plz. this chick proceeds to just read a book as she literally falls from the sky. Do you think non-intense people would passively enjoy a good book, knowing that their lives are in great danger?HML wrote:
I don't like the background. It's too calm and warm with a song this intense. Here are some I think would suit it better:
I like this one a lot. It fits perfectly
Anything from here would suit better imo
Anyways here's my mod :p
Screenshots are purely examples as to how a problem can be fixed
Lince
• You have very similar combo colors, including an unrankable white combo color (which you should replace with like a very light grey). You're going to have to cut the grey combo colors that you use to just like 2 or three, they should all be visually different
• 00:24:524 (1,2) - 00:35:559 (1,2,3,4,1) - These two rhythms are different, yet mapped to the same vocal pattern. Make this consistent?
• 00:43:835 (2) - unsnapped lol
• 00:54:438 (6,7) - 01:30:042 (3,4,5) - Make this more like a stream, like you did at 00:51:421 (5,6,7) - and 00:55:559 (3,4,5) - ?
• 00:58:317 - Make clickable?
• 01:36:593 - Make this clickable as well, it feels awkward starting the pattern at 01:36:766 -
• 01:56:938 (1) - I think you could provide more exaggeration to this note through spacing, the note is on a new group of guitar notes (the three notes that descend in pitch that are repeated) and there is a pretty strong snare there
• 02:07:283 (2,3,4,5) - Shouldn't a stream be here? with a note at 02:07:542 -
• 02:12:110 (1) - This slow slider is uncalled for, just make it normal speed
• 02:14:352 (3,4) - This rhythm isn't that great here, because of the strong note on the sliderend at 02:14:697 - Make it two 1/2 sliders here to bring out that guitar? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7665701
• 02:15:904 (3,4,5,6,7) - This whole stream should start at 02:15:731 - , because the hi hats these should be mapped to stop at 02:16:076 -
• 02:53:490 (1) - colorhax suggestion: make this a red slider? It would make the slider stand out to the player from 02:52:455 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - and tell them that the slider plays differently. Also, the same slider at 01:39:007 (1) - is also red
• 03:02:628 (1,2,3,4) - Stream here?
• 03:49:697 (1,2,3,4) - Why are these overlapped? The stops in flow here feel forced in such an intense part of the song, I would switch the places of 2 and 3
• 03:57:628 (5) - This is the only time youve put a corner in the more intense part of this map starting from 03:49:007 - . I would remove it
• 04:19:007 - Make clickable?
• 04:48:317 (1,2) - Make slider ends clickable here too? This seems like the intensity in the map reduces compared to 04:46:938 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) -
• 04:55:214 (1,2,3,4) - This might sound like a dumb suggestion, but can you make this a lighter combo color? Both times I've playtested this map I forget that there is still rhythm to account for at this part of the map, so maybe a light combo color here will bring more attention to the player? idk lol
• 05:48:317 (3,4) - Overap these? Or make that buzz slider end at 05:48:662 - The spacing makes it look like it plays similarly to 05:42:110 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - with the consistent 1/2 gap in between objects. Same for 05:59:352 (4,5) -
• 05:52:800 (6,7) - Account for the blue ticks that come after these notes somehow? Maybe kicksliders would be cool https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7665837
• 06:22:800 (2,1) - Space these more?
• 00:24:524 (1,2) - 00:35:559 (1,2,3,4,1) - These two rhythms are different, yet mapped to the same vocal pattern. Make this consistent?
• 00:43:835 (2) - unsnapped lol
• 00:54:438 (6,7) - 01:30:042 (3,4,5) - Make this more like a stream, like you did at 00:51:421 (5,6,7) - and 00:55:559 (3,4,5) - ?
• 00:58:317 - Make clickable?
• 01:36:593 - Make this clickable as well, it feels awkward starting the pattern at 01:36:766 -
• 01:56:938 (1) - I think you could provide more exaggeration to this note through spacing, the note is on a new group of guitar notes (the three notes that descend in pitch that are repeated) and there is a pretty strong snare there
• 02:07:283 (2,3,4,5) - Shouldn't a stream be here? with a note at 02:07:542 -
• 02:12:110 (1) - This slow slider is uncalled for, just make it normal speed
• 02:14:352 (3,4) - This rhythm isn't that great here, because of the strong note on the sliderend at 02:14:697 - Make it two 1/2 sliders here to bring out that guitar? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7665701
• 02:15:904 (3,4,5,6,7) - This whole stream should start at 02:15:731 - , because the hi hats these should be mapped to stop at 02:16:076 -
• 02:53:490 (1) - colorhax suggestion: make this a red slider? It would make the slider stand out to the player from 02:52:455 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - and tell them that the slider plays differently. Also, the same slider at 01:39:007 (1) - is also red
• 03:02:628 (1,2,3,4) - Stream here?
• 03:49:697 (1,2,3,4) - Why are these overlapped? The stops in flow here feel forced in such an intense part of the song, I would switch the places of 2 and 3
• 03:57:628 (5) - This is the only time youve put a corner in the more intense part of this map starting from 03:49:007 - . I would remove it
• 04:19:007 - Make clickable?
• 04:48:317 (1,2) - Make slider ends clickable here too? This seems like the intensity in the map reduces compared to 04:46:938 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) -
• 04:55:214 (1,2,3,4) - This might sound like a dumb suggestion, but can you make this a lighter combo color? Both times I've playtested this map I forget that there is still rhythm to account for at this part of the map, so maybe a light combo color here will bring more attention to the player? idk lol
• 05:48:317 (3,4) - Overap these? Or make that buzz slider end at 05:48:662 - The spacing makes it look like it plays similarly to 05:42:110 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - with the consistent 1/2 gap in between objects. Same for 05:59:352 (4,5) -
• 05:52:800 (6,7) - Account for the blue ticks that come after these notes somehow? Maybe kicksliders would be cool https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7665837
• 06:22:800 (2,1) - Space these more?
Solid map! good luck