hi im here
[lince]
i think slider tick rate 2 is a bit too much.. especially at the beginning
00:28:662 (3) - although this is more of personal preference, there isnt really a sound that indicates a slider art change like this so i would just make it a regular slider
00:31:421 (2) - i dont think theres a sound here (?) you were pretty much following the vocals beforehand so maybe delete this note to keep consistency? (and 00:32:455 (2) - as well)
00:35:559 (1,2) - spacing here is kind of small compared to what youve been doing i.e. 00:32:455 (2,1) - . ctrk+g this slider to make it more easier to read?
00:46:248 - to keep with the curves, maybe curve this as well? : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7690146
00:48:317 (3,4) - dont really get the stack here since the stronger beat should be on the second beat so i think you should stack these instead 00:48:145 (2,3) - (applies to others as well i.e. 00:51:076 (3,4) - )
00:48:317 (3) - also NC for the downbeat
00:57:973 (1,6) - blanket this xD
01:09:869 (4) - i think you should ctrl+g the rhythm here 01:09:869 (4,1) - to make the more prominent beat clickable
01:26:938 (1) - normal sampleset to keep it consistent with 01:25:559 (1) - ?
01:43:490 - the 1-2 jumps are pretty random here.. the music doesnt really call for it so maybe change it up a bit
01:50:300 (4,1) - consider spacing this out from the stream for the noice downbeat emphasis
01:58:662 - add a note here for a nice kiai finisher?
02:15:042 (6,1) - spacing here is kind of weak. stronger sound here but 02:14:869 (5,6) - is spaced more than this. should be the other way around imo
02:16:248 (7,8) - another thing on emphasis, the sound from 7-8 is not that larger so i would decrease the spacing to make 02:16:593 (1) - stand out more
02:42:110 (2) - ctrl+g this slider to match the spacing you were doing in this section?
02:49:352 (9,1) - increase the spacing here like you did here 02:50:731 (8,1) - . itlll compliment the song much more
03:10:214 (2,1) - pls emphasis the downbeat moarrr
03:15:817 (6,1) - lalala increase spacing from the stream to slider? same reason as last time
03:20:731 (3,4) - the flow here kind of destroys the counter clockwise flow you were building up here 03:18:662 - plus the sound isnt too big so no reason for flow change
03:32:455 (1,2) - wats dis spacing. if you say its for emphasis, you shouldve spaced it out on parts like 03:31:335 (4,1) - plus its not really landing on a prominent sound like 03:30:731 (2,1) - is so maybe just decrease spacing
03:53:145 - i kind of understood the overlap things before like 03:49:697 - but this one doesnt really make sense imo since the sound is completely different..
03:51:076 - also, try to make this the same rhythm as 03:49:697 (1,2,3,4) - since you know, same sound
03:59:697 - flow here for this stream is really awkward to move in so maybe rotate it 90 degrees and put it upright
04:13:490 (2,3) - swap the spacing here to make the 2 easier to read? applies to others as well
04:22:110 - so like you do this kind of spacing here but change it up here 04:23:490 - which is kind of inconsistent in spacing imo so make them the same spacing? like overlap these 2 04:23:490 (1,2) - instead of 04:23:490 (1,3) - or fix 04:22:110 - by ctrl+g spacing here 04:22:455 (2,3) -
04:52:455 - this slider feels awfully extended which makes it kind of boring xD i think you should continue the stream until 04:53:145 - or so
05:06:766 (3) - kind of weird rhythm here with the slider ending on the prominent beat
05:49:352 (2,3) - hahahahhaha blanket fix pls
05:58:317 (3) - maybe make this consistent flow wise to the other sliders since theyre the same sound
06:14:869 (4,5) - large spacing for no reason imo.. if anything, 06:15:042 (5,1) - should be larger instead
06:26:248 - add a note for dat nice finish
[lince]
i think slider tick rate 2 is a bit too much.. especially at the beginning
00:28:662 (3) - although this is more of personal preference, there isnt really a sound that indicates a slider art change like this so i would just make it a regular slider
00:31:421 (2) - i dont think theres a sound here (?) you were pretty much following the vocals beforehand so maybe delete this note to keep consistency? (and 00:32:455 (2) - as well)
00:35:559 (1,2) - spacing here is kind of small compared to what youve been doing i.e. 00:32:455 (2,1) - . ctrk+g this slider to make it more easier to read?
00:46:248 - to keep with the curves, maybe curve this as well? : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7690146
00:48:317 (3,4) - dont really get the stack here since the stronger beat should be on the second beat so i think you should stack these instead 00:48:145 (2,3) - (applies to others as well i.e. 00:51:076 (3,4) - )
00:48:317 (3) - also NC for the downbeat
00:57:973 (1,6) - blanket this xD
01:09:869 (4) - i think you should ctrl+g the rhythm here 01:09:869 (4,1) - to make the more prominent beat clickable
01:26:938 (1) - normal sampleset to keep it consistent with 01:25:559 (1) - ?
01:43:490 - the 1-2 jumps are pretty random here.. the music doesnt really call for it so maybe change it up a bit
01:50:300 (4,1) - consider spacing this out from the stream for the noice downbeat emphasis
01:58:662 - add a note here for a nice kiai finisher?
02:15:042 (6,1) - spacing here is kind of weak. stronger sound here but 02:14:869 (5,6) - is spaced more than this. should be the other way around imo
02:16:248 (7,8) - another thing on emphasis, the sound from 7-8 is not that larger so i would decrease the spacing to make 02:16:593 (1) - stand out more
02:42:110 (2) - ctrl+g this slider to match the spacing you were doing in this section?
02:49:352 (9,1) - increase the spacing here like you did here 02:50:731 (8,1) - . itlll compliment the song much more
03:10:214 (2,1) - pls emphasis the downbeat moarrr
03:15:817 (6,1) - lalala increase spacing from the stream to slider? same reason as last time
03:20:731 (3,4) - the flow here kind of destroys the counter clockwise flow you were building up here 03:18:662 - plus the sound isnt too big so no reason for flow change
03:32:455 (1,2) - wats dis spacing. if you say its for emphasis, you shouldve spaced it out on parts like 03:31:335 (4,1) - plus its not really landing on a prominent sound like 03:30:731 (2,1) - is so maybe just decrease spacing
03:53:145 - i kind of understood the overlap things before like 03:49:697 - but this one doesnt really make sense imo since the sound is completely different..
03:51:076 - also, try to make this the same rhythm as 03:49:697 (1,2,3,4) - since you know, same sound
03:59:697 - flow here for this stream is really awkward to move in so maybe rotate it 90 degrees and put it upright
04:13:490 (2,3) - swap the spacing here to make the 2 easier to read? applies to others as well
04:22:110 - so like you do this kind of spacing here but change it up here 04:23:490 - which is kind of inconsistent in spacing imo so make them the same spacing? like overlap these 2 04:23:490 (1,2) - instead of 04:23:490 (1,3) - or fix 04:22:110 - by ctrl+g spacing here 04:22:455 (2,3) -
04:52:455 - this slider feels awfully extended which makes it kind of boring xD i think you should continue the stream until 04:53:145 - or so
05:06:766 (3) - kind of weird rhythm here with the slider ending on the prominent beat
05:49:352 (2,3) - hahahahhaha blanket fix pls
05:58:317 (3) - maybe make this consistent flow wise to the other sliders since theyre the same sound
06:14:869 (4,5) - large spacing for no reason imo.. if anything, 06:15:042 (5,1) - should be larger instead
06:26:248 - add a note for dat nice finish