was looking at this in the editor and saw a few things that bugged me, so here you go:
awesome map, really great aesthetics, consistent flow, pretty bg. its got it all. hoping that the rc will send this map straight to ranked! xoxo
~pokey
Ambivalence
00:24:112 (2,3,1) - At these points it looks like a stack error. Maybe you chose to keep it like it, but as is, it's very choppy. Perhaps move the stacked notes to a more distant area (maybe like this )
00:48:712 (1) - On the top of this slider, it seems really flat and concise. imo it looks better when its more puffy and moved up. your call idk
00:51:562 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - This rhythm is really weird. You make up the 3 drums with 3 notes, but then a double note with a slider, which only requires one click. I would make the 3 sliders three doubles instead, to make up for the 2 drums.
01:01:162 (1,2,3,1,1,1) - ^^^
01:23:512 (1,2) - this overlap is kinda gross looking idk
01:55:762 (3,4,1) - Crazyyy. You can keep it since it does comply with the sr but like... on 200bpm (removing it doesn't change the sr either tho).
02:10:312 (1) - to 02:13:312 (3) - HoLy VoLuMe default skin
03:07:312 (1) - I slowed this to 25% and there are still notes on the red and white ticks. I can't see the reason for this 1/3 slider (
04:05:512 (1) - again HoLy VoLuMe
04:57:862 (1) - There's an important drum on the sliderend, which I think removes its emphasis. If u wanna keep it that's fine but I disagree with this kind fo backwards emphasis ://
05:34:312 (1) - Maybe raise the volume a bit here, I can't hear anything xdd
05:44:512 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Bit of an intense stream in a cool-down part of the song. Maybe scale it down or turn half of it into a slider or something.
00:48:712 (1) - On the top of this slider, it seems really flat and concise. imo it looks better when its more puffy and moved up. your call idk
00:51:562 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - This rhythm is really weird. You make up the 3 drums with 3 notes, but then a double note with a slider, which only requires one click. I would make the 3 sliders three doubles instead, to make up for the 2 drums.
01:01:162 (1,2,3,1,1,1) - ^^^
01:23:512 (1,2) - this overlap is kinda gross looking idk
01:55:762 (3,4,1) - Crazyyy. You can keep it since it does comply with the sr but like... on 200bpm (removing it doesn't change the sr either tho).
02:10:312 (1) - to 02:13:312 (3) - HoLy VoLuMe default skin
03:07:312 (1) - I slowed this to 25% and there are still notes on the red and white ticks. I can't see the reason for this 1/3 slider (
04:05:512 (1) - again HoLy VoLuMe
04:57:862 (1) - There's an important drum on the sliderend, which I think removes its emphasis. If u wanna keep it that's fine but I disagree with this kind fo backwards emphasis ://
05:34:312 (1) - Maybe raise the volume a bit here, I can't hear anything xdd
05:44:512 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Bit of an intense stream in a cool-down part of the song. Maybe scale it down or turn half of it into a slider or something.
awesome map, really great aesthetics, consistent flow, pretty bg. its got it all. hoping that the rc will send this map straight to ranked! xoxo
~pokey