01:02:600 (3,4) - imo 2 1/2 sliders would fit the vocals a lot better since "I" starts at 01:02:600 and "thank" starts at 01:03:065 . A 1/1 slider at 01:02:600 can work as you did but when you add the circle 01:03:298 (4) it interrupts what you're going for
01:03:531 (1,3) - these 2 objects being so close is a bit of an eye sore. Maybe it's a harsh choice of words bit the fact that they look like thy're almost touching is un-ideal
01:49:156 (3,1) - ^ a bit here too tho it's not as bad. You can pull 01:48:224 (1,3) a bit further out and it would fix it/look better imo
02:12:443 (1,2,3) - the spacing combined with the stack makes the 1/4 un-intuitive to play. Reducing the spacing would make it more easily readable as well as be a lot more comfortable to play. A similar pattern as 03:28:824 (1,2,3) would be ideal
02:49:713 (1) - nice
04:21:945 (3,1) - similar to 01:49:156 (3,1)
[] GL ~
If the jump patter in the current version is the same as the one Gabe mentioned above me then I'd like to add to that, I think it's fine
01:03:531 (1,3) - these 2 objects being so close is a bit of an eye sore. Maybe it's a harsh choice of words bit the fact that they look like thy're almost touching is un-ideal
01:49:156 (3,1) - ^ a bit here too tho it's not as bad. You can pull 01:48:224 (1,3) a bit further out and it would fix it/look better imo
02:12:443 (1,2,3) - the spacing combined with the stack makes the 1/4 un-intuitive to play. Reducing the spacing would make it more easily readable as well as be a lot more comfortable to play. A similar pattern as 03:28:824 (1,2,3) would be ideal
02:49:713 (1) - nice
04:21:945 (3,1) - similar to 01:49:156 (3,1)
[] GL ~
If the jump patter in the current version is the same as the one Gabe mentioned above me then I'd like to add to that, I think it's fine