Thank youuuuuu <3Gabe wrote:
I can't take my eyes off youForever In My Sight
- 00:22:512 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Hearing these objects makes me unconfortable because the rhythm is not the same as you've done on 00:15:059 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4) - . Some emplacements like 00:23:444 (4) - would require a slider because of the "violin-kindofsound" that is present at this moment. The fact that you are using three circles in a 1/4 measure doesn't follow it. It would be nice if you can try to do something else in here. True~ I replaced the first couple trios of circles since those felt awkward to the rhythm (they were actually following the rhythm but it sounds to low); however, left the other circles after the repeat slider untouched since those are obviously following the violin thingy~
- 00:31:839 (1,2,3,4) - If you were following the flow from 00:30:907 (3,4) - , doing a CTRL+H to these objects would be appropriate as the flow will be more natural and linear. The way it is right now, the flow goes to the opposite direction. Hmm, I really don't feel anything bad about the current flow, no change here :c
- 00:54:211 (1) - Imperfect symmetrical slider. Since you used symmetry to all of your map, I believe you should manage on making this slider more symmetric. Oh my god of symmetry! Fixed! I wasn't able to make it 100% perfect symmetric, but it's something about 98% I guess, not noticeable anymore anyway~
- 01:27:056 (2,3,4) - As for these circles, the spacing from (1,2) is quite different from (4,1). In this case, you were doing a jump from (2) to (3) while staking (4) to the circle (2). After the circle (4), it just feels weird to make another jump to catch a symmetrical slider while there wasn't a jump at the beginning. What I am suggesting you here, is to place these objects that way, by making a jump from (1,2) and (4,1) while keeping a neat flow: nice idea! applied!
- 02:01:268 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I am really unsure how I can describe this, but the movement and the jumps are weird? I just believe it would be better if you were doing something like this (while stacking the next slider (1) to the circle (5)) as the jump will be in the same direction over and over: after testing many times I still don't believe the jumps/flow is/are weird~
- 04:19:151 (1) - There's missing a clap at the end of this slider :^) oh true, fixed!
- 04:30:094 (4) - Since you used symmetry, I believe this circle should be placed at the opposite of the circle (2), so at x:412 y:184. The jump for the next slider is suitable in this case nice one! applied!
- 04:34:052 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Since this is copy/pasted from the first kiai, you should do what I suggested there also same reply:p
Good luck~
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