mini check
20:25 iYiyo: hi sheela
20:25 iYiyo: mind if I ask for a testplay?
20:26 sheela: sure
20:26 *iYiyo is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1156642 KANA-BOON - Nandemo Nedari]
20:26 iYiyo: thanks :3
20:31 iYiyo: hype
20:32 sheela: yes lol
20:32 sheela: good map
20:32 iYiyo: rip slow bpm
20:32 iYiyo: thanks!
20:32 sheela: no probs
20:32 iYiyo: however I saw some things that now I'd want to fix
20:32 iYiyo: aesthetics things mostly
20:33 sheela: all right
20:33 sheela: i also have some suggestions
20:33 iYiyo: please go ahead
20:34 iYiyo: ;o
20:34 sheela: 03:24:447 (1,1,1,1) - well this is not one, but they are off-beat
20:34 sheela: actually precisely 03:24:447 (1,1,1,1) -
20:34 sheela: *03:24:875 (1,1) -
20:35 iYiyo: omg yeah
20:35 iYiyo: with 25% it's clearly off
20:35 sheela: i think the better bpm would be 135
20:36 iYiyo: yeah, works better
20:36 sheela: cool
20:37 iYiyo: 05:06:460 - what do you think about these red lines tho?
20:37 iYiyo: I've talked with some mappers but nobody mention them xd
20:39 sheela: first line i think the offset should be shifted to 05:06:484 -
20:40 sheela: second red line maybe 05:07:222 - sounds more on-time
20:41 iYiyo: right feels a bit too early xd
20:41 iYiyo: let me see
20:41 iYiyo: right now*
20:43 iYiyo: yeah, fixed that
20:43 sheela: all right
20:43 sheela: some suggestions now
20:44 iYiyo: okay!
20:45 sheela: 00:38:162 (1,2,3,4,5) - 00:39:019 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - i don't like how you repeat the same pattern for half a music measure but change the movement
20:45 sheela: but i somewhat understand you did it
20:47 sheela: yet i'd probably try to move, flip the pattern 00:39:019 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - somewhere more to the left
20:47 iYiyo: well, while playing it's not that noticeable
20:47 iYiyo: lemme see :o
20:47 sheela: depends on the player tho
20:48 iYiyo: yes, it depends xd
20:48 sheela: with the low bpm, it's noticeable how the patterns are at the same place
20:48 iYiyo: yup I kinda agree, gonna move a few circles I think
20:48 iYiyo: but still have some stacks
20:49 iYiyo: as before
20:49 sheela: ook
20:49 sheela: 01:08:162 (3) - nc this circle to indicate the 1/1 rhythm change
20:50 iYiyo: you got a 50 there xD
20:51 sheela: hahaha
20:51 iYiyo: so I think i should add that nc xd
20:51 sheela: yeah highly recommended
20:53 sheela: also nc 02:20:162 (3) -
20:53 iYiyo: yup, already nc that
20:56 sheela: ok, i guess that's it
20:57 iYiyo: ok sheela, thanks a lot for your time :)
20:57 sheela: no probs
20:57 iYiyo: you can post for kds if you want
20:57 sheela: ook