This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on November-11-10 at 9:13:04 PM

Artist: DJ Okawari
Title: Minamo
Tags: piano tsukino sora Mirror
BPM: 130
Filesize: 10695kb
Play Time: 03:17
Difficulties Available:

1. Calm (2.56 stars, 212 notes)
2. Chill (3.73 stars, 246 notes)
3. Cool (4.73 stars, 346 notes)

Download: DJ Okawari - Minamo
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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9th beatmap created. 3rd submitted + ranked

November 21st, 2010: RANKED. Everyone who helped I give you my thanks, special thanks going to Doomsday, Krisom, and of course James!

First attempt at storyboarding, so any comments would be nice

CURRENTLY WORKING ON SKIN / SPRITES

ADDITIONAL INFO:
Another track from DJ Okawari's Mirror. Was going to finish another map before this, but I was obssessed with this song for a while, which is why this was finished before

October 16th, 2010: Initial submission
October 17th: Tightened up timing, new combos. Fixed storyboard and skin
October 18th: Hitsound changes, added a few notes
October 19th: Fixed spacing, added and changed a few notes
October 20th: Skin fixes
October 21st: Hitsound fix and addition
October 22nd: More skin fixes, changed a few sliders and spacing
(October 23rd: Hitsound additions, changed a few sliders and slider border to black)
October 24th: More hitsound and volume changes, deleted a few things, skin changes
October 25th: Tags changed, spacing fix, hitsound changes
October 26th: Spacing changes and added a note
October 28th: More timing and hitsound changes, OD + AR +1 in Chill, resized backgrounds
October 30th: Many hitsound changes, fixed some SB timing, will fix all with confirmed offsets
November 1st: OD + AR -1 in Calm, fixed volume and spacing, changed a few patterns and hitsounds as well
November 2nd: Using Doomsday's offset. Re - snapped most timing sections / bookmarks and storyboard
November 3rd: Fixed skin, spacing, hitsound, note changes
November 5th: Hitsound changes
November 6th: More hitsound, slider changes
November 7th: Added hitcircleoverlay, fixed scorebar-bg
November 9th: Storyboard fixes, deleted blue pulse (now unneeded)
November 11th: Minor spacing fix, scorebar kis fixed

Worthlessmod gogo

General
Clip the song at about 3:20, and have it fade out. Saves file size.
Seek timing help, I can't help with this :X

Calm
01:42:621 New Combo?

Cool
01:38:467 New Combo
01:39:852 Remove New Combo
01:41:698 New Combo

Sorry I can't be of much assistance. Everything's really really good.

I cannot provide much help when it comes to multiple timing sections, sorry.
However, you seem to have done an ample job of timing this song so give yourself a pat on the back.
I can only offer a few minor suggestions:

osu! Timing Help!

• 1. BPM 130 , Offset 22310 (-4)
  2. BPM 125 , Offset 105460 (-6)
  3. BPM 125 , Offset 163140
  4. BPM 120 , Offset 195780
  5. BPM 125 , Offset 197780 (+4)

Starred~!

Charles445 wrote:

Worthlessmod gogo

General
Clip the song at about 3:20, and have it fade out. Saves file size.
Seek timing help, I can't help with this :X

Calm
01:42:621 New Combo? This feels kind of an awkward place ... so no :S

Cool
01:38:467 New Combo
01:39:852 Remove New Combo
01:41:698 New Combo
OIC wat u did thar. All done

Sorry I can't be of much assistance. Everything's really really good.

Haha, thanks

soradg123 wrote:

I cannot provide much help when it comes to multiple timing sections, sorry.
However, you seem to have done an ample job of timing this song so give yourself a pat on the back.
I can only offer a few minor suggestions:

osu! Timing Help!

• 1. BPM 130 , Offset 22310 (-4) Done
  2. BPM 125 , Offset 105460 (-6) Fixed
  3. BPM 125 , Offset 163140
  4. BPM 120 , Offset 195780
  5. BPM 125 , Offset 197780 (+4) Nice catch there XD

Starred~!

Thank you very much!

Hi!

Calm:
01:01:079 (4) - clap in the beginning instead of whistle?
01:08:463 (5) - end clap
01:29:463 (2) - was suspecting finish here..
01:32:002 (6) - ^
02:25:780 (3) - clap at the end

Chill:
00:24:156 (4) - new combo
nothing else.good diff.

Cool:
HP+1?
01:37:309 (3,4) - delete the slider and make a triple out of it
01:52:660 (11) - align with (10)
02:08:500 (x) add note with finish


good mapset!

hi

my modding

[Calm]
01:35:233 (x) - add Notes and add clap
02:43:140 (1) - End Notes add clap
02:44:580 (2) - remove clap

[Chill]
02:08:980 (1) - add whistle


There is no special problem.

Sorry for the wait!

Backwards modding...yes
I <3 this map and SB.

General:
Source? Maybe piano works.

Cool:
00:54:617: Somehow I found it more...fitting to add a note here with a clap.
01:00:156: ^
02:08:500: Add note here as well, but with a finish?
02:16:180: ^

Chill:
01:10:310: Take out note 6 and stretch 5 so it ends where 6 was?

Calm:
Seems a little hard to be easy to me, make the circles larger~
02:27:700: Shape this slider a little better

I can't get over how beautiful this is. Take my star!

noneed wrote:

Hi! Hallo ^_^

Calm:
01:01:079 (4) - clap in the beginning instead of whistle? Mmm sounds better with whistle to me
01:08:463 (5) - end clap I like it better with nothing here
01:29:463 (2) - was suspecting finish here.. OK added but quietly
01:32:002 (6) - ^ Don't like it here
02:25:780 (3) - clap at the end I think claps on beat 3 fit in this song better, this feels awkward to me

Chill:
00:24:156 (4) - new combo This is fine I think
nothing else.good diff.

Cool:
HP+1? I'll ... think about it
01:37:309 (3,4) - delete the slider and make a triple out of it Well that's essentially what it was, but OK
01:52:660 (11) - align with (10) No, this was purposely one grid lower
02:08:500 (x) add note with finish Good idea, added


good mapset!

Thank you very much for your time!

Joon wrote:

hi Hi hi ;D

my modding

[Calm]
01:35:233 (x) - add Notes and add clap Done
02:43:140 (1) - End Notes add clap Added
02:44:580 (2) - remove clap Fixed, dunno what happened here O_o

[Chill]
02:08:980 (1) - add whistle OK


There is no special problem.

Thank you for checking my hitsounds! ^_^

kuyukiP wrote:

Sorry for the wait! Don't worry about it

Backwards modding...yes
I <3 this map and SB. Wow, thanks! My first time attempting SB XD

General:
Source? Maybe piano works.

Cool:
00:54:617: Somehow I found it more...fitting to add a note here with a clap. Mmm ... I don't like this here
01:00:156: ^ I like the break here, otherwise I feel it's kind of ... crowded? I dunno
02:08:500: Add note here as well, but with a finish? Done
02:16:180: ^ OK

Chill:
01:10:310: Take out note 6 and stretch 5 so it ends where 6 was? Hrm I'll think about the length of this slider (might make this shorter) but I want (6) to be its own note

Calm:
Seems a little hard to be easy to me, make the circles larger~
02:27:700: Shape this slider a little better Hmm OK, hope it looks better now

I can't get over how beautiful this is. Take my star!

Thanks so much!

Star first, mod comes later

[General]
A little decrease in offset? haha duno
great skin, great music, very cool
[Calm]
As a easy, I suggest you use a bigger circle size, and the whole map is like a normal rather than an easy
And, maybe a little decrease in SV?
I think this one needs some big changes ><
[Chill]
Generally speaking, I think it's hard for a rookie to read this map, consider fill it up a little bit, some parts are hard to read, sometimes it's not nessary to make all your notes follow the sound.
01:29:925 (4,5,6) - like this
02:47:700 (3,4,5) - and this
4/3 beats are not that normal for a normal
[Cool]
00:45:617 (3) - I think it would be better if you add two notes before and after this, cuz it's hard to hit them correctly when they appear to be on the red line separately, same feeling comes from other parts of this map
00:46:079 (4,5) - don't like this >< how about something like this?http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/31629
00:55:079 (7,1) - though I can read this cuz you used a new combo, but maybe better if you double the spacing
01:00:386 (4) - same as the first one
01:29:925 (4,5,6) - don't like this, maybe feel better if you make a reverse slider here
02:09:700 (3,4,5) - same to ↑

very beautiful map! XD

[Cool]
0:39:386 (5) right 1 grid
1:41:233 (6) finish?
2:13:900 (5) right 1 grid
3:07:140 (2) left 1 grid?
3:17:780 (11) left 1 grid
COOL SB

[Chill]
0:38:002 (2) left 1 grid

nice SB and I can't stop myself to double stat this one.

Mai mod ~

Cool :

00:49:310 (4) - Add a note?
00:54:617 (7) - ^
01:35:925 (10) - ^
01:42:617 (2) - Add a clap in the begin of the slider
01:44:463 (4) - ^
02:00:820 (10) - Add a note and a finish

Chill :

00:23:233 (3) - Add a clap in the fiinsh of the slider
00:25:540 (7) - Add a clap
00:26:925 (3) - ^
00:29:233 (7) - ^
00:30:617 (2) - ^
00:32:694 (5) - Add a clap in the finish of the slider
00:33:156 (6) - Add a clap
00:33:617 (2) - Add a clap in the finish of the slider
00:36:617 (6) - Add a clap
00:38:002 (2) - ^
00:39:848 (6) - Add a clap in the begin of the slider
02:16:180 (5) - Add a note and a clap


Calm :

Fine ~
I like the song and the sb
Good job :3

Heatherfield wrote:

Star first, mod comes later

[General]
A little decrease in offset? haha duno I think timing / offset is OK, got a little help up there
great skin, great music, very cool
[Calm]
As a easy, I suggest you use a bigger circle size, and the whole map is like a normal rather than an easy
And, maybe a little decrease in SV? Mmm ... pretty slow already, 1.1
I think this one needs some big changes ><
[Chill]
Generally speaking, I think it's hard for a rookie to read this map, consider fill it up a little bit, some parts are hard to read, sometimes it's not nessary to make all your notes follow the sound.
01:29:925 (4,5,6) - like this I like this, sorry D:
02:47:700 (3,4,5) - and this Hmm well this one is just one beat apart so I'm going to leave this
4/3 beats are not that normal for a normal
[Cool]
00:45:617 (3) - I think it would be better if you add two notes before and after this, cuz it's hard to hit them correctly when they appear to be on the red line separately, same feeling comes from other parts of this map I guess I kind of understand what you mean, but I don't think it would fit well here. I will keep this in mind for other parts
00:46:079 (4,5) - don't like this >< how about something like this?http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/31629 It's basically the same thing, but OK, changed (I just wanted some more variation in the patterns)
00:55:079 (7,1) - though I can read this cuz you used a new combo, but maybe better if you double the spacing Ah yes sorry, spacing error on my part. Thank you for catching that
01:00:386 (4) - same as the first one Hmm I checked the spacing and it's fine
01:29:925 (4,5,6) - don't like this, maybe feel better if you make a reverse slider here I think they feel more like separate notes
02:09:700 (3,4,5) - same to ↑

very beautiful map! XD

Thanks for your mod!

wmfchris wrote:

[Cool]
0:39:386 (5) right 1 grid Done
1:41:233 (6) finish? I don't think this fits here
2:13:900 (5) right 1 grid Fixed
3:07:140 (2) left 1 grid? Turned off grid snap and moved kind of half a grid
3:17:780 (11) left 1 grid Moved (10) kind of half a grid right
COOL SB

[Chill]
0:38:002 (2) left 1 grid Moved 1 left and down

nice SB and I can't stop myself to double stat this one.

Wow, thanks so much! *hugs*

Verdisphena wrote:

Mai mod ~

Cool :

00:49:310 (4) - Add a note? No I like this gap here
00:54:617 (7) - ^ Okay
01:35:925 (10) - ^ I think I will keep this one
01:42:617 (2) - Add a clap in the begin of the slider I want this to be a clap free section as well XD
01:44:463 (4) - ^
02:00:820 (10) - Add a note and a finish I kind of like the pause, but if other people suggest then I will

Chill :

00:23:233 (3) - Add a clap in the fiinsh of the slider I want the beginning part to be "lighter" so I'm going with no claps this part
00:25:540 (7) - Add a clap
00:26:925 (3) - ^
00:29:233 (7) - ^
00:30:617 (2) - ^
00:32:694 (5) - Add a clap in the finish of the slider
00:33:156 (6) - Add a clap
00:33:617 (2) - Add a clap in the finish of the slider
00:36:617 (6) - Add a clap
00:38:002 (2) - ^
00:39:848 (6) - Add a clap in the begin of the slider
02:16:180 (5) - Add a note and a clap I like this gap here so I'm keeping this


Calm :

Fine ~
I like the song and the sb
Good job :3

Thanks for your time!
Sorry I'm late in getting to your mods, school's a bit busy lately D:

Okai~ Modding

Well nothing wrong except the clap kinda kills the mood I was in when listening to the song XD

star

Kalypso wrote:

Okai~ Modding

Well nothing wrong except the clap kinda kills the mood I was in when listening to the song XD

star

Haha really? Thanks XD
Maybe I'll try to find custom clap or something ... sorry don't think I can give you kudosu! for that D:

Hi~
[Skin]
-Cut unnecesary transparency in hit0.png,hit50.png, hit100.png, ... , hit300g.png
-Resize scorebar-bg.png to 1x1 pixels.

[SB]
-Nice

<3 Star~

Mod~ Just like you asked for.....BUT! Before we start...../me rips of EvianBubble's face.
:3

Uhhh.....Well.....Can't find much x3

STAR!

Astom wrote:

Hi~
[Skin]
-Cut unnecesary transparency in hit0.png,hit50.png, hit100.png, ... , hit300g.png Okay
-Resize scorebar-bg.png to 1x1 pixels. Done

[SB]
-Nice

<3 Star~

Thanks for checking!

Kiddo-Kun wrote:

Mod~ Just like you asked for.....BUT! Before we start...../me rips of EvianBubble's face.
:3

Uhhh.....Well.....Can't find much x3

STAR!

AURGH, MY FACE! D;

Well, thank you for looking anyway

[Calm]
first [calm] it's bit hard for a [Easy]..

00:31:310 (3) - remove this circle
01:07:309 (2) - ^
01:58:660 (3) - ^
02:11:620 (5) - change this note from 02:11:620 to 02:11:380?

[Chill]
00:26:925 (3) - add a hitclap?
00:38:233 (3) - remove this circle

[Cool]
00:59:694 (3) - add a hitwhistle at the begin?
02:23:860 (1) - add a hitfinish at the begin?
02:44:580 (6) - add a hitclap at the begin?
02:46:500 (12) - ^
03:09:540 (7) - add a hitcalp?

good job^ ^

Nice relaxing maps here. The storyboard is a nice touch.

I'd give you suggestions, but I don't have any! Oh well~

Disoy wrote:

[Calm]
first [calm] it's bit hard for a [Easy].. Really? I don't think so O_o

00:31:310 (3) - remove this circle No, I think this fits really well
01:07:309 (2) - ^ I really think this helps with the flow
01:58:660 (3) - ^ Sorry, no D:
02:11:620 (5) - change this note from 02:11:620 to 02:11:380? That feels kind of ... random to me O_O

[Chill]
00:26:925 (3) - add a hitclap? Ah sorry, don't know why I had a clap at the beginning ... my mistake T_T So no, this first section is clap free
00:38:233 (3) - remove this circle Uhrm ... no

[Cool]
00:59:694 (3) - add a hitwhistle at the begin? Okay
02:23:860 (1) - add a hitfinish at the begin? I think whistle sounds better here
02:44:580 (6) - add a hitclap at the begin? These I think no clap is OK
02:46:500 (12) - ^
03:09:540 (7) - add a hitcalp?

good job^ ^

Thanks

Soaprman wrote:

Nice relaxing maps here. The storyboard is a nice touch.

I'd give you suggestions, but I don't have any! Oh well~

Oh ... well thanks for your time anyway ^_^