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EvianBubble

James2250 wrote:

Include a cursor trail in the folder (from the template skin if nothing else) Seeing as it is no longer on "default" OK, done
Is the hitcircle overlay blanked out? (and why) Well because I designed the hitcircle w/o overlay in mind, and it looks funny with it. I tried to add kind of a soft glow of the combo colour but it just turned out really ugly lol XD
(Looking at earlier comments 256kbps is allowed for a map this old) Yippeeee XD

Calm:
Maybe hp -1 for the easiest difficulty but I think this can pass for it otherwise? Sure
Looks good

Chill:
Nice

Cool:
Nice

Nice map/song/sb
PM me after fixes for bubble
Thanks James :D

ZLOdeuka wrote:

Hello~

This second your map DJ Okawari ~ I really like

Storyboard ~ excellent ...

I can`t even see the mistake, I really like the map

STAR~ *_*
Thanks so much for your time! ^_^
Beuchi
Hi!~

Remember these are just suggestions that you can always ignore :P

~All Diffs~
Skin:
- Did you make your hitcircles basing on LuigiHann's Technologic hitcircles? They're the same except that the color ring is bigger. If you did, please make sure you have LH's permission to modify/use them, if you already have it, please give credits to him on the description of your map :3

Storyboard:
- Crop the unnecessary transparency on the following images:
  1. blue.png
  2. colour pulse.png
  3. green.png
  4. red.png
  5. yellow.png
- About the colour flashes at the bottom of the screen, why don't you just use a white flash and use the Coloring function to make it the color you want? Check this thread, it will help you :3
- Not sure if it's intentional but when you use images like "double colour pulse", "blue pulse" or "double pulse" you also have the single pulse behind them, so you actually have two pulses at the same time. The most noticeable point of this is when you use "blue pulse", which has a transparency, so having the pulse behind it makes the image lose its "meaning" because you could just use "triple pulse" instead of that.

~Calm~
No problems here!

~Chill~
No problems here!

~Cool~
No problems here!

Beautiful and calm map, an example of how can a map be good without overmapping it with jumps or streams every 3 notes.
Good luck with this <3 *star*
Topic Starter
EvianBubble

Beuchi-chan wrote:

Hi!~

Remember these are just suggestions that you can always ignore :P

~All Diffs~
Skin:
- Did you make your hitcircles basing on LuigiHann's Technologic hitcircles? They're the same except that the color ring is bigger. If you did, please make sure you have LH's permission to modify/use them, if you already have it, please give credits to him on the description of your map :3

Storyboard:
- Crop the unnecessary transparency on the following images:
  1. blue.png
  2. colour pulse.png
  3. green.png
  4. red.png
  5. yellow.png
- About the colour flashes at the bottom of the screen, why don't you just use a white flash and use the Coloring function to make it the color you want? Check this thread, it will help you :3 This seems ... complicated ... OTL lol
- Not sure if it's intentional but when you use images like "double colour pulse", "blue pulse" or "double pulse" you also have the single pulse behind them, so you actually have two pulses at the same time. The most noticeable point of this is when you use "blue pulse", which has a transparency, so having the pulse behind it makes the image lose its "meaning" because you could just use "triple pulse" instead of that. Nice catch. I'll fix this

~Calm~
No problems here!

~Chill~
No problems here!

~Cool~
No problems here!

Beautiful and calm map, an example of how can a map be good without overmapping it with jumps or streams every 3 notes.
Good luck with this <3 *star*
Thanks so much Beuchi-chan! :D *hugs*
Sleep Powder
10 MB seems like a lot o_o"

Add a Source if you can?

A 5ms earlier offset might be better.

[Calm]
Good.

[Chill]
Good.

[Cool]
Good.
00:30:152 (3,4) - Move (3) right 1, Move (4) 1 right and 1 up (Level 3 Grid)

Overall, the beatmaps look correctly structured but some of the sliders felt a little off.
Work on your sliders a little more next time and your next map will be perfect~

I think everyone covered the SB files things so...guess I'm done for now.

Starr'd
Topic Starter
EvianBubble

animask wrote:

10 MB seems like a lot o_o"

Add a Source if you can? I don't think there is one

A 5ms earlier offset might be better. I'm not very good with these ... I'm going to go with Doomsday on this, sorry (also I don't want to snap SB lol XD)

[Calm]
Good.

[Chill]
Good.

[Cool]
Good.
00:30:152 (3,4) - Move (3) right 1, Move (4) 1 right and 1 up (Level 3 Grid) Looks way better, fixed

Overall, the beatmaps look correctly structured but some of the sliders felt a little off.
Work on your sliders a little more next time and your next map will be perfect~ OK :D

I think everyone covered the SB files things so...guess I'm done for now.

Starr'd
Thanks! BTW I like your colour coding haha XD
Jinxy
Nothing wrong for me. Starred.
yeahyeahyeahhh
This seems ready for bubble, but I'm not comfy bubbling anything with skin elements :( So if a MAT or BAT comes by, from a standard play point of view this map is A-OK.
Topic Starter
EvianBubble

JInxyjem wrote:

Nothing wrong for me. Starred.
Thanks for looking :D

yeahyeahyeahhh wrote:

This seems ready for bubble, but I'm not comfy bubbling anything with skin elements :( So if a MAT or BAT comes by, from a standard play point of view this map is A-OK.
All right, thanks ^_^
Time to go PM James I suppose
kiddly
It seems that your map is ready for a bubble,so maybe I don't have to mod?

I didn't find any problem in this mapset,well done!

oops,I forget one thing:
it's about the file size.it's 10.6MB,so...you know it.
James2250

EvianBubble wrote:

yeahyeahyeahhh wrote:

This seems ready for bubble, but I'm not comfy bubbling anything with skin elements :( So if a MAT or BAT comes by, from a standard play point of view this map is A-OK.
All right, thanks ^_^
Time to go PM James I suppose
And here I am
Doomsday handled timing, Beuchi handled all sb problems, maps are awesome
The only thing I wonder about is "blank" hitcircle overlay but it shouldn't cause any problems to my knowledge? It won't cause any skin conflicts
As for filesize I am ok with it (fairly long mp3 + skin + sb)

What else do I need to say
Bubbled~

(enough bubbles for today but had to do this one first :P)
narakucrimson
No issues at all :D Seriously. I loved the map, it's just fantastic.

There's no place for doubts here, you have my star~~
Topic Starter
EvianBubble

kiddly wrote:

It seems that your map is ready for a bubble,so maybe I don't have to mod?

I didn't find any problem in this mapset,well done!

oops,I forget one thing:
it's about the file size.it's 10.6MB,so...you know it.
Haha, well, I do have both SB and skin so ... I think it's OK :P
Thanks for checking :D

James2250 wrote:

And here I am
Doomsday handled timing, Beuchi handled all sb problems, maps are awesome
The only thing I wonder about is "blank" hitcircle overlay but it shouldn't cause any problems to my knowledge? It won't cause any skin conflicts
As for filesize I am ok with it (fairly long mp3 + skin + sb)

What else do I need to say
Bubbled~

(enough bubbles for today but had to do this one first :P)
Haha, thanks a lot James! :D You deserve a hug *hugs* ;D

narakucrimson wrote:

No issues at all :D Seriously. I loved the map, it's just fantastic.

There's no place for doubts here, you have my star~~
Thanks so much! It means a lot to me ^_^
DeathxShinigami
Dx-Star
Topic Starter
EvianBubble

DeathxShinigami wrote:

Dx-Star
O_O Thanks XD
Larto
Simple and beautiful! Well done!
James2250
Wow the day I tell you to go bug BATs it gets ranked. Good job!

I mean erm erm congrats on rank :P
lovhin456
Congrats ~ :3
Sallad4ever
Great~
Star Congratz :3
IceBeam
Gratz Evian :D
Reiji-RJ
Gratz!
Topic Starter
EvianBubble

Larto wrote:

Simple and beautiful! Well done!
O_O Wow thanks! How kind of you :D

James2250 wrote:

Wow the day I tell you to go bug BATs it gets ranked. Good job!

I mean erm erm congrats on rank :P
LOL XD The weird thing is I didn't even ask Larto lolololol Thanks :)

lovhin, Sallad, IceBeam, and Reiji thank you very much ^_^

I want to thank everyone who helped me on this, with special thanks going to Doomsday, Krisom, and of course James :D
Andrea
Heart fixed.
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