00:18:087 (6) - nc?
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gl!

Log Off Now

957 posts

Joined May 2014

Topic Starter

Log Off Now 8 years ago

Sotarks wrote:
m4m

winter break
00:13:458 (1,2) - i'll recommand you to use the same spacing as you are using 00:06:606 (2,3) - here for consistency, atm it's too close spacing. changed so its same visual distance

00:27:347 (2) - that reverse is kinda out of place like theres no sound on 00:27:717 - ya but idk how i can change this into a 1/1 without messing up the rest of the patterning, will figure smt out later :p

00:54:013 (2,3,4,5) - those are really unconfortable to play, and according to the drum snare a regular jump could've been better. these notes are placed like this because the drums play the same sound twice each time, so i represented this by grouping the sounds together and having a jump between them rather than having a jump between each note to make it more interesting (and personally i dont think it feels bad to play either)

01:01:421 (1,2) - muting those slider ends could be a good solution ya

01:06:976 (1) - spacing with 01:06:606 (1) - is a bit too far, consider stacking 01:06:976 (1) - on 01:06:606 (1) - 's head ? i moved it a bit closer, but i dont wanna stack it because that would look ugly af and i would also lose the emphasis on the chorus and big change in music here

01:36:235 (3) - why this is 1/3 ?? the piano is 1/3 here, i thought it was 1/4 originally but its not
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normal
00:05:124 (1) - imo you can delete that safely, it's not really needed wanna start each diff of at the same time, maybe if more people think its not important ill delete

00:18:087 (6) - nc? an nc here wouldn't effect anything in the gameplay so no point
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gl!

thanks for the mod!

Melter

534 posts

Joined October 2014

Melter 8 years ago

Sotarks wrote:
m4m

frost
01:18:180 - can you avoid mapping that note here, there's no sound.. i like the slider there and it is not so intense so i ignored it by using slider end (beats that are worth emphasizing i would use hitcircle or sliderstart)

01:18:643 (9,1) - spacing too missreading i almost thought it was a jump stream theres eomthing here 01:18:735 (10) -

01:31:976 (1,2) - overlap kinda triggers me 'cause poeple will think 01:32:347 (2) - this is 1/2 slider since it's covered by previous one, consider unstack? you can still see 01:32:347 (2) - length over the 1/1 slider
good diff, but please your hitsounds make me puke just copy log's one. puking is hot
[]
gl!

Dilectus

1,727 posts

Joined April 2014

Dilectus 8 years ago

Sotarks wrote:
00:11:050 (2,3,4) - you don't wanna keep ds here dud? reduced spacing slightly cause i want to keep my spacing concept

00:35:309 (5) - stack this on 00:34:013 (1) - 's end it's pretty nice structure ! would make my spacing concept inconsistent where i've mostly emphasized louder beats that stand out through spacing (00:08:272 (3,4) - bell, 00:11:050 (2,3,4) - flute, 00:22:532 (1,2) - piano, 00:28:828 (2,3) - vocal)

00:59:198 (6,7) - kinda dense rythmn here how about replacing this by a 1/2 slider ?

01:40:680 (4) - nc xd

thank you papa

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Electoz

Beatmap Nominator

1,899 posts

Joined May 2015

Electoz 8 years ago

[General]

Unused hitsounds:
1. drum-sliderslide69.wav
2. drum-slidertick69.wav
3. soft-slidertick68.wav

[Normal]

I disagree with the break. Just curious, why put one tho?
01:29:569 (3,1) - This part too, idk why you left these empty when the song rhythm's still there, I guess we have different interpretations on this zz

[DavidEd's Hard]

01:17:532 (2,5) - Could mislead the players considering they have different kicks. Would be better if you could differentiate these sliders for a better readability, there are ways to do this but putting NC on 01:18:272 (5) is probably the simplest way to do so.

[frost's Insane]

Using soft-hitclap + Normal sampleset in kiai kinda overpowers other hitsounds you used, personally I don't think Normal sampleset is really needed cuz soft-hitclap should be enough to represent the instrument as it's already the strongest hitsound you used.

[Winter Break]

00:18:087 - mmm personally I prefer you to focus solely on vocal on this part like 00:35:865 (1,2,3,4,5) cuz you focused on piano and other stuff so the rhythm density didn't reflect the calmness of the section as much, atm the rhythm density on this doesn't feel really different from 00:41:791 despite having a different intensity on these sections.
00:41:791 (1) - A 1/1 slider would work better, to me feels like 00:41:791 (1,2,3,4,5) is a 1/2 spam and if you're following vocal then you would rather to have sth clickable at 00:42:347 than 00:42:161 .
00:51:421 (4,5) - Could make a pattern here if you consider these as the same sounds, feels kinda wasted with that repeat slider.
01:01:421 (1,2,3) - Doesn't feel like they're worthy enough for extended sliders, I mean, just a pattern with 1/2 sliders would already work fine.
Also keep in mind that giving a consistent visual spacing will make the map cleaner, sth like 00:31:050 (1,1,2) - 01:23:087 (1,2) - would look a lot better if you give them more visual spacing like 00:09:198 (1,2,3) .

Just did a quick look so you don't have to kds if this isn't useful, good luck~

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Electroz wrote:
[General]

Unused hitsounds:
drum-sliderslide69.wav
drum-slidertick69.wav
soft-slidertick68.wav deleted
[Normal]

I disagree with the break. Just curious, why put one tho? put the break here because there is a noticable difference between the section before and the section after it, also because this is the lowest difficulty in the set and their isn't an easy, having a break here makes it easier for new players to catch their breath before going into the rest of the map which is significantly more intense than this section
01:29:569 (3,1) - This part too, idk why you left these empty when the song rhythm's still there, I guess we have different interpretations on this zz left these out for more emphasis on the first note of the outro, it also allows for a bigger movement (i know ds is a thing, but visually this looks like a much bigger gap) which makes it feel more involving, i might make a extended slider to cover for it, but i think how it is at the moment is fine
[Winter Break]

00:18:087 - mmm personally I prefer you to focus solely on vocal on this part like 00:35:865 (1,2,3,4,5) cuz you focused on piano and other stuff so the rhythm density didn't reflect the calmness of the section as much, atm the rhythm density on this doesn't feel really different from 00:41:791 despite having a different intensity on these sections. honestly i think this section is ok, i understand what you mean, but if i only focus on the vocals here i miss out a lot of little piano injections which i feel are really important to the song, i'll take a look and see if i can reduce the density a little bit, but i'm not gonna ignore big parts of the song, especially considering this is the top diff
00:41:791 (1) - A 1/1 slider would work better, to me feels like 00:41:791 (1,2,3,4,5) is a 1/2 spam and if you're following vocal then you would rather to have sth clickable at 00:42:347 than 00:42:161 . agree, also helps make it consistent with the patterning i use later on
00:51:421 (4,5) - Could make a pattern here if you consider these as the same sounds, feels kinda wasted with that repeat slider. i understand the reasoning here, but doing that would mean i lose the emphasis that i put on the two bass kicks leading into the pizzicato string transition
01:01:421 (1,2,3) - Doesn't feel like they're worthy enough for extended sliders, I mean, just a pattern with 1/2 sliders would already work fine. yea
Also keep in mind that giving a consistent visual spacing will make the map cleaner, sth like 00:31:050 (1,1,2) - 01:23:087 (1,2) - would look a lot better if you give them more visual spacing like 00:09:198 (1,2,3) . fixed
Just did a quick look so you don't have to kds if this isn't useful, good luck~

thanks for the mod!

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Dilectus 8 years ago

Electroz wrote:
01:17:532 (2,5) - Could mislead the players considering they have different kicks. Would be better if you could differentiate these sliders for a better readability, there are ways to do this but putting NC on 01:18:272 (5) is probably the simplest way to do so i dont want to change rhythm so i'll nc instead because of it being one of the only repeat slider with more than 1 repeat. also did nc on 01:05:124 (1) - for that same reason

Thanks Electoz!

fixes

osu file format v14

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ArtistUnicode:星咲 イリア
Creator:Log Off Now
Version:DavidEd's Hard
Source:この大空に、翼をひろげて SNOW PRESENTS
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Melter

534 posts

Joined October 2014

Melter 8 years ago

Electroz wrote:
[General]

Unused hitsounds:
drum-sliderslide69.wav
drum-slidertick69.wav
soft-slidertick68.wav

[frost's Insane]

Using soft-hitclap + Normal sampleset in kiai kinda overpowers other hitsounds you used, personally I don't think Normal sampleset is really needed cuz soft-hitclap should be enough to represent the instrument as it's already the strongest hitsound you used.
k removed all normal samplesets

Just did a quick look so you don't have to kds if this isn't useful, good luck~

diff http://puu.sh/uCOWt/b8ad63495b.osu

CircleFairy

221 posts

Joined January 2015

CircleFairy 8 years ago

Hi I came from your #modreqs request, m4m please :3 p/5911313#p5911313

Normal

00:49:754 (4) - I like a note on the slider here it fits the song better.
01:03:643 (3) - This would flow better for a beginner if it was left a bit inside the upcoming spinner.

DavidEd's Hard

00:28:087 (3) - I like this note better outside of the slider, it makes the next slider flow better.
00:29:754 (6) - This note needs a whistle.
00:38:458 (4,5) - Make these flow better towards the next slider.

frost's Insane

00:23:828 (4) - I don't like the placement of this note, I like it more on the next sliders end.
01:06:421 (1) - I feel like this note can flow better too.

Winter Break

00:15:865 (3) - I like a reverse slider here more.
01:22:902 (4) - This flows better out of the slider, personally I like it on the center line a bit under the sliders.

Overall

The mapset is nice, each map compliments the songs gentle chill vibe nicely. Good work and good luck! :3

Dilectus

1,727 posts

Joined April 2014

Dilectus 8 years ago

CircleFairy wrote:
DavidEd's Hard

00:28:087 (3) - I like this note better outside of the slider, it makes the next slider flow better. i prefer keeping the stack for the 1/2 break so people dont get confused if it used the same spacing as everything else.
00:29:754 (6) - This note needs a whistle. fix
00:38:458 (4,5) - Make these flow better towards the next slider. fix

thank you!

changes

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: privatesky.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 66976
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 6235,18087,35865,40124,41791,59569,62532,65124,66976,98272,98365,98458,100680,105495
DistanceSpacing: 1.5
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.6

[Metadata]
Title:Private Sky
TitleUnicode:Private Sky
Artist:Hoshizaki Iria
ArtistUnicode:星咲 イリア
Creator:Log Off Now
Version:DavidEd's Hard
Source:この大空に、翼をひろげて SNOW PRESENTS
Tags:if my heart had wings Kono Oozora ni Tsubasa wo Hirogete 羽々音 小鳥 Habane Kotori pulltop eroge visual novel expansion opening short version davided frostwich
BeatmapID:1188944
BeatmapSetID:558107

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:7.5
SliderMultiplier:1.25
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
Video,0,"SnowPresent.avi"
0,0,"privateskybg.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

[TimingPoints]
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66976,-100,4,2,3,60,0,1
90680,-100,4,2,3,50,0,0
105495,-100,4,2,3,10,0,0


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Combo2 : 253,218,254
Combo3 : 242,121,167
Combo4 : 190,190,190

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256,192,100865,12,0,105495,0:0:0:0:

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Hi I came from your #modreqs request, m4m please :3 p/5911313#p5911313

Normal

00:49:754 (4) - I like a note on the slider here it fits the song better. doing this would break my consistency with the previous verse
01:03:643 (3) - This would flow better for a beginner if it was left a bit inside the upcoming spinner. maybe change, i see what you mean but this note placement is intentional to help add emphasis on the loud vocal/climax of the buildup

Winter Break

00:15:865 (3) - I like a reverse slider here more. doing that would mean i lose a lot of emphasis i put on the vocals, and their isnt any real significant note anyway to hit on the red/white ticks after so no change on this one
01:22:902 (4) - This flows better out of the slider, personally I like it on the center line a bit under the sliders. i prefer the current back and forth motion, but i've moved this note to make the overlap more even on both sides

Overall

The mapset is nice, each map compliments the songs gentle chill vibe nicely. Good work and good luck! :3

thanks ^^ updated (also fixed some missing hitsounds in a drum fill on davids diff)

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CircleFairy wrote:
Hi I came from your #modreqs request, m4m please :3 p/5911313#p5911313

frost's Insane

00:23:828 (4) - I don't like the placement of this note, I like it more on the next sliders end. its fine
01:06:421 (1) - I feel like this note can flow better too. flow is usually between more than 1 note lol

The mapset is nice, each map compliments the songs gentle chill vibe nicely. Good work and good luck! :3

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hi am bak

Reduced spacing and sv in the middle part of Winter Break as per Monstratas suggestions but want to keep my rhythm for reasons above, fixed tags

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the thing said i would only get one kudosu for modding lol
I was pretty tempted to ignore your request because pcmasterrace is more just obnoxious these days :/

General
00:05:124 (1,2,3) - 01:36:235 (3) - These are 3/8 not 1/3. Resnap them with 1/8 beatsnap
00:28:272 (1) - This is 1/6

Winter Break
00:15:124 (1) - Move this slider head to 430,140 to avoid overlap with 00:13:828 (2,3) - , and reduce how much curve slider has
00:19:569 (1,2,3,4) - Rhythm isn't following vocal well, make 00:19:569 (1) - 1/1
00:19:569 (1) - nibba y u using old sliders
00:22:532 (1) - Make this 1/1 or a circle to avoid overmapped tail, as there's no sound. Makes 00:23:087 (3) - clearer there's a sound on this tail
00:25:495 (1) - etc same thing. Avoid using 1/2 sliders with no sound on the tail. It causes a bit of confusion on whether a sound is there for a player, and reduces emphasis on things that do have a sound on the tail.
00:36:235 (2) - Lower SV here, too high
01:09:939 (1) - uh hitwhistles get used too much around this area
01:27:347 (6,7,1) - 1 is not emphasised enough because spacing is the same, decrease spacing of previous jumps a bit (eg 6 can blanket 3)
Often times I think there's too many hitsounds going on tbh, but I can't point it out specifically

frost's Insane
See general
00:31:050 (1) - these are cool
00:53:643 (1) - my ears are ringing, can you increase the volume of your special samples and decrease inherited point volume
cool diff

DavidEd's Hard
See general
00:20:495 (4,5) - This doesn't really need distance emphasis
00:22:532 (1,2,3,4) - ^, only use it on important sounds, otherwise keep to the ds
00:28:828 (2,3) - Remove emphasis, it makes 00:29:754 (6,1) - stronger if there's fewer things with it
00:35:124 (4,5) - Can emphasise but reduce distance, not everything needs to be exact same distance when using emphasis
Apply the distance emphasis thing to other places where you see fit, there's quite a few. Try to keep them just to the most important sounds, especially for the first half
01:16:976 (4,5,1) - Too many distance changes for hard
01:18:272 (1,2) - The distance between these is wayy to big, makes player think that this is a 3x repeat. Make distance smaller so it's clear this is 5x.
01:26:976 (3,4,5,6) - This is a diff spike, make the distance spacing smaller than 01:24:013 (3) - . This is because it's easy to cut corners on the square. Compare how much red is in each pattern https://puu.sh/y7s9k/2a595c9b5e.png https://puu.sh/y7s99/40f99eb25d.png
It's a good diff, but there's too many uses of distance spacing. Cut them down

Normal diff is great, good job

Cut down on the usage of distance emphasis on hard, apply the changes for frost's hitsounds, and I'd suggest asking frost for a bit of help on hitsounds in top diff. Call me back after those are done

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Sinnoh wrote:
the thing said i would only get one kudosu for modding lol
I was pretty tempted to ignore your request because pcmasterrace is more just obnoxious these days :/

General
00:05:124 (1,2,3) - 01:36:235 (3) - These are 3/8 not 1/3. Resnap them with 1/8 beatsnap my bad
00:28:272 (1) - This is 1/6 talked to mir, and we decided that it was a grace note and a 1/8 slider + circle snapped best compared to 1/6 (i hate anime)

Winter Break
00:15:124 (1) - Move this slider head to 430,140 to avoid overlap with 00:13:828 (2,3) - , and reduce how much curve slider has this was intentional and i dont think it looks/plays that bad
00:19:569 (1,2,3,4) - Rhythm isn't following vocal well, make 00:19:569 (1) - 1/1 ok
00:19:569 (1) - nibba y u using old sliders yowatchusayindaWG
00:22:532 (1) - Make this 1/1 or a circle to avoid overmapped tail, as there's no sound. Makes 00:23:087 (3) - clearer there's a sound on this tail made it a circle since 00:22:902 (2) - is a really strong sound
00:25:495 (1) - etc same thing. Avoid using 1/2 sliders with no sound on the tail. It causes a bit of confusion on whether a sound is there for a player, and reduces emphasis on things that do have a sound on the tail. ya
00:36:235 (2) - Lower SV here, too high cool sv
01:09:939 (1) - uh hitwhistles get used too much around this area did some stuff + later on in the kiai hope its good now
01:27:347 (6,7,1) - 1 is not emphasised enough because spacing is the same, decrease spacing of previous jumps a bit (eg 6 can blanket 3) ya good idea, it also fixes up the odd visual spacing lol
Often times I think there's too many hitsounds going on tbh, but I can't point it out specifically whistle hitsounds are going on for the vocal and the notes that stand out in the background eg bells/loud held string notes, still got rid of a bunch in the kiai tho hope it sounds better

Normal diff is great, good job

Cut down on the usage of distance emphasis on hard, apply the changes for frost's hitsounds, and I'd suggest asking frost for a bit of help on hitsounds in top diff. Call me back after those are done

thanks for the mod! in addition to your top diff suggestions i fixed visual spacing up in some places

as per looking at davideds userpage/recent activity ill apply this mod for him

Sinnoh wrote:
DavidEd's Hard
See general fixed the first one, i've left the 1/6 out for the reason that it's a grace note, and that would be really difficult to read/play at this level of difficulty so it's remained as a repeat slider as it still snaps correctly
00:20:495 (4,5) - This doesn't really need distance emphasis ok
00:22:532 (1,2,3,4) - ^, only use it on important sounds, otherwise keep to the ds did a thing
00:28:828 (2,3) - Remove emphasis, it makes 00:29:754 (6,1) - stronger if there's fewer things with it i think david was using this as a final build up thats played in the piano for this section, and i think that his use om ephasis on these two notes fits the piano nicely
00:35:124 (4,5) - Can emphasise but reduce distance, not everything needs to be exact same distance when using emphasis ok
Apply the distance emphasis thing to other places where you see fit, there's quite a few. Try to keep them just to the most important sounds, especially for the first half ya did more stuff
01:16:976 (4,5,1) - Too many distance changes for hard nerf abit
01:18:272 (1,2) - The distance between these is wayy to big, makes player think that this is a 3x repeat. Make distance smaller so it's clear this is 5x. yea
01:26:976 (3,4,5,6) - This is a diff spike, make the distance spacing smaller than 01:24:013 (3) - . This is because it's easy to cut corners on the square. Compare how much red is in each pattern https://puu.sh/y7s9k/2a595c9b5e.png https://puu.sh/y7s99/40f99eb25d.png
It's a good diff, but there's too many uses of distance spacing. Cut them down not really sure how i can do this whilst keeping his current flow/pattern style and since this building up into the climax of the song i think its probably ok

updated, fixed some missing hitsounds in normal diff too, just waiting on frosts reply

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[ L u k a s ] wrote:
Rhythm isn't good

modding 11/10 :joy: :gun:

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updated with frosts update finally ><

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Frost
00:05:124 (1) - why are these kicks, overdoing the violin. Would work on a different sample set.

Going to ask for video to be compressed since 24mb is large for 2 minutes, wait until shad0w1and returns~

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http://puu.sh/yeHgc/f49d51f027.flv
uhmmmmmm

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fix both, thanks for the video shad0w1and!

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ok

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thank you!

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christmas is merry

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MariahCarey wrote:
christmas is merry

christmas is my favourite anime

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hello there I like this song

General

Add "Op" and "Minao Ohse" to the tags, checked it from your screen here https://i.gyazo.com/76841d0376ff49f1ec2 ... de76a5.png

Normal

00:10:495 (3,4) - This part has the same melody of the next section at 00:16:421 (3,4) - so I would make them the same since both section are initially following the same rhythm structure. Also, if I can give you a tip I would choose second section rhythm because it's more appropriated for the easiest diff of the mapset (1/2 slider with small breaks are kinda meh imo);
00:41:791 (1) - Would add soft finish here instead than drum to emphasize the cymbals in the music (I guess this applies to the next diffs as well so I won't mention it again);
00:44:754 (5) - I would add NC here and remove it from 00:46:235 (1) - instead, looks more logical. Apply this to 00:50:680 (5) - as well if you agree;
01:21:791 (1) - This slider is too pushed upside and HP bar covers it, and it's very bad and ugly, try to replace it properly;

DavidEd's Hard

00:28:272 (1) - Would flow better if directed on the right instead than left so it connects better the previous part to the upcoming slider: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9687711
00:35:309 (5,6,1,2) - I think this is pretty confusing and kinda bothered me tbh and I explain you why: 00:35:124 (4,5,6) - the spacing between these can be kept even if I think it's a bit exagerated compared to the previous elements so I would just stack the (5) with 00:34:013 (1) - 's tail, but the problem is the fact that after the jump between 00:35:309 (5,6,1) - that are currently snapped 1/2 the following part 00:35:865 (1,2) - is snapped 1/1 but still have the same spacing of the previous 1/2. So, I highly suggest you to reduce the spacing between 00:35:309 (5,6,1) - so that the 1/2 snapping will have a different spacing (smaller) than the next 1/1 (that can be kept in this way but it will be bigger than the previous part as it should actually be);
01:18:272 (1) - Too much repeats considering the previous one: remove two (so end it on the white tick) and add a circle on the new empty red tick (so 1/2 after the new tail snap);
Not a fun of so much random exagerated changes of spacing in the hard diff but well

frost's Insane

00:32:161 (2) - NC for consistency with 00:35:124 (1) - because of change of SV;
01:18:087 (6) - NC because of flute sound? It would even avoid this only long combo of the whole map;
01:29:847 (4,5) - I would make them more linear with the previous slider since they are actually slighly directed more on the left;
01:31:976 (1,2) - (Personal taste) I would try something else here because I don't like this pattern/overlap to be honest xD Map has been so clean so far but this kinda bothered me a little :c;
01:37:347 (3) - There should be addition: soft and clap on this slider's tail like you did for 01:31:421 (3) - ;

Winter Break

00:18:828 (3) - Would add whislte on head to emphasize the vocal higher pitch (it makes the section look empty), same for 00:24:754 (3) -
00:35:680 (4) - Place to 176|368 to follow the same logic you did for 00:34:754 (1,2) - ? (Placing circle on the same direction of slider's tail);
00:40:186 (4,5,6) - Why is this 1/6? Just snap it 1/4 like the Insane diff please, looks more appropriated;
00:54:013 (2,3,4,5) - I would avoid this since on the next section at 00:57:347 (2,3) - I would have expected the same pattern to be consistent, so just use normal spacing or the same rhythm of second part or 1/2 sliders :\
00:58:828 (2,3,4,5) - What about making the pattern like this? Cursor movement is much more flowing than the current placement: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9687880 (up and down movement);
01:22:902 (4) - I would overlap it with 01:21:791 (1) - 's tail instead, flow would be more way better;

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Chewin wrote:
hello there I like this song

General

Add "Op" and "Minao Ohse" to the tags, checked it from your screen here https://i.gyazo.com/76841d0376ff49f1ec2 ... de76a5.png
Normal

00:10:495 (3,4) - This part has the same melody of the next section at 00:16:421 (3,4) - so I would make them the same since both section are initially following the same rhythm structure. Also, if I can give you a tip I would choose second section rhythm because it's more appropriated for the easiest diff of the mapset (1/2 slider with small breaks are kinda meh imo);
good idea
00:41:791 (1) - Would add soft finish here instead than drum to emphasize the cymbals in the music (I guess this applies to the next diffs as well so I won't mention it again); good idea
00:44:754 (5) - I would add NC here and remove it from 00:46:235 (1) - instead, looks more logical. Apply this to 00:50:680 (5) - as well if you agree; the nc's here follow the vocal phrasing and i think the interjection from violins/bells warrants an nc here (same for next ojne too)
01:21:791 (1) - This slider is too pushed upside and HP bar covers it, and it's very bad and ugly, try to replace it properly; i think its fixed now
Winter Break

00:18:828 (3) - Would add whislte on head to emphasize the vocal higher pitch (it makes the section look empty), same for 00:24:754 (3) - yes
00:35:680 (4) - Place to 176|368 to follow the same logic you did for 00:34:754 (1,2) - ? (Placing circle on the same direction of slider's tail); wanted the change of direction here to further emphasise the bass kick/cymbal right after
00:40:186 (4,5,6) - Why is this 1/6? Just snap it 1/4 like the Insane diff please, looks more appropriated; i think its 1/6 in the music? is it ok to simplify this here to 1/4? im not 100% sure
00:54:013 (2,3,4,5) - I would avoid this since on the next section at 00:57:347 (2,3) - I would have expected the same pattern to be consistent, so just use normal spacing or the same rhythm of second part or 1/2 sliders :\
00:58:828 (2,3,4,5) - What about making the pattern like this? Cursor movement is much more flowing than the current placement: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9687880 (up and down movement); cool idea, i didn't really think to make a similar flowing jump pattern
01:22:902 (4) - I would overlap it with 01:21:791 (1) - 's tail instead, flow would be more way better; agre

thanks for the mod! also double checking artist name cus i think i got it wrong zzzzzzzz

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double edit: i didnt notice i double posted sorry

(((
edit: replying for davided as well as he is still supa busy

DavidEd's Hard

00:28:272 (1) - Would flow better if directed on the right instead than left so it connects better the previous part to the upcoming slider: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9687711 ok
00:35:309 (5,6,1,2) - I think this is pretty confusing and kinda bothered me tbh and I explain you why: 00:35:124 (4,5,6) - the spacing between these can be kept even if I think it's a bit exagerated compared to the previous elements so I would just stack the (5) with 00:34:013 (1) - 's tail, but the problem is the fact that after the jump between 00:35:309 (5,6,1) - that are currently snapped 1/2 the following part 00:35:865 (1,2) - is snapped 1/1 but still have the same spacing of the previous 1/2. So, I highly suggest you to reduce the spacing between 00:35:309 (5,6,1) - so that the 1/2 snapping will have a different spacing (smaller) than the next 1/1 (that can be kept in this way but it will be bigger than the previous part as it should actually be); did a thing, i hope its good now
01:18:272 (1) - Too much repeats considering the previous one: remove two (so end it on the white tick) and add a circle on the new empty red tick (so 1/2 after the new tail snap); the song supports this extended repeat and i think its readable enough tbh with the nc, but if not i think i can reuse the previous rhythm if you want
Not a fun of so much random exagerated changes of spacing in the hard diff but well

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Chewin 7 years ago

@DavidEd yea I prefer you use the same rhythm at 01:18:272 (1) it's much more better imo!
btw let me know when everyone fixed it up

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@DavidEd yea I prefer you use the same rhythm at 01:18:272 (1) it's much more better imo!

could be confusing for some, so sure

thanks

changes

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260,340,95495,2,0,L|212:354,2,46.875,2|0|0,1:2|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,260,95865,2,0,L|350:246,2,46.875,10|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,224,96235,2,0,L|168:239,2,46.875,2|0|0,1:2|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,136,96606,6,0,P|284:104|284:72,1,62.5,14|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,80,96976,2,0,L|120:64,1,62.5,2|8,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,136,97347,2,0,L|4:120,1,62.5,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
24,212,97717,1,2,1:2:0:0:
132,296,97902,6,0,L|208:280,1,62.5,10|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,220,98272,2,0,L|280:188,2,31.25,2|0|0,1:2|1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
197,151,98643,1,2,0:0:0:0:
272,106,98828,1,2,0:0:0:0:
347,150,99013,1,8,0:3:0:0:
355,236,99198,2,0,L|363:308,1,62.5,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
484,232,99569,6,0,L|472:107,1,125,12|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
352,52,100124,2,0,P|340:84|340:112,1,62.5,14|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,188,100495,1,8,0:0:0:0:
260,156,100680,5,12,0:0:0:0:
256,192,100865,12,0,105495,0:0:0:0:

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updated

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We have fixed some more stuff via IRC and not the mapset is ready for me! Have my first hear homie :3

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yeeey! thanks guys

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gratz~

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Sinnoh wrote:
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thank you

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