Lanturn wrote:

offset for that video is about 420ish

Lami wrote:

H

00:51:021 (1,2,3,4) - this beats are so strong, but become suddenly small DS.
but it's smaller than 00:48:482 (3,4,5,6) - . even if they have enough strong beat. fixed

I

00:21:367 (7,1) - it can more fluid shape with each other. change a little

I little worried about Normal - Hard gap.

ProEzreal wrote:

Hello~ NM from my queue

Normal

1. 01:07:059 (1,2) - I think the finishes on the end should be clickable cause it's such a stronk sound consider it
2. 01:21:059 (4,5) - uhm blanket? oke
3. 01:27:059 (1) - uhh is it okay to change velocity o.o just checking

Hard

1. Okay, so the distance actually varies quite a lot which isn't that great for a hard difficulty. The distance should be equal unless you aren't emphasizing something.
2. 00:42:021 (1,2,3,4,5) - It's weird how you change to 1/2 mapping when you were mapping with 3/4 sliders before and not to mention that you map with 3/4 sliders again afterwards. Just map this with 3/4 sliders for consistency i think Rhythm not bad at here, i would say keep
3. 01:05:059 - Shouldn't there be a note here? the NC should be here also
4. 01:17:059 (1) - Looks like you didn't NC this for the insane difficulty, let's keep consistency and disable NC. But what I really suggest is to not nc on 01:16:559 (1) - and keep it with the previous combo. Same for insane oke

Insane

1. 00:42:021 (1,2,3,4,5) - Same thing as I said earlier ^^
2. 01:12:559 (6,1) - Blanket nope

Good luck.

ekafjr wrote:

i think Rhythm not bad at here, i would say keep

ProEzreal wrote:

ekafjr wrote:

i think Rhythm not bad at here, i would say keep

Yes, but what I am saying is transition 3/4 to 1/2 sounds really awkward and is inconsistent which could become a problem. Either make it all 3/4 or 1/2, mixing them kinda makes it weird for me.

o yea and kds plz xD

O-Moei wrote:

Do not fail me, eka ! Lanjut references nanti ye :V

Oke

Time Capsule wrote:

O-Moei wrote:

Do not fail me, eka ! Lanjut references nanti ye :V

Oke

I could try to make 4*+ GD if you want to .w.
*give most innocent face you could imagine*
(telatnya +++++++++++ ya ww)
//digebukin sekampung

ekafjr wrote:

Time Capsule wrote:

I could try to make 4*+ GD if you want to .w.
*give most innocent face you could imagine*
(telatnya +++++++++++ ya ww)
//digebukin sekampung

Nanggung 4* gmana klo 8* aja XD XD XD

1. Unused hitsounds:
   
   1. drum-hitwhistle2.wav
2. The video's audio track must be removed from the video file. The audio track in video is not used in osu!, so removing it reduces that filesize of the beatmap.

1. 00:13:636 (2,3) - Supposed to be moved 1/2 tick later for consistency with 00:10:175 (3,4) . Also don't forget to fix your hitsounding after you moved them.
2. 00:16:175 - aaa strong downbeat with cymbal should be clickable
3. 00:29:098 (3) - Either map 00:29:559 instead of 00:29:444 if you're going for vocal or add hitsounds on 00:29:444 . To me it seems like you are following vocal in other diffs but I'm not sure what are you following with this one since there's no hitsound on that repeat arrow.
4. 00:51:713 (4,5,6) - I suggest using this rhythm instead, so that a strong sound on 00:51:944 will be clickable.
5. 00:55:059 (1,2) - Could have used the same rhythm from Hard on 00:55:059 (1,2) so you won't miss vocal on 00:55:934 and it's a bit off to make 00:55:809 clickable while there's nothing audible on it. Same applies to 00:57:059 (4,5,6) - 01:11:059 (1,2,3) - 01:13:059 (4,5,6) .
6. 01:16:059 (2,3,4,5,6) - A long chain of rhythm here compare to the rest of kiai:
   
   1. I suggest replacing 01:16:559 (3) with a circle because you didn't map 01:00:809 so it's better to keep consistency and also for a better rhythm density by leaving 01:16:809 empty.
   2. 01:17:059 (4) - Optional but can be changed to a 1/2 repeat slider like what you did on 01:01:059 (4) .
7. 01:23:059 (1,2) - I'm not sure if this is supposed to be a blanket but if it is then it can be improved.

1. 00:09:713 (3,4,5) - Don't really like how you followed the instruments instead of vocal, why you suddenly switched to instruments when you're following vocal earlier? It's uncomfortable to play since vocal is on 00:10:059 .
2. 00:24:482 (3) - Why hitsounds on a sliderbody zzz
3. 00:49:175 (6,1,2) - I would like to see the way you play with the piano 00:45:482 (6,1,2,3) here as well, how about changing 00:49:406 (1) to circles?
4. 01:00:559 (7,3) - A pixel overlap which can be easily avoided.
5. 01:13:059 (1,4,5) - Placement can be improved imo, you could've use the advantage of stacking something under 01:13:309 to make things neater.
6. Spacings throughout the song can be more consistent, there are some inconsistent spacings which they're off by 0.1-0.2 DS in each part of the song, 00:29:790 (4,5) - 00:33:482 (3,4,5,1) - these are the examples where spacings can be 1.2 for consistency, there's more of these so please recheck and fix them.

1. 00:08:098 (5,6) - Nerf the spacing a bit, feels off to have this bigger than 00:08:559 (7,1) which it should've been vice versa for a proper emphasis on vocals.
2. 00:56:309 (4,5) - 01:12:309 (5,6) - Yeah they're on the same rhythm so I expect more consistency on both of these in terms of spacing.
3. 01:01:809 (3,4,5) - 01:17:809 (4,5,6) - Could have used the same rhythm, tbh I prefer the first one cuz it supports vocal better and feels off to have a stronger sound 01:17:934 (5) in the middle of a stack.
4. 01:02:559 (6,7,1) - 01:18:809 (8,1) - Kinda curious why you mapped these two differently when the rhythm on both of these are pretty much same.
5. 01:07:559 (2,3,4,5) - How about this rhythm instead? You will get the same rhythms on 01:06:809 (8,9,1,2) - 01:07:934 (3,4,5,6) and with this you can use the advantage of repeating rhythms to create some cool patterns for expressing vocal.
6. 01:16:559 (1) - True there's a sound on 01:16:934 but better end this on 01:16:809 to follow vocal and also for consistency with 01:00:559 (7) .

Electoz wrote:

Please answer the mods properly line by line, "all fix" sounds lazy and is not the best way to reply the mods. If you don't then please ask other BNs instead of me for a nomination.
[General]

1. Unused hitsounds:
   
   1. drum-hitwhistle2.wav
   fix
2. The video's audio track must be removed from the video file. The audio track in video is not used in osu!, so removing it reduces that filesize of the beatmap.

[Normal]

1. 00:13:636 (2,3) - Supposed to be moved 1/2 tick later for consistency with 00:10:175 (3,4) . Also don't forget to fix your hitsounding after you moved them. fix
2. 00:16:175 - aaa strong downbeat with cymbal should be clickable fix
3. 00:29:098 (3) - Either map 00:29:559 instead of 00:29:444 if you're going for vocal or add hitsounds on 00:29:444 . To me it seems like you are following vocal in other diffs but I'm not sure what are you following with this one since there's no hitsound on that repeat arrow. follow drum at here
4. 00:51:713 (4,5,6) - I suggest using this rhythm instead, so that a strong sound on 00:51:944 will be clickable. fix
5. 00:55:059 (1,2) - Could have used the same rhythm from Hard on 00:55:059 (1,2) so you won't miss vocal on 00:55:934 and it's a bit off to make 00:55:809 clickable while there's nothing audible on it. Same applies to 00:57:059 (4,5,6) - 01:11:059 (1,2,3) - 01:13:059 (4,5,6) . fix
6. 01:16:059 (2,3,4,5,6) - A long chain of rhythm here compare to the rest of kiai: fix
   
   1. I suggest replacing 01:16:559 (3) with a circle because you didn't map 01:00:809 so it's better to keep consistency and also for a better rhythm density by leaving 01:16:809 empty. fix
   2. 01:17:059 (4) - Optional but can be changed to a 1/2 repeat slider like what you did on 01:01:059 (4) . fix
7. 01:23:059 (1,2) - I'm not sure if this is supposed to be a blanket but if it is then it can be improved. change this pattern not blanket

[Hard]

1. 00:09:713 (3,4,5) - Don't really like how you followed the instruments instead of vocal, why you suddenly switched to instruments when you're following vocal earlier? It's uncomfortable to play since vocal is on 00:10:059 . fix
2. 00:24:482 (3) - Why hitsounds on a sliderbody zzz fix
3. 00:49:175 (6,1,2) - I would like to see the way you play with the piano 00:45:482 (6,1,2,3) here as well, how about changing 00:49:406 (1) to circles? oke
4. 01:00:559 (7,3) - A pixel overlap which can be easily avoided. fix
5. 01:13:059 (1,4,5) - Placement can be improved imo, you could've use the advantage of stacking something under 01:13:309 to make things neater. fix
6. Spacings throughout the song can be more consistent, there are some inconsistent spacings which they're off by 0.1-0.2 DS in each part of the song, 00:29:790 (4,5) - 00:33:482 (3,4,5,1) - these are the examples where spacings can be 1.2 for consistency, there's more of these so please recheck and fix them.

fix

[Insane]

1. 00:08:098 (5,6) - Nerf the spacing a bit, feels off to have this bigger than 00:08:559 (7,1) which it should've been vice versa for a proper emphasis on vocals. maybe fix
2. 00:56:309 (4,5) - 01:12:309 (5,6) - Yeah they're on the same rhythm so I expect more consistency on both of these in terms of spacing. fix
3. 01:01:809 (3,4,5) - 01:17:809 (4,5,6) - Could have used the same rhythm, tbh I prefer the first one cuz it supports vocal better and feels off to have a stronger sound 01:17:934 (5) in the middle of a stack. fix
4. 01:02:559 (6,7,1) - 01:18:809 (8,1) - Kinda curious why you mapped these two differently when the rhythm on both of these are pretty much same. i thinks at here drum it so strong 01:02:934 (7) - but at here 01:18:934 (9) - barely audible drum
5. 01:07:559 (2,3,4,5) - How about this rhythm instead? You will get the same rhythms on 01:06:809 consider no sound at here 01:07:809 (8,9,1,2) - 01:07:934 (3,4,5,6) and with this you can use the advantage of repeating rhythms to create some cool patterns for expressing vocal.
6. 01:16:559 (1) - True there's a sound on 01:16:934 but better end this on 01:16:809 to follow vocal and also for consistency with 01:00:559 (7) . fix

Star for now as this mapset has potential but it's not ready for nomination yet. Get 5-6 more mods on Hard and Insane and then you may call me back, good luck~

• Hitsound:

1. 00:32:790 (3) - Missing clap for drum on slider tail
2. 00:45:713 (1) - Same, since you have clap on similiar rhythm on 00:49:406 (1) -
3. 00:55:559 (2) - 00:57:559 (5) - 01:11:559 (2) - and 01:13:559 (5) - Use Normal sampleset on reverse for bass
4. 01:10:559 (5) - Use auto sampleset instead? the Normal sampleset pretty contradictive with the clap imo, not sounds well
   
   Blizs if you use hitsound copier don't forget to apply on the rest of diffs as well, aku mager periksa diff lain soalnya
   
   Gameplay:
5. 00:07:636 (4,5,1) - The movement of the cursor is too sharp imo, I think you can move 00:08:790 (1) - to x:492 y:240 or you can follow a pattern like this one https://puu.sh/qPbzE/5b7ea5b9d2.jpg to improve the flows there
6. 00:11:098 (5) - I think better use 1/2 slider there to cover the vocal on 00:11:329 -
7. 00:21:713 (4) - You can try rotate that 20 degree, to produce a better flow between (3,4)
8. 00:24:482 (2) - Move up a bit to x:188 y:184, to fix the spacing
9. 01:03:809 (2,3) - Your stacking slightly off
   
   Nothing in particular, but since there is no Easy diff on this set, I think you should to reconsider reduce the stacking usage on this diff for the sake of gameplay for beginner

1. 00:01:406 (1) - How about move to x:284 y:212 https://puu.sh/qPcHm/6a4b4c0f2f.jpg ? Because a sudden jump on the beginning of the song is somewhat odd in this case since you don't seems use any jump for the intro
2. 00:10:406 (3) - Based on my testplay this morning, that extended slider not really play good, literally there is no reason to put it on the first place. My sugestion you can just simply use 1/1 slider for better hightlight on the vocal https://puu.sh/qPcyr/239d5381b2.jpg
3. 00:23:098 (5,1,2) - Umm those pattern seems less organized imo, maybe you can try to readjust the placement into https://puu.sh/qPdih/e940df217c.png ? I think that will plays better
4. 00:36:713 (2,3,4) - How about rearanged into something like https://puu.sh/qPdya/3b3d491e30.jpg ? they will plays more good
5. 00:45:252 (5) - Move to x:160 y:180 to readjust the placement of the triplet
6. 00:53:098 (6) - Forget to Add NC
7. 01:04:809 (6) - Better be replaced with a triplet imo, so at least the downbeat could be more clickable https://puu.sh/qOG3l/b1eedbeda1.png
8. 01:06:309 (5) - Try not to stacked the triplet there, seems out of place so far compared on what you did on triplet, try something like https://puu.sh/qPdOW/8a54693e58.jpg

1. 00:03:021 (5,6,1,2) - Like I said when testplay, that pattern too tricky to play because at glances this one 00:02:675 (4,5) - visually looks same as 1/2 beat but actually they are on 1/4 beat, aside from that, the placement itself not really neat and can make players hard to distinguish and hit the notes. My sugestion at least maybe you can try to make them neater, something like https://puu.sh/qPegj/7d452dfe63.jpg could work better imo
2. 00:05:098 (1,2) - Imo better stacked them together, the momentum of the anti jump there not really emphsized well imo, unless 00:04:406 (3,4,5,1) - they have a little jump on them
3. 00:41:098 (3,4,5,1) - Plays weiird during testplay, it is because the placement of 00:42:021 (1) - rather confusing to play if I say
4. 00:51:482 (7,1) - Swap your nc, (7) is the one that should be nc'd
5. 00:53:098 (5) - Also add nc to indicate the jump

Mako Sakata wrote:

Hello as asked
Sugestion,

Normal

• Hitsound:

1. 00:32:790 (3) - Missing clap for drum on slider tail di bluetic kali yah ketutup sama slider
2. 00:45:713 (1) - Same, since you have clap on similiar rhythm on 00:49:406 (1) - fix
3. 00:55:559 (2) - 00:57:559 (5) - 01:11:559 (2) - and 01:13:559 (5) - Use Normal sampleset on reverse for bass fix
4. 01:10:559 (5) - Use auto sampleset instead? the Normal sampleset pretty contradictive with the clap imo, not sounds well oke
   
   Blizs if you use hitsound copier don't forget to apply on the rest of diffs as well, aku mager periksa diff lain soalnya eh yg pakein hitsound copier aku XD
   
   Gameplay:
5. 00:07:636 (4,5,1) - The movement of the cursor is too sharp imo, I think you can move 00:08:790 (1) - to x:492 y:240 or you can follow a pattern like fixthis one https://puu.sh/qPbzE/5b7ea5b9d2.jpg to improve the flows there
6. 00:11:098 (5) - I think better use 1/2 slider there to cover the vocal on 00:11:329 - consider dulu deh agak ane klo ane ubah jadi 1/2
7. 00:21:713 (4) - You can try rotate that 20 degree, to produce a better flow between (3,4) fix
8. 00:24:482 (2) - Move up a bit to x:188 y:184, to fix the spacing fix
9. 01:03:809 (2,3) - Your stacking slightly off
   
   Nothing in particular, but since there is no Easy diff on this set, I think you should to reconsider reduce the stacking usage on this diff for the sake of gameplay for beginner

Hard

1. 00:01:406 (1) - How about move to x:284 y:212 https://puu.sh/qPcHm/6a4b4c0f2f.jpg ? Because a sudden jump on the beginning of the song is somewhat odd in this case since you don't seems use any jump for the intro oke
2. 00:10:406 (3) - Based on my testplay this morning, that extended slider not really play good, literally there is no reason to put it on the first place. My sugestion you can just simply use 1/1 slider for better hightlight on the vocal https://puu.sh/qPcyr/239d5381b2.jpg oke
3. 00:23:098 (5,1,2) - Umm those pattern seems less organized imo, maybe you can try to readjust the placement into https://puu.sh/qPdih/e940df217c.png ? I think that will plays better oke
4. 00:36:713 (2,3,4) - How about rearanged into something like https://puu.sh/qPdya/3b3d491e30.jpg ? they will plays more good oke
5. 00:45:252 (5) - Move to x:160 y:180 to readjust the placement of the triplet oke
6. 00:53:098 (6) - Forget to Add NC ahh :v
7. 01:04:809 (6) - Better be replaced with a triplet imo, so at least the downbeat could be more clickable https://puu.sh/qOG3l/b1eedbeda1.png oke
8. 01:06:309 (5) - Try not to stacked the triplet there, seems out of place so far compared on what you did on triplet, try something like https://puu.sh/qPdOW/8a54693e58.jpg oke

Insane

1. 00:03:021 (5,6,1,2) - Like I said when testplay, that pattern too tricky to play because at glances this one 00:02:675 (4,5) - visually looks same as 1/2 beat but actually they are on 1/4 beat, aside from that, the placement itself not really neat and can make players hard to distinguish and hit the notes. My sugestion at least maybe you can try to make them neater, something like https://puu.sh/qPegj/7d452dfe63.jpg could work better imo fix
2. 00:05:098 (1,2) - Imo better stacked them together, the momentum of the anti jump there not really emphsized well imo, unless 00:04:406 (3,4,5,1) - they have a little jump on them fix
3. 00:41:098 (3,4,5,1) - Plays weiird during testplay, it is because the placement of 00:42:021 (1) - rather confusing to play if I say fix
4. 00:51:482 (7,1) - Swap your nc, (7) is the one that should be nc'd oke
5. 00:53:098 (5) - Also add nc to indicate the jump oke

Hope that help, kalo ga ngerti tanya lagi aja

Deppyforce wrote:

hie
[General]
add 'because tomorrow is good' in tags, its the song name in engrish

[Normal]
00:07:636 (4,5,1) - tweak a bit so that 4 actually points to 5 would flow better already fix
00:22:867 - could map this tick lol, follow vocals and dat instrument drop thing fix
00:36:944 (4) - imo should be 2 circles cuz both sound on head and tail are strong consider it
01:03:809 (2,3) - lol fix stack fix
01:23:559 (2,3) - fix blanket fix

[Hard]
this definitely needs a remap
sv is too high and it must be around 1.4 - 1.45 to keep proper spread between n- h - i
and when you change sv u probably need to remap ya
or just fix all slider lengths if youre determined enough to do so xd
(OR ADD ADVANCED DIFF TO SET ALSO WORKS) Done

[Insane]
00:41:098 (3,4,5,1) - cool idea but with this ar it looks prety confusing maybe change so its more readable? xd
idk i think some patterns are weird and plays a bit bad try ask erectoz oke

1. od 4 would be too much if you want to treat this as the easiest diff , od 3 just make thing a bit more fit for easiest diff
2. 00:03:252 (3,4) - rhythm here plays pretty awkward imo prob becus the weird rhythm transition there which make 00:04:636 (4) - a bit hard to click it properly , I think this rhythm would make thing plays much more natuaral
   SPOILER

   

1. 00:02:329 (3,1) - 1/2 spacing are very similiar with 1/1 spacing here 00:01:406 (1,2,3) - , it will make the player a bit confuse here imo so try to make spacing a bit different from each others here like 00:02:329 (3,1,2) - , try increase spacing for 00:01:406 (1,2,3) - a bit ?
2. 00:10:406 (3) - no nc here ? I thought you nc every big white tick here
3. 00:12:944 (2) - I think if you make this slider a 1/1 slider instead it would make the rhythm here sound a bit better imo
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:45:482 (6,1) - this fit for jumps more than 00:45:252 (5,6) - tbh lol so try to make jumps here 00:45:482 (6,1) - instead (move (6) to around x232 y124 ) ?
5. 01:09:559 (2) - cymbal on sliderend , previously i see all you rhythm make the cymbal beat here clickable so this is like the only one place where the cymbal isn't clickable which will make the rhythm here play not really good compare with the preivous one so I think you can try this rhythm instead to make thing play a bit more natural
   SPOILER

   

1. 00:02:675 (4,5) - spacing seems a bit too much and inconsistent with 00:02:329 (3,4) - which make thing play not so good so consider lower spacing here a bit to something like 00:02:329 (3,4) -
2. 00:10:175 (5) - this 1/4 slider doesn't fit the instrument here , the instrument here doesn't sound that sudden so using 1/4 slider make this feel really weird , i recommend you to use the triplet for this one instead it makes the rhythm play a lots better imo
3. 00:41:098 (3,4,5) - minor but i think making the 00:41:675 (4,5) - head the same way as 00:41:098 (3) - would make the flow here a little better
4. 00:43:867 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - rhythm feel pretty out of place with the previou ones , previous rhythm you use some slider the emphasis the vocal but for this time it seems like you entirely ignore the vocal here which maek this really out of place so it would be better change some rhythm here to slider to emphasis some vocal here so that it make the rhythm here consistent with the previous one and make thing play more natural
5. 00:45:482 (11,1) - this should have higher spacing than 00:45:251 (10,11) - since (1) sound a lots more emphasized than 00:45:482 (11) - so try this ? (can change (2) placement to your preference)
   SPOILER

   
6. 00:56:309 (4,5) - doesn't this jumps a bit too much ? it make thing play weird imo , try to lower spacing a bit here so try move (5) to around x172 y128 ( might have to change next note placement too
7. 01:12:309 (5,6) - similiar to above

CelsiusLK wrote:

[normal]

1. od 4 would be too much if you want to treat this as the easiest diff , od 3 just make thing a bit more fit for easiest diff
2. 00:03:252 (3,4) - rhythm here plays pretty awkward imo prob becus the weird rhythm transition there which make 00:04:636 (4) - a bit hard to click it properly , I think this rhythm would make thing plays much more natuaral Okay
   SPOILER

   

[hard]

1. 00:02:329 (3,1) - 1/2 spacing are very similiar with 1/1 spacing here 00:01:406 (1,2,3) - , it will make the player a bit confuse here imo so try to make spacing a bit different from each others here like 00:02:329 (3,1,2) - , try increase spacing for 00:01:406 (1,2,3) - a bit ? increase spacing
2. 00:10:406 (3) - no nc here ? I thought you nc every big white tick here oke
3. 00:12:944 (2) - I think if you make this slider a 1/1 slider instead it would make the rhythm here sound a bit better imo
   SPOILER

   [img]http://puu.sh/qQegL/93c8fabc5a.jpg%20oke%20[/img]
4. 00:45:482 (6,1) - this fit for jumps more than 00:45:252 (5,6) - tbh lol so try to make jumps here 00:45:482 (6,1) - instead (move (6) to around x232 y124 ) ? fix
5. 01:09:559 (2) - cymbal on sliderend , previously i see all you rhythm make the cymbal beat here clickable so this is like the only one place where the cymbal isn't clickable which will make the rhythm here play not really good compare with the preivous one so I think you can try this rhythm instead to make thing play a bit more natural oke change to circle
   SPOILER

   
   all fix

[insane]

1. 00:02:675 (4,5) - spacing seems a bit too much and inconsistent with 00:02:329 (3,4) - which make thing play not so good so consider lower spacing here a bit to something like 00:02:329 (3,4) - fixed
2. 00:10:175 (5) - this 1/4 slider doesn't fit the instrument here , the instrument here doesn't sound that sudden so using 1/4 slider make this feel really weird , i recommend you to use the triplet for this one instead it makes the rhythm play a lots better imo i thinks its fine and playable but oke i change to triplet
3. 00:41:098 (3,4,5) - minor but i think making the 00:41:675 (4,5) - head the same way as 00:41:098 (3) - would make the flow here a little better i not understand XD my engglish its bad
4. 00:43:867 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - rhythm feel pretty out of place with the previou ones , previous rhythm you use some slider the emphasis the vocal but for this time it seems like you entirely ignore the vocal here which maek this really out of place so it would be better change some rhythm here to slider to emphasis some vocal here so that it make the rhythm here consistent with the previous one and make thing play more natural oke
5. 00:45:482 (11,1) - this should have higher spacing than 00:45:251 (10,11) - since (1) sound a lots more emphasized than 00:45:482 (11) - so try this ? (can change (2) placement to your preference)
   SPOILER

   [img]http://puu.sh/qQfqK/1cbded407e.jpgahh%20i%20see%20[/img]
6. 00:56:309 (4,5) - doesn't this jumps a bit too much ? it make thing play weird imo , try to lower spacing a bit here so try move (5) to around x172 y128 ( might have to change next note placement too oke
7. 01:12:309 (5,6) - similiar to above all fix

spread from normal to hard can be improve a bit imo i think hard diff has too many 1/4 whiel normal is just only full of basic 1/1 and rhythm 1/2 so it would be better to remove some 1/4 element from hard to make spread a bit better , also the spread from hard to insane is not good too cus insane just full of jumpy pattern while hard has very low jumps pattern so basically what you should do here is
1.remove some 1/4 element on hard to fix spread from normal to hard
2.add more jumps on hard so spread from hard to insane will be better hmm make more jump and remove 1/4 slider oke i will try

1. 00:05:098 (1,2) - I think you could try swapping NCs here. I think it'll be more matching if the NC is swapped.
2. 00:13:636 (3) - I think there should be less emphasis than 00:13:867 (4) - since number 4 feels stronger, and making it simillar to this emphasis, 00:14:790 (2) - , will be a good thing to do too.
3. In my opinion, this part, 00:01:406 - , is so calm. Try reducing the DS for jumps, maybe. (The sound is so cute XDDD)
4. 00:35:790 (5) - How about increasing this spacing a bit more? Since there's cymbal in it.
5. 00:36:252 (1,3) - These blanket seems off. (I think it's better to fix)
6. 00:51:482 (1,2) - Same spacing? what about making number 2 has a bigger spacing? And emphasizing 01:05:559 (3) - will be better, I think.

William K wrote:

Hi :3

[General]

Object isn't snapped at Insane diff, see Aimod. fix XD

[Insane]

1. 00:05:098 (1,2) - I think you could try swapping NCs here. I think it'll be more matching if the NC is swapped. i think consistance at big white tick it better
2. 00:13:636 (3) - I think there should be less emphasis than 00:13:867 (4) - since number 4 feels stronger, and making it simillar to this emphasis, 00:14:790 (2) - , will be a good thing to do too. hmm consider still
3. In my opinion, this part, 00:01:406 - , is so calm. Try reducing the DS for jumps, maybe. (The sound is so cute XDDD) why ?
4. 00:35:790 (5) - How about increasing this spacing a bit more? Since there's cymbal in it. no before cymbal i have 00:35:444 (3,4) - it can be hard if i increasing spacing
5. 00:36:252 (1,3) - These blanket seems off. (I think it's better to fix) oke
6. 00:51:482 (1,2) - Same spacing? what about making number 2 has a bigger spacing? And emphasizing 01:05:559 (3) - will be better, I think.

That's all, I think. Good luck in ranking. Bye bye :3

1. 00:02:675 (4,5,6,1,2) - - since the slider (and flow) is not straight, maybe placing circles like this better for flow
2. 00:06:713 (5,1) - a little far and sudden compared with things around, maybe a maxinum of 2.0x
3. 00:07:175 (2,4) - place 4 under 2 rather than right maybe better for flow of 2-3-4
4. 00:12:944 (2) - 312|28 to make a blanket or something?
5. 00:26:790 (5,6,1) - the flow not fit here, I mean reverse flow like this
6. 00:28:867 (6,1) - the same like 00:06:713 (5,1), distance like this fit better imo
7. 00:30:482 (6,7) - since the slider is like this, placing them on 0|184 could flow better imo
8. 00:49:867 (3,4) - flow maybe be better if it's something like this
9. 01:16:059 - NC like this to emphazise the change of rhythm?
10. 00:09:252 - unused inherited point

1. 00:02:329 (3,1,2) - kinda awkward since distance not matched with rhythm. I can accept 3-1 but plz place 2 farther cautz it makes a bad feeling imo, just as your 1.4x is ok
2. 00:20:790 (3,4) - ctrl+G better imo. It makes 4 to 5 father but you can have a better flow
3. 00:21:713 (1,2,3) - better like this for flow
4. 00:29:098 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - may be tidier like this, then you have to replace the slider followed
5. 00:36:021 (5,1) - no need to increase the distance here imo, cautz the slider starts at red kick which may be kinda sudden
6. 01:06:809 (1) - 248|348 to have a better flow as 3-4-1
7. 01:16:559 (4) - make it straight to emphazise the increased distance better
8. 00:09:252 - 01:16:559 - unused inherited points

1. 00:46:636 (2,3,4,5,1) - maybe you can try this, which is tidier imo
2. also check the unused inherited points plz

Misure wrote:

from in-game
hello
[Insane]

1. 00:02:675 (4,5,6,1,2) - - since the slider (and flow) is not straight, maybe placing circles like this better for flow change a little
2. 00:06:713 (5,1) - a little far and sudden compared with things around, maybe a maxinum of 2.0x oke
3. 00:07:175 (2,4) - place 4 under 2 rather than right maybe better for flow of 2-3-4 change a pattern
4. 00:12:944 (2) - 312|28 to make a blanket or something? no
5. 00:26:790 (5,6,1) - the flow not fit here, I mean reverse flow like this ?
6. 00:28:867 (6,1) - the same like 00:06:713 (5,1), distance like this fit better imo oke
7. 00:30:482 (6,7) - since the slider is like this, placing them on 0|184 could flow better imo hmm consider still maybe
8. 00:49:867 (3,4) - flow maybe be better if it's something like this oke
9. 01:16:059 - NC like this to emphazise the change of rhythm? no nc on cymbal its better
10. 00:09:252 - unused inherited point fix

[Hard]

1. 00:02:329 (3,1,2) - kinda awkward since distance not matched with rhythm. I can accept 3-1 but plz place 2 farther cautz it makes a bad feeling imo, just as your 1.4x is ok fix
2. 00:20:790 (3,4) - ctrl+G better imo. It makes 4 to 5 father but you can have a better flow oke
3. 00:21:713 (1,2,3) - better like this for flow oke
4. 00:29:098 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - may be tidier like this, then you have to replace the slider followed change a little
5. 00:36:021 (5,1) - no need to increase the distance here imo, cautz the slider starts at red kick which may be kinda sudden oke
6. 01:06:809 (1) - 248|348 to have a better flow as 3-4-1 fix
7. 01:16:559 (4) - make it straight to emphazise the increased distance better oke
8. 00:09:252 - 01:16:559 - unused inherited points oke

[Normal]

1. 00:46:636 (2,3,4,5,1) - maybe you can try this, which is tidier imo fix
2. also check the unused inherited points plz oke

Just suggestions
In fact no important things from me, the mapset is nice
Good luck!

• 00:03:252 (3) - blanket can be improved
  00:51:252 (3) - ^
  01:17:059 (4) - ^ but here im not sure if u mean to not make a blanket lol
  00:47:559 (3) - stack?

• 00:10:406 (4) - try nc here?
  00:12:021 (7) - blanket can be improved
  00:27:252 (1) - ^ just move its tail a little bit down

• 00:02:329 (3) - also blanket
  00:28:175 (3) - ^
  01:26:059 (3) - ^
  00:30:252 (5) - since here is a different part with the previous, try to set nc here to avoid probable reading problems would be better

Zaphkael wrote:

Also from mako's queue xd

normal

00:09:252 (2) - could you move this one a bit to the left and play around with some stuff to make ds fit? it looks off to me because ehh really but it not looks off for me
00:08:329 (5,1,2) - i dont like straight lines in maps but i like this

00:10:175 (3,4) - is there a reason you stack these but not 00:11:790 (6,7) - these? hmm it just my style

00:15:252 (4) - I think this fits the music better but its up to you (just the rhythm, not the mapping itself)
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6183788

nice

hard

00:17:098 (3,4,5) - this doesnt really follow the music imo, you have the..what is it, synth? that plays the double note fine for me

01:16:559 (4) - you could do a little jump here to emphasise it even more already emphasize

insane

00:09:944 (4) - this note feels out of place since there is nothing to support it

00:15:482 (5,6,7,8,9) - where does this come from? drum

00:17:098 (3,4,5,6) - there is that nice background rhythm that you ignore to place 1/2 stuff...why? i prefer circle

really good map, good luck!

Miryle wrote:

From my queue!

Let's get into it.~

Hard

Beats and Notes

1. All good!

Flow and Gameplay

1. All good!

Aesthetics and Hitsounding

1. 00:04:406 (2,3) – Blanket! fix
   
2. 00:06:944 (1,2) - ^ not for blanket
   
3. 00:09:713 (2,1) - ^ fix
   
4. 00:46:175 (2,3) - ^already blanket
   
5. 00:48:021 (2,3) – This isn’t linear.~ fix
   
6. 01:26:059 (3,1) – I think if you blanketed this like https://puu.sh/ryEMc/74dfc4bb6b.png it would look better. [color=#808000]whoaa nice :v[/color]

Insane

Beats and Notes

1. All good!

Flow and Gameplay

1. All good!

Aesthetics and Hitsounding

1. 00:14:098 (1,3) – Blanket! not for blanket
   
2. 00:24:482 (3,4) - ^ fix
   
3. 00:25:752 (2,3) - ^ already blanket
   
4. 00:38:329 (1,2) - ^ ^
   
5. 00:43:867 (1,2) - ^ fix
   
6. I'd recommend a blanket check.

Agatsu wrote:

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• Insane

1. 00:17:675 (6) - if you uncurve this slider a bit, i think it will look better oke
2. 00:47:559 (1,2) - ^ nope
3. 00:21:713 (1,2) - you could blanket these two ^
4. 00:39:252 (3,4) - blanket could be better owo ^
   
   

   Normal

5. 00:40:175 (3) - make this slider similiar to 00:38:329 (1,2) - hmm change a little
6. 00:42:021 (1) - ctrl+j? oke
7. 00:52:636 (1) - ^ nope

so sorry that was a short mod :[[[[

1. Inconsistent values in video! (Check Mako's Easy diff because in her diff, the video offset is 0 but other diff is 420)

1. 00:51:252 (3,1) - Maybe you can fix a bit that blanket (karena blanketnya agak miring sedikit).
2. 01:17:059 (4,5) - ^

1. 00:04:406 (4,1) - Same in Easy diff, blanketnya agak miring sedikit.

1. 00:01:867 (2,3,1) - Same in Easy diff! blanketnya agak miring sedikit.
2. 00:04:406 (2,3) - ^
3. 00:05:559 (4,5) - ^
4. 00:08:790 (1,2) - For me, this flow is confused
5. 00:22:867 (2,3) - Mungkin ini juga digeser ke kanan sedikit agar blanket terlihat bagus.
6. 00:50:329 (3) - Bagaimana kalau slider ini juga ikut lurus seperti slider yang 1 dan 2.
7. 00:55:059 (1,2) - Blanketnya diperbaiki, (slider 2 itu digeser ke atas sedikit).
8. 00:57:559 (2,3) - Blanketnya agar miring sedikit.
9. 01:07:559 (3,4) - ^
10. 01:11:559 (2,3) - ^

1. 00:19:867 (1,2) - Spacing is too far and not good for player with doubletime mod.
2. 00:36:252 (1,3) - Blanket
3. 00:38:329 (1,2) - ^
4. 00:40:175 (1,2) - ^
5. 00:42:021 (1,2) - ^
6. 00:43:867 (1,2) - Click Here!
7. 00:48:482 (3) - Circlenya hampir kena slider head (1), gimana kalau biar jarak sedikit?
8. 00:49:175 (6) - Flownya gak terlalu bagus. Coba taruh ditengah circle (3,4,5), nanti hasilnya jadi triangle flow.

KittyAdventure wrote:

As request! :3

Legend:
Black: Not to Important
Red: Is Unrankable
Blue: If not change, I'm ask with other BN and QAT

[General]

1. Inconsistent values in video! (Check Mako's Easy diff because in her diff, the video offset is 0 but other diff is 420) fix

[Easy]

1. 00:51:252 (3,1) - Maybe you can fix a bit that blanket (karena blanketnya agak miring sedikit).
2. 01:17:059 (4,5) - ^

[Normal]

1. 00:04:406 (4,1) - Same in Easy diff, blanketnya agak miring sedikit fix.

[Hard]

1. 00:01:867 (2,3,1) - Same in Easy diff! blanketnya agak miring sedikit. dah pas ini om
2. 00:04:406 (2,3) - ^ ^
3. 00:05:559 (4,5) - ^ ^
4. 00:08:790 (1,2) - For me, this flow is confused keep aja deh masih enak kok flownya
5. 00:22:867 (2,3) - Mungkin ini juga digeser ke kanan sedikit agar blanket terlihat bagus. blanketnya ini udah pas om
6. 00:50:329 (3) - Bagaimana kalau slider ini juga ikut lurus seperti slider yang 1 dan 2. ini dah lurus
7. 00:55:059 (1,2) - Blanketnya diperbaiki, (slider 2 itu digeser ke atas sedikit).fix
8. 00:57:559 (2,3) - Blanketnya agar miring sedikit. dah pas
9. 01:07:559 (3,4) - ^ fix
10. 01:11:559 (2,3) - ^ keep

[Insane]

1. 00:19:867 (1,2) - Spacing is too far and not good for player with doubletime mod. keep fine for dt player i am test it
2. 00:36:252 (1,3) - Blanket yeah its blanket
3. 00:38:329 (1,2) - ^ fix
4. 00:40:175 (1,2) - ^ dah blanket
5. 00:42:021 (1,2) - ^ ^
6. 00:43:867 (1,2) - Click Here!
7. 00:48:482 (3) - Circlenya hampir kena slider head (1), gimana kalau biar jarak sedikit? fix
8. 00:49:175 (6) - Flownya gak terlalu bagus. Coba taruh ditengah circle (3,4,5), nanti hasilnya jadi triangle flow .

Overall is good, mungkin hanya perlu diperbaiki blanketnya di hard diff :3

No Kudosu if my mod is not fixed all!

Good Luck~

Fuccho wrote:

[Insane]

1. 00:06:944 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - This is spacing ends up about the same as the spacing you use in the kiai. I'd suggest reducing it here to make the chorus stand out more. Also, just generally reducing the spacing (and note density?) of this first calm part. oke
2. 00:22:867 (1) - NC could fit here. oke
3. 00:44:329 (2) - You may want to make this slider go through the middle of (1)? yeah
4. 01:26:059 (1) - NC here could also be nice. oke
5. 01:27:059 (1) - Playing a bit more with the slidershape could make it look nicer. Suggestion oke

[Hard]

1. 00:51:944 (4) - NC oke
2. Looks good. Not much to say at all

Lastly, OD3 and HP3 on an easy of this low star rating is unusually high and I suggest reducing them to 2 instead. Additionally, since the normal has a low sr as well, you might want to reduce some of those settings as well. Though I think reducing the HP to 3 should be fine.

Sorry I'm late. Here's the mod ^^