Hi, from my queue
00:12:984 (3) - Kinda hard to read
00:13:284 - There's no sound here, slider's end represents nothing. You should make it 1/1 or put a circle
00:15:784 (3,4) - These two are like 00:14:184 (3,4) - so you think of stacking it
00:16:384 - There's a sound here you omit, so put a circle on 00:16:184 - and decrease the slider's lenght to be 1/1 and move it here
00:22:584 (1) - ^
00:38:184 (1) - It represent nothing, there's sound only on white tick
02:30:984 (1,2) - Looks like gap between them is 1/4, snap little more
I can't find anything in the second part, good job
Hope it will be helpful
00:12:984 (3) - Kinda hard to read
00:13:284 - There's no sound here, slider's end represents nothing. You should make it 1/1 or put a circle
00:15:784 (3,4) - These two are like 00:14:184 (3,4) - so you think of stacking it
00:16:384 - There's a sound here you omit, so put a circle on 00:16:184 - and decrease the slider's lenght to be 1/1 and move it here
00:22:584 (1) - ^
00:38:184 (1) - It represent nothing, there's sound only on white tick
02:30:984 (1,2) - Looks like gap between them is 1/4, snap little more
I can't find anything in the second part, good job
Hope it will be helpful