Thanksgyt wrote:
[Calm]
Use a bigger circle size? (lol, again) + maybe make this diff a bit easier. OK how about I lower AR and OD by one each
00:23:233 (2) - delete circle? No :S
01:38:925 (5) - too loud clap for me OK I've lowered volume a bit
01:41:694 (3) - replace whistle to finish + new combo? Nah, I like whistle here
01:48:825 (6) - delete circle? Uh ... I think this fits in pretty well here, and even if I did ... random 3 beat gap? o_O
[Chill]
00:26:002 (1,2,3) - make this like 00:22:310 (1,2,3)? No I want this variety here
00:30:617 (2) - delete circle? This fits in so nicely though T_T
01:38:925 (6) - too loud clap for me Fixed
01:41:694 (5) - replace whistle to finish + new combo? :S
[Cool]
00:23:002 (2,3,4) - these circles are unexpected for me. Replace them with one slider? [like 00:26:694 (2)]. I want them to be different ... D:
And why you use 1.3-1.4x spacing for 1/4 notes and 0.9-1.0x for others? It's not big problem, but looks a bit strange and random. I suggest using 1.2x spacing for 1/4 notes and 1.0x for others. I didn't really pay much attention to that, it just felt right to me. I guess I'll change it thoughFor example00:29:463 (7,1,2,3,4)
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00:34:079 (2,3,4)
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00:34:771 (5,6,7,8,9)
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Ok, it's very good map for cool song. Star!
All right, thanks so much for your mod! ;DDragvon wrote:
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Hello~
Info
Suggestions! It's up to you!
Problems! You should take a look at these.
Errors! Please fix those.
<General>
• Everything okay!
<Timing>
• BPM & Offset: Fine!
<Calm>
• 00:51:848 (1) - Maybe switch this combo marker with (2)? I think this is fine
• 00:59:002 (6) - New combo here? (Remove from (1) then) Hmm I think this is OK as well but I see what you mean. Will fix if someone else suggests this
• 01:48:345 (6) - I would move this one 1/1 back and add Claps to it. (Don't forget to fix spacing if you do so!) OTL nobody likes this, but this flows so well for me T_T K if one more person says this I'll change it :S
• 02:23:145 (3,1) - Switch the combo marker? Well ... they feel fine?
• 02:27:225 (4,1) - ^
• 02:55:860 (2) - Reduce by 1/2 and add a repeat here? Hmm, OK
Aesthethics: (Feel free to ignore)
• 01:51:225 (3) - With Distance Snap activated, move it once to the right so it can be aligned with the end of the slider? (If you do so, move (4) 1 grid right & 1 grid up) OK did this and messed with note placements a bit
• 01:37:309 (3) and any similar sliders- Move the finishing point 2 grids down and 1 grid left then flip it Done
This way the slider looks like it's "guiding" you to the next note =p
Comments: 02:23:865 (1,2,3) - Oh i liked this combo! Haha thanks! I do my best to please
<Chill>
• 01:01:079 (4) - Replace this with a 1/1 slider. Sounds nice doesn't it :O? (Don't forget your Whistles) This is so amazingly obvious I wonder why I didn't do this in the first place O_O
• 01:58:185 (2,3,4) - Another crazy idea: Replace 2 & 3 for a single 1/1 slider with whistles in the notes (not in the body), then, make 4 a 1/2 slider with 1 or 2 repeats. I think you may be my favouritest modder ever. Don't tell anyone
Aesthethics:
• 00:32:233 (4) - Align with the slider? (1 grid right & 2 grids up) No, not here
Comments: It's a nice diff, some notes could be spaced better but it plays fine =p Spacing /color]
<Cool>
•[color=#FF8000] 01:28:540 (11,1) - Switch this combo marker. Hmm ... OK
• 01:30:617 (6) - Add a combo marker here or in (7). Meh ... no
• 01:52:665 (11,1) - Switch this combo marker too. I think this one feels better the way it is
• 02:17:385 (5,6) - I would remove 6 and add a repeat to 5 Sorry, I think this plays better
• 02:43:380 (2,3,4,8,9,10,11,12) - This sounds weid. Try this:Did you noticed the pattern i've tried to tell you here? Repeat that if you liked in the following combos.
- → 02:43:500 (3,4) - Switch Whistles. (Remove from 3 and add it to 4) Done
→ 02:45:420 (8,9) - Same as above. OK
→ 02:46:260 (10,11,12) - Add Whistles to 10, then either remove 11 or remove it's whistle. Okay
• 02:49:620 (7) - New combo here. I kind of like this as a "prelude" to the next combo :S
Comments: Pretty fun diff i must say , again, some ugly spacing but that don't really bother me at all xD! Me and spacing are not friends
Final Comments:
I liked your mapset, all diffs are quite balanced. But i think you could have used more the beats related to the piano! It's such a beautiful melody ^-^!
Good luck! Star!
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