Halo Again :D
[General]
Slider tick rate 2 sound much better
No kiai?
use the slider border code from lovhin, it fit your hit circle :3
[Skin]
There almost no different between 300, 300g, and 300k score burst. The same also happens for 100 and 100k
I suggest you to change the color of the number and make it different from each score burst, you don't have to make it bigger to make it different as bigger score burst is annoying xD
I'm going to be blunt on the scorebar, it's too plain without any score-bar bg :(
[Calm]
Normal?
00:23:233 (2) - remove this or shorten 00:22:310 (1) by 1/2 beat than add note add 00:23:002
00:55:079 (5) - clap is kinda don't fit here, remove it
02:02:740 (3) - remove the whistle from the slider slide
02:21:220 (2) - shorten this by 1/1 beat then add a circle on where the slider end was
02:46:980 (1) - remove the whistle from the slider slide
03:13:860 (1) - add a timing section that decrease the volume from here, 40% volume is good
[timing section]
00:40:656 - increase the volume for this timing by another 1 tick to 35%
02:43:620 - umm why is this timing section on the middle of slider?
03:15:780 - decrease the volume by 1 tick
[Cool]
Normal+?
01:08:463 (5) - actually it's better if you lengthen this bye 1/1 beat, then remove 01:10:310 (6) even more better with slider ticki rate 2
02:13:540 (2) - remove the whistle slider slide
02:27:700 (1) - same as 01:08:463 (5)
[timing section]
00:40:656 - increase the volume for this timing by another 1 tick to 35%
03:13:620 - decrease the volume by 1 tick
[Chill]
This is hard :3
00:40:656 (7) - increase the volume for this timing by another 1 tick to 35%
01:02:925 (1,2) - imo it'll flow better if you put 2 on 01:02:925 and 1 on 01:03:848
01:06:156 (7,8,9,10) - ok this stream doesn't fit the song and it's kinda random. I strongly suggest you to remove 'em
01:41:694 (1) - change the start to finish
[timing section]
03:13:740 - decrease the volume by 1 tick
03:15:780 - ^
Good map, good SB, and superb song
Overall this is a good map
what worried me is how Calm and Cool are similar :?
+pink star cause it's DJ Okawari 8-)
you don't have to kudosu this cause I've already got one before :3
please PM me if you want to map another DJ Okawari song
[General]
Slider tick rate 2 sound much better
No kiai?
use the slider border code from lovhin, it fit your hit circle :3
[Skin]
There almost no different between 300, 300g, and 300k score burst. The same also happens for 100 and 100k
I suggest you to change the color of the number and make it different from each score burst, you don't have to make it bigger to make it different as bigger score burst is annoying xD
I'm going to be blunt on the scorebar, it's too plain without any score-bar bg :(
[Calm]
Normal?
00:23:233 (2) - remove this or shorten 00:22:310 (1) by 1/2 beat than add note add 00:23:002
00:55:079 (5) - clap is kinda don't fit here, remove it
02:02:740 (3) - remove the whistle from the slider slide
02:21:220 (2) - shorten this by 1/1 beat then add a circle on where the slider end was
02:46:980 (1) - remove the whistle from the slider slide
03:13:860 (1) - add a timing section that decrease the volume from here, 40% volume is good
[timing section]
00:40:656 - increase the volume for this timing by another 1 tick to 35%
02:43:620 - umm why is this timing section on the middle of slider?
03:15:780 - decrease the volume by 1 tick
[Cool]
Normal+?
01:08:463 (5) - actually it's better if you lengthen this bye 1/1 beat, then remove 01:10:310 (6) even more better with slider ticki rate 2
02:13:540 (2) - remove the whistle slider slide
02:27:700 (1) - same as 01:08:463 (5)
[timing section]
00:40:656 - increase the volume for this timing by another 1 tick to 35%
03:13:620 - decrease the volume by 1 tick
[Chill]
This is hard :3
00:40:656 (7) - increase the volume for this timing by another 1 tick to 35%
01:02:925 (1,2) - imo it'll flow better if you put 2 on 01:02:925 and 1 on 01:03:848
01:06:156 (7,8,9,10) - ok this stream doesn't fit the song and it's kinda random. I strongly suggest you to remove 'em
01:41:694 (1) - change the start to finish
[timing section]
03:13:740 - decrease the volume by 1 tick
03:15:780 - ^
Good map, good SB, and superb song
Overall this is a good map
what worried me is how Calm and Cool are similar :?
+pink star cause it's DJ Okawari 8-)
you don't have to kudosu this cause I've already got one before :3
please PM me if you want to map another DJ Okawari song