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Forever In My Sight
- 00:22:512 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Hearing these objects makes me unconfortable because the rhythm is not the same as you've done on 00:15:059 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4) - . Some emplacements like 00:23:444 (4) - would require a slider because of the "violin-kindofsound" that is present at this moment. The fact that you are using three circles in a 1/4 measure doesn't follow it. It would be nice if you can try to do something else in here.
- 00:31:839 (1,2,3,4) - If you were following the flow from 00:30:907 (3,4) - , doing a CTRL+H to these objects would be appropriate as the flow will be more natural and linear. The way it is right now, the flow goes to the opposite direction.
- 00:54:211 (1) - Imperfect symmetrical slider. Since you used symmetry to all of your map, I believe you should manage on making this slider more symmetric.
- 01:27:056 (2,3,4) - As for these circles, the spacing from (1,2) is quite different from (4,1). In this case, you were doing a jump from (2) to (3) while staking (4) to the circle (2). After the circle (4), it just feels weird to make another jump to catch a symmetrical slider while there wasn't a jump at the beginning. What I am suggesting you here, is to place these objects that way, by making a jump from (1,2) and (4,1) while keeping a neat flow:
- 02:01:268 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I am really unsure how I can describe this, but the movement and the jumps are weird? I just believe it would be better if you were doing something like this (while stacking the next slider (1) to the circle (5)) as the jump will be in the same direction over and over:
- 04:19:151 (1) - There's missing a clap at the end of this slider :^)
- 04:30:094 (4) - Since you used symmetry, I believe this circle should be placed at the opposite of the circle (2), so at x:412 y:184. The jump for the next slider is suitable in this case
- 04:34:052 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Since this is copy/pasted from the first kiai, you should do what I suggested there also
Good luck~