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Wiwi_

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Wiwi_ 2017-02-06T19:36:00+00:00

I'll edit this post into a mod eventually

Monstrata

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Monstrata 2017-02-08T00:01:48+00:00

Winter Break

00:10:495 (4,1,2,3,4) - This could be arranged more structurally imo. The triangle makes it look like its trying to be structured, but then the sliders mess it up.
00:15:124 (1,2,3) - These jumps really don't feel necessary here. Theyre really big but don't reflect any especially strong notes in the song ;p
00:18:087 - 00:40:309 - This whole section is really quiet. I feel you've overmapped this section and used too many jumps and circles xP.
00:35:865 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - Something like this would be a much better rhythm. Though i think the jump from 4>5>1 is still too big for the section.
00:41:791 - This section onward the music picks up and you hear more instruments int he background and theres a more frequent drum beat. But right now because of the overmap on the previous section you don't really get to appreciate that increase in density and tempo.
01:06:513 - No triplet?

frost's Insane

00:11:421 (3) - 1/2 slider? Theres definitely a note on the red tick
00:14:569 (4) - This note is barely audible i don't think it deserves a jump like this xP
00:27:902 (3) - Quite overmapped, Just do a 1/1 gap here?
00:39:384 (2) - ^
00:59:198 (6,1,2) - This is easily misread because 6>1 is a 1/2 jump but 1>2 is a 1/1 gap.

DavidEd's Hard

00:31:606 (2) - Sounds overmapped here. 1/1 gap?
00:34:569 (2) - ^

Normal

00:16:421 (3) - I woudl extend this to a 1/1 slider instead because mapping 00:16:791 - leads into the next few notes better.
00:35:680 (4,1) - Use a 1/2 slider instead. two clicks is really dense here for a section thats supposed to be quiet. You could do a 1/1 rhythm here too
00:41:791 (1,2,3,4) - Weird that you're beginning a section thats more upbeat with such simple rhythms.
01:19:569 (2,3) - Moving these back 1/2 a beat sounds better with vocals.

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Log Off Now 2017-02-08T00:28:35+00:00

Monstrata wrote:
Winter Break

00:10:495 (4,1,2,3,4) - This could be arranged more structurally imo. The triangle makes it look like its trying to be structured, but then the sliders mess it up. i don't really understand what you mean here?
00:15:124 (1,2,3) - These jumps really don't feel necessary here. Theyre really big but don't reflect any especially strong notes in the song ;p reduced and changed following pattern a little bit
00:18:087 - 00:40:309 - This whole section is really quiet. I feel you've overmapped this section and used too many jumps and circles xP. i think i'll get some more opinions on this first, i wanted to make sure that i hit the vocals/occasional piano and emphasise them because there really isn't anything else in this section to do, over simplifying it wouldn't feel right for top diff either, so i'm not sure what i can really do apart from reduce the overall spacing
00:35:865 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - Something like this would be a much better rhythm. Though i think the jump from 4>5>1 is still too big for the section. nerfed the jump
00:41:791 - This section onward the music picks up and you hear more instruments int he background and theres a more frequent drum beat. But right now because of the overmap on the previous section you don't really get to appreciate that increase in density and tempo. i see what you mean, will ask for more opinions
01:06:513 - No triplet? no, i think the spacing emphasis between the bass kick and the rest of the music kicking in is more important hitting the piano scale

Normal

00:16:421 (3) - I woudl extend this to a 1/1 slider instead because mapping 00:16:791 - leads into the next few notes better. i agree
00:35:680 (4,1) - Use a 1/2 slider instead. two clicks is really dense here for a section thats supposed to be quiet. You could do a 1/1 rhythm here too removed a circle since 1/2 slider would make the downbeat unclickable
00:41:791 (1,2,3,4) - Weird that you're beginning a section thats more upbeat with such simple rhythms. changed up this section a little bit by adding in more sliders and repositioned a few things
01:19:569 (2,3) - Moving these back 1/2 a beat sounds better with vocals. doing this would be inconsistent with the rest of the kiai, and since i'm focusing more on the simple drum beat i think it's ok as it is

thanks for the mod!

Miquella

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Miquella 2017-02-08T11:44:50+00:00

frost insane,

00:11:791 (4,5) - feel like you kinda losed the priveledge for this rhythm after you made the whistle land on a sliderend 00:11:050 (2) -
follow something consistently please

winterbreak

00:10:865 (1,2,3) - He means that your triangle looks bad?, i think rhythm sucks instead because the whistle that comes here is more prominent, and you just ignore it at first and then map to it :/, normal-hitwhistle also fit on these sliderbodies+sliderheads as a small suggestion

SPOILER

00:15:124 (1) - copy this slider and paste it 00:15:680 (2) - there

01:04:569 (4,5,6) - vocals stop there so i woudn't keep expanding that jump there

01:38:643 (4,5,6,7,8) - your star is uneven

SPOILER

_Meep_

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_Meep_ 2017-02-08T11:47:44+00:00

There is a space between private and sky ._. Its been ranked b4

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Log Off Now 2017-02-08T12:05:59+00:00

_Meep_ wrote:
There is a space between private and sky ._. Its been ranked b4

Precious Wing was ranked before but the metadata is movie ver, the tracklist on the official website lists it without the space (seen in the screenshot, can't link cuz nsfw) so I think its ok

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Log Off Now 2017-02-08T12:11:47+00:00

zev wrote:
winterbreak

00:10:865 (1,2,3) - He means that your triangle looks bad?, i think rhythm sucks instead because the whistle that comes here is more prominent, and you just ignore it at first and then map to it :/, normal-hitwhistle also fit on these sliderbodies+sliderheads as a small suggestion
SPOILER

the rhythm is fine imo, the bell on the 00:11:421 (4) - is extremely important compared to the rest of the sounds here, so i changed it into a slider, copy pasted it because having another 2 circles for a less intense sound compared to the rest of the bar doesn't make sense to me, i could change all of it into circles, but i feel like that would be overmapping it

00:15:124 (1) - copy this slider and paste it 00:15:680 (2) - there ?? why

01:04:569 (4,5,6) - vocals stop there so i woudn't keep expanding that jump there these jumps don't follow the vocal they follow the rising pitch and intensifying snare roll

01:38:643 (4,5,6,7,8) - your star is uneven it wasn't meant to be a star, but i changed the pattern now :p
SPOILER

thanks for the mod!
oops double post sorry

_Meep_

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_Meep_ 2017-02-09T03:01:54+00:00

Log Off Now wrote:
_Meep_ wrote:
There is a space between private and sky ._. Its been ranked b4
Precious Wing was ranked before but the metadata is movie ver, the tracklist on the official website lists it without the space (seen in the screenshot, can't link cuz nsfw) so I think its ok

I meant that this private sky song was ranked before

iYiyo

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Joined January 2014

iYiyo 2017-02-13T02:23:44+00:00

hello there

m4m

[Winter Break]

00:39:569 (2,3,4) - feels like you could increase 00:39:569 (2,3) - distance a bit so the short time-distance 00:39:939 (3,4) - here is more noticeable
00:58:828 (2,3,4) - idk but this pattern here feels a bit messy in terms of DS. maybe you can do some symmetry copying 00:59:198 (4,5) - instead of the actual 00:58:828 (2,3) - ?
01:38:458 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - from the whole diff, i'd say that this is the only pattern that is messy, maybe you could try with some big triangle and then a mini triangle inside? idk but 01:38:828 (5,7,8) - it looks like random to me x.x

[frost's]
00:31:050 (1,1) - maybe you can do some color hax here and make both have same color? since they have same DS change and it's very noticeable I think it would fit quite good.
[DavidEd's]
since normal has ar4 and insane 8.5 I think that reducing the AR a bit would fit better for the mapset. maybe ar 6? 6.5? 7? idk xD but you get the idea
01:17:347 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - idk but spacing here feels a bit messy D: specially for 01:17:902 (3,4,5,1) - I think you could try with more similar DS for these? the music isn't that intense for those mini jumps imo

[normal]
00:15:124 (1) - why not making this a 1/1 slider just like u did 00:09:198 (1) - here?
00:40:680 - mmm I feel like you should map this beat, it might be a normal diff but still missing noticeable beats aren't good imo
00:44:754 (5) - since you were doing a NC every 2 downbeat, this should have a nc no? and so on..
01:23:272 - missing hitsound? maybe clap?

Ok that's all from me. Couldn't say much cause the set is already fine, you should call a BN D:

GL!

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Log Off Now 2017-02-13T03:12:16+00:00

iYiyo wrote:
hello there

m4m

[Winter Break]
00:39:569 (2,3,4) - feels like you could increase 00:39:569 (2,3) - distance a bit so the short time-distance 00:39:939 (3,4) - here is more noticeable increase a little
00:58:828 (2,3,4) - idk but this pattern here feels a bit messy in terms of DS. maybe you can do some symmetry copying 00:59:198 (4,5) - instead of the actual 00:58:828 (2,3) - ? good idea, changed
01:38:458 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - from the whole diff, i'd say that this is the only pattern that is messy, maybe you could try with some big triangle and then a mini triangle inside? idk but 01:38:828 (5,7,8) - it looks like random to me x.x i fixed the aesthetics a little but i think the jump as a whole is ok, the ds changes represent the different tones in the drum fill

[normal]
00:15:124 (1) - why not making this a 1/1 slider just like u did 00:09:198 (1) - here? ye
00:40:680 - mmm I feel like you should map this beat, it might be a normal diff but still missing noticeable beats aren't good imo changed pattern to hit this
00:44:754 (5) - since you were doing a NC every 2 downbeat, this should have a nc no? and so on.. this is nc'd because the nc patterning changes to follow the end of each verse to better match the music
01:23:272 - missing hitsound? maybe clap? added, there wasn't anything i really wanted to hitsound but agree it feels empty and weird without one so added clap

Ok that's all from me. Couldn't say much cause the set is already fine, you should call a BN D:

GL!

thanks for the mod!

Dilectus

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Dilectus 2017-02-13T03:27:24+00:00

iYiyo wrote:
since normal has ar4 and insane 8.5 I think that reducing the AR a bit would fit better for the mapset. maybe ar 6? 6.5? 7? idk xD but you get the idea 7.5

01:17:347 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - idk but spacing here feels a bit messy D: specially for 01:17:902 (3,4,5,1) - I think you could try with more similar DS for these? the music isn't that intense for those mini jumps imo formed an M for Misaka

Thanks

fixes

osu file format v14

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ArtistUnicode:星咲 イリア
Creator:Log Off Now
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Source:この大空に、翼をひろげて SNOW PRESENTS
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Kyuukai

Beatmap Nominator

1,541 posts

Joined December 2014

Kyuukai 2017-02-19T16:35:09+00:00

very late NM LOL

Normal

00:06:606 (2,6) - dat overlap looks bad D:
00:10:495 (3) - a copy/paste CTRL+J of 00:09:754 (2) - would look better imo, check this
00:32:161 (4,1,2,3) - something like this would look better tho

Winter Break

00:14:384 (4,5,1) - RIP flow, something like this would be better I guess ?
00:55:680 (2,3,4) - it is not a straight triple, idk if it's made on purpose tho D:
01:05:124 (7,8,9,10) - Stream starts here 01:04:939 (6) -
01:11:606 (2,4) - stack em' I guess, would look better

Rip mod D:

GL

Melter

534 posts

Joined October 2014

Melter 2017-02-19T17:13:42+00:00

frost's
00:31:050 (1,1) - maybe you can do some color hax here and make both have same color? since they have same DS change and it's very noticeable I think it would fit quite good. sure!

00:11:791 (4,5) - feel like you kinda losed the priveledge for this rhythm after you made the whistle land on a sliderend 00:11:050 (2) -
follow something consistently please k i changed it

frost's Insane

00:11:421 (3) - 1/2 slider? Theres definitely a note on the red tick ok
00:14:569 (4) - This note is barely audible i don't think it deserves a jump like this xP i wanted to stay consistent with the rhythm ive used throughout the song
00:27:902 (3) - Quite overmapped, Just do a 1/1 gap here? ok
00:39:384 (2) - ^ ok
00:59:198 (6,1,2) - This is easily misread because 6>1 is a 1/2 jump but 1>2 is a 1/1 gap. ok

diff: http://puu.sh/uap5Y/66c3943171.rar

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Global Moderator

957 posts

Joined May 2014

Topic Starter

Log Off Now 2017-02-20T12:02:23+00:00

yaleufeu wrote:
very late NM LOL

Normal
00:06:606 (2,6) - dat overlap looks bad D: doesnt show up in gameplay so i think its ok
00:10:495 (3) - a copy/paste CTRL+J of 00:09:754 (2) - would look better imo, check this ye
00:32:161 (4,1,2,3) - something like this would look better tho
loses slider shape consistency with previous bar

Winter Break
00:14:384 (4,5,1) - RIP flow, something like this would be better I guess ? uh they look the same lo
00:55:680 (2,3,4) - it is not a straight triple, idk if it's made on purpose tho D: ye its meant to be at that angle
01:05:124 (7,8,9,10) - Stream starts here 01:04:939 (6) - i cant hear it, and even if it did, i would probably leave it out because the rising pitch in the violin is what i feel has more emphasis at this note
01:11:606 (2,4) - stack em' I guess, would look better ok

Rip mod D:

GL

thanks for the mod!

edit: also ya meep there is a space in title, i kinda dun gufd and took track name and didnt chek metadata when i saw it had no space on website xd ty

Logic Agent

483 posts

Joined April 2015

Logic Agent 2017-02-23T22:26:45+00:00

[General]

resize ur bg
inconsistent tags

[Winter Break]

00:07:532 (1,2) - you could bring the red nodes further out more if you think it looks better apply that everywhere you think it fits
00:09:939 (3) - flip the gray node the other way so it follows implied motion better
00:10:865 (1,2,3) - could make this a perfect triangle
00:14:384 (4) - red node thing
00:20:124 (3) - if you made this slider straight the change in direction would feel less harsh
00:22:902 (2,3,4) - could make visual distance between these more consistent
00:28:272 (3,4,1) - this is 1/6th
00:32:902 (3) - sharper red node pls
00:38:643 (5,1) - could space this out more
00:40:124 (4,5,6) - this might be 1/6 as well
01:20:495 (2,3) - motion between these is pretty sharp, i'd make it more wide

[Normal]

00:33:643 (2,3) - could make this a wider angle, easier to read and more comfortable for new players
00:36:976 (3,4) - same
00:40:309 (4) - can nc if you want
00:52:161 (1,2) - same as earlier
01:39:569 - could do 2 1/1 sliders and a circle to make the outtro different from the rest of the map.

short mod gl

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Topic Starter

Log Off Now 2017-02-23T22:48:30+00:00

Logic Agent wrote:
[General]
resize ur bg thnx waifu
inconsistent tags fix
[Winter Break]
00:07:532 (1,2) - you could bring the red nodes further out more if you think it looks better apply that everywhere you think it fits yes
00:09:939 (3) - flip the gray node the other way so it follows implied motion better yes
00:10:865 (1,2,3) - could make this a perfect triangle yes
00:14:384 (4) - red node thing yes
00:20:124 (3) - if you made this slider straight the change in direction would feel less harsh did that slight curve thing instead
00:22:902 (2,3,4) - could make visual distance between these more consistent yes
00:28:272 (3,4,1) - this is 1/6th i need to double check this one because on 25% it fits 1/4 but idk
00:32:902 (3) - sharper red node pls yes
00:38:643 (5,1) - could space this out more did a bit more
00:40:124 (4,5,6) - this might be 1/6 as well finally got a right snap on this w e w
01:20:495 (2,3) - motion between these is pretty sharp, i'd make it more wide tbh i think this plays ok, since its a totally different sound and tone in the vocal compared to the previous one

[Normal]
00:33:643 (2,3) - could make this a wider angle, easier to read and more comfortable for new players yes
00:36:976 (3,4) - same yes
00:40:309 (4) - can nc if you want idk if its needed, will wait if its suggested again
00:52:161 (1,2) - same as earlier yes
01:39:569 - could do 2 1/1 sliders and a circle to make the outtro different from the rest of the map. yes

short mod gl

thanks for mod! :d

Seolv

847 posts

Joined March 2016

Seolv 2017-02-24T17:05:27+00:00

M4M ~~from my queue~~ kek

Normal

Eh, why isn't the first 5 seconds mapped, it wouldn't make sense for 00:05:124 (1) - to be there. Either map the first 5 seconds, or remove the object.
00:32:902 (1,2,3) - This is the same melody as 00:29:939 (1,2,3,4) - so it would make sense to map the parts same way.
01:06:976 (1,2,3) - Rhythm isn't good, try this
01:12:902 (1,2,3) - Same
01:27:717 (1) - Shorten this slider by two ticks
01:28:643 (2) - Move this to 01:28:458 -

Hard

00:05:124 (1,2,3,1) - This might be hard for some players since you can't really hear the melody that good. Delete that
00:07:532 (1) - Double the slider for better rhythm following.
00:11:050 (2,3,4) - Jumps in Hard diffs aren't very suitable. Keep the spacing consistent.
00:24:013 (1) - Same, this bit is calm and it cant have big spacing emphasis.
00:26:791 (5) - Same
00:29:754 (6) - Don't overlap.
00:29:939 (1) - Big spacing
00:32:902 (1) - Same
00:35:309 (5) - Same, this doesn't even have emphasis so it makes even less sense
Since it's just repeating same thing over and over, I just want you to remap this with more consistent spacing, since it appears to be too hard and unpredictable.

Insane

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957 posts

Joined May 2014

Topic Starter

Log Off Now 2017-02-24T17:15:26+00:00

[ L u k a s ] wrote:
M4M ~~from my queue~~ kek

Normal

Eh, why isn't the first 5 seconds mapped, it wouldn't make sense for 00:05:124 (1) - to be there. Either map the first 5 seconds, or remove the object. the first 5 seconds is really hard to map because of how the main note is just one held note, and the guitar isn't really worth mapping, so i map when the first 'important' instrument plays
00:32:902 (1,2,3) - This is the same melody as 00:29:939 (1,2,3,4) - so it would make sense to map the parts same way. there is a definite difference the second time around because of the piano, there is a repeat slider there because there is a strong note on the repeat, if i just ended the slider their i would have to make a weird and slightly overmapped slider on the red tick to follow the piano
01:06:976 (1,2,3) - Rhythm isn't good, try this
01:12:902 (1,2,3) - Same these are mapped as 1/1 because its the lowest diff in the set and i dont want to overdo it on 1/2, the bass/drums also follow a 1/1 pattern here, so i think its fine, maybe if more people suggest
01:27:717 (1) - Shorten this slider by two ticks what for? i think the bell on the white tick is more more important here
01:28:643 (2) - Move this to 01:28:458 - same reasoning as above, i prefer the current emphasis

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thanks for the mod!

Dilectus

1,727 posts

Joined April 2014

Dilectus 2017-02-24T20:02:07+00:00

[ L u k a s ] wrote:
00:05:124 (1,2,3,1) - This might be hard for some players since you can't really hear the melody that good. Delete that i don't think people are THAT deaf.
00:07:532 (1) - Double the slider for better rhythm following. i'd rather put heavy emphasize on the vocals as ive done so for the entirety of the intro
00:11:050 (2,3,4) - Jumps in Hard diffs aren't very suitable. Keep the spacing consistent. with the current bpm, players at this level should be able to handle it. its not like the rc is against jumps in hard difficulties.
00:24:013 (1) - Same, this bit is calm and it cant have big spacing emphasis. new vocal section so spacing increase,
00:26:791 (5) - Same intense beat so spacing increase
00:29:754 (6) - Don't overlap. it wont be visual during gameplay so it shouldnt be a problem
00:29:939 (1) - Big spacing beginning of new section so spacing increase
00:32:902 (1) - Same same
00:35:309 (5) - Same, this doesn't even have emphasis so it makes even less sense polished a bit
Since it's just repeating same thing over and over, I just want you to remap this with more consistent spacing, since it appears to be too hard and unpredictable. i think i've followed the song properly with emphasize and rhythm, so idk what the problem is. a hard is supposed to be hard.

Thanks!

UPDATE

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Sotarks

Mapping Architect

3,553 posts

Joined May 2014

Sotarks 2017-02-25T21:18:35+00:00

m4m

winter break
00:13:458 (1,2) - i'll recommand you to use the same spacing as you are using 00:06:606 (2,3) - here for consistency, atm it's too close spacing.

00:27:347 (2) - that reverse is kinda out of place like theres no sound on 00:27:717 -

00:54:013 (2,3,4,5) - those are really unconfortable to play, and according to the drum snare a regular jump could've been better.

01:01:421 (1,2) - muting those slider ends could be a good solution

01:06:976 (1) - spacing with 01:06:606 (1) - is a bit too far, consider stacking 01:06:976 (1) - on 01:06:606 (1) - 's head ?

01:36:235 (3) - why this is 1/3 ??
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frost
01:18:180 - can you avoid mapping that note here, there's no sound..

01:18:643 (9,1) - spacing too missreading i almost thought it was a jump stream

01:31:976 (1,2) - overlap kinda triggers me 'cause poeple will think 01:32:347 (2) - this is 1/2 slider since it's covered by previous one, consider unstack?
good diff, but please your hitsounds make me puke just copy log's one.
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my angel devidad
00:11:050 (2,3,4) - you don't wanna keep ds here dud?

00:35:309 (5) - stack this on 00:34:013 (1) - 's end it's pretty nice structure !

00:59:198 (6,7) - kinda dense rythmn here how about replacing this by a 1/2 slider ?

01:40:680 (4) - nc xd
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normal
00:05:124 (1) - imo you can delete that safely, it's not really needed

00:18:087 (6) - nc?
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gl!

Log Off Now

Global Moderator

957 posts

Joined May 2014

Topic Starter

Log Off Now 2017-02-26T00:12:48+00:00

Sotarks wrote:
m4m

winter break
00:13:458 (1,2) - i'll recommand you to use the same spacing as you are using 00:06:606 (2,3) - here for consistency, atm it's too close spacing. changed so its same visual distance

00:27:347 (2) - that reverse is kinda out of place like theres no sound on 00:27:717 - ya but idk how i can change this into a 1/1 without messing up the rest of the patterning, will figure smt out later :p

00:54:013 (2,3,4,5) - those are really unconfortable to play, and according to the drum snare a regular jump could've been better. these notes are placed like this because the drums play the same sound twice each time, so i represented this by grouping the sounds together and having a jump between them rather than having a jump between each note to make it more interesting (and personally i dont think it feels bad to play either)

01:01:421 (1,2) - muting those slider ends could be a good solution ya

01:06:976 (1) - spacing with 01:06:606 (1) - is a bit too far, consider stacking 01:06:976 (1) - on 01:06:606 (1) - 's head ? i moved it a bit closer, but i dont wanna stack it because that would look ugly af and i would also lose the emphasis on the chorus and big change in music here

01:36:235 (3) - why this is 1/3 ?? the piano is 1/3 here, i thought it was 1/4 originally but its not
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normal
00:05:124 (1) - imo you can delete that safely, it's not really needed wanna start each diff of at the same time, maybe if more people think its not important ill delete

00:18:087 (6) - nc? an nc here wouldn't effect anything in the gameplay so no point
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gl!

thanks for the mod!

Melter

534 posts

Joined October 2014

Melter 2017-02-26T22:39:42+00:00

Sotarks wrote:
m4m

frost
01:18:180 - can you avoid mapping that note here, there's no sound.. i like the slider there and it is not so intense so i ignored it by using slider end (beats that are worth emphasizing i would use hitcircle or sliderstart)

01:18:643 (9,1) - spacing too missreading i almost thought it was a jump stream theres eomthing here 01:18:735 (10) -

01:31:976 (1,2) - overlap kinda triggers me 'cause poeple will think 01:32:347 (2) - this is 1/2 slider since it's covered by previous one, consider unstack? you can still see 01:32:347 (2) - length over the 1/1 slider
good diff, but please your hitsounds make me puke just copy log's one. puking is hot
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gl!

Dilectus

1,727 posts

Joined April 2014

Dilectus 2017-02-27T02:17:11+00:00

Sotarks wrote:
00:11:050 (2,3,4) - you don't wanna keep ds here dud? reduced spacing slightly cause i want to keep my spacing concept

00:35:309 (5) - stack this on 00:34:013 (1) - 's end it's pretty nice structure ! would make my spacing concept inconsistent where i've mostly emphasized louder beats that stand out through spacing (00:08:272 (3,4) - bell, 00:11:050 (2,3,4) - flute, 00:22:532 (1,2) - piano, 00:28:828 (2,3) - vocal)

00:59:198 (6,7) - kinda dense rythmn here how about replacing this by a 1/2 slider ?

01:40:680 (4) - nc xd

thank you papa

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Electoz

Nomination Assessment Team

1,901 posts

Joined May 2015

Electoz 2017-03-01T11:43:13+00:00

[General]

Unused hitsounds:
1. drum-sliderslide69.wav
2. drum-slidertick69.wav
3. soft-slidertick68.wav

[Normal]

I disagree with the break. Just curious, why put one tho?
01:29:569 (3,1) - This part too, idk why you left these empty when the song rhythm's still there, I guess we have different interpretations on this zz

[DavidEd's Hard]

01:17:532 (2,5) - Could mislead the players considering they have different kicks. Would be better if you could differentiate these sliders for a better readability, there are ways to do this but putting NC on 01:18:272 (5) is probably the simplest way to do so.

[frost's Insane]

Using soft-hitclap + Normal sampleset in kiai kinda overpowers other hitsounds you used, personally I don't think Normal sampleset is really needed cuz soft-hitclap should be enough to represent the instrument as it's already the strongest hitsound you used.

[Winter Break]

00:18:087 - mmm personally I prefer you to focus solely on vocal on this part like 00:35:865 (1,2,3,4,5) cuz you focused on piano and other stuff so the rhythm density didn't reflect the calmness of the section as much, atm the rhythm density on this doesn't feel really different from 00:41:791 despite having a different intensity on these sections.
00:41:791 (1) - A 1/1 slider would work better, to me feels like 00:41:791 (1,2,3,4,5) is a 1/2 spam and if you're following vocal then you would rather to have sth clickable at 00:42:347 than 00:42:161 .
00:51:421 (4,5) - Could make a pattern here if you consider these as the same sounds, feels kinda wasted with that repeat slider.
01:01:421 (1,2,3) - Doesn't feel like they're worthy enough for extended sliders, I mean, just a pattern with 1/2 sliders would already work fine.
Also keep in mind that giving a consistent visual spacing will make the map cleaner, sth like 00:31:050 (1,1,2) - 01:23:087 (1,2) - would look a lot better if you give them more visual spacing like 00:09:198 (1,2,3) .

Just did a quick look so you don't have to kds if this isn't useful, good luck~

Log Off Now

Global Moderator

957 posts

Joined May 2014

Topic Starter

Log Off Now 2017-03-01T12:45:36+00:00

Electroz wrote:
[General]

Unused hitsounds:
drum-sliderslide69.wav
drum-slidertick69.wav
soft-slidertick68.wav deleted
[Normal]

I disagree with the break. Just curious, why put one tho? put the break here because there is a noticable difference between the section before and the section after it, also because this is the lowest difficulty in the set and their isn't an easy, having a break here makes it easier for new players to catch their breath before going into the rest of the map which is significantly more intense than this section
01:29:569 (3,1) - This part too, idk why you left these empty when the song rhythm's still there, I guess we have different interpretations on this zz left these out for more emphasis on the first note of the outro, it also allows for a bigger movement (i know ds is a thing, but visually this looks like a much bigger gap) which makes it feel more involving, i might make a extended slider to cover for it, but i think how it is at the moment is fine
[Winter Break]

00:18:087 - mmm personally I prefer you to focus solely on vocal on this part like 00:35:865 (1,2,3,4,5) cuz you focused on piano and other stuff so the rhythm density didn't reflect the calmness of the section as much, atm the rhythm density on this doesn't feel really different from 00:41:791 despite having a different intensity on these sections. honestly i think this section is ok, i understand what you mean, but if i only focus on the vocals here i miss out a lot of little piano injections which i feel are really important to the song, i'll take a look and see if i can reduce the density a little bit, but i'm not gonna ignore big parts of the song, especially considering this is the top diff
00:41:791 (1) - A 1/1 slider would work better, to me feels like 00:41:791 (1,2,3,4,5) is a 1/2 spam and if you're following vocal then you would rather to have sth clickable at 00:42:347 than 00:42:161 . agree, also helps make it consistent with the patterning i use later on
00:51:421 (4,5) - Could make a pattern here if you consider these as the same sounds, feels kinda wasted with that repeat slider. i understand the reasoning here, but doing that would mean i lose the emphasis that i put on the two bass kicks leading into the pizzicato string transition
01:01:421 (1,2,3) - Doesn't feel like they're worthy enough for extended sliders, I mean, just a pattern with 1/2 sliders would already work fine. yea
Also keep in mind that giving a consistent visual spacing will make the map cleaner, sth like 00:31:050 (1,1,2) - 01:23:087 (1,2) - would look a lot better if you give them more visual spacing like 00:09:198 (1,2,3) . fixed
Just did a quick look so you don't have to kds if this isn't useful, good luck~

thanks for the mod!

Dilectus

1,727 posts

Joined April 2014

Dilectus 2017-03-01T16:51:56+00:00

Electroz wrote:
01:17:532 (2,5) - Could mislead the players considering they have different kicks. Would be better if you could differentiate these sliders for a better readability, there are ways to do this but putting NC on 01:18:272 (5) is probably the simplest way to do so i dont want to change rhythm so i'll nc instead because of it being one of the only repeat slider with more than 1 repeat. also did nc on 01:05:124 (1) - for that same reason

Thanks Electoz!

fixes

osu file format v14

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Artist:Hoshizaki Iria
ArtistUnicode:星咲 イリア
Creator:Log Off Now
Version:DavidEd's Hard
Source:この大空に、翼をひろげて SNOW PRESENTS
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Melter

534 posts

Joined October 2014

Melter 2017-03-10T15:59:44+00:00

Electroz wrote:
[General]

Unused hitsounds:
drum-sliderslide69.wav
drum-slidertick69.wav
soft-slidertick68.wav

[frost's Insane]

Using soft-hitclap + Normal sampleset in kiai kinda overpowers other hitsounds you used, personally I don't think Normal sampleset is really needed cuz soft-hitclap should be enough to represent the instrument as it's already the strongest hitsound you used.
k removed all normal samplesets

Just did a quick look so you don't have to kds if this isn't useful, good luck~

diff http://puu.sh/uCOWt/b8ad63495b.osu

CircleFairy

221 posts

Joined January 2015

CircleFairy 2017-03-31T17:28:06+00:00

Hi I came from your #modreqs request, m4m please :3 p/5911313#p5911313

Normal

00:49:754 (4) - I like a note on the slider here it fits the song better.
01:03:643 (3) - This would flow better for a beginner if it was left a bit inside the upcoming spinner.

DavidEd's Hard

00:28:087 (3) - I like this note better outside of the slider, it makes the next slider flow better.
00:29:754 (6) - This note needs a whistle.
00:38:458 (4,5) - Make these flow better towards the next slider.

frost's Insane

00:23:828 (4) - I don't like the placement of this note, I like it more on the next sliders end.
01:06:421 (1) - I feel like this note can flow better too.

Winter Break

00:15:865 (3) - I like a reverse slider here more.
01:22:902 (4) - This flows better out of the slider, personally I like it on the center line a bit under the sliders.

Overall

The mapset is nice, each map compliments the songs gentle chill vibe nicely. Good work and good luck! :3

Dilectus

1,727 posts

Joined April 2014

Dilectus 2017-04-08T18:20:29+00:00

CircleFairy wrote:
DavidEd's Hard

00:28:087 (3) - I like this note better outside of the slider, it makes the next slider flow better. i prefer keeping the stack for the 1/2 break so people dont get confused if it used the same spacing as everything else.
00:29:754 (6) - This note needs a whistle. fix
00:38:458 (4,5) - Make these flow better towards the next slider. fix

thank you!

changes

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: privatesky.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 66976
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 6235,18087,35865,40124,41791,59569,62532,65124,66976,98272,98365,98458,100680,105495
DistanceSpacing: 1.5
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.6

[Metadata]
Title:Private Sky
TitleUnicode:Private Sky
Artist:Hoshizaki Iria
ArtistUnicode:星咲 イリア
Creator:Log Off Now
Version:DavidEd's Hard
Source:この大空に、翼をひろげて SNOW PRESENTS
Tags:if my heart had wings Kono Oozora ni Tsubasa wo Hirogete 羽々音 小鳥 Habane Kotori pulltop eroge visual novel expansion opening short version davided frostwich
BeatmapID:1188944
BeatmapSetID:558107

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:7.5
SliderMultiplier:1.25
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
Video,0,"SnowPresent.avi"
0,0,"privateskybg.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

[TimingPoints]
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6235,-100,4,2,3,40,0,0
18087,-117.647058823529,4,2,3,30,0,0
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66976,-100,4,2,3,60,0,1
90680,-100,4,2,3,50,0,0
105495,-100,4,2,3,10,0,0


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Combo2 : 253,218,254
Combo3 : 242,121,167
Combo4 : 190,190,190

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140,44,89384,5,8,0:0:0:0:
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CircleFairy wrote:
Hi I came from your #modreqs request, m4m please :3 p/5911313#p5911313

Normal

00:49:754 (4) - I like a note on the slider here it fits the song better. doing this would break my consistency with the previous verse
01:03:643 (3) - This would flow better for a beginner if it was left a bit inside the upcoming spinner. maybe change, i see what you mean but this note placement is intentional to help add emphasis on the loud vocal/climax of the buildup

Winter Break

00:15:865 (3) - I like a reverse slider here more. doing that would mean i lose a lot of emphasis i put on the vocals, and their isnt any real significant note anyway to hit on the red/white ticks after so no change on this one
01:22:902 (4) - This flows better out of the slider, personally I like it on the center line a bit under the sliders. i prefer the current back and forth motion, but i've moved this note to make the overlap more even on both sides

Overall

The mapset is nice, each map compliments the songs gentle chill vibe nicely. Good work and good luck! :3

thanks ^^ updated (also fixed some missing hitsounds in a drum fill on davids diff)

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Melter 2017-04-08T18:51:32+00:00

CircleFairy wrote:
Hi I came from your #modreqs request, m4m please :3 p/5911313#p5911313

frost's Insane

00:23:828 (4) - I don't like the placement of this note, I like it more on the next sliders end. its fine
01:06:421 (1) - I feel like this note can flow better too. flow is usually between more than 1 note lol

The mapset is nice, each map compliments the songs gentle chill vibe nicely. Good work and good luck! :3

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hi am bak

Reduced spacing and sv in the middle part of Winter Break as per Monstratas suggestions but want to keep my rhythm for reasons above, fixed tags

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Xinnoh 2017-10-26T07:12:29+00:00

the thing said i would only get one kudosu for modding lol
I was pretty tempted to ignore your request because pcmasterrace is more just obnoxious these days :/

General
00:05:124 (1,2,3) - 01:36:235 (3) - These are 3/8 not 1/3. Resnap them with 1/8 beatsnap
00:28:272 (1) - This is 1/6

Winter Break
00:15:124 (1) - Move this slider head to 430,140 to avoid overlap with 00:13:828 (2,3) - , and reduce how much curve slider has
00:19:569 (1,2,3,4) - Rhythm isn't following vocal well, make 00:19:569 (1) - 1/1
00:19:569 (1) - nibba y u using old sliders
00:22:532 (1) - Make this 1/1 or a circle to avoid overmapped tail, as there's no sound. Makes 00:23:087 (3) - clearer there's a sound on this tail
00:25:495 (1) - etc same thing. Avoid using 1/2 sliders with no sound on the tail. It causes a bit of confusion on whether a sound is there for a player, and reduces emphasis on things that do have a sound on the tail.
00:36:235 (2) - Lower SV here, too high
01:09:939 (1) - uh hitwhistles get used too much around this area
01:27:347 (6,7,1) - 1 is not emphasised enough because spacing is the same, decrease spacing of previous jumps a bit (eg 6 can blanket 3)
Often times I think there's too many hitsounds going on tbh, but I can't point it out specifically

frost's Insane
See general
00:31:050 (1) - these are cool
00:53:643 (1) - my ears are ringing, can you increase the volume of your special samples and decrease inherited point volume
cool diff

DavidEd's Hard
See general
00:20:495 (4,5) - This doesn't really need distance emphasis
00:22:532 (1,2,3,4) - ^, only use it on important sounds, otherwise keep to the ds
00:28:828 (2,3) - Remove emphasis, it makes 00:29:754 (6,1) - stronger if there's fewer things with it
00:35:124 (4,5) - Can emphasise but reduce distance, not everything needs to be exact same distance when using emphasis
Apply the distance emphasis thing to other places where you see fit, there's quite a few. Try to keep them just to the most important sounds, especially for the first half
01:16:976 (4,5,1) - Too many distance changes for hard
01:18:272 (1,2) - The distance between these is wayy to big, makes player think that this is a 3x repeat. Make distance smaller so it's clear this is 5x.
01:26:976 (3,4,5,6) - This is a diff spike, make the distance spacing smaller than 01:24:013 (3) - . This is because it's easy to cut corners on the square. Compare how much red is in each pattern https://puu.sh/y7s9k/2a595c9b5e.png https://puu.sh/y7s99/40f99eb25d.png
It's a good diff, but there's too many uses of distance spacing. Cut them down

Normal diff is great, good job

Cut down on the usage of distance emphasis on hard, apply the changes for frost's hitsounds, and I'd suggest asking frost for a bit of help on hitsounds in top diff. Call me back after those are done

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Sinnoh wrote:
the thing said i would only get one kudosu for modding lol
I was pretty tempted to ignore your request because pcmasterrace is more just obnoxious these days :/

General
00:05:124 (1,2,3) - 01:36:235 (3) - These are 3/8 not 1/3. Resnap them with 1/8 beatsnap my bad
00:28:272 (1) - This is 1/6 talked to mir, and we decided that it was a grace note and a 1/8 slider + circle snapped best compared to 1/6 (i hate anime)

Winter Break
00:15:124 (1) - Move this slider head to 430,140 to avoid overlap with 00:13:828 (2,3) - , and reduce how much curve slider has this was intentional and i dont think it looks/plays that bad
00:19:569 (1,2,3,4) - Rhythm isn't following vocal well, make 00:19:569 (1) - 1/1 ok
00:19:569 (1) - nibba y u using old sliders yowatchusayindaWG
00:22:532 (1) - Make this 1/1 or a circle to avoid overmapped tail, as there's no sound. Makes 00:23:087 (3) - clearer there's a sound on this tail made it a circle since 00:22:902 (2) - is a really strong sound
00:25:495 (1) - etc same thing. Avoid using 1/2 sliders with no sound on the tail. It causes a bit of confusion on whether a sound is there for a player, and reduces emphasis on things that do have a sound on the tail. ya
00:36:235 (2) - Lower SV here, too high cool sv
01:09:939 (1) - uh hitwhistles get used too much around this area did some stuff + later on in the kiai hope its good now
01:27:347 (6,7,1) - 1 is not emphasised enough because spacing is the same, decrease spacing of previous jumps a bit (eg 6 can blanket 3) ya good idea, it also fixes up the odd visual spacing lol
Often times I think there's too many hitsounds going on tbh, but I can't point it out specifically whistle hitsounds are going on for the vocal and the notes that stand out in the background eg bells/loud held string notes, still got rid of a bunch in the kiai tho hope it sounds better

Normal diff is great, good job

Cut down on the usage of distance emphasis on hard, apply the changes for frost's hitsounds, and I'd suggest asking frost for a bit of help on hitsounds in top diff. Call me back after those are done

thanks for the mod! in addition to your top diff suggestions i fixed visual spacing up in some places

as per looking at davideds userpage/recent activity ill apply this mod for him

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DavidEd's Hard
See general fixed the first one, i've left the 1/6 out for the reason that it's a grace note, and that would be really difficult to read/play at this level of difficulty so it's remained as a repeat slider as it still snaps correctly
00:20:495 (4,5) - This doesn't really need distance emphasis ok
00:22:532 (1,2,3,4) - ^, only use it on important sounds, otherwise keep to the ds did a thing
00:28:828 (2,3) - Remove emphasis, it makes 00:29:754 (6,1) - stronger if there's fewer things with it i think david was using this as a final build up thats played in the piano for this section, and i think that his use om ephasis on these two notes fits the piano nicely
00:35:124 (4,5) - Can emphasise but reduce distance, not everything needs to be exact same distance when using emphasis ok
Apply the distance emphasis thing to other places where you see fit, there's quite a few. Try to keep them just to the most important sounds, especially for the first half ya did more stuff
01:16:976 (4,5,1) - Too many distance changes for hard nerf abit
01:18:272 (1,2) - The distance between these is wayy to big, makes player think that this is a 3x repeat. Make distance smaller so it's clear this is 5x. yea
01:26:976 (3,4,5,6) - This is a diff spike, make the distance spacing smaller than 01:24:013 (3) - . This is because it's easy to cut corners on the square. Compare how much red is in each pattern https://puu.sh/y7s9k/2a595c9b5e.png https://puu.sh/y7s99/40f99eb25d.png
It's a good diff, but there's too many uses of distance spacing. Cut them down not really sure how i can do this whilst keeping his current flow/pattern style and since this building up into the climax of the song i think its probably ok

updated, fixed some missing hitsounds in normal diff too, just waiting on frosts reply

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Seolv 2017-11-03T11:31:16+00:00

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Rhythm isn't good

modding 11/10 :joy: :gun:

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updated with frosts update finally ><

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Frost
00:05:124 (1) - why are these kicks, overdoing the violin. Would work on a different sample set.

Going to ask for video to be compressed since 24mb is large for 2 minutes, wait until shad0w1and returns~

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Shad0w1and 2017-11-04T18:14:10+00:00

http://puu.sh/yeHgc/f49d51f027.flv
uhmmmmmm

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fix both, thanks for the video shad0w1and!

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Xinnoh 2017-11-07T01:39:57+00:00

ok

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thank you!

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Voli 2017-11-08T19:56:14+00:00

christmas is merry

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MariahCarey wrote:
christmas is merry

christmas is my favourite anime

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Fursum 2017-11-19T17:11:45+00:00

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Chewin 2017-12-04T12:47:33+00:00

hello there I like this song

General

Add "Op" and "Minao Ohse" to the tags, checked it from your screen here https://i.gyazo.com/76841d0376ff49f1ec2 ... de76a5.png

Normal

00:10:495 (3,4) - This part has the same melody of the next section at 00:16:421 (3,4) - so I would make them the same since both section are initially following the same rhythm structure. Also, if I can give you a tip I would choose second section rhythm because it's more appropriated for the easiest diff of the mapset (1/2 slider with small breaks are kinda meh imo);
00:41:791 (1) - Would add soft finish here instead than drum to emphasize the cymbals in the music (I guess this applies to the next diffs as well so I won't mention it again);
00:44:754 (5) - I would add NC here and remove it from 00:46:235 (1) - instead, looks more logical. Apply this to 00:50:680 (5) - as well if you agree;
01:21:791 (1) - This slider is too pushed upside and HP bar covers it, and it's very bad and ugly, try to replace it properly;

DavidEd's Hard

00:28:272 (1) - Would flow better if directed on the right instead than left so it connects better the previous part to the upcoming slider: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9687711
00:35:309 (5,6,1,2) - I think this is pretty confusing and kinda bothered me tbh and I explain you why: 00:35:124 (4,5,6) - the spacing between these can be kept even if I think it's a bit exagerated compared to the previous elements so I would just stack the (5) with 00:34:013 (1) - 's tail, but the problem is the fact that after the jump between 00:35:309 (5,6,1) - that are currently snapped 1/2 the following part 00:35:865 (1,2) - is snapped 1/1 but still have the same spacing of the previous 1/2. So, I highly suggest you to reduce the spacing between 00:35:309 (5,6,1) - so that the 1/2 snapping will have a different spacing (smaller) than the next 1/1 (that can be kept in this way but it will be bigger than the previous part as it should actually be);
01:18:272 (1) - Too much repeats considering the previous one: remove two (so end it on the white tick) and add a circle on the new empty red tick (so 1/2 after the new tail snap);
Not a fun of so much random exagerated changes of spacing in the hard diff but well

frost's Insane

00:32:161 (2) - NC for consistency with 00:35:124 (1) - because of change of SV;
01:18:087 (6) - NC because of flute sound? It would even avoid this only long combo of the whole map;
01:29:847 (4,5) - I would make them more linear with the previous slider since they are actually slighly directed more on the left;
01:31:976 (1,2) - (Personal taste) I would try something else here because I don't like this pattern/overlap to be honest xD Map has been so clean so far but this kinda bothered me a little :c;
01:37:347 (3) - There should be addition: soft and clap on this slider's tail like you did for 01:31:421 (3) - ;

Winter Break

00:18:828 (3) - Would add whislte on head to emphasize the vocal higher pitch (it makes the section look empty), same for 00:24:754 (3) -
00:35:680 (4) - Place to 176|368 to follow the same logic you did for 00:34:754 (1,2) - ? (Placing circle on the same direction of slider's tail);
00:40:186 (4,5,6) - Why is this 1/6? Just snap it 1/4 like the Insane diff please, looks more appropriated;
00:54:013 (2,3,4,5) - I would avoid this since on the next section at 00:57:347 (2,3) - I would have expected the same pattern to be consistent, so just use normal spacing or the same rhythm of second part or 1/2 sliders :\
00:58:828 (2,3,4,5) - What about making the pattern like this? Cursor movement is much more flowing than the current placement: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9687880 (up and down movement);
01:22:902 (4) - I would overlap it with 01:21:791 (1) - 's tail instead, flow would be more way better;

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Chewin wrote:
hello there I like this song

General

Add "Op" and "Minao Ohse" to the tags, checked it from your screen here https://i.gyazo.com/76841d0376ff49f1ec2 ... de76a5.png
Normal

00:10:495 (3,4) - This part has the same melody of the next section at 00:16:421 (3,4) - so I would make them the same since both section are initially following the same rhythm structure. Also, if I can give you a tip I would choose second section rhythm because it's more appropriated for the easiest diff of the mapset (1/2 slider with small breaks are kinda meh imo);
good idea
00:41:791 (1) - Would add soft finish here instead than drum to emphasize the cymbals in the music (I guess this applies to the next diffs as well so I won't mention it again); good idea
00:44:754 (5) - I would add NC here and remove it from 00:46:235 (1) - instead, looks more logical. Apply this to 00:50:680 (5) - as well if you agree; the nc's here follow the vocal phrasing and i think the interjection from violins/bells warrants an nc here (same for next ojne too)
01:21:791 (1) - This slider is too pushed upside and HP bar covers it, and it's very bad and ugly, try to replace it properly; i think its fixed now
Winter Break

00:18:828 (3) - Would add whislte on head to emphasize the vocal higher pitch (it makes the section look empty), same for 00:24:754 (3) - yes
00:35:680 (4) - Place to 176|368 to follow the same logic you did for 00:34:754 (1,2) - ? (Placing circle on the same direction of slider's tail); wanted the change of direction here to further emphasise the bass kick/cymbal right after
00:40:186 (4,5,6) - Why is this 1/6? Just snap it 1/4 like the Insane diff please, looks more appropriated; i think its 1/6 in the music? is it ok to simplify this here to 1/4? im not 100% sure
00:54:013 (2,3,4,5) - I would avoid this since on the next section at 00:57:347 (2,3) - I would have expected the same pattern to be consistent, so just use normal spacing or the same rhythm of second part or 1/2 sliders :\
00:58:828 (2,3,4,5) - What about making the pattern like this? Cursor movement is much more flowing than the current placement: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9687880 (up and down movement); cool idea, i didn't really think to make a similar flowing jump pattern
01:22:902 (4) - I would overlap it with 01:21:791 (1) - 's tail instead, flow would be more way better; agre

thanks for the mod! also double checking artist name cus i think i got it wrong zzzzzzzz

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double edit: i didnt notice i double posted sorry

(((
edit: replying for davided as well as he is still supa busy

DavidEd's Hard

00:28:272 (1) - Would flow better if directed on the right instead than left so it connects better the previous part to the upcoming slider: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9687711 ok
00:35:309 (5,6,1,2) - I think this is pretty confusing and kinda bothered me tbh and I explain you why: 00:35:124 (4,5,6) - the spacing between these can be kept even if I think it's a bit exagerated compared to the previous elements so I would just stack the (5) with 00:34:013 (1) - 's tail, but the problem is the fact that after the jump between 00:35:309 (5,6,1) - that are currently snapped 1/2 the following part 00:35:865 (1,2) - is snapped 1/1 but still have the same spacing of the previous 1/2. So, I highly suggest you to reduce the spacing between 00:35:309 (5,6,1) - so that the 1/2 snapping will have a different spacing (smaller) than the next 1/1 (that can be kept in this way but it will be bigger than the previous part as it should actually be); did a thing, i hope its good now
01:18:272 (1) - Too much repeats considering the previous one: remove two (so end it on the white tick) and add a circle on the new empty red tick (so 1/2 after the new tail snap); the song supports this extended repeat and i think its readable enough tbh with the nc, but if not i think i can reuse the previous rhythm if you want
Not a fun of so much random exagerated changes of spacing in the hard diff but well

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Chewin 2017-12-05T22:13:32+00:00

@DavidEd yea I prefer you use the same rhythm at 01:18:272 (1) it's much more better imo!
btw let me know when everyone fixed it up

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Dilectus 2017-12-06T18:26:31+00:00

Chewin wrote:
@DavidEd yea I prefer you use the same rhythm at 01:18:272 (1) it's much more better imo!

could be confusing for some, so sure

thanks

changes

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Creator:Log Off Now
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Source:この大空に、翼をひろげて SNOW PRESENTS
Tags:if my heart had wings Kono Oozora ni Tsubasa wo Hirogete 羽々音小鳥 Habane Kotori pulltop eroge visual novel expansion opening short version davided frostwich
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