09kami wrote:

09kami 改二 wrote:

no kd pls

soft-sliderslide.wav
if mute .at least 44kb oh ok

Background dimensions are more than allowed maximum - exceed rankable limitation of 1366x768

[Hard]

00:14:229 (5) - slider in the middle of strange whistle fixed

00:16:553 (1) - ↑

[beiv's Easy]

Draining time: 00:28:943 fixed


Ranking Criteria - Audio
https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Ranking_Criteria#Audio




The minimum draining (play) time for a map is 30 seconds (but the recommended minimum is 45 seconds). If your map is shorter than that, then try looping the song with an audio editing program. This is so each map gives a high enough score, and also so people do not try and cut songs too short for no reason, thus stopping people from enjoying the song fully.
about background posted in 4th page by shmiklak and vanucik
thanks

lit120 wrote:

Use kurante's mapset for the mp3 then

09kami wrote:

09kami 改二 wrote:

Background dimensions are more than allowed maximum - exceed rankable limitation of 1366x768

MashaSG wrote:

SnowNiNo_: There are vocals on all circles, so no reason for this

09kami wrote:

[M a r v o l l o's Normal]

00:28:490 - Spinner start and what? I see that spinner starts here, it's unnecessary to show me it.

pay attention to your slider velocity .using 1.4 of slider velocity in Normal is very dangerous cool

MashaSG wrote:

@Джулус, хватит упоминать меня в разных говноконфах. Считай это предупреждением

Shmiklak wrote:

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Also Masha's diff has some things that hurt me, so let me point them up.

1. 00:05:567 (5,6) - I don't see reasons to use stack here because there are no same stacks, you used jumps for the other same moments. vocals "ke ke"
2. Also I agree with SnowNino that you could emphasis vocal power here 00:05:989 (7,8) - by using different spacing because 00:06:201 - sounds much quieter than this one 00:05:990 - This is made for better playability and structure
3. I cannot agree with such low DS in placements like 00:08:102 (1,2) - 00:08:525 (3,4) - 00:08:948 (5,6) - etc because the most part of the song has been emphasized by high DS and even if thee ones sound quieter they could be emphasized a bit more. Also, it's so stupid: 00:08:102 - the most loud part of the tact is emphasized by 1.5DS and this one 00:08:525 (3) - , which doesn't sound really strong tbh, placed for 2.5, same for 00:04:722 (1,3) - flow changes

I think your diff could be much better, I pointed the most important things which hurt me. https://coub.com/view/3ckmosjr
[]
That's all for now, I am not having anything else to say rn.

1. 00:03:454 (2,3) - Move these objects to the right, you have two ways to do this, 1) Move them to x:284 y:176, they will look like they're part of the triplet in this way, or, 2)Overlap them with 00:02:821 (6) - and edit the slidershape (make a blanket, for example) so it won't touch 00:03:032 (1) -
2. Overlap 00:05:990 (7) - with 00:05:144 (3) -
3. Move 00:10:637 (4) - down, so it won't overlap with 00:09:370 (7) -
4. 00:11:482 (1,2) - The map is basically jump spams, so you should at least use 1/2 sliders instead of 1/1, using a such "calm" pattern out of nowhere doesn't make sense
5. 00:14:018 (5) - NC?
6. 00:15:919 (4,6,7,1) - Use the same distance snap between (4) and (6) ._;
7. 00:16:553 (1,2) - Same thing as before, no reason for 1/1 sliders, the map is full of 1/2 beats, you alternate these 1/2-1/1 patterns pretty randomly, is a there a reason for this or it's just a random map? There are clear beats on the redlines, like 00:16:764 -, don't follow only vocals randomly.
8. 00:18:666 (3) - Move it to x:264 y:320 or overlap it with 00:18:032 (4) -, same thing as before
9. 00:18:877 (4) - Move it a bit up so it won't overlap with 00:17:821 (3) -
10. 00:24:792 (1) - Silence the sliderend
11. 00:26:482 (1) - Put a 5 tick slider (with a silenced sliderend) and circle also here, the beat on 00:26:905 - is even stronger than the beat on 00:25:215 -. And re-arrange the pattern, of course.

• In first place, this isn't a Light Insane at all, all the patterns are Insane patterns, they're easy because the BPM is low.

1. 00:03:454 (2,3) - Put it a bit up, looks really bad if it's so near to 00:02:821 (6) -
2. 00:04:194 - Rip sound
3. 00:07:997 (5) - Another beat you didn't map
4. 00:09:581 (8,9,1) - The sound here is almost absent, but you mapped a triplet, why didn't you map triplets before when the sounds were much stronger?
5. 00:12:961 (7,1) - Put a triplet
6. Jumps were mapped without a normal structure before, why don't you keep doing it instead of using squares out of nowhere as you did for 00:18:243 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ?
7. 00:23:102 (1,1) - Silence the sliderends
   
   
   [Hard]
   
   1. 00:07:997 (5,1) - Too much distance, consider to reduce the spacing between the circle and the sliders.
   2. 00:14:018 (3,4,5) - Put the triplet after the red tick (re-arrange the pattern, obviously), it doesn't make sense right now, since the slider ends on a strong beat

SnowNiNo_ wrote:

• [Tarrasky's True Love]

1. oky so the following mod are all suggestion, feel free to denied all
2. 00:09:158 (6,7) - ctrl + g would make the flow smoother since it follows the previous up and down patterns
3. 00:10:849 (5,6) - make the spacing bigger for emphasis the high pitch vocal cool
4. 00:13:173 (1,2,3,4) - this is the most intense part of the song so making the spacing biggest here makes more sense, especially 00:13:806 (4,5) - the spacing here is way to small increased a bit but the distance between 00:13:806 (4,5) - i prefer not to change because is a stream and can be quite a intense for the players
5. 00:16:342 (6,7,1) - flow here should be ctrl + h ed changed

Mark101 wrote:

[Tarrasky's Insane]

1. 00:03:454 (2,3) - Move these objects to the right, you have two ways to do this, 1) Move them to x:284 y:176, they will look like they're part of the triplet in this way, or, 2)Overlap them with 00:02:821 (6) - and edit the slidershape (make a blanket, for example) so it won't touch 00:03:032 (1) -
2. Overlap 00:05:990 (7) - with 00:05:144 (3) - why i need do that? looks ok for me
3. Move 00:10:637 (4) - down, so it won't overlap with 00:09:370 (7) - is proposital, to show the inteinsity of the vocal
4. 00:11:482 (1,2) - The map is basically jump spams, so you should at least use 1/2 sliders instead of 1/1, using a such "calm" pattern out of nowhere doesn't make sense please dont call my map "jump spam", i'm following the vocal and in this moment looks logical for me do that, there's no syllable in the vocal, just the same song, and for that i prefer do no circle jumps
5. 00:14:018 (5) - NC? why? i'm following in all map the 4/1 NC sequence
6. 00:15:919 (4,6,7,1) - Use the same distance snap between (4) and (6) ._; is nazi but i'll change
7. 00:16:553 (1,2) - Same thing as before, no reason for 1/1 sliders, the map is full of 1/2 beats, you alternate these 1/2-1/1 patterns pretty randomly, is a there a reason for this or it's just a random map? There are clear beats on the redlines, like 00:16:764 -, don't follow only vocals randomly doesn't looks randomly for me, since just the "n" song isn't intense enought for a circle, but i change just for be consistent with 00:03:032 (1) -
8. 00:18:666 (3) - Move it to x:264 y:320 or overlap it with 00:18:032 (4) -, same thing as before no, will destroy the shape
9. 00:18:877 (4) - Move it a bit up so it won't overlap with 00:17:821 (3) - cant even notice the overlap in gameplay...
10. 00:24:792 (1) - Silence the sliderend woa unecessary 3/4
11. 00:26:482 (1) - Put a 5 tick slider (with a silenced sliderend) and circle also here, the beat on 00:26:905 - is even stronger than the beat on 00:25:215 -. And re-arrange the pattern, of course. nah

Mark101 wrote:

w

[Hard]

1. 00:07:997 (5,1) - Too much distance, consider to reduce the spacing between the circle and the sliders.I hope it's become good
2. 00:14:018 (3,4,5) - Put the triplet after the red tick (re-arrange the pattern, obviously), it doesn't make sense right now, since the slider ends on a strong beat fixed

Didn't find anything in Shmik's Normal.

About veib's easy, it's a nonsense map
It follows irregual rhythms, objects and pauses are placed randomly, it's definitely not ready for a chance in ranking i remapped easy diff, because beiv accepted to delete diff and quit from this mapset

Mirash wrote:

[Hard]
аа замуть слайдер слайд
00:24:159 (4) - движение с нее на некст слайдер не нрав, попробуй как-то так http://i.imgur.com/ZKXdihv.png например мне не нравиться этот пример, но я сделал по другому, надеюсь стало лучше тбх

[Easy]
аааааааа жалко первый слайдер убрать нельзя, он супер аут оф плейс звучит эту слайдер изменил на другое

Mirash wrote:

[Marcuddles' True Love]
why not mute slider slide The slide is almost unhearable, but yep, silenced.
00:22:257 (4,5,6) - better to ctr+g it and increase spacings a little for smooth movements xD Didn't CTRL+G but I re-arranged the pattern,
should be better now

Koiyuki wrote:

general
the 2 combo colors are a bit similar, i recommend to use some different colour schemes like pink with yellow or others fixed

e&n
fine

hard
00:23:736 (2,3,4,1) - make a better blanket pattern like this i like it, fixed

call me later ok!

Koiyuki wrote:

Mark101
00:07:046 (1) - remove nc
00:17:187 (1) - ^
00:09:581 (10,11,1) - i prefer the way to nc like this, i'd like you to keep this way to nc at the strong beat but not 00:06:201 (1,2,3) - , the ncs should be set like 00:12:961 (7,8,1) - but not 00:06:201 (1,2,3) -
00:02:821 (1,2,3) - 00:06:201 (1,2,3) - 00:07:891 (1,2,3) - 00:11:271 (1,2,3) - 00:16:342 (1,2,3) - ^

call me later

imo it can be called an INSANE not light one

Mark101 wrote:

Koiyuki wrote:

Since me and Shmik are using differents BG, how about using a different BG for each diff?
https://wall.alphacoders.com/by_sub_cat ... ?id=251345 has cute and HD wallpapers, including me and shmik's ones, if somebody chooses the white ones you've got to rotate them (i.e.with GIMP, I can do it for you if you need).

Mark101 wrote:

@DefendeRDjulus delete Marcuddles.jpg from the folder, I'm using the HD png but mirash
Sends me a same resolution bg's and this isn't have a problem
Since me and Shmik are using differents BG, how about using a different BG for each diff?
https://wall.alphacoders.com/by_sub_cat ... ?id=251345 has cute and HD wallpapers, including me and shmik's ones, if somebody chooses the white ones you've got to rotate them (i.e.with GIMP, I can do it for you if you need). I'll think about it
EDIT: my answer is "no" because i didn't want change bg's and i like it(your recommended bgs)sorry mark

imo it can be called an INSANE not light one

Totally agreeing, the only thing that makes it easy is the BPM

Koiyuki wrote:

Tarrasky
00:24:581 (7,1) - it plays not well imo, slider 1 flows better if it's an rising slider. I'd like to set a pattern of following notes like this. Fixed but i have done in a different way, with semi stack like in others pattern, and following the triples spacing

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Mark101 wrote:

w

[Masha's Light Insane]

• In first place, this isn't a Light Insane at all, all the patterns are Insane patterns, they're easy because the BPM is low. Yea

1. 00:03:454 (2,3) - Put it a bit up, looks really bad if it's so near to 00:02:821 (6) - Holy, sure
2. 00:04:194 - Rip sound There is like no bit..
3. 00:07:997 (5) - Another beat you didn't map Wat?? lul
4. 00:09:581 (8,9,1) - The sound here is almost absent, but you mapped a triplet, why didn't you map triplets before when the sounds were much stronger? In my opinion this sound is stronger
5. 00:12:961 (7,1) - Put a triplet There is no beat?????
6. Jumps were mapped without a normal structure before, why don't you keep doing it instead of using squares out of nowhere as you did for 00:18:243 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ? Squares are easy
7. 00:23:102 (1,1) - Silence the sliderends Sure

Асо рейо wrote:

[Masha's Light Insane]
00:21:201 (6,3) - не надо Ок
00:27:961 (1,2,3,4,5) - укради хс с ласт дифы Попрошу Джулуса это сделать

Koiyuki wrote:

MashaSG
00:05:989 (7,8) - lol a nice trap, the first time i think 8 is stack with 7 in the editor I don't need to change it if I get you right...right?
imo it can be called an INSANE not light one Sure

MashaSG wrote:

@Djulus Copy hitsounds from top diff to my, thx ok

diff: https://puu.sh/wGB1l/5f95243c31.osu

[*]Jumps were mapped without a normal structure before, why don't you keep doing it instead of using squares out of nowhere as you did for 00:18:243 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ? Squares are easy

Pachiru wrote:

omg but stop with this song, this joke is not funny

Mark101 wrote:

[*]Jumps were mapped without a normal structure before, why don't you keep doing it instead of using squares out of nowhere as you did for 00:18:243 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ? Squares are easy

And so what, @MashaSG?
You always used random-shaped jumps, the fact that squares are easy (false thing lmao) doesn't justify the fact that you changed pattern without a reason

Mark101 wrote:

[*]Jumps were mapped without a normal structure before, why don't you keep doing it instead of using squares out of nowhere as you did for 00:18:243 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ? Squares are easy

And so what, @MashaSG?
You always used random-shaped jumps, the fact that squares are easy (false thing lmao) doesn't justify the fact that you changed pattern without a reason

1. the bg isn't related with the character as Hanasaka Yui who sang this as the story is about her
2. 00:22:468 (3) - 00:24:159 (3) - 3 notes here that's different from the first part. this should work like http://puu.sh/wIt5Y/3a12735eba.jpg to make it a bit challenging before the song is about to end would work for a part that builds up its emphasize better

1. 00:16:553 (1,2) - seems like u were about to blanket here
2. 00:19:933 (1,2) - can be fixed for that blanket
3. 00:27:961 (7) - try this http://puu.sh/wIta7/8b7c35532b.jpg

1. recheck ur hitsounds again, as i may not pointing them out
2. 00:00:285 (1,2,3,4,5) - i wouldn't recommend having jumps like this for an intro due to a vocal sound only. try to use sth a different pattern like pentagon shape, or just adjust it from ur own way, since i'd recommend having a same spacing there at least
3. 00:01:342 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - weird hitsound choice, but u did it right from 00:04:722 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - . perhaps that might be ur mistake there
4. 00:07:680 (4) - 00:17:821 (4) - clap
5. 00:19:933 (1) - finish for emphasize beat
6. 00:13:173 (1) - i wouldn't stack it due to an emphasize note that builds up the song, so i'd just put it somewhere to emphasize with jumps there
7. 00:19:088 (5,6,7,8) - the square pattern isn't the same spacing as it is like 00:18:243 (1,2,3,4) - better. u might wanna recheck it by copas from 00:19:088 (5,6) - , check it again with 90 degree angle for that pattern

1. recheck the hitsound use
2. 00:00:285 (1,2,3,4,5) - don't. start. with. jumps. for an intro part like this, it's just a vocal. there's nothing to emphasize it. go with pentagon shape flow instead of star jumps
3. 00:25:215 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 00:27:116 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - i don't get it why u set drum hitsounds there, as u have did soft hitsound sampleset there only

1. ugh hitsounds aren't properly used right based on the song providing its beat
2. why not Mark's True Love instead?
3. 00:14:123 (2) - clearly an overmap due to an absent note. same goes to 00:17:926 (9) - 00:04:194 (8) - 00:13:067 (8) - 00:21:306 (8,10) -

lit120 wrote:

[hard]

1. 00:16:553 (1,2) - seems like u were about to blanket here fixed
2. 00:19:933 (1,2) - can be fixed for that blanket fixed
3. 00:27:961 (7) - try this http://puu.sh/wIta7/8b7c35532b.jpg seems look like, i like this, fixed owo

not going through a whole thing, but seems like there are something that i wanted to address more about it, but ya :thinking:

lit120 wrote:

[mark]

1. ugh hitsounds aren't properly used right based on the song providing its beat I copied hitsounds from Tarrasky's difficulty, I know they aren't the best but I can't really hitsound. I'll try to make something in the next updates
2. why not Mark's True Love instead? No, that's my new nickname, I can't change it right now though, if you see the tags marcuddles is there as well. I didn't like very much "True Love", changed with "Happiness" (wow i'm so fucking originalmao
3. 00:14:123 (2) - clearly an overmap due to an absent note. same goes to 00:17:926 (9) - 00:04:194 (8) - 00:13:067 (8) - 00:21:306 (8,10) -

Fixed the first one by adding a kickslider which is meant to give less emphasis to 00:14:123 -, the second one is made on purpose, I'm not using the previous structure of the first kiai and this mini-stream fits pretty well imo. About the third one, the fusion of the sounds makes the triplet completely justified, it fits perfectly and I can't see any problem in it. I clearly hear a beat in 00:13:067 (8) -. I already explained the last point

not going through a whole thing, but seems like there are something that i wanted to address more about it, but ya

lit120 wrote:

[tarrasky]

1. recheck the hitsound use The hitsounds looks ok for me, whistle in the vocals, claps in the beats, drums in the intense moments of the end, for me is ok
2. 00:00:285 (1,2,3,4,5) - don't. start. with. jumps. for an intro part like this, it's just a vocal. there's nothing to emphasize it. go with pentagon shape flow instead of star jumps why not? for me the vocal is intense enough for a star
3. 00:25:215 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 00:27:116 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - i don't get it why u set drum hitsounds there, as u have did soft hitsound sampleset there only for me flows correct the song of the music

lit120 wrote:

[shmiklak]

1. the bg isn't related with the character as Hanasaka Yui who sang this as the story is about her it's related to the anime so it's fine, I did the same thing on my map when I couldn't find any good pic with right character
2. 00:22:468 (3) - 00:24:159 (3) - 3 notes here that's different from the first part. this should work like http://puu.sh/wIt5Y/3a12735eba.jpg to make it a bit challenging before the song is about to end would work for a part that builds up its emphasize better good idea

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lit120 wrote:

[masha]

1. recheck ur hitsounds again, as i may not pointing them out I'll call Julus once again
2. 00:00:285 (1,2,3,4,5) - i wouldn't recommend having jumps like this for an intro due to a vocal sound only. try to use sth a different pattern like pentagon shape, or just adjust it from ur own way, since i'd recommend having a same spacing there at least Fixed
3. 00:01:342 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - weird hitsound choice, but u did it right from 00:04:722 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - . perhaps that might be ur mistake there
4. 00:07:680 (4) - 00:17:821 (4) - clap
5. 00:19:933 (1) - finish for emphasize beat
6. 00:13:173 (1) - i wouldn't stack it due to an emphasize note that builds up the song, so i'd just put it somewhere to emphasize with jumps there yyyyyyyyep
7. 00:19:088 (5,6,7,8) - the square pattern isn't the same spacing as it is like 00:18:243 (1,2,3,4) - better. u might wanna recheck it by copas from 00:19:088 (5,6) - , check it again with 90 degree angle for that pattern Fixed