M4M, very sorry for delay, school days
Easy:
Normal:
Hard:
Good mapset, again, sorry for such a delay
map 2 mod: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/591709
GL!!
Easy:
- 00:10:643 (3,1) - I think you were told about that, but nevertheless: this moment can cause a missreading
- 00:20:243 (1,2,2) - And such sliders without strong sound on red ticks: I can see that you emphasize vocal line here, but imo drum ( or what is it ) sounds are more important here, especially here 00:25:043 (2) - on the down beat 00:26:003 -
- 00:02:723 - I think you need finishes on this points
Normal:
- 00:14:963 (5,6) - I think this rhythm is better because you had already used 1/4 rhythm and this part is something strong https://puu.sh/vqigM/363a6634c5.png
- 00:18:083 - 00:22:883 - 00:25:763 - 00:30:563 - 00:33:443 - I think you need more consistency here, I would recommend to follow vocals everywhere, this would be really better
- 00:42:323 (6,1) - Blanket maybe? It's placement seems a bit random atm imo
- 01:36:803 (6) - nc?
Hard:
- 00:09:683 (3) - 1/4 reverse slider maybe?
- 00:15:203 (3) - 1/4 is so so here, sound on 00:15:323 - is sooooooo weak, maybe do simple 1/2 slider?
- 01:05:603 (5) - 2 taps would fit much better + you did it multiple times later
- 01:20:963 (4) - 01:28:643 (4) - ^
- 00:04:163 (3,4,5) - I think those sounds not so important to give them so much spacing between
- 00:05:843 (5,6,1) - Why spacing to 00:06:563 (1) - is smaller than spacing to 00:06:323 (6) - ? 00:06:563 (1) - is much stronger than 00:06:323 (6) - , make their spacings at least identical
- 00:13:043 (3,4,5) - Too short jump between 00:13:283 (4,5) - . Compare this jump to your last previous
- 00:19:763 (1) - Remove NC, 00:20:243 (5) - NC
- 00:24:083 - ?
- 00:27:683 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1) - Seems dirty for me: change your overlaps, they are a bit annoying
- 00:48:563 (3,4,5) - Strange stack, 00:48:803 (4) - must be stacked with 00:48:563 (3) - because 00:49:043 (5) - is very strong sound
- 00:49:763 (7,8) - No triple?
- 00:52:403 (4,5,6) - ^^
- 00:57:203 (2,3,4,5) - Strange spacing: 00:57:683 (3,4,5) - Those 3 notes are identical, why 00:57:683 (3) - has a such bit jump to it in compare to other taps?
- 01:12:323 (1) - Why so small spacing?
- 01:36:803 (1) - Is probably the strongest sound in whole song, why is it has so small spacing?
- 01:44:963 (1) - Slider ends on strong beat
Good mapset, again, sorry for such a delay
map 2 mod: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/591709
GL!!