hanyuu_nanodesu wrote:

Hey, quick testplay

n00b

I sucked so bad @-@

mod pendek sekalian deh buat Insane
no kudos pls

yang bikin agak susah itu transisi 1/4 patternya itu loh
00:02:329 (3,4) - bagian sini misalnya, karena distancenya ga terlalu beda kayak 00:01:406 (1,2) - jadi keliatan kayak normal 1/1 pattern jadi aku ngekliknya agak telat. Kalo bisa dibikin lebih simple kayak gini aja http://puu.sh/pYVA7/eb3a2d4b65.jpg ato kayak gini 00:06:021 (3,4) - , yang penting ada jembatan buat pindah rhythm biar ngga mislead. Aku sih lebih prefer ke yang pertama soalnya lebih simple, cocok buat bagian ini soalnya juga masih lebih tenang.
00:03:252 (1,2) - terus bagian ini juga. gapapa sih pake jump buat 1/4, tpi anglenya agak terlalu tajem jadinya keliatan agak berantakan. Kalo mau 00:03:252 (1) - dibikin ngadep keatas aja http://puu.sh/pYVKn/25b35a19c7.jpg biar lebih gampang buat di read. Udah berapa kali aku putus combo di bagian ini doang :v
00:24:482 (3,4,5) - Kalo mau pattern kayak gini dibikin sama jaraknya. Kalo jaraknya beda, kesannya kayak rhythmnya juga beda padahal sama2 1/4. Terus ini 00:24:482 (3,4) - kayaknya agak kejauhan jadi kayak 1/2 pattern. http://puu.sh/pYVQl/7343f9260b.jpg kalo jaraknya sama walaupun 1/4 pattern pake jump, bakal lebih gampang buat di read. Sama buat pattern2 lainnya, agak bingung mainnya di bagian itu.
00:43:867 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - Bagian ini juga agak susah sih flownya, tpi keanya ini sih akunya aja yang n00b xD

itu aja sih kayaknya masalah utamanya, kalo bisa di fix ya :3
terus add video soalnya tv size

Good luck~

yf_bmp wrote:

[I]
00:08:790 (1,3) - a little closed
00:14:098 (1) - remake this slider
00:14:098 (1,4) - it's better not be overlapped
00:23:559 (1,2,3) - make them farther, since your sliders like 00:25:406 (1,2,3) - have a similar visual distance
00:34:290 (6,1) - make them farther

[H]
01:04:059 (4,6,1) - make them clearer

[NM]
01:27:059 (1) - looks not that good..

just some small points
gl~

1. Wave hitsounds with possible delay > 5ms:
   
   1. soft-hitfinish2.wav
   2. soft-hitfinish.wav

1. 00:10:406 - Since you seemed to follow vocal earlier, I suggest ctrl+g 00:10:175 (3,4) so there will be something on 00:10:406 which vocal landed there.
2. 00:29:098 (3) - Optional but you can map vocal normally instead of going for a blue tick here, anyways the hitsound on 00:29:444 is missing, I recommend using the same hitsound as 00:25:752 .
3. 00:33:482 (4) - Unsnapped.
4. 00:51:944 - The sound here is very strong and should be clickable. How about a circle + 1/1 slider instead of 00:51:713 (4,5) ?
5. 01:13:809 (5) - It's not that necessary to be a repeat slider I think? Since you didn't do the same on 00:57:809 (5) which has a similar rhythm, also 01:13:059 (4,5,6,1) looks cramp with DS tbh.
6. 01:23:059 (1,2) - Blanket is off like 1 millimetre but who cares

1. 00:15:598 (6,7,1) - Is it really necessary to make a spacing this high? I think it's too big because the song is still in the calm section, also the objects 00:16:175 (1,2,3,4,5) are kinda cramped because 00:16:175 (1) was placed so high up in the screen, in my opinion 1.5 DS on 00:15:713 (7,1) would fit nicely here considering that players have to handle a jump after a repeat slider.
2. 00:30:944 (1,2) - Plays fine but spacing should be consistent with 00:23:559 (1,2) - 00:27:252 (1,2) - 00:34:636 (1,2) .
3. 00:31:867 (3) - DS is a bit off here.
4. 00:44:790 (3,4) - Same as above, I assume it should be 0.5 DS here.
5. 00:35:790 (5,6,1) - Could have been a triangle like what you did in Insane, since this part 00:35:559 (4,5,6,1,2,3,4) didn't follow your usual DS so there's no reason to make a 1.0 DS on 00:36:021 (6,1) right?
6. 00:51:021 (1,4) - Minor but how about using the same shape? It's more appealing that way.
7. 01:10:059 (3) - Can you make this a triplet or come up with a different rhythm on this? It's very confusing with 01:10:059 (3,4) because they have a different number of kicks, if you can't then I recommend NC'ing 01:10:559 (4) for readability.
8. 01:21:559 (2,3) - This stack doesn't play well since the stronger sound 01:21:559 (2) is on top of the stack so it doesn't give a proper emphasis, I recommend unstacking this since you didn't have a 1/2 stack in kiai so far.

1. 00:07:175 (2,4) - 00:08:329 (6,1) - Better do the same thing here on both of these, either overlapping or stacking.
2. 00:09:713 (3,4,5) - Please use a smaller spacing on these, it's kinda overdone for a calm section like this, at least nerf 00:09:944 (4,5) so 00:09:713 (3,4,5) will become sth like a triangle.
3. 00:14:098 (1) - Kinda curious, why did you hitsound a sliderbody?
4. 00:29:098 (1,2,3) - Better move 00:29:559 (3) down to y:292 for a perfect triangle, this way will make a spacing on 00:29:559 (3,4) a bit inconsistent but it's kinda worth it cuz visual stuff has a higher priority in this diff.
5. 00:29:790 (4) - How about something like this for a better flow to 00:30:252 (5) ? (In the pic I also rotated 00:29:790 (4) about 5 degrees.)
6. 00:33:136 (2) - 2 circles on 00:33:136 - 00:33:252 is better since the music kinda faded out on 00:33:252 so it will give sth like a 1/2 pause this way.
7. 00:36:944 (3) - Should be placed at x:325 y:251 for a better blanket with 00:36:252 (1) . You might have to adjust DS on 00:36:713 (2,3,4) a bit though.
8. 00:55:059 (2) - NC I guess.
9. 01:04:809 (6,7,1) - Inconsistent spacings.
10. I'm kinda curious why you used different spacing for 1/4 circles in kiai, like, you have 0.7 DS on 00:57:809 (3,4,5) - 00:59:809 (3,4,5) . 0.6 on 01:02:559 (6,7,1) and then 0.5 on 01:06:184 (5,6) which is kinda unappealing, should have used the same spacing for consistency throughout kiai.

1. consider change your current .mp3 file to a better one with fade out since the music just stops suddenly at the end
2. just a quick complaint. the bg is rather blank since there's too much whiteness and the color scheme is too light. not like I can find a better one so yah please just ignore this

1. 00:08:790 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - in my opinion following the drums and neglecting the vocals in this part is a rather bad idea to be honest since the vocals are more visible. and especially in 00:09:252 (2,3,4,5) - it feels a little bit too off sync. consider following the rhythm indicated in the timeline in the screenshot https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5621607
2. 00:21:713 (4,1) - move (4) to the right of slider (3) for a better flow, make the slider (3) curve a little and make the sliders (4) and (1) parallel for some aesthetics improvement imo
3. 00:33:482 (4) - unsnapped note
4. 00:23:559 (1,2) - the current one appears to be like out-of-place blankets or sth. consider to place them as blankets or as of suggestion anyway https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5621724
5. 00:51:713 (4,5) - please make them parallel btw
6. 01:07:059 (1,2) - ^ or try out https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5621815
7. 01:16:559 (4) - music is best represented by a circle instead of a slider

1. 00:01:406 (1,2,3) - make them equidistant to follow the distance-time concept
2. 00:07:406 (2,3,4) - suggestion https://s31.postimg.org/vbl3318ij/time.jpg
3. 00:34:636 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - suggestion again https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5621935
4. 00:37:175 (4) - suggest move to below 3 to make a flow like parallelogram
5. 00:51:021 (1,2,3,4) - 01:00:309 (6,7,1,2,3,4) - the distance spacing is relatively smaller and it's unreasonable to do so
6. 01:14:559 (1,2) - swap combos
7. 01:25:059 (1) - lift up a little. it is too out of grid

1. Where is the video? This is a TV size, and as such, many players expect a video to go with it. If you don't know how to make video, ask Lanturn for one of his Super HD Videos.
2. Two of your file names are .WAV. They should be .wav instead.

1. 00:38:329 (1,2,3) - You could make these sliders flow better. Slider 1 curves up, but your slider 2 is below the curve. Fix this by moving slider 2 up a bit, and adjusting slider 3 as necessary.
2. 00:48:021 (3,4,5) - It's best to make this a perfect triangle by using the "Create Polygon Circles" feature. Remember to re-apply the hitsounds when finished.
3. 01:15:059 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This pattern is a bit too long since Normal is the easiest difficulty. Try adding a 1/1 wait somewhere or decreasing the object density.
4. 01:25:059 (3) - Try x:64 y:256 or some other variant instead. Going back to the same place in the pattern 01:23:059 (1,2,3) - feels weird IMO, and it can be spiced up by making a triangle with the objects. Of course, you have to re-arrange the next few objects as well.

1. 00:05:098 (1,2,3) - Take a second to look at this pattern. Does it look visually pleasing to you? Maybe, but a lot of things can be done here to improve the quality of this part. For example, the flow from slider 1 to 2 doesn't really make sense. You can make it better by moving slider 2 slightly to the right. You should never sacrifice playability for a blanket, such as how slider 2 blankets with slider 3. In comparison, 00:06:944 (1,2) - is a more acceptable blanket since slider 1 curves into slider 2.
2. 00:10:406 - Here is a hold in the vocal, and as such, the player should also hold a slider during this time for emphasis of the song. Since you mapped the vocal at 00:14:098 (1) -, you must follow the same pattern here as well.
3. 00:19:867 (1,2) - For this and all similar patterns, please remember what I said about flow. Are you using the default skin to map? If so, switch to it. Look at how the slider tail looks and then look at where the arrows are pointing. Try moving slider 2 to the right to make it flow better.
4. 00:34:175 (5,1) - This pattern does not look very appealing. I suggest that you ctrl+j 00:34:636 (1) - and move the objects accordingly.
5. 00:42:482 (2,4) - You can't do this since the slider tail of 4 appears before 2 is pressed. You must not overlap the objects like this, otherwise, it's an unrankable issue.
6. 01:24:559 (6,7,1) - You should make this symmetrical about the y-axis.

1. 00:17:098 (3,4,5,6) - You need to use the "Create Polygon Circles" here in order to make a perfect triangle. Right now, there is too much height and not enough base for the triangle. Same for 00:35:559 (4,5,6) -. Do not stack here. It is better to have an enjoyable map with reasonable spacing than stacks that affect spacing negatively.
2. 00:51:944 (1) - It looks like this slider is using an older version of the osu format. Try making a new slider that looks similar to it and delete the old slider to fix this.
3. 00:54:320 (1) - You should make this slider symmetrical across the y-axis.

Project Railgun wrote:

hi m4m

what happened to the old background? this one has text in it...

[General]

1. Where is the video? This is a TV size, and as such, many players expect a video to go with it. If you don't know how to make video, ask Lanturn for one of his Super HD Videos.
2. Two of your file names are .WAV. They should be .wav instead.

[Normal]

1. 00:38:329 (1,2,3) - You could make these sliders flow better. Slider 1 curves up, but your slider 2 is below the curve. Fix this by moving slider 2 up a bit, and adjusting slider 3 as necessary.
2. 00:48:021 (3,4,5) - It's best to make this a perfect triangle by using the "Create Polygon Circles" feature. Remember to re-apply the hitsounds when finished.
3. 01:15:059 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This pattern is a bit too long since Normal is the easiest difficulty. Try adding a 1/1 wait somewhere or decreasing the object density.
4. 01:25:059 (3) - Try x:64 y:256 or some other variant instead. Going back to the same place in the pattern 01:23:059 (1,2,3) - feels weird IMO, and it can be spiced up by making a triangle with the objects. Of course, you have to re-arrange the next few objects as well.

[Hard]

1. 00:05:098 (1,2,3) - Take a second to look at this pattern. Does it look visually pleasing to you? Maybe, but a lot of things can be done here to improve the quality of this part. For example, the flow from slider 1 to 2 doesn't really make sense. You can make it better by moving slider 2 slightly to the right. You should never sacrifice playability for a blanket, such as how slider 2 blankets with slider 3. In comparison, 00:06:944 (1,2) - is a more acceptable blanket since slider 1 curves into slider 2.
2. 00:10:406 - Here is a hold in the vocal, and as such, the player should also hold a slider during this time for emphasis of the song. Since you mapped the vocal at 00:14:098 (1) -, you must follow the same pattern here as well.
3. 00:19:867 (1,2) - For this and all similar patterns, please remember what I said about flow. Are you using the default skin to map? If so, switch to it. Look at how the slider tail looks and then look at where the arrows are pointing. Try moving slider 2 to the right to make it flow better.
4. 00:34:175 (5,1) - This pattern does not look very appealing. I suggest that you ctrl+j 00:34:636 (1) - and move the objects accordingly.
5. 00:42:482 (2,4) - You can't do this since the slider tail of 4 appears before 2 is pressed. You must not overlap the objects like this, otherwise, it's an unrankable issue.
6. 01:24:559 (6,7,1) - You should make this symmetrical about the y-axis.

[Insane]

1. 00:17:098 (3,4,5,6) - You need to use the "Create Polygon Circles" here in order to make a perfect triangle. Right now, there is too much height and not enough base for the triangle. Same for 00:35:559 (4,5,6) -. Do not stack here. It is better to have an enjoyable map with reasonable spacing than stacks that affect spacing negatively.
2. 00:51:944 (1) - It looks like this slider is using an older version of the osu format. Try making a new slider that looks similar to it and delete the old slider to fix this.
3. 00:54:320 (1) - You should make this slider symmetrical across the y-axis.

Good luck!

Lanturn wrote:

offset for that video is about 420ish

Lami wrote:

H

00:51:021 (1,2,3,4) - this beats are so strong, but become suddenly small DS.
but it's smaller than 00:48:482 (3,4,5,6) - . even if they have enough strong beat. fixed

I

00:21:367 (7,1) - it can more fluid shape with each other. change a little

I little worried about Normal - Hard gap.

ProEzreal wrote:

Hello~ NM from my queue

Normal

1. 01:07:059 (1,2) - I think the finishes on the end should be clickable cause it's such a stronk sound consider it
2. 01:21:059 (4,5) - uhm blanket? oke
3. 01:27:059 (1) - uhh is it okay to change velocity o.o just checking

Hard

1. Okay, so the distance actually varies quite a lot which isn't that great for a hard difficulty. The distance should be equal unless you aren't emphasizing something.
2. 00:42:021 (1,2,3,4,5) - It's weird how you change to 1/2 mapping when you were mapping with 3/4 sliders before and not to mention that you map with 3/4 sliders again afterwards. Just map this with 3/4 sliders for consistency i think Rhythm not bad at here, i would say keep
3. 01:05:059 - Shouldn't there be a note here? the NC should be here also
4. 01:17:059 (1) - Looks like you didn't NC this for the insane difficulty, let's keep consistency and disable NC. But what I really suggest is to not nc on 01:16:559 (1) - and keep it with the previous combo. Same for insane oke

Insane

1. 00:42:021 (1,2,3,4,5) - Same thing as I said earlier ^^
2. 01:12:559 (6,1) - Blanket nope

Good luck.

ekafjr wrote:

i think Rhythm not bad at here, i would say keep

ProEzreal wrote:

ekafjr wrote:

i think Rhythm not bad at here, i would say keep

Yes, but what I am saying is transition 3/4 to 1/2 sounds really awkward and is inconsistent which could become a problem. Either make it all 3/4 or 1/2, mixing them kinda makes it weird for me.

o yea and kds plz xD

O-Moei wrote:

Do not fail me, eka ! Lanjut references nanti ye :V

Oke

Time Capsule wrote:

O-Moei wrote:

Do not fail me, eka ! Lanjut references nanti ye :V

Oke

I could try to make 4*+ GD if you want to .w.
*give most innocent face you could imagine*
(telatnya +++++++++++ ya ww)
//digebukin sekampung

ekafjr wrote:

Time Capsule wrote:

I could try to make 4*+ GD if you want to .w.
*give most innocent face you could imagine*
(telatnya +++++++++++ ya ww)
//digebukin sekampung

Nanggung 4* gmana klo 8* aja XD XD XD

1. Unused hitsounds:
   
   1. drum-hitwhistle2.wav
2. The video's audio track must be removed from the video file. The audio track in video is not used in osu!, so removing it reduces that filesize of the beatmap.

1. 00:13:636 (2,3) - Supposed to be moved 1/2 tick later for consistency with 00:10:175 (3,4) . Also don't forget to fix your hitsounding after you moved them.
2. 00:16:175 - aaa strong downbeat with cymbal should be clickable
3. 00:29:098 (3) - Either map 00:29:559 instead of 00:29:444 if you're going for vocal or add hitsounds on 00:29:444 . To me it seems like you are following vocal in other diffs but I'm not sure what are you following with this one since there's no hitsound on that repeat arrow.
4. 00:51:713 (4,5,6) - I suggest using this rhythm instead, so that a strong sound on 00:51:944 will be clickable.
5. 00:55:059 (1,2) - Could have used the same rhythm from Hard on 00:55:059 (1,2) so you won't miss vocal on 00:55:934 and it's a bit off to make 00:55:809 clickable while there's nothing audible on it. Same applies to 00:57:059 (4,5,6) - 01:11:059 (1,2,3) - 01:13:059 (4,5,6) .
6. 01:16:059 (2,3,4,5,6) - A long chain of rhythm here compare to the rest of kiai:
   
   1. I suggest replacing 01:16:559 (3) with a circle because you didn't map 01:00:809 so it's better to keep consistency and also for a better rhythm density by leaving 01:16:809 empty.
   2. 01:17:059 (4) - Optional but can be changed to a 1/2 repeat slider like what you did on 01:01:059 (4) .
7. 01:23:059 (1,2) - I'm not sure if this is supposed to be a blanket but if it is then it can be improved.

1. 00:09:713 (3,4,5) - Don't really like how you followed the instruments instead of vocal, why you suddenly switched to instruments when you're following vocal earlier? It's uncomfortable to play since vocal is on 00:10:059 .
2. 00:24:482 (3) - Why hitsounds on a sliderbody zzz
3. 00:49:175 (6,1,2) - I would like to see the way you play with the piano 00:45:482 (6,1,2,3) here as well, how about changing 00:49:406 (1) to circles?
4. 01:00:559 (7,3) - A pixel overlap which can be easily avoided.
5. 01:13:059 (1,4,5) - Placement can be improved imo, you could've use the advantage of stacking something under 01:13:309 to make things neater.
6. Spacings throughout the song can be more consistent, there are some inconsistent spacings which they're off by 0.1-0.2 DS in each part of the song, 00:29:790 (4,5) - 00:33:482 (3,4,5,1) - these are the examples where spacings can be 1.2 for consistency, there's more of these so please recheck and fix them.

1. 00:08:098 (5,6) - Nerf the spacing a bit, feels off to have this bigger than 00:08:559 (7,1) which it should've been vice versa for a proper emphasis on vocals.
2. 00:56:309 (4,5) - 01:12:309 (5,6) - Yeah they're on the same rhythm so I expect more consistency on both of these in terms of spacing.
3. 01:01:809 (3,4,5) - 01:17:809 (4,5,6) - Could have used the same rhythm, tbh I prefer the first one cuz it supports vocal better and feels off to have a stronger sound 01:17:934 (5) in the middle of a stack.
4. 01:02:559 (6,7,1) - 01:18:809 (8,1) - Kinda curious why you mapped these two differently when the rhythm on both of these are pretty much same.
5. 01:07:559 (2,3,4,5) - How about this rhythm instead? You will get the same rhythms on 01:06:809 (8,9,1,2) - 01:07:934 (3,4,5,6) and with this you can use the advantage of repeating rhythms to create some cool patterns for expressing vocal.
6. 01:16:559 (1) - True there's a sound on 01:16:934 but better end this on 01:16:809 to follow vocal and also for consistency with 01:00:559 (7) .

Electoz wrote:

Please answer the mods properly line by line, "all fix" sounds lazy and is not the best way to reply the mods. If you don't then please ask other BNs instead of me for a nomination.
[General]

1. Unused hitsounds:
   
   1. drum-hitwhistle2.wav
   fix
2. The video's audio track must be removed from the video file. The audio track in video is not used in osu!, so removing it reduces that filesize of the beatmap.

[Normal]

1. 00:13:636 (2,3) - Supposed to be moved 1/2 tick later for consistency with 00:10:175 (3,4) . Also don't forget to fix your hitsounding after you moved them. fix
2. 00:16:175 - aaa strong downbeat with cymbal should be clickable fix
3. 00:29:098 (3) - Either map 00:29:559 instead of 00:29:444 if you're going for vocal or add hitsounds on 00:29:444 . To me it seems like you are following vocal in other diffs but I'm not sure what are you following with this one since there's no hitsound on that repeat arrow. follow drum at here
4. 00:51:713 (4,5,6) - I suggest using this rhythm instead, so that a strong sound on 00:51:944 will be clickable. fix
5. 00:55:059 (1,2) - Could have used the same rhythm from Hard on 00:55:059 (1,2) so you won't miss vocal on 00:55:934 and it's a bit off to make 00:55:809 clickable while there's nothing audible on it. Same applies to 00:57:059 (4,5,6) - 01:11:059 (1,2,3) - 01:13:059 (4,5,6) . fix
6. 01:16:059 (2,3,4,5,6) - A long chain of rhythm here compare to the rest of kiai: fix
   
   1. I suggest replacing 01:16:559 (3) with a circle because you didn't map 01:00:809 so it's better to keep consistency and also for a better rhythm density by leaving 01:16:809 empty. fix
   2. 01:17:059 (4) - Optional but can be changed to a 1/2 repeat slider like what you did on 01:01:059 (4) . fix
7. 01:23:059 (1,2) - I'm not sure if this is supposed to be a blanket but if it is then it can be improved. change this pattern not blanket

[Hard]

1. 00:09:713 (3,4,5) - Don't really like how you followed the instruments instead of vocal, why you suddenly switched to instruments when you're following vocal earlier? It's uncomfortable to play since vocal is on 00:10:059 . fix
2. 00:24:482 (3) - Why hitsounds on a sliderbody zzz fix
3. 00:49:175 (6,1,2) - I would like to see the way you play with the piano 00:45:482 (6,1,2,3) here as well, how about changing 00:49:406 (1) to circles? oke
4. 01:00:559 (7,3) - A pixel overlap which can be easily avoided. fix
5. 01:13:059 (1,4,5) - Placement can be improved imo, you could've use the advantage of stacking something under 01:13:309 to make things neater. fix
6. Spacings throughout the song can be more consistent, there are some inconsistent spacings which they're off by 0.1-0.2 DS in each part of the song, 00:29:790 (4,5) - 00:33:482 (3,4,5,1) - these are the examples where spacings can be 1.2 for consistency, there's more of these so please recheck and fix them.

fix

[Insane]

1. 00:08:098 (5,6) - Nerf the spacing a bit, feels off to have this bigger than 00:08:559 (7,1) which it should've been vice versa for a proper emphasis on vocals. maybe fix
2. 00:56:309 (4,5) - 01:12:309 (5,6) - Yeah they're on the same rhythm so I expect more consistency on both of these in terms of spacing. fix
3. 01:01:809 (3,4,5) - 01:17:809 (4,5,6) - Could have used the same rhythm, tbh I prefer the first one cuz it supports vocal better and feels off to have a stronger sound 01:17:934 (5) in the middle of a stack. fix
4. 01:02:559 (6,7,1) - 01:18:809 (8,1) - Kinda curious why you mapped these two differently when the rhythm on both of these are pretty much same. i thinks at here drum it so strong 01:02:934 (7) - but at here 01:18:934 (9) - barely audible drum
5. 01:07:559 (2,3,4,5) - How about this rhythm instead? You will get the same rhythms on 01:06:809 consider no sound at here 01:07:809 (8,9,1,2) - 01:07:934 (3,4,5,6) and with this you can use the advantage of repeating rhythms to create some cool patterns for expressing vocal.
6. 01:16:559 (1) - True there's a sound on 01:16:934 but better end this on 01:16:809 to follow vocal and also for consistency with 01:00:559 (7) . fix

Star for now as this mapset has potential but it's not ready for nomination yet. Get 5-6 more mods on Hard and Insane and then you may call me back, good luck~

• Hitsound:

1. 00:32:790 (3) - Missing clap for drum on slider tail
2. 00:45:713 (1) - Same, since you have clap on similiar rhythm on 00:49:406 (1) -
3. 00:55:559 (2) - 00:57:559 (5) - 01:11:559 (2) - and 01:13:559 (5) - Use Normal sampleset on reverse for bass
4. 01:10:559 (5) - Use auto sampleset instead? the Normal sampleset pretty contradictive with the clap imo, not sounds well
   
   Blizs if you use hitsound copier don't forget to apply on the rest of diffs as well, aku mager periksa diff lain soalnya
   
   Gameplay:
5. 00:07:636 (4,5,1) - The movement of the cursor is too sharp imo, I think you can move 00:08:790 (1) - to x:492 y:240 or you can follow a pattern like this one https://puu.sh/qPbzE/5b7ea5b9d2.jpg to improve the flows there
6. 00:11:098 (5) - I think better use 1/2 slider there to cover the vocal on 00:11:329 -
7. 00:21:713 (4) - You can try rotate that 20 degree, to produce a better flow between (3,4)
8. 00:24:482 (2) - Move up a bit to x:188 y:184, to fix the spacing
9. 01:03:809 (2,3) - Your stacking slightly off
   
   Nothing in particular, but since there is no Easy diff on this set, I think you should to reconsider reduce the stacking usage on this diff for the sake of gameplay for beginner

1. 00:01:406 (1) - How about move to x:284 y:212 https://puu.sh/qPcHm/6a4b4c0f2f.jpg ? Because a sudden jump on the beginning of the song is somewhat odd in this case since you don't seems use any jump for the intro
2. 00:10:406 (3) - Based on my testplay this morning, that extended slider not really play good, literally there is no reason to put it on the first place. My sugestion you can just simply use 1/1 slider for better hightlight on the vocal https://puu.sh/qPcyr/239d5381b2.jpg
3. 00:23:098 (5,1,2) - Umm those pattern seems less organized imo, maybe you can try to readjust the placement into https://puu.sh/qPdih/e940df217c.png ? I think that will plays better
4. 00:36:713 (2,3,4) - How about rearanged into something like https://puu.sh/qPdya/3b3d491e30.jpg ? they will plays more good
5. 00:45:252 (5) - Move to x:160 y:180 to readjust the placement of the triplet
6. 00:53:098 (6) - Forget to Add NC
7. 01:04:809 (6) - Better be replaced with a triplet imo, so at least the downbeat could be more clickable https://puu.sh/qOG3l/b1eedbeda1.png
8. 01:06:309 (5) - Try not to stacked the triplet there, seems out of place so far compared on what you did on triplet, try something like https://puu.sh/qPdOW/8a54693e58.jpg

1. 00:03:021 (5,6,1,2) - Like I said when testplay, that pattern too tricky to play because at glances this one 00:02:675 (4,5) - visually looks same as 1/2 beat but actually they are on 1/4 beat, aside from that, the placement itself not really neat and can make players hard to distinguish and hit the notes. My sugestion at least maybe you can try to make them neater, something like https://puu.sh/qPegj/7d452dfe63.jpg could work better imo
2. 00:05:098 (1,2) - Imo better stacked them together, the momentum of the anti jump there not really emphsized well imo, unless 00:04:406 (3,4,5,1) - they have a little jump on them
3. 00:41:098 (3,4,5,1) - Plays weiird during testplay, it is because the placement of 00:42:021 (1) - rather confusing to play if I say
4. 00:51:482 (7,1) - Swap your nc, (7) is the one that should be nc'd
5. 00:53:098 (5) - Also add nc to indicate the jump

Mako Sakata wrote:

Hello as asked
Sugestion,

Normal

• Hitsound:

1. 00:32:790 (3) - Missing clap for drum on slider tail di bluetic kali yah ketutup sama slider
2. 00:45:713 (1) - Same, since you have clap on similiar rhythm on 00:49:406 (1) - fix
3. 00:55:559 (2) - 00:57:559 (5) - 01:11:559 (2) - and 01:13:559 (5) - Use Normal sampleset on reverse for bass fix
4. 01:10:559 (5) - Use auto sampleset instead? the Normal sampleset pretty contradictive with the clap imo, not sounds well oke
   
   Blizs if you use hitsound copier don't forget to apply on the rest of diffs as well, aku mager periksa diff lain soalnya eh yg pakein hitsound copier aku XD
   
   Gameplay:
5. 00:07:636 (4,5,1) - The movement of the cursor is too sharp imo, I think you can move 00:08:790 (1) - to x:492 y:240 or you can follow a pattern like fixthis one https://puu.sh/qPbzE/5b7ea5b9d2.jpg to improve the flows there
6. 00:11:098 (5) - I think better use 1/2 slider there to cover the vocal on 00:11:329 - consider dulu deh agak ane klo ane ubah jadi 1/2
7. 00:21:713 (4) - You can try rotate that 20 degree, to produce a better flow between (3,4) fix
8. 00:24:482 (2) - Move up a bit to x:188 y:184, to fix the spacing fix
9. 01:03:809 (2,3) - Your stacking slightly off
   
   Nothing in particular, but since there is no Easy diff on this set, I think you should to reconsider reduce the stacking usage on this diff for the sake of gameplay for beginner

Hard

1. 00:01:406 (1) - How about move to x:284 y:212 https://puu.sh/qPcHm/6a4b4c0f2f.jpg ? Because a sudden jump on the beginning of the song is somewhat odd in this case since you don't seems use any jump for the intro oke
2. 00:10:406 (3) - Based on my testplay this morning, that extended slider not really play good, literally there is no reason to put it on the first place. My sugestion you can just simply use 1/1 slider for better hightlight on the vocal https://puu.sh/qPcyr/239d5381b2.jpg oke
3. 00:23:098 (5,1,2) - Umm those pattern seems less organized imo, maybe you can try to readjust the placement into https://puu.sh/qPdih/e940df217c.png ? I think that will plays better oke
4. 00:36:713 (2,3,4) - How about rearanged into something like https://puu.sh/qPdya/3b3d491e30.jpg ? they will plays more good oke
5. 00:45:252 (5) - Move to x:160 y:180 to readjust the placement of the triplet oke
6. 00:53:098 (6) - Forget to Add NC ahh :v
7. 01:04:809 (6) - Better be replaced with a triplet imo, so at least the downbeat could be more clickable https://puu.sh/qOG3l/b1eedbeda1.png oke
8. 01:06:309 (5) - Try not to stacked the triplet there, seems out of place so far compared on what you did on triplet, try something like https://puu.sh/qPdOW/8a54693e58.jpg oke

Insane

1. 00:03:021 (5,6,1,2) - Like I said when testplay, that pattern too tricky to play because at glances this one 00:02:675 (4,5) - visually looks same as 1/2 beat but actually they are on 1/4 beat, aside from that, the placement itself not really neat and can make players hard to distinguish and hit the notes. My sugestion at least maybe you can try to make them neater, something like https://puu.sh/qPegj/7d452dfe63.jpg could work better imo fix
2. 00:05:098 (1,2) - Imo better stacked them together, the momentum of the anti jump there not really emphsized well imo, unless 00:04:406 (3,4,5,1) - they have a little jump on them fix
3. 00:41:098 (3,4,5,1) - Plays weiird during testplay, it is because the placement of 00:42:021 (1) - rather confusing to play if I say fix
4. 00:51:482 (7,1) - Swap your nc, (7) is the one that should be nc'd oke
5. 00:53:098 (5) - Also add nc to indicate the jump oke

Hope that help, kalo ga ngerti tanya lagi aja

Deppyforce wrote:

hie
[General]
add 'because tomorrow is good' in tags, its the song name in engrish

[Normal]
00:07:636 (4,5,1) - tweak a bit so that 4 actually points to 5 would flow better already fix
00:22:867 - could map this tick lol, follow vocals and dat instrument drop thing fix
00:36:944 (4) - imo should be 2 circles cuz both sound on head and tail are strong consider it
01:03:809 (2,3) - lol fix stack fix
01:23:559 (2,3) - fix blanket fix

[Hard]
this definitely needs a remap
sv is too high and it must be around 1.4 - 1.45 to keep proper spread between n- h - i
and when you change sv u probably need to remap ya
or just fix all slider lengths if youre determined enough to do so xd
(OR ADD ADVANCED DIFF TO SET ALSO WORKS) Done

[Insane]
00:41:098 (3,4,5,1) - cool idea but with this ar it looks prety confusing maybe change so its more readable? xd
idk i think some patterns are weird and plays a bit bad try ask erectoz oke

1. od 4 would be too much if you want to treat this as the easiest diff , od 3 just make thing a bit more fit for easiest diff
2. 00:03:252 (3,4) - rhythm here plays pretty awkward imo prob becus the weird rhythm transition there which make 00:04:636 (4) - a bit hard to click it properly , I think this rhythm would make thing plays much more natuaral
   SPOILER

   

1. 00:02:329 (3,1) - 1/2 spacing are very similiar with 1/1 spacing here 00:01:406 (1,2,3) - , it will make the player a bit confuse here imo so try to make spacing a bit different from each others here like 00:02:329 (3,1,2) - , try increase spacing for 00:01:406 (1,2,3) - a bit ?
2. 00:10:406 (3) - no nc here ? I thought you nc every big white tick here
3. 00:12:944 (2) - I think if you make this slider a 1/1 slider instead it would make the rhythm here sound a bit better imo
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:45:482 (6,1) - this fit for jumps more than 00:45:252 (5,6) - tbh lol so try to make jumps here 00:45:482 (6,1) - instead (move (6) to around x232 y124 ) ?
5. 01:09:559 (2) - cymbal on sliderend , previously i see all you rhythm make the cymbal beat here clickable so this is like the only one place where the cymbal isn't clickable which will make the rhythm here play not really good compare with the preivous one so I think you can try this rhythm instead to make thing play a bit more natural
   SPOILER

   

1. 00:02:675 (4,5) - spacing seems a bit too much and inconsistent with 00:02:329 (3,4) - which make thing play not so good so consider lower spacing here a bit to something like 00:02:329 (3,4) -
2. 00:10:175 (5) - this 1/4 slider doesn't fit the instrument here , the instrument here doesn't sound that sudden so using 1/4 slider make this feel really weird , i recommend you to use the triplet for this one instead it makes the rhythm play a lots better imo
3. 00:41:098 (3,4,5) - minor but i think making the 00:41:675 (4,5) - head the same way as 00:41:098 (3) - would make the flow here a little better
4. 00:43:867 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - rhythm feel pretty out of place with the previou ones , previous rhythm you use some slider the emphasis the vocal but for this time it seems like you entirely ignore the vocal here which maek this really out of place so it would be better change some rhythm here to slider to emphasis some vocal here so that it make the rhythm here consistent with the previous one and make thing play more natural
5. 00:45:482 (11,1) - this should have higher spacing than 00:45:251 (10,11) - since (1) sound a lots more emphasized than 00:45:482 (11) - so try this ? (can change (2) placement to your preference)
   SPOILER

   
6. 00:56:309 (4,5) - doesn't this jumps a bit too much ? it make thing play weird imo , try to lower spacing a bit here so try move (5) to around x172 y128 ( might have to change next note placement too
7. 01:12:309 (5,6) - similiar to above

CelsiusLK wrote:

[normal]

1. od 4 would be too much if you want to treat this as the easiest diff , od 3 just make thing a bit more fit for easiest diff
2. 00:03:252 (3,4) - rhythm here plays pretty awkward imo prob becus the weird rhythm transition there which make 00:04:636 (4) - a bit hard to click it properly , I think this rhythm would make thing plays much more natuaral Okay
   SPOILER

   

[hard]

1. 00:02:329 (3,1) - 1/2 spacing are very similiar with 1/1 spacing here 00:01:406 (1,2,3) - , it will make the player a bit confuse here imo so try to make spacing a bit different from each others here like 00:02:329 (3,1,2) - , try increase spacing for 00:01:406 (1,2,3) - a bit ? increase spacing
2. 00:10:406 (3) - no nc here ? I thought you nc every big white tick here oke
3. 00:12:944 (2) - I think if you make this slider a 1/1 slider instead it would make the rhythm here sound a bit better imo
   SPOILER

   [img]http://puu.sh/qQegL/93c8fabc5a.jpg%20oke%20[/img]
4. 00:45:482 (6,1) - this fit for jumps more than 00:45:252 (5,6) - tbh lol so try to make jumps here 00:45:482 (6,1) - instead (move (6) to around x232 y124 ) ? fix
5. 01:09:559 (2) - cymbal on sliderend , previously i see all you rhythm make the cymbal beat here clickable so this is like the only one place where the cymbal isn't clickable which will make the rhythm here play not really good compare with the preivous one so I think you can try this rhythm instead to make thing play a bit more natural oke change to circle
   SPOILER

   
   all fix

[insane]

1. 00:02:675 (4,5) - spacing seems a bit too much and inconsistent with 00:02:329 (3,4) - which make thing play not so good so consider lower spacing here a bit to something like 00:02:329 (3,4) - fixed
2. 00:10:175 (5) - this 1/4 slider doesn't fit the instrument here , the instrument here doesn't sound that sudden so using 1/4 slider make this feel really weird , i recommend you to use the triplet for this one instead it makes the rhythm play a lots better imo i thinks its fine and playable but oke i change to triplet
3. 00:41:098 (3,4,5) - minor but i think making the 00:41:675 (4,5) - head the same way as 00:41:098 (3) - would make the flow here a little better i not understand XD my engglish its bad
4. 00:43:867 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - rhythm feel pretty out of place with the previou ones , previous rhythm you use some slider the emphasis the vocal but for this time it seems like you entirely ignore the vocal here which maek this really out of place so it would be better change some rhythm here to slider to emphasis some vocal here so that it make the rhythm here consistent with the previous one and make thing play more natural oke
5. 00:45:482 (11,1) - this should have higher spacing than 00:45:251 (10,11) - since (1) sound a lots more emphasized than 00:45:482 (11) - so try this ? (can change (2) placement to your preference)
   SPOILER

   [img]http://puu.sh/qQfqK/1cbded407e.jpgahh%20i%20see%20[/img]
6. 00:56:309 (4,5) - doesn't this jumps a bit too much ? it make thing play weird imo , try to lower spacing a bit here so try move (5) to around x172 y128 ( might have to change next note placement too oke
7. 01:12:309 (5,6) - similiar to above all fix

spread from normal to hard can be improve a bit imo i think hard diff has too many 1/4 whiel normal is just only full of basic 1/1 and rhythm 1/2 so it would be better to remove some 1/4 element from hard to make spread a bit better , also the spread from hard to insane is not good too cus insane just full of jumpy pattern while hard has very low jumps pattern so basically what you should do here is
1.remove some 1/4 element on hard to fix spread from normal to hard
2.add more jumps on hard so spread from hard to insane will be better hmm make more jump and remove 1/4 slider oke i will try

1. 00:05:098 (1,2) - I think you could try swapping NCs here. I think it'll be more matching if the NC is swapped.
2. 00:13:636 (3) - I think there should be less emphasis than 00:13:867 (4) - since number 4 feels stronger, and making it simillar to this emphasis, 00:14:790 (2) - , will be a good thing to do too.
3. In my opinion, this part, 00:01:406 - , is so calm. Try reducing the DS for jumps, maybe. (The sound is so cute XDDD)
4. 00:35:790 (5) - How about increasing this spacing a bit more? Since there's cymbal in it.
5. 00:36:252 (1,3) - These blanket seems off. (I think it's better to fix)
6. 00:51:482 (1,2) - Same spacing? what about making number 2 has a bigger spacing? And emphasizing 01:05:559 (3) - will be better, I think.