Hi!
M4M
Gud map. Good luck! - 00:00:418 (1,2) - Blanket not perfect.
- 00:00:418 (1,3) - ^
- 00:15:187 (4) - This needs more emphasis.
- 00:14:264 (3,1) - Why overlap randomly when you have a lot of free space?
- 00:15:648 (1,2,1,2) - These should be symmetrical, because they are the same.
- 00:17:033 (2,2) - Again random overlap.
- 00:30:418 (1,2,3,4) - and 00:31:341 (1,2,3,4) - are more intense parts than for an example 00:29:494 (1,2,3,4) - so I think you should do something about it.
- 00:33:341 (2,4) - I think this should be in the middle of 00:32:264 (1,2) - these sliders.
- 00:34:110 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I'm not saying that I don't like the shape, and it fits the non-geometrical mapping style, but then you should do something cool with these, since it's a slow part.
- 01:19:606 (1,4) - You can overlap these.
- 01:27:706 (4) - This slider should be different from 01:26:806 (1,2,3) -
- 01:27:406 (3,4,3,4) - I'm not a big fan of these overlaps but ok. :v
- 01:53:656 (1,2) - and 01:52:606 (2,3,4,5,1) - overlap is just not good.
- 01:53:206 (1,3) - Too close?
- 02:05:056 - No sound.
- 02:10:756 (5,1) - Close. :I
- 02:14:806 (1,1,1,1) - In that case use structure. Copy the first two then place it over the second circle etc.
- 02:35:206 (2,3,4,5) - Listen to the music, its not the same as 02:34:906 (1) - so you should do something else.
- 02:39:106 (2,3,4) - ^
- 04:31:455 (7,1) - Overlap?
- 05:06:331 (14,3) - ^
- 06:52:456 (1,2,3) - Fix the overlaps. It's good tho.
- The last timing point and the last two inherited timing points are not needed imo.