Reduce your mp3 quality to 192kb/s also 1920x1080 background would be better you can put symphonic and gothic in tags !
00:02:262 (3) - Make this a bit less spiky like with a soften shape, 00:12:416 (2) - is good
00:16:569 (3,4) - why this is so different (angle, spacing) than 00:15:646 (1,2) - you must be more consistent when you map 2 same sounds thats look better
00:30:416 (1) - Be carefull with hitsounds consistency here, you forgot some
01:14:579 (14,15,16,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - that kind of stream shapes looks very very weird and not clean, btw, when you're not at ease to make streams without slider convert, don't do it cause sometimes its looks not mastered and its not cool
01:22:004 (1) - you skipped a lot of drum rolls in your map, also be carefull with that !
02:15:404 (1,2) - Spacing is toooo big tbh, compared to the rest of the part
02:22:904 (6,7,8) - Idk for me this triple is bugged, maybe thats just me
04:09:104 (1,2,3,4) - this rhythm is wrong imo ask someone very good for that kind of things like goldenwolf
05:48:404 (4) - Overmapped circle
05:48:554 (1,2,3) - Triple here, then nothing on blue tick and stream start on white one
07:31:604 (5,6,7) - kicksliders pleaseeee!
07:32:654 (4,5,6,7) - same, soo much 1/4 skips
Also, this map need a big improvement in visual to be honest, you must review you stream shapes ! and be carefull with your rhythm, lot of 1/4 skips/triple and thats so sad >.< this map isn't bad at all but if you want to rank it, rework some stream shapes
Good luck~
00:02:262 (3) - Make this a bit less spiky like with a soften shape, 00:12:416 (2) - is good
00:16:569 (3,4) - why this is so different (angle, spacing) than 00:15:646 (1,2) - you must be more consistent when you map 2 same sounds thats look better
00:30:416 (1) - Be carefull with hitsounds consistency here, you forgot some
01:14:579 (14,15,16,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - that kind of stream shapes looks very very weird and not clean, btw, when you're not at ease to make streams without slider convert, don't do it cause sometimes its looks not mastered and its not cool
01:22:004 (1) - you skipped a lot of drum rolls in your map, also be carefull with that !
02:15:404 (1,2) - Spacing is toooo big tbh, compared to the rest of the part
02:22:904 (6,7,8) - Idk for me this triple is bugged, maybe thats just me
04:09:104 (1,2,3,4) - this rhythm is wrong imo ask someone very good for that kind of things like goldenwolf
05:48:404 (4) - Overmapped circle
05:48:554 (1,2,3) - Triple here, then nothing on blue tick and stream start on white one
07:31:604 (5,6,7) - kicksliders pleaseeee!
07:32:654 (4,5,6,7) - same, soo much 1/4 skips
Also, this map need a big improvement in visual to be honest, you must review you stream shapes ! and be carefull with your rhythm, lot of 1/4 skips/triple and thats so sad >.< this map isn't bad at all but if you want to rank it, rework some stream shapes
Good luck~