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Kilabarus

Renumi wrote:

[light insane]
ghost was nice Thx!

00:03:666 (3) - ctrl+j for some flow? What is flow
00:03:032 (1,4) - copy and paste these two for some parallel? looks neater 0: Doesn't rly matter
00:06:412 (1,3) - fix blanket ok
00:12:750 (8,9) - the flow on these feels way too forced yo maybe you could place '8' like more on the right hand side to '9' to accomodate a bit better for flow I think you missed timing
00:16:342 (6,1) - reduce spacing xd It's star pattern lol
Thx!

@megbeg не оч понял, о чем ты, АР повысил

MisakiAN wrote:

eya,NM from nowhere =w=

[Masha's Light Insane]
this is too far for Light Insane Diff,try to move this 00:03:032 (1) - to X=96 and Y=192,and then Curve it,so it can blanked with this circle 00:02:609 (5) -
this is hard too read. maybe you can try to ctrl g this 00:05:567 (5,6) - and stack this 00:06:201 (8) - with this 00:06:412 (1) - It's not lul
00:09:792 (1) - put hitsound finish Ok
00:16:975 (2,3) - try to move this,so it wont get overlap with this,00:16:553 (1) - .and move this too 00:17:821 (4) - if you want to make it blanked with this 00:16:975 (2,3) - Overlaps r not bad, not blankets r 2
00:19:933 (1) - Finish ok
00:27:328 (4,5,6) - stack this with this 00:26:482 (1) - They're already
Thx!

Diff: https://puu.sh/w6DsB/8af7fa2c78.osu
Topic Starter
Djulus
Updated! (don't mod the normal diff because i''m waiting his remap) xd
DepressedCactus
Zop's True Love.osu
Basically a transformed (scaled up, rotated, raised stats) copy of Tarrasky's True Love, but most importantly, I fixed the timing offset for you - it should be okay on Hidden OD10 with these settings. You decide if you really want to add this as a new difficulty.
Shmiklak
We talked about Hard diff. No kudosu because I modded the set before
11:27 DefendeRDjulus: helyou go zamod' harumachi ples
11:27 DefendeRDjulus: moyu diffu
11:27 Shmiklak: okay
11:27 Shmiklak: np it please
11:28 *DefendeRDjulus is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1278814 Hanasaka Yui(CV: M.A.O) - Harumachi Clover]
11:29 Shmiklak: Норм
11:29 Shmiklak: Больше полишинга и я бы даже дал бабл
11:29 DefendeRDjulus: wow
11:29 Shmiklak: Теперь давай посмотрим внимательнее
11:29 DefendeRDjulus: ок
11:30 Shmiklak: 00:02:187 (3) - Этот должен быть дальше, не так ли?
11:30 Shmiklak: Он у тебя сейчас на 1.2
11:30 Shmiklak: А надо на 1.3
11:30 Shmiklak: Ибо ты так юзал
11:30 Shmiklak: тем более это даунбит
11:30 DefendeRDjulus: мле
11:30 Shmiklak: А его не стоит принижать
11:31 DefendeRDjulus: сделаль
11:31 Shmiklak: 00:03:243 (2,4) - мне этот оверлап не внушает доверия
11:31 Shmiklak: Давай избавимся от него
11:32 Shmiklak: Может быть ты бланкет сделаешь
11:32 DefendeRDjulus: и
11:32 DefendeRDjulus: ок
11:32 Shmiklak: Как то так сделай https://puu.sh/w8pcM/0c79fdda1a.jpg
11:33 Shmiklak: А дальше там по флоу еще сделай
11:33 Shmiklak: Как ты чувствуешь сделай
11:33 DefendeRDjulus: ок ща
11:33 Shmiklak: 00:01:975 (2,3) - вообще мне тут флоу не нравится но это не столь важно ибо я не аспирин
11:34 DefendeRDjulus: пусть будет
11:34 DefendeRDjulus: по прежнему
11:34 DefendeRDjulus: или же как нибудь сделаю
11:34 DefendeRDjulus: что ли..
11:35 Shmiklak: Если хочешь угол от 2 то можно 3 наверх
11:35 Shmiklak: ща
11:35 Shmiklak: покажу как
11:35 Shmiklak: https://puu.sh/w8piG/529a61aaeb.jpg
11:35 Shmiklak: Так красивее
11:35 Shmiklak: И по флоу едет
11:36 Shmiklak: Но если так сделаешь то надо будет делать крупные перестройки
11:36 Shmiklak: Дальше
11:36 DefendeRDjulus: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8240187 вот смотри
11:36 DefendeRDjulus: ок выберу твой вариант
11:36 Shmiklak: Я не думаю что стак нужен
11:36 DefendeRDjulus: понял
11:37 Shmiklak: Ибо он не использовался в подобных местах
11:37 Shmiklak: Вообще со стаками надо быть аккуратнее
11:37 Shmiklak: И юзать их когда это нужно
11:37 DefendeRDjulus: ясна
11:38 Shmiklak: Бтв ласт диффа немного овердан
11:38 Shmiklak: Но это потом
11:38 Shmiklak: Когда БНом стану
11:38 Shmiklak: Да, да я чекну эту карту если стану БНом
11:38 DefendeRDjulus: лол
11:38 Shmiklak: И нет, я не рофлю
11:38 DefendeRDjulus: обязательно :DD
11:39 Shmiklak: 00:06:835 (3,4) - да бля таких стаков больше нет
11:39 Shmiklak: Не делай
11:39 Shmiklak: Если есть то покажи
11:39 DefendeRDjulus: хм
11:39 Shmiklak: 00:08:736 (1) - тут нк лишнее
11:39 Shmiklak: 00:09:792 (6) - а тут пропустил
11:40 DefendeRDjulus: сделаль
11:40 Shmiklak: 00:14:018 (1) - вот тут под вопросом нк
11:40 Shmiklak: Где нибудь еще такое-же есть?
11:40 Shmiklak: Если есть то пусть будет
11:40 DefendeRDjulus: убрем нк
11:40 Shmiklak: Если нет то лучше убери
11:41 Shmiklak: 00:26:482 (5) - НК лучше звучит тут чем на 00:27:116 (1) -
11:41 DefendeRDjulus: нету
11:41 Shmiklak: 00:17:187 (1) - а этот нк не нужен
11:41 Shmiklak: и бланкет подровня
11:41 Shmiklak: й
11:41 Shmiklak: 00:13:595 (2,3) - тут кстати тоже бланкет
11:42 DefendeRDjulus: норм же не?
11:42 Shmiklak: 00:18:243 (3) - миссд нк
11:42 Shmiklak: Что норм?
11:42 DefendeRDjulus: бланкет
11:42 Shmiklak: Неа
11:42 Shmiklak: Хуёво
11:42 Shmiklak: Присмотрись
11:43 DefendeRDjulus: ща фиксну
11:43 Shmiklak: 00:14:229 (3,1) - особенно тут видно что хуёвый
11:43 Shmiklak: 00:19:511 (1) - не надо нк 00:19:933 (2) - нк
11:44 Shmiklak: 00:21:835 - лишний финиш
11:44 DefendeRDjulus: сделаль
11:44 Shmiklak: 00:23:102 - финиш нуже
11:44 Shmiklak: н
11:44 DefendeRDjulus: упс
11:44 Shmiklak: 00:24:159 (4,1) - бланкет
11:44 Shmiklak: И тоже финиш
11:44 Shmiklak: 00:24:792 (1,2) - бланкет
11:44 Shmiklak: Вообще у тебя бланкеты везде хуёвые
11:44 Shmiklak: Тебе надо с ними разобраться
11:45 Shmiklak: НК ставь каждый Новый такт
11:45 Shmiklak: А в местах типо 00:24:159 (4,1,2) - ставь там где слайдер пересекает белую линию
11:45 Shmiklak: То есть в этом случае на
11:45 Shmiklak: 00:24:792 (1) -
11:45 DefendeRDjulus: э
11:45 DefendeRDjulus: ща
11:46 Shmiklak: 00:27:328 (2) - тут бы выделить эти биты
11:47 Shmiklak: Везде выделял
11:47 Shmiklak: А тут решил на вокал идти
11:47 Shmiklak: Не надо так
11:47 Shmiklak: Ну так сойдет
11:47 DefendeRDjulus: тогда
11:47 DefendeRDjulus: тройку?
11:47 Shmiklak: Как хочешь
11:47 Shmiklak: Как тебе кажется лучше будет
11:47 Shmiklak: Диффа так
11:47 DefendeRDjulus: пусть будет тройкой
11:47 Shmiklak: На троечку
11:48 DefendeRDjulus: :^)
11:48 Shmiklak: То есть ранкнуть можно
11:48 Shmiklak: Но всё же плохо
11:48 Shmiklak: Ну крч позовешь если что
11:48 Shmiklak: Посмотрим что с ней можно сделать
11:48 Shmiklak: А сейчас собирай моды хорошие
11:48 DefendeRDjulus: кого?
11:48 DefendeRDjulus: ы
11:48 Shmiklak: Меня позовешь
11:48 Shmiklak: Если я БНом стану
11:48 DefendeRDjulus: ок
Topic Starter
Djulus
thx bro you really helped me <3
elena2705
Привет всем
Меня попросили)

Erra's Normal

00:03:032 (1) - Ds!!!! Здесь прямо очень нужно!!! Потому что я только с 4 раза поняла как это вообще нажимать. Да и потом это начало. А ты уже сбил игрока причем конкретно сбил, на пол карты. Реально только из-за этого одного неправильного расстояния, считай карта потеряна. Пожалуйста исправь, правда бомбит)
00:11:482 - куда пропал звук??? это не звучит, лучше не менять на 60%

beiv's Easy

00:22:891 - тут должен быть круг. Структура без него портиться, и становиться не понятно играть
00:24:159 - добавь круг, 00:24:370 - удали круг, 00:24:581 - добавь круг. Так карта понятна, и структура остаётся привычной для игры, и очень подчеркивает силу этого момента в песне. Так что советую)
00:04:299 (2,3) - стэки низя!!! на изи уровне стэки противопоказаны вообще, потому что начинающие игроки, за кругом не видят ничего.
Мне нрав саунды, хорошо подобраны)

К другим уровням претензий нет) Всё отлично)
Так что удачи^^
Topic Starter
Djulus

elena2705 wrote:

Привет всем
Меня попросили)

Erra's Normal

00:03:032 (1) - Ds!!!! Здесь прямо очень нужно!!! Потому что я только с 4 раза поняла как это вообще нажимать. Да и потом это начало. А ты уже сбил игрока причем конкретно сбил, на пол карты. Реально только из-за этого одного неправильного расстояния, считай карта потеряна. Пожалуйста исправь, правда бомбит)
00:11:482 - куда пропал звук??? это не звучит, лучше не менять на 60% гд скоро должна быть ремапнута, прости что не предупредил тебе...

beiv's Easy

00:22:891 - тут должен быть круг. Структура без него портиться, и становиться не понятно играть
00:24:159 - добавь круг, 00:24:370 - удали круг, ок 00:24:581 - добавь круг. нет, так как там по вокалу и даже будет не играбельной, ставил слайдер на красном тике т.к там сильный бит. Так карта понятна, и структура остаётся привычной для игры, и очень подчеркивает силу этого момента в песне. Так что советую)
00:04:299 (2,3) - стэки низя!!!на изи уровне стэки противопоказаны вообще, потому что начинающие игроки, за кругом не видят ничего.
Мне нрав саунды, хорошо подобраны) ой. пофиксил

К другим уровням претензий нет) Всё отлично)
Так что удачи^^ спасибо
Tarrasky

Zop wrote:

Zop's True Love.osu
Basically a transformed (scaled up, rotated, raised stats) copy of Tarrasky's True Love, but most importantly, I fixed the timing offset for you - it should be okay on Hidden OD10 with these settings. You decide if you really want to add this as a new difficulty.
who request this?

DefendeRDjulus i tried update my diff and crashed here, what you have changed?
Topic Starter
Djulus

Tarrasky wrote:

Zop wrote:

Zop's True Love.osu
Basically a transformed (scaled up, rotated, raised stats) copy of Tarrasky's True Love, but most importantly, I fixed the timing offset for you - it should be okay on Hidden OD10 with these settings. You decide if you really want to add this as a new difficulty.
who request this?

DefendeRDjulus i tried update my diff and crashed here, what you have changed?
oh fuck, idk, i not changed your diff except disable widescreen support /shrug
@zop sorry i don't accept gd's for this map anymore, sorry..
P.S: erra's normal diff remapped!
09kami

09kami wrote:

[m4m]

Unused hitsounds:

normal-hitclap.wav

normal-hitfinish.wav
normal-hitwhistle.wav


Title:
...why no tvsize? The full version of the song is 4 minutes and 6 seconds


Tag
市道真央

[Tarrasky's True Love]

00:14:018 (5) - add nc

00:16:553 (1,2) - emmmm...try
http://puu.sh/wpmhK/a3ae2f4034.png


[Masha's Light Insane]

wow good difficulty

00:12:750 (1,3) - Swap nc?

[Hard]

00:02:926 (6) - delete

00:22:363 (4) - ↑

00:27:433 (4) - ↑
SnowNiNo_
m4m
  • [Tarrasky's True Love]
  1. oky so the following mod are all suggestion, feel free to denied all
  2. 00:09:158 (6,7) - ctrl + g would make the flow smoother since it follows the previous up and down patterns
  3. 00:10:849 (5,6) - make the spacing bigger for emphasis the high pitch vocal
  4. 00:13:173 (1,2,3,4) - this is the most intense part of the song so making the spacing biggest here makes more sense, especially 00:13:806 (4,5) - the spacing here is way to small
  5. 00:16:342 (6,7,1) - flow here should be ctrl + h ed
  • [Masha's Light Insane]
  1. 00:05:989 (7,8) - could make the spacing different to emphasis the vocal
  • [Hard]
  1. 00:07:680 (4,5,1) - inconsistent spacing
  2. 00:25:743 - undermapped, add a note
Topic Starter
Djulus

09kami wrote:

09kami wrote:

[m4m]

Unused hitsounds:

normal-hitclap.wav

normal-hitfinish.wav
normal-hitwhistle.wav
oh i will delete this hitsounds

Title:
...why no tvsize? The full version of the song is 4 minutes and 6 seconds thats "tv size" writed on tags,But still it is not necessary.


Tag
市道真央 LOL, thats chinese language? but i will not accepted.
[Hard]

00:02:926 (6) - delete why? thats ok for hard diff

00:22:363 (4) - ↑

00:27:433 (4) - ↑
thank you :D

SnowNiNo_ wrote:

m4m
  • [Hard]
  1. 00:07:680 (4,5,1) - inconsistent spacing fixed
  2. 00:25:743 - undermapped, add a note Thats ok, but i replaced sliders
thanks
09kami
emmmm....It was actually her name.

M·A·O :
市道 真央(いちみち まお,Ichimichi Mao)

edit : I've changed my mind. I'll give you a detailed Mod
Topic Starter
Djulus

09kami wrote:

emmmm....It was actually her name.

M·A·O :
市道 真央(いちみち まお,Ichimichi Mao

edit : I've changed my mind. I'll give you a detailed Mod
oh shit, i'm stupid, sorry me, thank you very much for your mod
P.S: i checked wikipedia :p
09kami

09kami 改二 wrote:

no kd pls

soft-sliderslide.wav
if mute .at least 44kb

Background dimensions are more than allowed maximum - exceed rankable limitation of 1366x768


[Tarrasky's True Love]

00:02:187 (3,4,5,6,7,1) - Stream is out of place . there should be a more appropriate curve

00:04:299 (4,5) - I think it should be stack

00:15:285 (2,3,4,5) - I don't think the space is right here .because 00:08:102 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - .

00:16:553 (1,2) - Very weird location ...why no 00:11:482 (1,2) - ?

[Masha's Light Insane]

00:10:637 (3) - nc

00:12:750 (6,1) - swap nc


[Hard]

00:14:229 (5) - slider in the middle of strange whistle

00:16:553 (1) - ↑

[M a r v o l l o's Normal]

00:28:490 - Spinner start

pay attention to your slider velocity .using 1.4 of slider velocity in Normal is very dangerous

[beiv's Easy]

Draining time: 00:28:943


Ranking Criteria - Audio
https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Ranking_Criteria#Audio




The minimum draining (play) time for a map is 30 seconds (but the recommended minimum is 45 seconds). If your map is shorter than that, then try looping the song with an audio editing program. This is so each map gives a high enough score, and also so people do not try and cut songs too short for no reason, thus stopping people from enjoying the song fully.
Topic Starter
Djulus

09kami wrote:

09kami 改二 wrote:

no kd pls

soft-sliderslide.wav
if mute .at least 44kb oh ok

Background dimensions are more than allowed maximum - exceed rankable limitation of 1366x768

[Hard]

00:14:229 (5) - slider in the middle of strange whistle fixed

00:16:553 (1) - ↑

[beiv's Easy]

Draining time: 00:28:943 fixed


Ranking Criteria - Audio
https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Ranking_Criteria#Audio




The minimum draining (play) time for a map is 30 seconds (but the recommended minimum is 45 seconds). If your map is shorter than that, then try looping the song with an audio editing program. This is so each map gives a high enough score, and also so people do not try and cut songs too short for no reason, thus stopping people from enjoying the song fully.
about background posted in 4th page by shmiklak and vanucik
thanks
lit120
Use kurante's mapset for the mp3 then
Topic Starter
Djulus

lit120 wrote:

Use kurante's mapset for the mp3 then
but, my mapset's mp3 Similar to kurante's mp3...
lit120
Ow, sorry, i'm not on my laptop atm .-.

Better tell him about that though
Shmiklak
Spinner counts as drain time and we can see it in all other ranked sets of this song. Also, 09kami, please re-read RC. Now, maximal resolution of BG pictures is 1920x1200 not as you said.
Topic Starter
Djulus
@lit120
owo ok
vanucik

09kami wrote:

09kami 改二 wrote:

Background dimensions are more than allowed maximum - exceed rankable limitation of 1366x768
please read the RC again
lit120
Now the max is 1920x1080 though for 16:9 res owo
Kilabarus
Nothing changed from mods:

09kami: See no reasons for doing this

SnowNiNo_: There are vocals on all circles, so no reason for this

@Джулус, хватит упоминать меня в разных говноконфах. Считай это предупреждением
SnowNiNo_

MashaSG wrote:

SnowNiNo_: There are vocals on all circles, so no reason for this
lol do u even know wat im saying, the mod is about spacing nothing to do with the circles
Shmiklak

09kami wrote:

[M a r v o l l o's Normal]

00:28:490 - Spinner start and what? I see that spinner starts here, it's unnecessary to show me it.

pay attention to your slider velocity .using 1.4 of slider velocity in Normal is very dangerous cool
No changes because there wasn't anything in your mod, I cannot even call it "mod".
[]
Djulus asked my opinion about drain time, so let me finish this disussion about drain times. We can find several nominated sets of this song which have got a spinner at the end and it starts on ~28th second:
https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1201303
https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1181061
https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1180209
As I told before spinner counts as drain time too so it's pretty well rn, also let's take a look at other songs which have similar problem but they were going to get approved:
https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1172819 - here last slider starts on 4:48 and as we may see it's much less than 5 minutes minimum, but it ends on 5:05 so it's just good to use such sliders/spinners at the end.
btw also you suggested looping song to increase drain time, but let me show you incoming RC update: t/602728
Songs/maps cannot be modified to reach the minimum drain time. Abusing the 5 minute limitation removes its intended purpose. Types of abuse include:
Lowering a song’s BPM
Looping portions of a song
Adding sounds before/after a song begins/ends
Extending spinners/sliders over inaudible sounds
Manually removing breaks
Though, this rule wasn't added yet but it might be added soon so better do not suggest things in which you aren't sure and which may create problems in the near future. I hope that my arguments will stop this discussion.
[]
Also Masha's diff has some things that hurt me, so let me point them up.
  1. 00:05:567 (5,6) - I don't see reasons to use stack here because there are no same stacks, you used jumps for the other same moments.
  2. Also I agree with SnowNino that you could emphasis vocal power here 00:05:989 (7,8) - by using different spacing because 00:06:201 - sounds much quieter than this one 00:05:990 -
  3. I cannot agree with such low DS in placements like 00:08:102 (1,2) - 00:08:525 (3,4) - 00:08:948 (5,6) - etc because the most part of the song has been emphasized by high DS and even if thee ones sound quieter they could be emphasized a bit more. Also, it's so stupid: 00:08:102 - the most loud part of the tact is emphasized by 1.5DS and this one 00:08:525 (3) - , which doesn't sound really strong tbh, placed for 2.5, same for 00:04:722 (1,3) -
I think your diff could be much better, I pointed the most important things which hurt me.
[]
That's all for now, I am not having anything else to say rn.
Topic Starter
Djulus

MashaSG wrote:

@Джулус, хватит упоминать меня в разных говноконфах. Считай это предупреждением
но я ведь никого не упоменял /shrug
Kilabarus

Shmiklak wrote:

[]
Also Masha's diff has some things that hurt me, so let me point them up.
  1. 00:05:567 (5,6) - I don't see reasons to use stack here because there are no same stacks, you used jumps for the other same moments. vocals "ke ke"
  2. Also I agree with SnowNino that you could emphasis vocal power here 00:05:989 (7,8) - by using different spacing because 00:06:201 - sounds much quieter than this one 00:05:990 - This is made for better playability and structure
  3. I cannot agree with such low DS in placements like 00:08:102 (1,2) - 00:08:525 (3,4) - 00:08:948 (5,6) - etc because the most part of the song has been emphasized by high DS and even if thee ones sound quieter they could be emphasized a bit more. Also, it's so stupid: 00:08:102 - the most loud part of the tact is emphasized by 1.5DS and this one 00:08:525 (3) - , which doesn't sound really strong tbh, placed for 2.5, same for 00:04:722 (1,3) - flow changes
I think your diff could be much better, I pointed the most important things which hurt me. https://coub.com/view/3ckmosjr
[]
That's all for now, I am not having anything else to say rn.
Fixed 1 slider https://puu.sh/wshEE/7774090ef6.osu
marcuddles
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Pretty much an aesthetics-about mod, so it's composed from 90% of subjective suggestions

[Tarrasky's Insane]
  1. 00:03:454 (2,3) - Move these objects to the right, you have two ways to do this, 1) Move them to x:284 y:176, they will look like they're part of the triplet in this way, or, 2)Overlap them with 00:02:821 (6) - and edit the slidershape (make a blanket, for example) so it won't touch 00:03:032 (1) -
  2. Overlap 00:05:990 (7) - with 00:05:144 (3) -
  3. Move 00:10:637 (4) - down, so it won't overlap with 00:09:370 (7) -
  4. 00:11:482 (1,2) - The map is basically jump spams, so you should at least use 1/2 sliders instead of 1/1, using a such "calm" pattern out of nowhere doesn't make sense
  5. 00:14:018 (5) - NC?
  6. 00:15:919 (4,6,7,1) - Use the same distance snap between (4) and (6) ._;
  7. 00:16:553 (1,2) - Same thing as before, no reason for 1/1 sliders, the map is full of 1/2 beats, you alternate these 1/2-1/1 patterns pretty randomly, is a there a reason for this or it's just a random map? There are clear beats on the redlines, like 00:16:764 -, don't follow only vocals randomly.
  8. 00:18:666 (3) - Move it to x:264 y:320 or overlap it with 00:18:032 (4) -, same thing as before
  9. 00:18:877 (4) - Move it a bit up so it won't overlap with 00:17:821 (3) -
  10. 00:24:792 (1) - Silence the sliderend
  11. 00:26:482 (1) - Put a 5 tick slider (with a silenced sliderend) and circle also here, the beat on 00:26:905 - is even stronger than the beat on 00:25:215 -. And re-arrange the pattern, of course.
[Masha's Light Insane]
  • In first place, this isn't a Light Insane at all, all the patterns are Insane patterns, they're easy because the BPM is low.
  1. 00:03:454 (2,3) - Put it a bit up, looks really bad if it's so near to 00:02:821 (6) -
  2. 00:04:194 - Rip sound
  3. 00:07:997 (5) - Another beat you didn't map
  4. 00:09:581 (8,9,1) - The sound here is almost absent, but you mapped a triplet, why didn't you map triplets before when the sounds were much stronger?
  5. 00:12:961 (7,1) - Put a triplet
  6. Jumps were mapped without a normal structure before, why don't you keep doing it instead of using squares out of nowhere as you did for 00:18:243 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ?
  7. 00:23:102 (1,1) - Silence the sliderends


    [Hard]
    1. 00:07:997 (5,1) - Too much distance, consider to reduce the spacing between the circle and the sliders.
    2. 00:14:018 (3,4,5) - Put the triplet after the red tick (re-arrange the pattern, obviously), it doesn't make sense right now, since the slider ends on a strong beat
Didn't find anything in Shmik's Normal.

About veib's easy, it's a nonsense map
It follows irregual rhythms, objects and pauses are placed randomly, it's definitely not ready for a chance in ranking
Tarrasky

SnowNiNo_ wrote:

  • [Tarrasky's True Love]
  1. oky so the following mod are all suggestion, feel free to denied all
  2. 00:09:158 (6,7) - ctrl + g would make the flow smoother since it follows the previous up and down patterns
  3. 00:10:849 (5,6) - make the spacing bigger for emphasis the high pitch vocal cool
  4. 00:13:173 (1,2,3,4) - this is the most intense part of the song so making the spacing biggest here makes more sense, especially 00:13:806 (4,5) - the spacing here is way to small increased a bit but the distance between 00:13:806 (4,5) - i prefer not to change because is a stream and can be quite a intense for the players
  5. 00:16:342 (6,7,1) - flow here should be ctrl + h ed changed

Mark101 wrote:

[Tarrasky's Insane]
  1. 00:03:454 (2,3) - Move these objects to the right, you have two ways to do this, 1) Move them to x:284 y:176, they will look like they're part of the triplet in this way, or, 2)Overlap them with 00:02:821 (6) - and edit the slidershape (make a blanket, for example) so it won't touch 00:03:032 (1) -
  2. Overlap 00:05:990 (7) - with 00:05:144 (3) - why i need do that? looks ok for me
  3. Move 00:10:637 (4) - down, so it won't overlap with 00:09:370 (7) - is proposital, to show the inteinsity of the vocal
  4. 00:11:482 (1,2) - The map is basically jump spams, so you should at least use 1/2 sliders instead of 1/1, using a such "calm" pattern out of nowhere doesn't make sense please dont call my map "jump spam", i'm following the vocal and in this moment looks logical for me do that, there's no syllable in the vocal, just the same song, and for that i prefer do no circle jumps
  5. 00:14:018 (5) - NC? why? i'm following in all map the 4/1 NC sequence
  6. 00:15:919 (4,6,7,1) - Use the same distance snap between (4) and (6) ._; is nazi but i'll change
  7. 00:16:553 (1,2) - Same thing as before, no reason for 1/1 sliders, the map is full of 1/2 beats, you alternate these 1/2-1/1 patterns pretty randomly, is a there a reason for this or it's just a random map? There are clear beats on the redlines, like 00:16:764 -, don't follow only vocals randomly doesn't looks randomly for me, since just the "n" song isn't intense enought for a circle, but i change just for be consistent with 00:03:032 (1) -
  8. 00:18:666 (3) - Move it to x:264 y:320 or overlap it with 00:18:032 (4) -, same thing as before no, will destroy the shape
  9. 00:18:877 (4) - Move it a bit up so it won't overlap with 00:17:821 (3) - cant even notice the overlap in gameplay...
  10. 00:24:792 (1) - Silence the sliderend woa unecessary 3/4
  11. 00:26:482 (1) - Put a 5 tick slider (with a silenced sliderend) and circle also here, the beat on 00:26:905 - is even stronger than the beat on 00:25:215 -. And re-arrange the pattern, of course. nah
Topic Starter
Djulus

Mark101 wrote:

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[Hard]
  1. 00:07:997 (5,1) - Too much distance, consider to reduce the spacing between the circle and the sliders.I hope it's become good
  2. 00:14:018 (3,4,5) - Put the triplet after the red tick (re-arrange the pattern, obviously), it doesn't make sense right now, since the slider ends on a strong beat fixed
Didn't find anything in Shmik's Normal.

About veib's easy, it's a nonsense map
It follows irregual rhythms, objects and pauses are placed randomly, it's definitely not ready for a chance in ranking i remapped easy diff, because beiv accepted to delete diff and quit from this mapset
Mirash
[Marcuddles' True Love]
why not mute slider slide
00:22:257 (4,5,6) - better to ctr+g it and increase spacings a little for smooth movements xD

[Masha's Light Insane]
00:21:201 (6,3) - не надо
00:27:961 (1,2,3,4,5) - укради хс с ласт дифы

[Hard]
аа замуть слайдер слайд
00:24:159 (4) - движение с нее на некст слайдер не нрав, попробуй как-то так http://i.imgur.com/ZKXdihv.png например

[Easy]
аааааааа жалко первый слайдер убрать нельзя, он супер аут оф плейс звучит
Topic Starter
Djulus

Mirash wrote:

[Hard]
аа замуть слайдер слайд
00:24:159 (4) - движение с нее на некст слайдер не нрав, попробуй как-то так http://i.imgur.com/ZKXdihv.png например мне не нравиться этот пример, но я сделал по другому, надеюсь стало лучше тбх

[Easy]
аааааааа жалко первый слайдер убрать нельзя, он супер аут оф плейс звучит эту слайдер изменил на другое
спасибо
marcuddles

Mirash wrote:

[Marcuddles' True Love]
why not mute slider slide The slide is almost unhearable, but yep, silenced.
00:22:257 (4,5,6) - better to ctr+g it and increase spacings a little for smooth movements xD Didn't CTRL+G but I re-arranged the pattern,
should be better now
UPDATE (with the silenced sliderslide): https://mark101.s-ul.eu/kTF6S8Hl
Koiyuki
general
the 2 combo colors are a bit similar, i recommend to use some different colour schemes like pink with yellow or others

e&n
fine

hard
00:23:736 (2,3,4,1) - make a better blanket pattern like this?

MashaSG
00:05:989 (7,8) - lol a nice trap, the first time i think 8 is stack with 7 in the editor
imo it can be called an INSANE not light one

Tarrasky
00:24:581 (7,1) - it plays not well imo, slider 1 flows better if it's an rising slider. I'd like to set a pattern of following notes like this.

Mark101
00:07:046 (1) - remove nc
00:17:187 (1) - ^
00:09:581 (10,11,1) - i prefer the way to nc like this, i'd like you to keep this way to nc at the strong beat but not 00:06:201 (1,2,3) - , the ncs should be set like 00:12:961 (7,8,1) - but not 00:06:201 (1,2,3) -
00:02:821 (1,2,3) - 00:06:201 (1,2,3) - 00:07:891 (1,2,3) - 00:11:271 (1,2,3) - 00:16:342 (1,2,3) - ^

call me later
Topic Starter
Djulus

Koiyuki wrote:

general
the 2 combo colors are a bit similar, i recommend to use some different colour schemes like pink with yellow or others fixed

e&n
fine

hard
00:23:736 (2,3,4,1) - make a better blanket pattern like this i like it, fixed

call me later ok!
arigatou yuki
marcuddles

Koiyuki wrote:

Mark101
00:07:046 (1) - remove nc
00:17:187 (1) - ^
00:09:581 (10,11,1) - i prefer the way to nc like this, i'd like you to keep this way to nc at the strong beat but not 00:06:201 (1,2,3) - , the ncs should be set like 00:12:961 (7,8,1) - but not 00:06:201 (1,2,3) -
00:02:821 (1,2,3) - 00:06:201 (1,2,3) - 00:07:891 (1,2,3) - 00:11:271 (1,2,3) - 00:16:342 (1,2,3) - ^

call me later
Fixed everything
UPDATE: https://mark101.s-ul.eu/KMo2reS2
@DefendeRDjulus delete Marcuddles.jpg from the folder, I'm using the HD png

Since me and Shmik are using differents BG, how about using a different BG for each diff?
https://wall.alphacoders.com/by_sub_cat ... ?id=251345 has cute and HD wallpapers, including me and shmik's ones, if somebody chooses the white ones you've got to rotate them (i.e.with GIMP, I can do it for you if you need).

imo it can be called an INSANE not light one
Totally agreeing, the only thing that makes it easy is the BPM
Shmiklak

Mark101 wrote:

Koiyuki wrote:

Since me and Shmik are using differents BG, how about using a different BG for each diff?
https://wall.alphacoders.com/by_sub_cat ... ?id=251345 has cute and HD wallpapers, including me and shmik's ones, if somebody chooses the white ones you've got to rotate them (i.e.with GIMP, I can do it for you if you need).
useless tbh
Topic Starter
Djulus

Mark101 wrote:

@DefendeRDjulus delete Marcuddles.jpg from the folder, I'm using the HD png but mirash
Sends me a same resolution bg's and this isn't have a problem

Since me and Shmik are using differents BG, how about using a different BG for each diff?
https://wall.alphacoders.com/by_sub_cat ... ?id=251345 has cute and HD wallpapers, including me and shmik's ones, if somebody chooses the white ones you've got to rotate them (i.e.with GIMP, I can do it for you if you need). I'll think about it
EDIT: my answer is "no" because i didn't want change bg's and i like it(your recommended bgs)sorry mark
imo it can be called an INSANE not light one
Totally agreeing, the only thing that makes it easy is the BPM
fixed about light insane
Tarrasky

Koiyuki wrote:

Tarrasky
00:24:581 (7,1) - it plays not well imo, slider 1 flows better if it's an rising slider. I'd like to set a pattern of following notes like this. Fixed but i have done in a different way, with semi stack like in others pattern, and following the triples spacing
map
osu file format v14

[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 74
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.5
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2.2

[Metadata]
Title:Harumachi Clover
TitleUnicode:春待ちクローバー
Artist:Hanasaka Yui(CV: M.A.O)
ArtistUnicode:花坂結衣(CV:M・A・O)
Creator:DefendeRDjulus
Version:Tarrasky's Insane
Source:OneRoom
Tags:Shmiklak marvollo M_a_r_v_o_l_l_o Tarrasky beiv MashaSG Mark101 Marcuddles tvsize one_room カントク 市道 真央 いちみち まお
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BeatmapSetID:600702

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:7
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:8
ApproachRate:9
SliderMultiplier:1.8
SliderTickRate:1

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//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
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