Hello
Lolicon
00:05:370 (1,1) - i see no reason of NC these, at least the first one.
00:07:951 (1) - same for this.
00:23:665 (3,1) - probably stack these for better aesthetics?
00:24:332 (6,1) - this is a really bad placement. You should put a bigger spacing between these two if you compare 00:24:332 (6,1) - with 00:23:832 (4,5,6) - .Also the overlap is very confusing
00:24:998 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - i would say the distance here is a bit overdone because music isnt that intense. Maybe use a slider 00:25:332 (4,5) - ?
00:47:498 (2,3,4) - this doesnt look really good imo, and the blunt angle plays awful. Try another pattern?
01:00:321 (6,7) - this is extremely confusing.01:00:101 (5,6,7) - objects are also crushed together. You need to rearrange 01:00:541 (7,8,9) - because rn the flow is bad. Just try sth like
http://puu.sh/wLLGH/930afb36f3.jpg where 01:00:865 (3,5) - are stacked.
01:16:265 (1,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6) - hmm you are just flipping the previous pattern here, dont be lazy while mapping xd
01:35:253 (1) - ctrl+G for better flow?
The map is ok but a bit messy from my point of view. Try improve aesthetics and object placement.
Extra
00:47:498 (2,5) - stack?
00:47:165 (1,2) - distance is too small
01:00:541 (7) - NC,same for top diff
01:01:839 (1,2,4) - etc are they all mis stacks?
01:29:586 (4,1) - this looks bad because of random overlapping.
01:38:389 (2,3) - better use a slider since music is relatively calm
Same as top diff, i think you should improve on aesthetics for jumps. They are sometimes too randomly overlapped.
Insanity
00:29:498 (5,2) - etc should stack them, not gonna mention similar stuff later on
00:39:832 (4,5) - distance is really inconsistent with 00:40:165 (5,6,7,1) -
00:51:310 (1,2) - 00:50:651 (4,5) - bad mapping here. You are putting sliders too casual and they have different spacings and not even parallel
00:52:958 (1) - why nc
01:04:461 (1,2) - for this kind of patterns you often ignore aesthetics
01:36:253 (5) - change to 2 circles because of different music
Insane
00:39:164 (1,2,3,4) - use same spacing pls
01:13:970 (2,3,4,5) - similar spacing issue
01:33:586 (4) - ctrl+g?
tbh your two insane diffs have very similar design and patterns, so i think using one of them is more than enough.
For lower diffs, there are many many structure issues which cannot be ranked at all. You should follow some basic rules when mapping easier difficulties.
Hard
while you are not required to use same spacing, you should keep your spacing rather consistent.
00:01:014 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - etc the first part you are using various distances casually.
00:39:164 (4,5,6,7,1,2) - etc they are supposed to have a similar spacing
01:06:101 (2,3,4) - music is similar so i expect a similar spacing here.
Normal
you should also check ds again and make them the same
00:52:629 (3,4) - change the rhythm here because you want to emphasis 00:53:123 - .maybe make 3 a reverse slider and add a circle?
00:57:738 (1) - make a circular angle would be much better than this kind of straight ones
http://puu.sh/wLMgS/5bb5927e9a.jpg01:22:822 (1,2) - blanket
01:28:586 (2) - i think you should nc here
Easy
00:16:499 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - you are not following the main instrument here...the drum you are following will play very awkward
00:27:331 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - etc you totally messed up the rhythm lol...please try to follow vocal in this case rather than the meaningless background drum beats.
00:42:997 (6,1,2) - dont do this in easy.
01:03:806 (3,4) - hmm try not to use this ds because it's somewhere between overlap and separate and looks very bad.
Easy diff lacks quality imo. You should reconstruct your map with a new rhythm and new placements. 01:02:822 - 01:03:478 - 01:09:379 - etc you missed main vocals. 00:28:497 - etc vocals are here but you simply ignored them.
Good luck on this, i think there's lots of space to improve!