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00:14:233 (2) - there is actually a note here but assume that it's a human error since it's such a minor error and use a 1/12 rhythm instead like so https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8543833 also this way you don't get a 390 bpm 1/4 triple :p
00:14:723 (3,4,6) - hitsound these please?, they are quite loud compared to 00:15:031 (5) - and should therefore have hitsounds
00:15:646 (1) - this sliderhead too
00:16:108 (2) - ^
00:15:031 (5) - maybe stack with 00:16:108 (2) - for aesthetic purposes
00:16:569 (1,4) - hitsounds
00:17:031 (4) - i think you should emphasize this better considering its a stronger sound https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8543849 something like this?
00:17:492 (1,2) - hitsounds
00:19:800 (2,1) - maybe stack these?
00:19:339 (1,2,1,2,3,4) - hitsounds again
00:20:724 (4) - same as above
00:21:646 (2) - this would look more neatly placed if you used a triangle like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8543865 using 00:20:570 (3,4,1) -
00:30:723 (2) - this is overmapped, this is the actual rhythm https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8543876
i think you get the idea with hitsounds, if you can't figure it out send me a pm
00:31:646 (2) - this is undermapped, this is the actual rhythm https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8543891
00:38:723 (1,2) - there should be a triple here, to avoid cancer rhythms you can just simplify to http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8543901
00:42:416 (1,2) - here too
00:44:569 (3,4) - ^
00:49:829 (2) - theres a guitar beat here
01:04:304 (5) - it should be changing speed on this note rather than on this note 01:04:379 (6) - because thats what you did 01:01:604 (1) - here and 01:00:404 (1) - gotta stay consistent with streams
also i think the entire stream can be improved using slider to stream, looks a bit messy https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8543920 for example
01:08:804 (1,2,3,4,5) - why is this lower DS than 01:09:179 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1) - ?
01:13:604 (1,2,3,4,5) - same
01:15:329 (8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - is it me or is spacing inconsistent between each note here?
01:16:604 (9,13) - speed changes and strong beats like these are usually new combo'd so it's more obvious and looks better
01:17:279 (1) - spinner from here to 01:19:304 (2) - here?
01:20:504 (4,5) - these should be 1/4 kicksliders because there are sounds on the blue ticks
01:31:304 (7,8,9,10,1) - these sounds are alot louder compared to 01:31:004 (3,4,5,6) - and should be emphasised accordingly
01:38:804 (1) - blanket?
01:40:679 (4) - missed note here
01:42:179 (5) - same
01:42:854 (7,5,1,7,5) - notes to new combo are these, not the ones you have currently, because there are no distinct changes in the drums on each new combo but rather there is are vocal beats instead, and streams can change direction and or new combo with each vocal beat
01:46:529 (3) - overmapped
01:46:829 (5) - same
01:47:279 (2) - there is no beat here
01:47:729 (3) - same
01:48:029 (3) - ^
01:48:329 (4) - ^
01:49:679 (6) - there is a beat here
01:50:129 (6) - overmapped
01:50:804 (1,2) - ^
01:51:704 (4) - this isnt emphasising the loud 1/2 beats as it should do
01:52:379 (2) - theres a note here
01:58:904 (4) - maybe stack with 01:57:404 (3) - ?
01:59:654 (2) - overmapped
02:04:904 (5) - this should be a slider
02:13:379 (6) - theres a note here
02:16:679 (4) - same
02:18:179 (4) - same
02:20:204 (9) - stream should be turning on this note, not this note 02:20:279 (10) -
02:34:529 (3) - overmapped
02:34:829 (1) - ^
02:35:204 (3) - should emphasise the 1/2 beats, could be done with regular 1/4 kicksliders like so https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8544020
02:36:104 (7) - ^
02:37:679 (6) - theres a note here
02:38:804 (1,2,3,4) - emphasising 1/2 beats like above
its really just the same mistakes appearing over and over again..
some general advice
1. Make sure you slow down the song sometimes so you don't miss any important beats
2. Slidertails are reserved for the more sublte beats, whereas circles and sliderheads are for the stronger beats 02:35:354 (4,5) - like the red and white tick here
3. Hitsounds
4. trying to come up with neat overlaps and geometrical shapes to give a sense of aesthetic structure in your map, like suggested here https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8543865
5. You get much cleaner streams with slider to stream and really makes a huge difference.
really good considering you've only uploaded 8 maps!
Keep mapping <3
00:14:723 (3,4,6) - hitsound these please?, they are quite loud compared to 00:15:031 (5) - and should therefore have hitsounds
00:15:646 (1) - this sliderhead too
00:16:108 (2) - ^
00:15:031 (5) - maybe stack with 00:16:108 (2) - for aesthetic purposes
00:16:569 (1,4) - hitsounds
00:17:031 (4) - i think you should emphasize this better considering its a stronger sound https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8543849 something like this?
00:17:492 (1,2) - hitsounds
00:19:800 (2,1) - maybe stack these?
00:19:339 (1,2,1,2,3,4) - hitsounds again
00:20:724 (4) - same as above
00:21:646 (2) - this would look more neatly placed if you used a triangle like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8543865 using 00:20:570 (3,4,1) -
00:30:723 (2) - this is overmapped, this is the actual rhythm https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8543876
i think you get the idea with hitsounds, if you can't figure it out send me a pm
00:31:646 (2) - this is undermapped, this is the actual rhythm https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8543891
00:38:723 (1,2) - there should be a triple here, to avoid cancer rhythms you can just simplify to http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8543901
00:42:416 (1,2) - here too
00:44:569 (3,4) - ^
00:49:829 (2) - theres a guitar beat here
01:04:304 (5) - it should be changing speed on this note rather than on this note 01:04:379 (6) - because thats what you did 01:01:604 (1) - here and 01:00:404 (1) - gotta stay consistent with streams
also i think the entire stream can be improved using slider to stream, looks a bit messy https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8543920 for example
01:08:804 (1,2,3,4,5) - why is this lower DS than 01:09:179 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1) - ?
01:13:604 (1,2,3,4,5) - same
01:15:329 (8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - is it me or is spacing inconsistent between each note here?
01:16:604 (9,13) - speed changes and strong beats like these are usually new combo'd so it's more obvious and looks better
01:17:279 (1) - spinner from here to 01:19:304 (2) - here?
01:20:504 (4,5) - these should be 1/4 kicksliders because there are sounds on the blue ticks
01:31:304 (7,8,9,10,1) - these sounds are alot louder compared to 01:31:004 (3,4,5,6) - and should be emphasised accordingly
01:38:804 (1) - blanket?
01:40:679 (4) - missed note here
01:42:179 (5) - same
01:42:854 (7,5,1,7,5) - notes to new combo are these, not the ones you have currently, because there are no distinct changes in the drums on each new combo but rather there is are vocal beats instead, and streams can change direction and or new combo with each vocal beat
01:46:529 (3) - overmapped
01:46:829 (5) - same
01:47:279 (2) - there is no beat here
01:47:729 (3) - same
01:48:029 (3) - ^
01:48:329 (4) - ^
01:49:679 (6) - there is a beat here
01:50:129 (6) - overmapped
01:50:804 (1,2) - ^
01:51:704 (4) - this isnt emphasising the loud 1/2 beats as it should do
01:52:379 (2) - theres a note here
01:58:904 (4) - maybe stack with 01:57:404 (3) - ?
01:59:654 (2) - overmapped
02:04:904 (5) - this should be a slider
02:13:379 (6) - theres a note here
02:16:679 (4) - same
02:18:179 (4) - same
02:20:204 (9) - stream should be turning on this note, not this note 02:20:279 (10) -
02:34:529 (3) - overmapped
02:34:829 (1) - ^
02:35:204 (3) - should emphasise the 1/2 beats, could be done with regular 1/4 kicksliders like so https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8544020
02:36:104 (7) - ^
02:37:679 (6) - theres a note here
02:38:804 (1,2,3,4) - emphasising 1/2 beats like above
its really just the same mistakes appearing over and over again..
some general advice
1. Make sure you slow down the song sometimes so you don't miss any important beats
2. Slidertails are reserved for the more sublte beats, whereas circles and sliderheads are for the stronger beats 02:35:354 (4,5) - like the red and white tick here
3. Hitsounds
4. trying to come up with neat overlaps and geometrical shapes to give a sense of aesthetic structure in your map, like suggested here https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8543865
5. You get much cleaner streams with slider to stream and really makes a huge difference.
really good considering you've only uploaded 8 maps!
Keep mapping <3