I modded this map set twice without realizing. Hope this is useful.
Normal
00:52:177 (7,8,1) – I don’t think the spacing of these circles work very well. I personally dislike where circle 8 is located but you have a very consistent mapping style in this beatmap and that location would continue that continuity so instead I think you should increase the spacing between circle 8 and 00:53:115 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) -
01:04:365 (3,4,5,6,7) – I’m don’t think this section works but I see your trying to create variety in the patterns of the beatmap. I think you should find an alternative however.
01:10:224 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) – I think you should lower the volume of the end of all the sliders here to better accompany the vocal instead of having a metronome like beat.
01:39:990 (1,2,3) – I think slider 3 should be under slider 1 and the end of slider 3 be moved more to the right to better mimic slider 1
01:04:365 (3,4,5,6,7) – I’m don’t think this section works but I see your trying to create variety in the patterns of the beatmap. I think you should find an alternative however.
01:10:224 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) – I think you should lower the volume of the end of all the sliders here to better accompany the vocal instead of having a metronome like beat.
01:39:990 (1,2,3) – I think slider 3 should be under slider 1 and the end of slider 3 be moved more to the right to better mimic slider 1
Hard
00:23:115 (1) – This is a good opportunity to use a different sound such as drum to better accompany the music
00:26:865 (1,2,3) – Same with this ^
00:30:615 (1) – You could do the same for the entire section after here but that might make negatively affect the beatmap
00:28:271 (3) – You could change the slider velocity to 0.75 to better accompany with the music
00:32:958 (3,4) – I think the spacing between the two notes is a bit too far away based on listening to the vocal. But I can see you made a consistent map style throughout the beatmap so you could skip this.
00:41:865 (1,2,3) – I don’t think this section works very well. I think having circle 2 and 3 be a single slider be a better alternative
01:02:021 (4) – I think the beatmap would better follow the music if this slider had a faster velocity to signify the beginning of the chorus/kiai mode
01:39:990 (1) – You could change the sound of this slider to a drum perhaps? Alone with the other circles that follow with it that follow the drum noise
00:26:865 (1,2,3) – Same with this ^
00:30:615 (1) – You could do the same for the entire section after here but that might make negatively affect the beatmap
00:28:271 (3) – You could change the slider velocity to 0.75 to better accompany with the music
00:32:958 (3,4) – I think the spacing between the two notes is a bit too far away based on listening to the vocal. But I can see you made a consistent map style throughout the beatmap so you could skip this.
00:41:865 (1,2,3) – I don’t think this section works very well. I think having circle 2 and 3 be a single slider be a better alternative
01:02:021 (4) – I think the beatmap would better follow the music if this slider had a faster velocity to signify the beginning of the chorus/kiai mode
01:39:990 (1) – You could change the sound of this slider to a drum perhaps? Alone with the other circles that follow with it that follow the drum noise