Yi
_Yiiiii wrote:
M4M
Generalmight change diffname laterThe diff name is unrankable. Although the highest diff can have a custom name, but it mustn't show the diff isn't at the difficulty
03:23:483 - This red line offset=203517 bpm=178 i guess, I'm not a pro timing tester XD Tried but don't think it's correct D: gonna keep checking.
Beginner ←You should change it later
00:01:305 - What about adding a circle? I find ending with slider is fine
Same thing to the same other pattern.
00:27:233 (2,3) - Maybe a 1/4 slider is better here, I think... umm this is a fully stream so 1/4 feels weird imo
01:05:590 (1,3) - Too curve. yup
01:12:448 (1,2) - Need more distance, or you can choose to have a very small DS to emphasise the strong sound. kinda fixed the ds but I want this distance tbh
03:03:447 (6,7,1) - Make a sharper angle for the bass sound. I think it's sharp enough, want to keep structure
04:12:876 (1) - That is too surprising, I think you should mention this slider in the map description. oh well the music provides such a change is sv + is not confusing or unusual so there's no need to mention i think xD
04:55:519 (6) - Delete it, there is no guitar sound.
Good luck~
Nostalgic
Nostalgic wrote:
o/ m4m from your queue![General]
- As aforementioned, change the diff name pls
- Source: Origin Gonna ask KwaN for this since I don't really understand what it says + She also told me that I should leave source blank so yeah.
- Tag: jrock 資生堂 Shiseido ANESSA uu no idea what anessa or shiseido are, gonna look at them first
- Either lower the od or increase the ar pls! ar 8.8 is fine now i think
[Beginner]
- 00:07:198 There's a sound you should map it yup but I'm following guitar here, not necessary to follow drums always
- 00:34:733 (1,2,3,4) - the square can be improved by moving 4 a bit towards right oops you're right! fixed
- Music in kiai intensifies but I can barely feel the ds differences
- 02:27:233 (4,5) - curvy would look nicer curved
- 03:38:590 (6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1) - It's the guitar solo part, the stream could be more spaced imo no need to space them more, I think that having such streams is hard enough for a 4.4*
Good luck!
Left
Left wrote:
M4M from ur q
[Beginner lul]
00:01:626 (4) - no sound fixed
00:02:162 (1,2) - dissapointing rhythm use, not following drum because no sound in first 1/4's reverse arrow. also not following guitar. of course you can say 'every point has sound so it's okay' but not smart rhythm use i mean. I think following drums is not bad here. 00:02:162 - 00:02:590 - have distinctive sound so don't feel like a bad rhythm use D:
01:11:805 (4,5) - how about tail mute (5%)? feel better when hit okay!
02:34:733 (1,2,3,4,5) - maybe need some gap in DS with 02:33:876 (1,2,3,4) - since sound is different changed a bit
02:35:590 (1,2) - tail mute is really effective here I bet kk!
03:03:662 (7) - no drumsound only here, at least lower DS pls Following the vocals for the jump is good imo + 03:03:876 - thing is a strong sound so emphasizing it is good D:
03:23:483 (1,2,3) - mute ^
03:57:876 (1) - can give more impact on this note? I think it's fine D:
good luck with this map!
Regraz
Regraz wrote:
M4M from queue.
Oh such bg lol da best : okhand :
I noticed some jumps are pretty underemphasized, for example: 00:03:876 (1,2) - 00:07:305 (1,2) - 00:10:733 (1,2) - etc, I think they deserves to be more space'd. Since in latter sections, you have much larger spacing for 1/2 rhythm gaps. Gonna think about it, probably gonna spaced them more, but not now since im a bit tired and have no creativity atm xd
01:48:233 (1,4) - ayy this .... make the space between note and the slider for blanket larger pls. Also compared to other blankets you made like 01:34:519 (1,3) - , this feels extremely small tbh. lol yeah xd feels better when it's not that tiny
01:53:590 (1) - Since in this section, the song is mostly focused on vocal, I'd recommend a lower volume here. yup, lowered to 30%
01:58:733 (1,2) - Need a larger spacing for sure, compared to the 1/2 jumps made by you later, it could easily be misread as 1/4 note. increased spacing between those, not it doesn't feel like 1/4 gap
03:10:733 (1) - Weird rhythm section imo, especially the reverse sliders, it seems you are trying to follow more than one instruments in this part, which feels a little bit weird. It should be like this imo: https://puu.sh/tGdNg/bb5e37f86c.png yeah overall this rhythm is weird to handle, at first I tried single circle as how you mention.. but didn't really like them D: maybe i'm gonna change it but not now since as I said, don't creativity today x.x
05:09:469 (4,1) - Anti-jump feels better? Could also emphasize the last beat better. I think there aren't much possibilities to emphasize last beat + I like how it's now D:
Sorry nothing much to say, solid map.
Thanks for mods!