Hello there.
I don't think that I did a good enough mod for this ~4 months ago and I'd like to try to fix that. So here you are!
[General]
[Futsuu]
[Muzukashii]
[Oni]
Sorry if my mod was a bit long. ;; But, good luck. ;w;7
I don't think that I did a good enough mod for this ~4 months ago and I'd like to try to fix that. So here you are!
[General]
- Metadata seems fine.
- Widescreen support can be disabled.
- 00:08:516 - and 00:08:809 - You could show the differences in pitches between these two notes by making one of them d. (Preferably 00:08:516 - )
- 00:11:150 - / 00:12:321 - / 00:13:492 - / 00:15:833 - / 00:17:004 - / 00:18:174 - I'd recommend making all of these finishers. Because there is quite a big impact on these notes. As well as the fact that they're basically the same as the D's that you have at 00:09:979 - and 00:14:662 -
- 00:20:077 - Would be better moved to 00:19:784 - to follow the beginning of this rhythm change, rather than the second beat of it.
- 00:22:418 - I would propose the same idea here, except moving it to 00:22:126 - .
- 00:24:028 - Why not have this a finisher just like the previous two D's at 00:21:687 - and 00:19:345 - ?
- 00:24:760 - Same thing as 00:22:418 - and 00:20:077 - .
- 00:27:101 - Same as the last point.
- 00:28:272 - Could be changed to d to emphasize the K at 00:28:711 - rather than further cluttering the section with k's.
- 00:33:687 - Change to k. Aside from the fact that most of the notes within this section are just d's, there is a clear kick in the background here.
- 00:42:760 - and 00:41:735 - I would suggest Ctrl+G'ing these two note, due to the pitch differences here in relation to the previous combination that was used at 00:39:394 -
- 00:47:443 - Would recommend changing this to D to emphasize the louder sound in the background here. Just like you did at 00:46:272 - .
- 00:48:760 - Move to 00:48:613 - to better follow the drums as well as vocals.
- 00:49:345 - Move to 00:49:199 - for the same reason as above. Since both of these are falling a beat later than they should be.
- 00:51:101 - I would also suggest moving this forward to 00:50:955 - for the same reason as the last two points.
- 00:53:296 - Change to D, it's relatively the same sound as the previous D at 00:52:126 - . As well as the fact that this would make the K at 00:54:467 - even more impacted.
- 00:59:882 - Change to d so it's not the same as the monotone k's at 01:00:321 - .
- 01:01:492 - Change to D, it's basically the same as the D at the start of the kiai here.
- 01:02:662 - Change to k. There's a clear difference in pitch between this note and 01:02:223 - .
- 01:03:394 - Move to 01:03:248 - to better follow the drums as well as vocals.
- 01:04:565 - Change to d. Relatively the same pitch as 01:03:833 -
- 01:08:077 - Would better fit at 01:07:931 - with what 01:06:906 - and 01:07:345 - are following.
- 01:09:248 - Change to d for the same reason as 00:59:882 -
- 01:10:857 - Change to D for the same reason as 01:01:492 -.
- 01:12:760 - Change to d. Relatively the same pitch as 01:12:028 - .
- 01:13:199 - Change to K, has the same pitch as the D at the start of the kiai, despite the fact that this one is following the kick instead.
- 01:13:931 - Change to d. Would better emphasize the kick at 01:14:370 -
- 01:16:711 - / 01:17:882 - / 01:19:053 - / 01:21:394 - / 01:22:565 - / 01:23:735 - Like in the beginning, I would suggest making all of these finishers too.
- 01:24:467 - Add a k here to keep the consistency of the d k and k d that you've had within this section. Also because the drums are rather prominent here.
[Futsuu]
- 00:06:174 - This note would sound better moved back to 00:06:028 - to follow the same type of sound that 00:05:296 - is following.
- Going along with the above suggestion, 00:07:345 - would sound better if moved back to 00:07:199 - .
- Also, with the top two suggestions, I think that adding a note at 00:08:370 - would be beneficial to preserve the consistency of the doubles beforehand. (Preferably d.)
- 00:23:882 - Could be changed to k to better follows the kicks, but it depends if you want to keep the d dD type of pattern here to be different from the k kD that was at 00:21:540 - (But you followed something similar to what I suggested at 00:28:565 - so that's why this point is questionable.)
- 00:37:345 - Like the above, changing this to k would show a change in pitch between the patterns that occured before this one, and this one.
- 00:42:760 - Using a finisher here is a bit debatable since it's during a rather calm section, and all it is emphasizing is the kick in the background. But tbh I'd keep it for consistency reasons. (Just thought I'd mention this.)
- 00:49:492 - I'd suggest changing this to d so it's not a monotone k k k k K pattern here, also the differences in pitch.
- 01:13:492 - You could add a k, just so the pattern matches the vocal a bit better based on the note you have at 01:13:931 - but if you don't want a 4 note pattern, don't do it.
- 01:14:662 - I would suggest either removing this slider or shortening it. Since the sound it should be following starts at 01:15:101 - . If removed, add a k at 01:15:101 - and 01:15:248 - (But it depends on how you want to follow the sound here. ;w; )
[Muzukashii]
- 00:23:735 - I'd suggest adding a note here, or making 00:23:589 - a triple to make this pattern stand out more against the k k k k k k kD from before.
- 00:28:418 - Same as above.
- 00:37:199 - and 00:37:492 - Same kind of reasoning as above. I'd suggest adding d's on the mentioned points to follow the drums a bit better and make the pattern itself stand out a bit more. (Since it looks basically like the previous patterns.)
- 01:14:662 - Same problem that happened in Futsuu.
[Oni]
- 00:06:174 - kdd is a sin. Consider trying kkd instead, imo it flows a bit better and follows the rhythm a bit more accurately.
- 00:08:516 - Same as above.
- 00:21:248 - I can accept this. Good job. ♥
- 00:23:589 - Would follow the kick at 00:23:735 - more accurately as ddk.
- 00:25:931 - Good job #2. 00:25:931 -
- 00:28:272 - Same concern as 00:23:589 -
- 00:37:931 - I'd suggest making this a k, it'd follow the drums / vocals a bit better.
- 00:40:857 - kkd. Follows the vocals a bit more nicely.
- 00:42:321 - kdk. Same reason as above.
- 00:44:809 - Considering the vocals are a bit more intense here than the last kd dk, I'd suggest adding a note here to emphasize that a bit more.
- 00:47:223 - and 00:47:296 - Preferably, both could be k's to follow the drums. But if not both, then just 00:47:296 - since ddddd seems rather plain when there are clearly different things happening here.
- 00:49:492 - kkd or kdk. Same type of reasoning as 00:42:321 -
- 01:09:248 - kkd. Same as above.
- 01:09:687 - / 01:09:979 - / 01:10:272 - Seems a bit odd to not have these as finishers but have 01:00:321 - / 01:00:613 - / 01:00:906 - . Consider making the mentioned points finishers or removing them. (Especially since this is the only difficulty that has finishers at these parts.)
Sorry if my mod was a bit long. ;; But, good luck. ;w;7