NM from my queue
mod
Rapsody of a Lolicon
- AR 9.5 i feel is a little too high considering this is below 200 bpm, perhaps something like 9.2 would be better
- 00:08:918 (1,2,3,4) - Not really a fan of this pattern, i feel its flow is a little off as well as the blankets are basically non existant and look a little weird
- 00:16:015 (1) - in my opinon doesnt need to be new combo'd
- 00:17:999 - Is this red line really needed? it changes the offset by 1 ms
- 00:23:497 (2,5) - I feel these notes are a little too close to each other
- 00:27:164 (6) - Should use a sharp angle here to continue the flow http://puu.sh/wBWO3/0063515165.png keeping similar angles while maintaining emphasis in the reducing tone
- 00:28:164 (4) - and 00:28:997 (3) - not a very nice looking overlap imo
- 00:37:997 (1) - Tilt this a few degrees, right now it looks a little off as a perfect horizontal slider
- You use these wide angles for example at 00:27:164 (6) - 00:47:497 (2,3,4) - 00:49:002 (2,3,4) - and while i was playing it, it was a little awkward, using sharper angles imo would play a lot better, this is throughout the whole map, not just this section.
- 00:37:164 (4) - You are mapping to the vocals so why not make this a 1/1 slider, there isnt a strong sound on the white tick that would be lost if you did so and you could still keep 00:37:664 (6) - placement as the flow would be very similar
- 00:56:914 (2,5) - Another overlap, keep an eye out for these, while they might not be noticable in editor, they are a little more noticable ingame
- 00:59:469 (2) - Going over the stream with the slider body isnt something i'd do as it doesnt look very good imo, perhaps tilt a few degrees and it might still be fine
- 00:59:222 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Feels Very cramped in my opinion
- 01:11:876 (6,7,8,9,10) - Stream shape seems a little off, could be a little more refined
Pretty solid
Extra
- 00:14:886 (6) - Might just look better if you stacked this on the end of the burst due to your currently overlap feels like its trying to decide if it wants to overlap or not
- 00:15:047 (7) - place this on 00:16:015 (1) - to play better due to the player not needing to move his hand for no reason
- 00:47:997 (5,6,7,8,1) - These are a little close, could space them out to look a little less cramped
- 00:59:222 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This looks much less cramped than the rapsody, much better
Some angles could be looked at too, pretty solid as well
Insanity
- 00:01:177 (1,3,4) - Not sure why these are straight when nearly everything else in the section have an angle tilt
- 00:39:831 (4,5,6) - Maybe use a sharp angle, since you are trying to create a traiangle, wide angles into triangles generally dont play very well and i would advise against it, this occurs a few times in this section
- 00:47:997 (5,6) - these ignore the snares and the hitsounding + this rhythm choice sounds weird to me
- 01:11:631 (4,1,2,3,4,5,1) - To me this looks really odd, I would suggest perhaps not having a slider into it but it still works as is
Seems good.
Insane
- 00:26:497 (3) - While playing, this felt a little too close to 00:25:831 (1) - and looked awkward
- 00:52:299 (4,1,2) - Since the angles before this are all sharp, using a wide angle flowing into a sharp triangle is really awkward so i would suggest continuing using the sharp angles to make it feel less awkward.
- 01:27:368 (1,2,3) - Since everything before is sharp angles, this feels uncomfortable due having a suddent change from what was before.