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SLM

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SLM 2017-01-12T00:12:37+00:00

Wuab wrote:
Hi M4M heres my diff to mod https://osu.ppy.sh/s/556537
smallish mod

Second beat

00:31:819 (2,1) - give 2 some overlap with 1 so the gap betweeen notes is not confusing as move slider to match this - ehhh think it's readable cuz of NC
00:36:937 (1,2) - idk about that, imo i would have it higher so moving from 7 to 1 to 2 makes a curve - I like current linear flow more so not changing
00:48:407 (2,3,4) - might be confusing, i think a circle into slider fits better, everytime this part of the music is heard somthing different is done e.g. - It's because there's guitar here unlike others.00:36:937 (1,2) - and 00:42:584 (1,2) - maybe make this more consistant.
00:41:701 (3) - Move it to make a line with 00:40:819 (4,5) - - sure
00:53:348 (5) - move to the right makes this combo look like one big curve - but I don't see any big reason to

Nice map!

short mod but thanks for your time!

Buster

942 posts

Joined April 2016

Buster 2017-01-12T09:33:56+00:00

Sorry for huge delay but im gonna mod your map

Easy

00:24:205 (1) Move to x:371 y:320
00:43:995 (1) Move a bit down
01:00:937 (1) Move to x:260 y:340
01:02:701 (3,4) Move note to x:197 y:304 and slider to x:258 y:352
01:10:113 (2) Move to x:250 y:341
01:23:525 (1) Move to x:138 y:329

SLM

462 posts

Joined February 2015

Topic Starter

SLM 2017-01-13T00:04:03+00:00

Lolinator2000 wrote:
Sorry for huge delay but im gonna mod your map

Easy
00:24:205 (1) Move to x:371 y:320 - but it will break the ds
00:43:995 (1) Move a bit down - I want to keep some flow change here
01:00:937 (1) Move to x:260 y:340
01:02:701 (3,4) Move note to x:197 y:304 and slider to x:258 y:352
01:10:113 (2) Move to x:250 y:341
01:23:525 (1) Move to x:138 y:329
ehhh most of move to mods break ds and I don't understand the purpose of them since you didn't write why to, so didn't apply.

no kds cuz no apply, but thanks for spending your time modding the map.

Kyubey

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Kyubey 2017-01-13T05:14:24+00:00

What is this artist I don't even.

Enon

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Joined November 2012

Enon 2017-01-13T22:25:27+00:00

lol kyubey

Lily Bread

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Joined December 2014

Lily Bread 2017-01-14T03:34:06+00:00

M4M

can't find much because your rhythm is good for me.

[Easy]
OD2 is better imo.

[Normal]
OD4?

[Hard]
nothing to say

[Left's Insane]
00:21:006 (3,2) - move them away a little? the reverse arrow is overlapped.
http://puu.sh/tlD2J/734ca2eeba.jpg

01:13:113 (5,1) - make them parallel?

[Second beat]
the kiai is copy and paste, then ctrl+H ... it's better to make them a little different imo.

good luck!

SLM

462 posts

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Topic Starter

SLM 2017-01-14T15:48:12+00:00

Lily Bread

Lily Bread wrote:
M4M

can't find much because your rhythm is good for me.

[Easy]
OD2 is better imo. - sure

[Normal]
OD4? - sure

[Hard]
nothing to say

[Second beat]
the kiai is copy and paste, then ctrl+H ... it's better to make them a little different imo. - ;-; ok

good luck!

Thanks for modding!

Pachiru

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Pachiru 2017-01-17T15:44:51+00:00

[General]

I'm not sure at all about the offset. Try out this as offset, and tell me what you think, to me it looks better: 1459
I don't like the gap of SV you used. For exemple, on Easy you use 0.90, and on Normal, you use 1.0, from now on, it's okay, but on Hard diff you use 1.40... This is like 0.40 gap between Normal and Hard, and 0.10 between Easy and Normal. Try to have a consistant SV between them. Like 0.90 for Easy, 1.10-1.20 for Normal and 1.40 for Hard, or you can also nerf the Hard diff SV too. Because the SV gap with Hard → Extra is good. Please fix this.

[Easy]

00:11:766 (3,4) - The move here is kinda anti-flow, I mean, it doesn't really fit with the music. Why not doing something like that: https://puu.sh/tpsOg/ed4ffa415c.png in my opinion, that would be better here. Because it makes the player doing some tricky stuff, and at an beginner level, I don't know if they are really able to do things like that so easy >w<!
00:35:878 (2,3) - To be honest, the double reverse slider feels really weird here to me.Even if there is beats here, I think that this should get some clickable beats here. Like why not trying to do stuff like this: https://puu.sh/tpt2b/4148a5bf5e.png since you use this pattern for previous parts like here: 00:32:701 (1,2) - don't you agree?
00:43:289 - The pattern you did here is not bad, I also like it, but you can clearly hear some strong beats here on 1/1 beats. Why not mapping them with circles? Like this: https://puu.sh/tpt8X/b0b9adec02.png
00:53:878 (3) - Something like that would fit better, since the last note of the reverse slider you made is on a strong beat, so why not doing this? https://puu.sh/tptcb/40adde30e2.png

In my opinion, this diff is pretty hard for an simple Easy diff. There is a lot of beats that could be replaced by long 2/1 sliders instead. And in my opinion some patterns could be nerfed!

[Normal]

00:03:591 (2,3) - I don't know if those patterns should be straight, but they're not. Don't forget to put them straight if you was about to do that.
00:58:113 (1,2) - I don't really like those patterns, because they don't have a true flow in my opinion, why not doing this instead: https://puu.sh/tptIe/c041dce049.png ?
Why not putting HD and OD to 3.5 here, since there is a lot of 1/2 close patterns, players could fail somtimes, and it should lead them to the defeat you know... :/

That's all for me. If you nerf the Easy, then please mind nerfing a little bit this Normal, to avoid unconsistancy with the average objects in each diffs. (Only for Easy/Normal)

Dereku

98 posts

Joined May 2013

Dereku 2017-01-17T18:31:56+00:00

Pachiru wrote:
I'm not sure at all about the offset. Try out this as offset, and tell me what you think, to me it looks better: 1459

Your offset doesnt change anything.

But 1st bpm point... SLM, sorry. It's 168.9 bpm D:

SLM

462 posts

Joined February 2015

Topic Starter

SLM 2017-01-18T03:28:00+00:00

Dereku wrote:
But 1st bpm point... SLM, sorry. It's 168.9 bpm D:

I can't notice the difference between 0.075 bpm change, changed to 168.9 anyway cuz I'm not good at timimngs.
Thanks for rechecking!

Pachiru

Pachiru wrote:
[General]
I'm not sure at all about the offset. Try out this as offset, and tell me what you think, to me it looks better: 1459 - doesn't really matter which I think
I don't like the gap of SV you used. For exemple, on Easy you use 0.90, and on Normal, you use 1.0, from now on, it's okay, but on Hard diff you use 1.40... This is like 0.40 gap between Normal and Hard, and 0.10 between Easy and Normal. Try to have a consistant SV between them. Like 0.90 for Easy, 1.10-1.20 for Normal and 1.40 for Hard, or you can also nerf the Hard diff SV too. Because the SV gap with Hard → Extra is good. Please fix this.
- I think it will not be a big issue cuz at Easy -> Normal gap, I mainly focus on rhythm change, but at Normal -> Hard gap, I mainly focus on movement change, therefore much more spaced so faster movement. but I'll keep this in mind and if I someday change this, I think I might lower Easy SV.
[Easy]
00:11:766 (3,4) - The move here is kinda anti-flow, I mean, it doesn't really fit with the music. Why not doing something like that: https://puu.sh/tpsOg/ed4ffa415c.png in my opinion, that would be better here. Because it makes the player doing some tricky stuff, and at an beginner level, I don't know if they are really able to do things like that so easy >w<! - fixed
00:35:878 (2,3) - To be honest, the double reverse slider feels really weird here to me.Even if there is beats here, I think that this should get some clickable beats here. Like why not trying to do stuff like this: https://puu.sh/tpt2b/4148a5bf5e.png since you use this pattern for previous parts like here: 00:32:701 (1,2) - don't you agree? - I agree about the double reverse slider, but I also think it fits really well at the same time.
Can't describe really well, imo making 00:35:878 - this clickable fits the music better unlike this 00:32:701 (1,2) - part.
00:43:289 - The pattern you did here is not bad, I also like it, but you can clearly hear some strong beats here on 1/1 beats. Why not mapping them with circles? Like this: https://puu.sh/tpt8X/b0b9adec02.png - sure
00:53:878 (3) - Something like that would fit better, since the last note of the reverse slider you made is on a strong beat, so why not doing this? https://puu.sh/tptcb/40adde30e2.png - I intended this to released at 00:54:584 - cuz there's some kind of fading out(?) sound from there. also I think making it clickable fits better when the rhythm uses lots of 1/2s.
In my opinion, this diff is pretty hard for an simple Easy diff. There is a lot of beats that could be replaced by long 2/1 sliders instead. And in my opinion some patterns could be nerfed!

[Normal]
00:03:591 (2,3) - I don't know if those patterns should be straight, but they're not. Don't forget to put them straight if you was about to do that. - fixed
00:58:113 (1,2) - I don't really like those patterns, because they don't have a true flow in my opinion, why not doing this instead: https://puu.sh/tptIe/c041dce049.png ? - umm.... not changing cuz I wanted this two 00:58:113 (1,2) - to be same ctrl h'd objects cuz of same lyric.
Why not putting HD and OD to 3.5 here, since there is a lot of 1/2 close patterns, players could fail somtimes, and it should lead them to the defeat you know... :/ - lowered OD to 3.5
That's all for me. If you nerf the Easy, then please mind nerfing a little bit this Normal, to avoid unconsistancy with the average objects in each diffs. (Only for Easy/Normal)

Thanks for modding!

Bursthammy

1,254 posts

Joined May 2015

Bursthammy 2017-01-18T05:40:43+00:00

hiiiii

General

Check AiMod for uninherited timing point inconsistencies between Easy/Second beat

Easy

00:01:104 - Could probably use a note here

Normal

00:28:457 (1,1) - REALLY wouldn't recommend having two spinners visually overlap like this, there's no reason the second spinner has to start 1/4 of a beat after the end of the first one
01:27:760 (1,1) - ^

Second beat

Capitalize that "beat" boi

00:11:938 (7) - This would probably flow better if it was underneath 00:11:228 (3,4) -
01:11:348 (7) - ^
00:31:290 (1,2,1) - This spacing is too CUHRAYZEE similar despite the differences in times they are hit, space (1,2) out a bit
00:54:584 (1) - I really wouldn't recommend keeping this slider as cramped as it is, is almost visually burai
00:55:995 (3,4) - Not a huge fan of this overlap but it's fine I guess?

Good luck!

SLM

462 posts

Joined February 2015

Topic Starter

SLM 2017-01-18T16:25:04+00:00

Weber

Weber wrote:
hiiiii

General

Check AiMod for uninherited timing point inconsistencies between Easy/Second beat - ok. there was a bpm change recently and gonna fix it very soon

Easy

00:01:104 - Could probably use a note here - I prefer to start on a downbeat when I'm using simple rhythms.

Normal

00:28:457 (1,1) - REALLY wouldn't recommend having two spinners visually overlap like this, there's no reason the second spinner has to start 1/4 of a beat after the end of the first one - fixed, to 1/2 but not sure 1/2 is still ok
01:27:760 (1,1) - ^

Second beat

Capitalize that "beat" boi - sure

00:11:938 (7) - This would probably flow better if it was underneath 00:11:228 (3,4) - - I did like this to express kinda weak 'oh' at 00:11:938 -
01:11:348 (7) - ^
00:31:290 (1,2,1) - This spacing is too CUHRAYZEE similar despite the differences in times they are hit, space (1,2) out a bit - it was intended but this is 2nd mod claiming this and I see no big reason to keep it, so changed.
00:54:584 (1) - I really wouldn't recommend keeping this slider as cramped as it is, is almost visually burai - umm think it's fine but changed a bit
00:55:995 (3,4) - Not a huge fan of this overlap but it's fine I guess? - it's somehow better than just stacking imo?

Good luck!

Thank you!!

direday

188 posts

Joined February 2013

direday 2017-01-21T03:41:30+00:00

Hello! M4M from your queue.

General

I think Kyubae is supposed to start with capital letter, even though it starts with lowercase in soundcloud. Actually, after some research I don't know. I would still recommend that because it hurts my tender european eyes otherwise . (yeah it's a rule to start proper name with capital letter). Everything else is fine and you have almost perfect diff spread.

Second Beat

I almost SS'ed it on first play and that's a good sign. It also looks really well visually.

00:08:386 (3) - 00:25:437 (3) - 01:07:819 (3) - 01:24:760 (3) - I feel like those are too fast for no apparent reason. Yeah, player hold the cursor in place anyway but I personally got startled by sudden fast object. I suggest reducing SV to 1.25 and make them accordingly smaller.
00:37:113 (2) - I think this slider should be further for better flow. Unlike 00:42:584 (1,2) - here, player need to fully stop on that reverse slider, and I recommend make him slow down more gradiually.
00:50:878 (1) - I think this should be rotated CCW a bit to make it blanket (3) like (2)
00:55:642 (2) - slightly less curvy for better blanket
01:11:878 (2,1,2) - make those form a line?
01:14:525 (5,7,2) - make those form equilateral triangle? It will also help to remove that 01:14:172 (3,2) - awkward overlap
01:18:054 (2) - same. Like this
I think that's all but maybe you should look for more triangles since they definetly will improve visuals for your map

Left's Insane

Also a nice diif and fits the style of "Second Beat". It was very hard to find anything.

00:27:391 (3,5) - Not a perfect line
01:04:642 (4,5) - ^
01:09:054 (3,4) - Make a blanket by moving slider lower? Idk
01:15:407 (3,5) - I think those were supposed to be symmetrical from 01:16:289 (6) 's axis and they are not. I suggest ctrl+g->rotate from center -5 -> ctrl+g.
Didn't find much else.

Hard

00:01:458 (2) - the end of this slider is not blanketed perefectly. There are a bit of tiny little bit misplaced objects that are almost unnoticable but I will point them out anyway, because I want to mod smth. Sry :3
00:08:030 (3,4) - not perfectly in line. You can check by ctrl+g 00:08:030 (3) -, disabling NC and look at follow point.
00:16:023 (2) - rotate 1° CW
00:26:680 (5) - ^ same
00:39:937 (2) - add curvature for better blanket?
00:51:231 (2) - ^
Actally blankets and parallels got better after 1st kiai so disreagard mo comment on first line :3
That's all. Simple and clean diff, not much to comment about.

Don't think I can say anything about Easy and Normal =\

Nice song. Good luck ranking it!

SLM

462 posts

Joined February 2015

Topic Starter

SLM 2017-01-21T06:29:49+00:00

direday wrote:
Hello! M4M from your queue.

General

I think Kyubae is supposed to start with capital letter, even though it starts with lowercase in soundcloud. Actually, after some research I don't know. I would still recommend that because it hurts my tender european eyes otherwise . (yeah it's a rule to start proper name with capital letter). Everything else is fine and you have almost perfect diff spread. - pretty sure lowercase is right

Second Beat

I almost SS'ed it on first play and that's a good sign. It also looks really well visually.
00:08:386 (3) - 00:25:437 (3) - 01:07:819 (3) - 01:24:760 (3) - I feel like those are too fast for no apparent reason. Yeah, player hold the cursor in place anyway but I personally got startled by sudden fast object. I suggest reducing SV to 1.25 and make them accordingly smaller. - think it's fine cuz the actual cursor movement is not too huge, like you mentioned.
00:37:113 (2) - I think this slider should be further for better flow. Unlike 00:42:584 (1,2) - here, player need to fully stop on that reverse slider, and I recommend make him slow down more gradiually. - moved a little bit, also changed 00:42:760 (2) - a bit
00:50:878 (1) - I think this should be rotated CCW a bit to make it blanket (3) like (2) - fixed
00:55:642 (2) - slightly less curvy for better blanket - imo it's somehow better not to perfectly blanket cuz both 00:55:642 (2,3) - are sliders (sorry for poor explantion)
01:11:878 (2,1,2) - make those form a line? - umm... no
01:14:525 (5,7,2) - make those form equilateral triangle? It will also help to remove that 01:14:172 (3,2) - awkward overlap - fixed
01:18:054 (2) - same. Like this - that will make too much spaced jump, and actually, 7 notes are stacked on that spot during the kiai.
I think that's all but maybe you should look for more triangles since they definetly will improve visuals for your map - ok sure

Hard
00:01:458 (2) - the end of this slider is not blanketed perefectly. There are a bit of tiny little bit misplaced objects that are almost unnoticable but I will point them out anyway, because I want to mod smth. Sry :3 - lol okay c: fixed i think?
00:08:030 (3,4) - not perfectly in line. You can check by ctrl+g 00:08:030 (3) -, disabling NC and look at follow point. - rotated a bit to not be linear, cuz I think some 00:08:563 (1) - flow change here would be nice
00:16:023 (2) - rotate 1° CW - fixed
00:26:680 (5) - ^ same - fixed
00:39:937 (2) - add curvature for better blanket? - umm.. no cuz it's intended to have much less curvature compared to 00:40:289 (3) -
00:51:231 (2) - ^ - ^
Actally blankets and parallels got better after 1st kiai so disreagard mo comment on first line :3
That's all. Simple and clean diff, not much to comment about.

Don't think I can say anything about Easy and Normal =\

Nice song. Good luck ranking it!

Thanks for modding!

Aihuro

329 posts

Joined January 2015

Aihuro 2017-01-21T11:28:11+00:00

Heya! M4M request in-game.

General:

You can uncheck widescreen support since you don't have a SB. It's also very unnecessary.
The music ends abruptly. I suggest you fade out the song a bit.
The hitsounds are very loud, because you are using the normal sample set on most of the objects. You must only add the normal sample set on beats that are strong because not all the beats are that strong. Like you should add it here: 01:06:937 - ; 01:07:642 - ; 01:08:348 - So basically on every second tick (beat)

Easy:

00:32:701 - This green timing point is unnecessary. Please remove it.
00:23:483 (4,3) - I personally don't really like these kinds of overlap. (Even though they are rankable) But why not just stack these two sliders? Or try to avoid the overlap. The main reason will be just to keep the mapset clean and neat. (Cuz it is a very nice solid set)
00:27:036 (1) - I'm not sure if you are following the vocals here but I think this rhythm can be improved. Just shorten the slider until the repeat arrow is here: 00:27:391 - and the slider end here: 00:27:746 - . Like a 1/2 slider with a reverse arrow. And then just add a hitcircle here on the white tick: 00:28:101 -
Image
Just like here: 00:21:352 (1,2) -
00:35:525 (1,2,3,4) - This is not very good to stack so many notes in Easy diff since it can confuse new players. Try turning 00:35:878 (2) - into a straight slider which end points upwards and than put 00:36:937 (3) - just underneath it. Like this:
Image
This flow imo is also better~
00:48:231 (4,5) - You can try to improve the blanket here since at the moment it looks really nazi. (I personally don't like these types of balnkets) Or you can just make (5) into a straight slider like (4)?
00:57:407 (4,3) - ^ Please try to avoid these kind of overlaps. Just move (3) downwards to avoid it.
01:05:172 - Here is a beat which you can map, so why not lengthen the slider so thaat it ends on 01:05:172 - Like this:
Image
It sounds and fits better with the music.
01:22:819 (4,3) - ^ Overlap again. Please try to ignore this.
01:29:172 (1) - I suggest you silence the spinner here. At the moment it's pretty loud.

Okay, there are a lot of stacking going on in this diff and it can be very difficult for newbies to play since it can confuse them. (Like I mentioned above) Here are some examples: 00:50:701 (3,4,5) - ; 00:57:407 (4,2) - ; 01:00:937 (1,3,4) - (this one is pretty bad) ; 01:11:525 (4,2) - and etc. Please try to avoid these kind of stacking in Easy diffs. Please keep that in mind in the future. There are also some overlaps here and there, so please keep a look out for those as well.

Normal:

00:36:937 (1) - I suggest you remove NC here since it's inconsistent with the others.
00:37:290 - You are missing a very strong beat here. I suggest you move 00:37:466 (2) - onto the white tick here: 00:37:290 - and then end the slider here: 00:37:466 - . (As you can hear, this beat: 00:37:642 - is not so strong than 00:37:290 - so I think it's really unnecessary to map that part) Just add a note here then: 00:37:819 - . It fits the song better imo.
Image
00:40:642 (5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This pattern is way too long! It may/may not be unrankable. So I highly advise you try shortening this pattern. 00:42:584 (1,2) - instead if this long slider and note try to remove them both and add a hitcircle here: 00:42:584 - and one here: 00:42:937 - .
01:11:172 - Add a note here?
01:15:937 (3,4,5,6) - This rhythm here can definitely be improved. Try shortening this slider: 01:15:937 (3) - until here: 01:16:113 - and then remove this hitcircle: 01:16:466 (4) - and then move 01:16:289 (4) - until here: 01:16:289 - and then add a 1/2 slider here: 01:16:819 -
Image
01:21:584 (3,4,5) - ^ Same here like I mentioned above.

Hard:

00:03:590 (1,2) - The DS here just doesn't make sense because the DS here between 00:02:347 (3,1) - where the beat is closer to each other is the same with 00:03:590 (1,2) -. Please keep the DS consistent here.
I don't see any 1/1 sliders (in first kiai, so I suggest you add more of these types of sliders because you can't just use 1/2 sliders. Use more variety in any diff!
01:05:348 (1,2) - I don't reall like the way you place these two notes. . why not just DS them?
00:01:103 (1,3) - This stack here can be improved.
00:19:753 (4,1) - This jump here is kinda big if you ask me. The music also doesn't call for a jump so I suggest you just keep the DS here consistent with the others.

I highly suggest you add more 1/1 slider for more variety. . because at the moment there are like just 5-6 1/1 sliders.

I will end my mod here~
Good luck with this mapset of yours!

Left

2,162 posts

Joined October 2014

Left 2017-01-21T12:57:12+00:00

Lily Bread wrote:
M4M

can't find much because your rhythm is good for me.

[Left's Insane]
00:21:006 (3,2) - move them away a little? the reverse arrow is overlapped. hmm i'll consider it
http://puu.sh/tlD2J/734ca2eeba.jpg

01:13:113 (5,1) - make them parallel? yeah

good luck!

direday wrote:
Hello! M4M from your queue.

Left's Insane

Also a nice diif and fits the style of "Second Beat". It was very hard to find anything.
00:27:391 (3,5) - Not a perfect line lol
01:04:642 (4,5) - ^ lol
01:09:054 (3,4) - Make a blanket by moving slider lower? Idk no blanket here
01:15:407 (3,5) - I think those were supposed to be symmetrical from 01:16:289 (6) 's axis and they are not. I suggest ctrl+g->rotate from center -5 -> ctrl+g. yeah
Didn't find much else.

Nice song. Good luck ranking it!

thx for mod

ㅑ

osu file format v14

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 66319
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
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LetterboxInBreaks: 0
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DistanceSpacing: 1.1
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2.3

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TitleUnicode:begging m3
Artist:kyubae
ArtistUnicode:♡kyubae♡
Creator:SLM
Version:Left's Insane
Source:
Tags:me Florrie Experiments nightcore short cut
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OverallDifficulty:7.5
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255,107,75760,1,0,0:0:0:0:
328,183,75937,2,0,P|367:175|404:159,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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SLM

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Topic Starter

SLM 2017-01-21T13:14:43+00:00

Aihuro wrote:
Heya! M4M request in-game.

General:
You can uncheck widescreen support since you don't have a SB. It's also very unnecessary. - fixed
The music ends abruptly. I suggest you fade out the song a bit. - okay, will do it
The hitsounds are very loud, because you are using the normal sample set on most of the objects. You must only add the normal sample set on beats that are strong because not all the beats are that strong. Like you should add it here: 01:06:937 - ; 01:07:642 - ; 01:08:348 - So basically on every second tick (beat) - not agreeing that I should use normal sampleset only on strong beats, but lowered volume a bit

Easy:
00:32:701 - This green timing point is unnecessary. Please remove it. - I think that doesn't matter, fixed anyway
00:23:483 (4,3) - I personally don't really like these kinds of overlap. (Even though they are rankable) But why not just stack these two sliders? Or try to avoid the overlap. The main reason will be just to keep the mapset clean and neat. (Cuz it is a very nice solid set) - think it's totally fine cuz 00:25:615 (3) - appears after 00:23:483 (4) - disappears completely. it's only editor thing.
00:27:036 (1) - I'm not sure if you are following the vocals here but I think this rhythm can be improved. Just shorten the slider until the repeat arrow is here: 00:27:391 - and the slider end here: 00:27:746 - . Like a 1/2 slider with a reverse arrow. And then just add a hitcircle here on the white tick: 00:28:101 - - It's intended, I did it like this to calm down the cursor movement, but maybe I might change this someday.
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Just like here: 00:21:352 (1,2) -
00:35:525 (1,2,3,4) - This is not very good to stack so many notes in Easy diff since it can confuse new players. Try turning 00:35:878 (2) - into a straight slider which end points upwards and than put 00:36:937 (3) - just underneath it. Like this: - changed 00:35:878 (2) - a bit
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This flow imo is also better~
00:48:231 (4,5) - You can try to improve the blanket here since at the moment it looks really nazi. (I personally don't like these types of balnkets) Or you can just make (5) into a straight slider like (4)? - fixed I think, didn't change into straight slider cuz I want those 2 sliders to be different.
00:57:407 (4,3) - ^ Please try to avoid these kind of overlaps. Just move (3) downwards to avoid it. - as said above, it's totally fine when playing.
01:05:172 - Here is a beat which you can map, so why not lengthen the slider so thaat it ends on 01:05:172 - Like this: - umm.. no cuz there's no drum there and I like to prefer to follow drums more when mapping easy diffs.
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It sounds and fits better with the music.
01:22:819 (4,3) - ^ Overlap again. Please try to ignore this. - ^
01:29:172 (1) - I suggest you silence the spinner here. At the moment it's pretty loud. - I don't think I need to silence this, since there is a beat at spinner end.

Okay, there are a lot of stacking going on in this diff and it can be very difficult for newbies to play since it can confuse them. (Like I mentioned above) Here are some examples: 00:50:701 (3,4,5) - ; 00:57:407 (4,2) - ; 01:00:937 (1,3,4) - (this one is pretty bad) ; 01:11:525 (4,2) - and etc. Please try to avoid these kind of stacking in Easy diffs. Please keep that in mind in the future. There are also some overlaps here and there, so please keep a look out for those as well. - think it will be fine to play even for newbies, since I'm using very simple flow.

Normal:
00:36:937 (1) - I suggest you remove NC here since it's inconsistent with the others. - fixed
00:37:290 - You are missing a very strong beat here. I suggest you move 00:37:466 (2) - onto the white tick here: 00:37:290 - and then end the slider here: 00:37:466 - . (As you can hear, this beat: 00:37:642 - is not so strong than 00:37:290 - so I think it's really unnecessary to map that part) Just add a note here then: 00:37:819 - . It fits the song better imo. - fixed differently
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00:40:642 (5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This pattern is way too long! It may/may not be unrankable. So I highly advise you try shortening this pattern. 00:42:584 (1,2) - instead if this long slider and note try to remove them both and add a hitcircle here: 00:42:584 - and one here: 00:42:937 - . - umm.. think it's fine cuz it is to have rhythm differences with Easy diff. and actually having 2 circles is harder than a 1/1 slider.
01:11:172 - Add a note here?
01:15:937 (3,4,5,6) - This rhythm here can definitely be improved. Try shortening this slider: 01:15:937 (3) - until here: 01:16:113 - and then remove this hitcircle: 01:16:466 (4) - and then move 01:16:289 (4) - until here: 01:16:289 - and then add a 1/2 slider here: 01:16:819 - - not really sure about this, I'll think more about this.
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01:21:584 (3,4,5) - ^ Same here like I mentioned above.

Hard:
00:03:590 (1,2) - The DS here just doesn't make sense because the DS here between 00:02:347 (3,1) - where the beat is closer to each other is the same with 00:03:590 (1,2) -. Please keep the DS consistent here. - fixed
I don't see any 1/1 sliders (in first kiai, so I suggest you add more of these types of sliders because you can't just use 1/2 sliders. Use more variety in any diff! - why not? I think it's fine as how it is now, the music is pretty fast, and it's hard diff.
01:05:348 (1,2) - I don't reall like the way you place these two notes. . why not just DS them? - it's because I didn't want these to be far from each other, since the music is calm here. if I stack or use similar distance like 01:05:701 (2,3) - , it will be confusing as a 1/2 rhythm.
00:01:103 (1,3) - This stack here can be improved. - fixed
00:19:753 (4,1) - This jump here is kinda big if you ask me. The music also doesn't call for a jump so I suggest you just keep the DS here consistent with the others. - think it will not be an issue, since 00:19:753 (4) - 's sliderhead is close to 00:20:109 (1) - , the actual movement is not that huge. also it's a new phase.

I highly suggest you add more 1/1 slider for more variety. . because at the moment there are like just 5-6 1/1 sliders.

I will end my mod here~
Good luck with this mapset of yours!

Thanks for modding!

SLM

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SLM 2017-01-21T13:18:21+00:00

updated
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jeanbernard8865

600 posts

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jeanbernard8865 2017-01-22T19:56:47+00:00

Hey there, from M4M q

Easy

00:33:407 (2,3) - same thing as below with the slider shape contradicting (3)’s placement

01:00:937 (1,2,3,4) - why did you stop using red slider anchors ? It’s the same part of the music

Same as the extra, the second kiai is pretty much the first but with ctrl+h so everything I said in there works for that part as well

Normal

00:04:833 (1) - not obligatory but I’d personally put a circle there and start the spinner afterwards

00:12:293 (5,6) - 00:12:649 seems of same importance as the 2 previous ticks so I don’t understand that slider rhythm-wise

00:17:267 (5,6) - same thing with slider shapes and flow

00:28:457 (1,1) - not a bad idea. However, I don’t know if this is possible in a normal considering players might be surprised by a second spinner

01:02:878 (5,6) - I just thought about it but it’s also applicable to other 1/2 stacks earlier in the map ; I’m not sure this is rankable for a normal ? I recall there being a page somewhere with the rules per difficulty tier but I just can’t find it so yeah I’d ask a BN/QAT for confirmation

Again since the 2nd kiai is just 1st one but ctrl+h it would be a waste of time to talk about it since I’d be repeating myself. Do consider really mapping it though.

Left’s Insane

00:45:231 (4,1) - this flows very badly 00:52:466 (1,2,3,4,5) - I don’t understand the difference in this pattern and 00:35:525 (1,2,3,4,5) ? The music doesn’t change, so the map shouldn’t change as well

00:47:878 (6,3) - overlap

00:48:760 (3,4) - The placement of 00:49:289 (4) is contradictory to what 00:48:760 (3) ‘s shape implies ; you’d want (4) somewhere under (3)

00:59:525 - leaving a downbeat ( big white tick ) like this while there’s a sound on it is awkward, plus starting a slider on a red tick is weird rhythm-wise, try 2 circles

01:00:937 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3) - why such a big burst of singletaps ?

01:22:819 (1,2,3,4) - underwhelming, ctrl+g (3) and (4) ( especially considering you did this at 01:25:642 (1,2,3,4) so it gets consistent that way )

Second Beat

overall there’s very few difference between spacings in kiais vs non-kiais, and this leads to not having a feeling of intensity when playing the kiai ( while there should be ). Might wanna either nerf the non-kiai or buff kiais, up to you.

00:01:103 (1) - I’m not fond of starting somewhere else than a downbeat, especially when the music starts later ( at 00:01:458 (2) ). Technically not wrong, so up to you whether you delete that or not.

00:09:807 - I don’t understand why this is empty ? It just breaks the rhythm for no reason

00:10:872 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - rather underwhelming ; don’t be afraid of doing 1/2/1/2 lines ( example )

00:15:313 (6,7,1) - rip flow

00:50:348 (5,6) - why stack when the rest of the pattern is jumps and it’s the same sound ?

00:52:819 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - straight lines flow horribly at this spacing because snapping and then going in the same direction is really awkward.

00:56:701 (1,2) - flows weirdly as well. I know there’s slider leniency and stuff, but aesthetically speaking it’s not the best option ( ideally you want your circles to kind of follow the slider shape, I suggest you take a look at Pishifat’s video on slider flow for better explanation )

01:03:584 (6) - red ticks sliders aren’t ideal, especially when they leave the downbeat ( big white tick ) non clickable with a sound on it ( here, guitar ). Try 2 circles instead of slider ?

Not much to say about second kiai since it’s just the 1st one with ctrl+h so yeah same mistakes in there as in the beginning I guess

There we go, overall I noticed a lot of consistency mistakes, so look out for that.

also map your 2nd kiai

Good luck with the rest of your mapping :>

SLM

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SLM 2017-01-23T10:08:16+00:00

AyanokoRin wrote:
Hey there, from M4M q

Easy
00:33:407 (2,3) - same thing as below with the slider shape contradicting (3)’s placement - some flow change should work fine since it's on a downbeat

01:00:937 (1,2,3,4) - why did you stop using red slider anchors ? It’s the same part of the music - it's for some variety, also it's a new phase

Same as the extra, the second kiai is pretty much the first but with ctrl+h so everything I said in there works for that part as well

Normal
00:04:833 (1) - not obligatory but I’d personally put a circle there and start the spinner afterwards - i think current one works better for diff-spread wise issue.

00:12:293 (5,6) - 00:12:649 seems of same importance as the 2 previous ticks so I don’t understand that slider rhythm-wise - I did like this cause of the vocal 00:12:293 (5) - 'oh' 00:12:471 (6) - 'baby'

00:17:267 (5,6) - same thing with slider shapes and flow - it's intended to have unnatural flow here.

00:28:457 (1,1) - not a bad idea. However, I don’t know if this is possible in a normal considering players might be surprised by a second spinner - yeah.. gonna ask about this very soon

01:02:878 (5,6) - I just thought about it but it’s also applicable to other 1/2 stacks earlier in the map ; I’m not sure this is rankable for a normal ? I recall there being a page somewhere with the rules per difficulty tier but I just can’t find it so yeah I’d ask a BN/QAT for confirmation
- you mean this? t/517731 it is fine to use stacks
Stacks are acceptable, but avoid switching between 1/1 and 1/2 stacks repeatedly.
Again since the 2nd kiai is just 1st one but ctrl+h it would be a waste of time to talk about it since I’d be repeating myself. Do consider really mapping it though.

Second Beat
overall there’s very few difference between spacings in kiais vs non-kiais, and this leads to not having a feeling of intensity when playing the kiai ( while there should be ). Might wanna either nerf the non-kiai or buff kiais, up to you. - imo it has enough spacing difference between them. At kiai, almost every notes are spaced about 6 follow points (even more at sliders) while at non-kiai, maybe around 40%?(I don't know exactly cause I didn't count lo) of them are spaced 5 follow points, only few are spaced 6 follow points and rest are spaced less.

00:01:103 (1) - I’m not fond of starting somewhere else than a downbeat, especially when the music starts later ( at 00:01:458 (2) ). Technically not wrong, so up to you whether you delete that or not. - umm yeah I think current one works better than starting at downbeat, since i'm mainly focusing on lyrics at this diff.

00:09:807 - I don’t understand why this is empty ? It just breaks the rhythm for no reason - ^ as I said above, it's because I'm focusing on the vocals. (especially more at kiai)

00:10:872 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - rather underwhelming ; don’t be afraid of doing 1/2/1/2 lines ( example ) - ^ I did like this to refer to the vocal

00:15:313 (6,7,1) - rip flow - changed a bit

00:50:348 (5,6) - why stack when the rest of the pattern is jumps and it’s the same sound ? - cuz 00:50:348 (5) - and 00:50:525 (6) - 's pitch is same, 00:50:701 (7) - 's pitch is different.

00:52:819 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - straight lines flow horribly at this spacing because snapping and then going in the same direction is really awkward. - okay, will change when I get some idea

00:56:701 (1,2) - flows weirdly as well. I know there’s slider leniency and stuff, but aesthetically speaking it’s not the best option ( ideally you want your circles to kind of follow the slider shape, I suggest you take a look at Pishifat’s video on slider flow for better explanation ) - imo not every notes have to be natural flow, I intended uncomfortable flow here, also I've watched pishi's video as well.

01:03:584 (6) - red ticks sliders aren’t ideal, especially when they leave the downbeat ( big white tick ) non clickable with a sound on it ( here, guitar ). Try 2 circles instead of slider ? - as I said above, I'm mainly following the vocal and vocal 01:03:760 - here is pretty weak.

Not much to say about second kiai since it’s just the 1st one with ctrl+h so yeah same mistakes in there as in the beginning I guess - yeah I always check both at once when I'm applying mods lo

There we go, overall I noticed a lot of consistency mistakes, so look out for that.

also map your 2nd kiai - think it works fine. ~~also I'm too lazy ;-;~~

Good luck with the rest of your mapping :>

Thanks for modding!

Left

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Left 2017-01-24T11:17:14+00:00

AyanokoRin wrote:
Hey there, from M4M q
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Left’s Insane
00:45:231 (4,1) - this flows very badly very nice i think 00:52:466 (1,2,3,4,5) - I don’t understand the difference in this pattern and 00:35:525 (1,2,3,4,5) ? The music doesn’t change, so the map shouldn’t change as well my free to use another slider,circle use in same rhythm

00:47:878 (6,3) - overlap u can't notice it while playing

00:48:760 (3,4) - The placement of 00:49:289 (4) is contradictory to what 00:48:760 (3) ‘s shape implies ; you’d want (4) somewhere under (3) don't have to

00:59:525 - leaving a downbeat ( big white tick ) like this while there’s a sound on it is awkward, plus starting a slider on a red tick is weird rhythm-wise, try 2 circles mapping skill

01:00:937 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3) - why such a big burst of singletaps ? just circle pattern.

01:22:819 (1,2,3,4) - underwhelming, ctrl+g (3) and (4) ( especially considering you did this at 01:25:642 (1,2,3,4) so it gets consistent that way )k ill consider it
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Good luck with the rest of your mapping :>

thx for mod~

Hectic

514 posts

Joined August 2015

Hectic 2017-01-25T17:56:52+00:00

Hi, small random mod, hope you don't mind.

green - just a suggestion
yellow? - not sure
orange - this could be better, i think
red - i totally don't like it

Cute song c:

Second beat

00:08:386 (3) - i wouldn't make this so fast, it doesn't emphasize anything
00:25:437 (3) - ^ (it applies to all next similar sliders)
00:29:167 (1) - no NC
00:31:819 (2,1) - 2 reverse arrows are almost impossible to predict for player, so I would change this to 1 circle and two 1/2 sliders
01:03:584 (6) - i don't think slider fit there.. And jumping section should start here 01:03:760 -
01:06:231 (4,5) - would make another slider instead of 2 circles, cause there is second repetitive sound
01:31:113 - 01:31:289 - 01:31:466 - 01:31:642 - 01:31:819 - why not make objects here? :3
changings of SV throughout the whole difficulty are pretty random, i would try to organize them according to the sounds
um, is the second kiai section is just a ctrl+c ctrl+v ctrl+h of the first one?

Left's Insane

00:20:109 - clickable please
00:31:819 - 00:31:995 - 00:32:172 - 00:32:348 - 00:32:525 - ^
00:48:760 (3) - would make 1/2 reverse instead of 1/1 to represent guitar sounds
00:49:289 (4) - and don't stack this with 00:49:466 (5) - for same reason
01:31:113 - 01:31:289 - 01:31:466 - 01:31:642 - 01:31:819 - clickable?

SLM

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SLM 2017-01-28T11:19:55+00:00

late reply

h4d0uk3n1

h4d0uk3n1 wrote:
Hi, small random mod, hope you don't mind.

green - just a suggestion
yellow? - not sure
orange - this could be better, i think
red - i totally don't like it

Cute song c:

Second beat
00:08:386 (3) - i wouldn't make this so fast, it doesn't emphasize anything - lowered sv a bit
00:25:437 (3) - ^ (it applies to all next similar sliders) - ^
00:29:167 (1) - no NC - it's for better readability
00:31:819 (2,1) - 2 reverse arrows are almost impossible to predict for player, so I would change this to 1 circle and two 1/2 sliders - they're fine at higher diffs.
01:03:584 (6) - i don't think slider fit there.. And jumping section should start here 01:03:760 - - it's because the vocal at there is weak so I made it sliderend.
01:06:231 (4,5) - would make another slider instead of 2 circles, cause there is second repetitive sound
01:31:113 - 01:31:289 - 01:31:466 - 01:31:642 - 01:31:819 - why not make objects here? :3 - cuz that's the end of the map
changings of SV throughout the whole difficulty are pretty random, i would try to organize them according to the sounds
um, is the second kiai section is just a ctrl+c ctrl+v ctrl+h of the first one? - why not? the music is totally same so imo copying gives more logic

Thanks for modding!

SLM

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SLM 2017-01-28T12:12:00+00:00

mp3 changed; offset +25

PhantomHunt3r

118 posts

Joined September 2015

PhantomHunt3r 2017-01-30T16:15:38+00:00

hello, a m4m from your queue. plz don't disregard me ;w;

Easy

I'm not really good at modding things below 2* sooooooo-

00:18:535 (1) - try avoiding kick sliders, it will interrupt the flow with the new players, kick sliders normally come in Hard try replacing with something like this: https://puu.sh/tGU1g/4be53128c6.png

00:27:061 (1) - here is the same thing as above but this slider makes no sense, put the end here 00:27:416 and place a note one tick to the right and keep a note here 00:28:126

01:15:432 (2) - change this into this, and make it flow able, I just threw this together https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7190928

like I said, I suck at modding anything below 2* ;w; sorry if this was no help

Normal

00:28:482 (1,1) - I don't see the point of these two spinners, this sounds like on fluent motion into the next beat

00:35:373 - there is a beat here, maybe note?

00:54:609 (7) - maybe place a slider here that ends 00:54:962 maybe?
00:58:667 - there needs to be a note here, pretty major beat, try shoving the slider back a tick and making it longer
01:05:020 (4) - I think there needs to be a spinner here, sounds like there is one and it should end 01:06:256 maybe?

a little tip, on the second kiai, try using more of the middle. I noticed you use the edges more then the middle. just a tip, you don't have to so it

Hard

00:25:107 (3,4,5,1) - this seems hard to read for people I sure didn't notice the three notes if it wasn't for the approach circles

00:25:107 (3,4,5,1) - try flipping these around to fit flow into the note after it

01:05:903 (3,4) - this sounds like a repeat slider (basically connect the two sliders)

01:12:962 - I know this is over mapping, but look into a note here, it would make it flow a little better

01:24:432 (3,4,5,1) - same thing as the first mod of this difficulty, its hard to read

01:29:197 (1,2,3,4,1) - maybe make these into a slider?

Left's Insane

00:07:167 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - spacing emphasis please

00:37:844 (4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - maybe make these into a star or triangles this seems to be the same thing with different spacing between he two but there is no sound queue to cause the different spacing

00:46:491 (4,1) - this doesn't seem to flow

00:56:020 (3,4,5,6,7) - make into a star or something, this has potential to be a good pattern but a circle doesn't seem to cut it for me, idk why

01:30:609 (1) - I think this makes more sense as a spinner most likely

second beat

first thing I noticed, I didn't find any correlation to the main song, just pointing that out. I may be wrong though

00:01:128 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - remap this, I don't know why it is so hard for me to grasp it into words but it bugs me that this is here

00:07:167 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6) - to much emphasis here buddy, calm the spacing down plz

00:25:107 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2) - ^

00:48:432 (2,3,4,5,6) - try spacing these out into a triangle and a slider or a star it doesn't "fit in"

00:51:609 (3) - no overlaps please

01:07:491 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6) - try using a different pattern, the same thing 5 times in a setting makes it predictable and easy, try doing something different, look at airman for example. they used different patterns of the same shape... probably because it was BlueDragons and Ztrot's BUT you know what I mean

01:06:609 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,1,2) - do I smell some copy paste?

overall its a good map, some kinks you could work out but it has much potential

Hello, overall its a good map set, Good Luck in the future with your map

SLM

462 posts

Joined February 2015

Topic Starter

SLM 2017-01-31T04:33:59+00:00

PhantomHunt3r wrote:
hello, a m4m from your queue. plz don't disregard me ;w; - lol why would I?

Easy
I'm not really good at modding things below 2* sooooooo-

00:18:535 (1) - try avoiding kick sliders, it will interrupt the flow with the new players, kick sliders normally come in Hard try replacing with something like this: https://puu.sh/tGU1g/4be53128c6.png - umm it's not a kickslider tho

00:27:061 (1) - here is the same thing as above but this slider makes no sense, put the end here 00:27:416 and place a note one tick to the right and keep a note here 00:28:126 - it is for simplifying the rhythm at the end of the kiai.

01:15:432 (2) - change this into this, and make it flow able, I just threw this together https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7190928 - I think no

like I said, I suck at modding anything below 2* ;w; sorry if this was no help - no problem! I still appreciate it.

Normal
00:28:482 (1,1) - I don't see the point of these two spinners, this sounds like on fluent motion into the next beat - idk well about this, might change in the future.

00:35:373 - there is a beat here, maybe note? - nop cuz the vocal ended

00:54:609 (7) - maybe place a slider here that ends 00:54:962 maybe? - nop
00:58:667 - there needs to be a note here, pretty major beat, try shoving the slider back a tick and making it longer - no cuz of the vocal
01:05:020 (4) - I think there needs to be a spinner here, sounds like there is one and it should end 01:06:256 maybe? - no cuz the recovery time is not enough for a Normal

a little tip, on the second kiai, try using more of the middle. I noticed you use the edges more then the middle. just a tip, you don't have to so it

Hard
00:25:107 (3,4,5,1) - this seems hard to read for people I sure didn't notice the three notes if it wasn't for the approach circles - think it's fine cuz there is auto stack doing work

00:25:107 (3,4,5,1) - try flipping these around to fit flow into the note after it - the flow is ok i think,

01:05:903 (3,4) - this sounds like a repeat slider (basically connect the two sliders) - umm no cuz i don't want to use 2 times repeating slider at Hard diff

01:12:962 - I know this is over mapping, but look into a note here, it would make it flow a little better - if I put a note here it will break the concept with other parts.

01:24:432 (3,4,5,1) - same thing as the first mod of this difficulty, its hard to read

01:29:197 (1,2,3,4,1) - maybe make these into a slider? - umm... no

second beat
first thing I noticed, I didn't find any correlation to the main song, just pointing that out. I may be wrong though

00:01:128 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - remap this, I don't know why it is so hard for me to grasp it into words but it bugs me that this is here - I don't see any problem?

00:07:167 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6) - to much emphasis here buddy, calm the spacing down plz - it's fine imo

00:25:107 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2) - ^

00:48:432 (2,3,4,5,6) - try spacing these out into a triangle and a slider or a star it doesn't "fit in" - it is referring to the guitar sound

00:51:609 (3) - no overlaps please - it's an intended overlap so..

01:07:491 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6) - try using a different pattern, the same thing 5 times in a setting makes it predictable and easy, try doing something different, look at airman for example. they used different patterns of the same shape... probably because it was BlueDragons and Ztrot's BUT you know what I mean - okay, I'll consider it.

01:06:609 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,1,2) - do I smell some copy paste? - yes

overall its a good map, some kinks you could work out but it has much potential

Hello, overall its a good map set, Good Luck in the future with your map Sorry I didn't apply much, but thank you!

Thanks for modding! and the stars(wut)!

Santtu

539 posts

Joined November 2012

Santtu 2017-02-04T14:38:42+00:00

Hi! M4M from your queue
Please mod this: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/474417

General

All difficulties are really decent. Almost found nothing to mention! Just minor things ☆~

Easy

If you wanted to, you could stack 01:00:962 (1,4) -

Normal

00:56:726 (4) - Blanket would be improved a bit.

Hard

01:19:138 (4,1) - To my mind, since you don't make this kind of jump anywhere else, this is bit random. Maybe you could just keep 1,3x.

Left's Insane

00:13:206 (3,1) - Could be stacked if wanted to.
00:31:315 (1) - Having slidertail at strong beat amkes it less strong than it really is. So maybe you could reduce the length of the slider and add circle to strong beat.
01:29:197 (1,2,3,4) - Stacks are ruining the star pattern. You could move these stacks bit to down right, so the first note (01:29:197 (1) - ) would be at the right place (at x171 y209).

Second Beat

00:09:832 - I don't come up with any reason to leave this empty since there is a vocal sound and melody.
01:09:256 - ^

Good luck!!!!

SLM

462 posts

Joined February 2015

Topic Starter

SLM 2017-02-04T15:45:58+00:00

Santtu

Santtu wrote:
Hi! M4M from your queue
Please mod this: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/474417
General
All difficulties are really decent. Almost found nothing to mention! Just minor things ☆~
Easy
If you wanted to, you could stack 01:00:962 (1,4) - - sure. fixed
Normal
00:56:726 (4) - Blanket would be improved a bit. - fixed
Hard
01:19:138 (4,1) - To my mind, since you don't make this kind of jump anywhere else, this is bit random. Maybe you could just keep 1,3x. - true, but since I used opposite going flow at 01:17:903 (1,2,3,4) - and 01:19:138 (4) - 's head is close to 01:19:491 (1) - , think it's fine as it is.
Second Beat
00:09:832 - I don't come up with any reason to leave this empty since there is a vocal sound and melody. - at this diff I'm trying to refer to the vocal as much as possible, and the vocal is very weak here (I didn't even notice that here has a vocal before I searched for the lyrics). But maybe I'll change this in the future.
01:09:256 - ^

Good luck!!!!

Thank you! for the mod and star!
I have to sleep now, I'll do yours within 24 hours.

Left

2,162 posts

Joined October 2014

Left 2017-02-05T05:53:45+00:00

left

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Dereku

98 posts

Joined May 2013

Dereku 2017-02-07T19:22:42+00:00

SLM wrote:
mp3 changed; offset +25

+4.
Offset: All -21

SLM

462 posts

Joined February 2015

Topic Starter

SLM 2017-02-08T02:45:57+00:00

Dereku wrote:
SLM wrote:
mp3 changed; offset +25
+4.
Offset: All -21

Thanks! but I'm sure that +25 is pretty accurate,

Former mp3

In-game editor

Goldwave

Current mp3

In-game editor

Goldwave

Are you sure with +4?

KappaPraise

316 posts

Joined November 2015

KappaPraise 2017-02-10T11:46:57+00:00

hi, m4m from your queue

Easy
what about set slider tick rate on 2, to emphasize some sounds on red ticks for example 00:08:766 - 00:10:897 - and etc
00:04:325 (1) - should it be soft slider end?
01:03:785 (1,2) - what about make spinner instead which ends here 01:05:020 - to emphasize this sound?
00:48:256 (4,5) - this moment sounds special and I dont like fact that you ignored this 00:48:785 - sound, may be try this reverse slider?
Normal
00:34:844 (7) - make please two 1/2 sliders instead, they are fits more, because of strong vocal on white ticks and that feels weird that you follow in priority vocal 00:32:726 - here then follow instrumental here 00:35:550 - but ignoring this 00:35:373 - sound, same here 00:46:138 (7) -
00:36:962 (5) - NC, new part
00:42:609 (5) - ^
00:48:256 (5) - ^
Hard
00:31:315 (1) - hard to see this circle under this 4 sliders, I could suggest you unstack it
01:05:726 (2,3,4) - may be stack them? confusing spacing imo, you use jump for 1/2 and stacking
01:28:138 (1,2) - copy 01:28:844 (4,5) - paste please xd
Lift's Insane
Good dif
Second Beat
00:07:167 - ctrl+c 01:06:609 - ctrl+v ctrl+h =w=b
this half screen jumps dont fits for spread of difs imo... after insane they are too big
00:01:839 (3,4) - uncomfortable to play something like this should be better imo
00:05:746 - I think this is still should be soft part
00:14:094 (2) - ctrl+g please
00:16:936 (2) - ^
00:31:844 (2,1) - stack please
00:36:962 (1,2) - uncomfotable jump imo, this plays better imo
00:42:785 (2) - I am not sure, but try ctrl+g and restack circle with slider end also 00:43:138 (3,4) - ctrl+g
00:48:256 (1,2) - place them in double too
00:56:020 (3,4) - thats not looks like 1/2
for 2nd kiai there should be similar suggestions as before

Thats it from me.
Good luck!

SLM

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Topic Starter

SLM 2017-02-10T14:04:57+00:00

WISPG_G

WISPG_G wrote:
hi, m4m from your queue

Easy
what about set slider tick rate on 2, to emphasize some sounds on red ticks for example 00:08:766 - 00:10:897 - and etc - nice, but i think 1 is better.
00:04:325 (1) - should it be soft slider end? - fixed
01:03:785 (1,2) - what about make spinner instead which ends here 01:05:020 - to emphasize this sound? - that's too short imo
00:48:256 (4,5) - this moment sounds special and I dont like fact that you ignored this 00:48:785 - sound, may be try - umm no, I think current straight forward rhythm is better, & consistency with other parts.this reverse slider?
Normal
00:34:844 (7) - make please two 1/2 sliders instead, they are fits more, because of strong vocal on white ticks and that feels weird that you follow in priority vocal 00:32:726 - here then follow instrumental here 00:35:550 - but ignoring this 00:35:373 - sound, same here 00:46:138 (7) - - that's because I'm starting 1/1 at downbeats. I'll consider it.
00:36:962 (5) - NC, new part
00:42:609 (5) - ^
00:48:256 (5) - ^ - okay
Hard
00:31:315 (1) - hard to see this circle under this 4 sliders, I could suggest you unstack it - changed
01:05:726 (2,3,4) - may be stack them? confusing spacing imo, you use jump for 1/2 and stacking - changed a bit
01:28:138 (1,2) - copy 01:28:844 (4,5) - paste please xd - not necessary I think
Lift's Insane
Good dif
Second Beat
00:07:167 - ctrl+c 01:06:609 - ctrl+v ctrl+h =w=b
this half screen jumps dont fits for spread of difs imo... after insane they are too big
00:01:839 (3,4) - uncomfortable to play something like this should be better imo - umm.. no
00:05:746 - I think this is still should be soft part - no cuz at this diff i'm using continuos 1/2s.
00:14:094 (2) - ctrl+g please - okay
00:16:936 (2) - ^ - okay
00:31:844 (2,1) - stack please - stacking this feels awkward imo
00:36:962 (1,2) - uncomfotable jump imo, this plays better imo - it's intended to be uncomfortable so keeping
00:42:785 (2) - I am not sure, but try ctrl+g and restack circle - okay with slider end also 00:43:138 (3,4) - ctrl+g - not this
00:48:256 (1,2) - place them in double too - it's refering to the huitar sound
00:56:020 (3,4) - thats not looks like 1/2 - umm wut
for 2nd kiai there should be similar suggestions as before - done
Thats it from me.
Good luck!

Thanks for modding! will do yours within 24 hours

Dereku

98 posts

Joined May 2013

Dereku 2017-02-10T17:11:20+00:00

SLM wrote:
Thanks! but I'm sure that +25 is pretty accurate,
Are you sure with +4?

You can check it itself in game. Just play your Second Beat diff with that offsets.

SLM

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SLM 2017-02-11T03:29:56+00:00

checked with both +25 and +4, +4 sounds more off-beat to me tho.
did you re download the mp3?

Pachiru

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Pachiru 2017-02-18T02:32:49+00:00

#whenranked?

Chalwa

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Chalwa 2017-02-19T11:53:21+00:00

Hello. From queue.
[General]

Fine.

[Easy]

00:41:903 (2) - I think after smooth part wirth curve sliders before this straight really doesn't fit here, so better thing which you can make here copy 00:39:785 (3) slider, make Ctrl + J. Now it looks nicer i think.

[Normal]

00:16:581 (3) - You skipped here very important beat 00:16:759 - here, which is a bit weird, because i can hear this sound is stronger than 00:16:581 -. You can make here circle on 00:16:581 - and then put 1/2 slider. Now it sounds better.

[Hard]

00:35:550 (1) - In my opinion you should to Ctrl + G this slider, cause it will be more consistency with 00:34:844 (3,4) pattern and i think 00:35:550 (1,2) jump is close enough and nice to aim.
00:50:373 (4) - What do you think about make this slider parallel with 00:49:667 (1)? I think it looks more aesthetics, cause now 00:50:373 (4) slider is a bit randomely to be honest.

Sorry for shitty mod, take my star.
Very nice map, i hope it will get ranked...
GOOD LUCK!!!

SLM

462 posts

Joined February 2015

Topic Starter

SLM 2017-02-19T18:06:12+00:00

Chalwa wrote:
Hello. From queue.
[General]
Fine.
[Easy]
00:41:903 (2) - I think after smooth part wirth curve sliders before this straight really doesn't fit here, so better thing which you can make here copy 00:39:785 (3) slider, make Ctrl + J. Now it looks nicer i think. - hmm okay
[Normal]
00:16:581 (3) - You skipped here very important beat 00:16:759 - here, which is a bit weird, because i can hear this sound is stronger than 00:16:581 -. You can make here circle on 00:16:581 - and then put 1/2 slider. Now it sounds better. - Actually there are lots of other 1/1 sliders skipping the drum snare, probably not gonna change but I might have to think about this more.
[Hard]
00:35:550 (1) - In my opinion you should to Ctrl + G this slider, cause it will be more consistency with 00:34:844 (3,4) pattern and i think 00:35:550 (1,2) jump is close enough and nice to aim. - nice suggestion but the current one plays pretty well also so keeping it.
00:50:373 (4) - What do you think about make this slider parallel with 00:49:667 (1)? I think it looks more aesthetics, cause now 00:50:373 (4) slider is a bit randomely to be honest. - sure
Sorry for shitty mod, take my star.
Very nice map, i hope it will get ranked...
GOOD LUCK!!!

Thanks for modding!!

Pachiru wrote:
#whenranked?

c:

Akitoshi

2,687 posts

Joined August 2014

Akitoshi 2017-02-24T04:22:45+00:00

a

Normal

00:28:482 (1) - uhm why spinner while the instruments are still not that calm yet? Even your Easy was mapped on this part. Maybe keeping consistency on lower diff would be great here i guess
00:32:726 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 00:35:550 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 00:40:667 (5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 1/2 beat chains are way too long as Normal, I recommend you to make some 1/1 gap here because they are actually harder than your kiai sections tbh
01:27:785 (1) - same as first one

Hard

00:31:315 (1,2) - I would like to swap NC for the switching rhythm, as the different instrument starts on 00:31:844 -

Second Beat

00:08:411 (3) - I suggest to make this rounded slider downward instead for the flow with 00:08:766 (1) - , like blanketing the 00:09:121 (3) - maybe raise the sliderhead upward so ur tail won't go offscreen
yep this isn't offscreen yet
00:25:462 (3) - 01:07:844 (3) - 01:24:785 (3) - same ^
00:27:416 (3,3) - this overlaps looks kinda off atm since they're both visible, maybe at least make sth parallel with those sliders
01:26:726 (3,3) - ^

nice map, but am I the only one who feels copy-pasted on some part??? Maybe BN's don't approve with that copypaste method so ye

https://osu.ppy.sh/s/506291 pls mod only 1 diff as my mod is very short
gl and have a star~

SLM

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Topic Starter

SLM 2017-02-24T11:22:33+00:00

Akitoshi wrote:
a

Normal
00:28:482 (1) - uhm why spinner while the instruments are still not that calm yet? Even your Easy was mapped on this part. Maybe keeping consistency on lower diff would be great here i guess - fixed
00:32:726 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 00:35:550 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 00:40:667 (5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 1/2 beat chains are way too long as Normal, I recommend you to make some 1/1 gap here because they are actually harder than your kiai sections tbh - I don't think it should be a problem, but changed slightly anyway
01:27:785 (1) - same as first one - fixed
Hard
00:31:315 (1,2) - I would like to swap NC for the switching rhythm, as the different instrument starts on 00:31:844 - - no cuz I want follow points to appear towards (2).
Second Beat
00:08:411 (3) - I suggest to make this rounded slider downward instead for the flow with 00:08:766 (1) - , like blanketing the 00:09:121 (3) - maybe raise the sliderhead upward so ur tail won't go offscreen - I kinda intended this flow, soooo
yep this isn't offscreen yet
00:25:462 (3) - 01:07:844 (3) - 01:24:785 (3) - same ^
00:27:416 (3,3) - this overlaps looks kinda off atm since they're both visible, maybe at least make sth parallel with those sliders - okay
01:26:726 (3,3) - ^ - fixed
nice map, but am I the only one who feels copy-pasted on some part??? Maybe BN's don't approve with that copypaste method so ye

https://osu.ppy.sh/s/506291 pls mod only 1 diff as my mod is very short
gl and have a star~

Thank you ~~corinn!!~~

Since lots of ppl are saying this,

About copy paste :
Actually when I mapped this first, I mapped both kiais differently. But cuz of the current repetitive pattern with bisymmetrical half cross screen jumps, I strongly felt 2nd kiai is really off with the map's pattern concept and doesn't balance well with 1st, so I concluded pasting is much better than having a different kiai.
After that I got lots of mods complaining about the paste, so I tried several times to map 2nd kiai but I don't think any of them suited better than the current one.
My thought about this is, It might trigger some mappers when looking through the editor, but it's actually better when it comes to playing the map.

Left

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Joined October 2014

Left 2017-02-24T11:50:26+00:00

WISPG_G wrote:
hi, m4m from your queue

Lift's Insane
Good dif

heyyyyyy who's LIFT

SLM

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Topic Starter

SLM 2017-02-24T12:30:55+00:00

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Pachiru

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Pachiru 2017-02-25T23:56:30+00:00

Hey SLM!

Sorry for coming back, I have some suggestions to give you for Second beat. I read your small text about why you copypasted the stuff in the Second beat. I agree with what you saying, but I think that I can give you an suggestion that could clear this problem, and it's not that hard to fix that.
There is a solution to that:

• Change the angle of your Kiai part. Like something 90° or you could do something like Monstrata did with his Mitsuha and Taki's diff. Even if it's still the same patterns, that would give an new interesting view.

I know that you don't want to change this. But I think that just inverting the first Kiai is not enough to give a diversity into both Kiai, I think it can be more than that, but to keep a... "similarity", you can keep the same pattern style. I think the only thing that could be a problem here is the placements of the notes.

Good luck with it bro

And please, rank it, because I want to have a Ranked score on it !

SLM

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Topic Starter

SLM 2017-02-26T05:35:30+00:00

@Pachiru
Thank you!
Not gonna 90° the whole section but I got the idea! ~~Thank mr monstata~~
I'll probably try some little variations at kiai.
Again, Huge thanks for the inspiration!! <3<3

I would like to give kds for that if u want btw

Edit : Changed slightly, but hopefullly it should be enough imo

Beomsan

Beatmap Nominator

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Beomsan 2017-02-27T02:02:16+00:00

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SLM

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SLM 2017-02-27T02:09:18+00:00

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m3대신 me치면 원곡이나오긴 하네요

UndeadCapulet

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Joined April 2013

UndeadCapulet 2017-02-27T02:45:30+00:00

irc

017-02-26 20:13 SLM: ACTION is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1168441 kyubae - begging m3]
2017-02-26 20:13 UndeadCapulet: ah same one, alright
2017-02-26 20:15 UndeadCapulet: lol arent these just default combocolours but without red?
2017-02-26 20:15 SLM: yep
2017-02-26 20:15 UndeadCapulet: that's silly

2017-02-26 20:15 UndeadCapulet: i guess it fits w/ your bg tho lol
2017-02-26 20:16 SLM: lol ikr
2017-02-26 20:17 UndeadCapulet: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1168441 kyubae - begging m3 [Second Beat]]
2017-02-26 20:17 UndeadCapulet: 00:03:615 (4) - probably nc here to fit with vocals better?
2017-02-26 20:17 UndeadCapulet: and then maybe remove 00:02:904 (1) - nc
2017-02-26 20:17 SLM: hmmm okay
2017-02-26 20:18 SLM: yeah it looks better
2017-02-26 20:19 UndeadCapulet: i feel like putting a 1/2 slider at places like 00:09:654 (6) - and 01:09:079 (6) - works better than the 1/1 gaps
2017-02-26 20:19 UndeadCapulet: it fits with the rhythm you use at 01:27:609 (3) -
2017-02-26 20:22 SLM: hmm but drum here 01:27:785 - is pretty strong compared to 00:09:832 - or 01:09:256 -
2017-02-26 20:22 UndeadCapulet: ah true
2017-02-26 20:22 UndeadCapulet: though 00:09:832 - also has a vocal beat to it
2017-02-26 20:22 SLM: and I want different rhythm with 01:07:844 (3) - 00:08:411 (3) -
2017-02-26 20:23 SLM: cuz they sound like meeeeee
2017-02-26 20:23 UndeadCapulet: haha sure
2017-02-26 20:23 UndeadCapulet: maybe put a circle then? because there is a vocal beat there, singer says "the" both times
2017-02-26 20:25 SLM: hmmmmmm I still think 1/1 gap is better than a circle tho
2017-02-26 20:25 UndeadCapulet: hmm ok
2017-02-26 20:26 UndeadCapulet: im not really sure why the spacing at 00:20:134 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - is so much bigger than 00:22:975 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) -
2017-02-26 20:26 UndeadCapulet: 00:17:469 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - worked well because the spacing was building into the new verse
2017-02-26 20:27 UndeadCapulet: but 00:22:975 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - is kinda just
2017-02-26 20:27 UndeadCapulet: small
2017-02-26 20:28 SLM: yeah true, might have to fix it
2017-02-26 20:28 UndeadCapulet: same thing at 01:22:314 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ~
2017-02-26 20:29 UndeadCapulet: everything else seems fine to me, cool usage of spacing to work with vocals and stuff :3
2017-02-26 20:29 SLM: Yep. Thanks c:
2017-02-26 20:31 UndeadCapulet: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1169545 kyubae - begging m3 [Hard]]
2017-02-26 20:32 UndeadCapulet: surprised that 00:25:107 (3,4) - is stacked when in the higher diff this was much more intense in spacing than 00:27:061 (1,2,3) -
2017-02-26 20:33 UndeadCapulet: it's fine to do different things in different diffs, i just wanna make sure you're intentions are coming through properly
2017-02-26 20:35 SLM: yeah it's intended to be stacked cuz 00:25:107 (3,4) - the vocal's pitch is same.
2017-02-26 20:35 UndeadCapulet: alright cool
2017-02-26 20:36 UndeadCapulet: everything else seems fine lol
2017-02-26 20:37 SLM: lol okay c:
2017-02-26 20:37 UndeadCapulet: 00:03:615 (1,2) - looks a bit like 1/2, but not too bad
2017-02-26 20:37 SLM: oh true
2017-02-26 20:39 UndeadCapulet: oh yeah actually 00:01:483 (2,3,1) - are all the same spacing which is kinda awkward in a hard ^^'
2017-02-26 20:40 SLM: yeah but i think it should be fine cuz it's intro.
2017-02-26 20:40 UndeadCapulet: right
2017-02-26 20:41 UndeadCapulet: (im stretching at this point cuz this set is small and needs bn checks more than actual mods)
2017-02-26 20:42 UndeadCapulet: lower diffs are fine
2017-02-26 20:42 UndeadCapulet: sorry for short modding, but its a small set >.<'
2017-02-26 20:43 SLM: Yeah it's fine xD Thank you!
2017-02-26 20:44 UndeadCapulet: np :3

Pachiru

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Pachiru 2017-03-12T00:21:07+00:00

By the way, can we have a confirmation of the metadata or else? Because I can't find the song on YouTube or anywhere else, and I really want to have some informations about the song if you have! o:

SLM

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Topic Starter

SLM 2017-03-12T05:51:14+00:00

Yeah, I couldn't find the song other than soundcloud either.
Anyway here's the soundcloud link :
https://soundcloud.com/kyubae/begging-m3

polka

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polka 2017-03-21T06:14:29+00:00

[

General:]

I HAVE THIS SONG JAMMED IN MY HEAD OMFG
I can't hear your custom samples at all.
I wish you would have used some custom colors. I feel these defaulty ones kind of take away from the personalization of the map.

[

Easy:]

This is one intense easy mode haha.
00:18:535 - Your patterns get very repetitive here. Try to vary it up! Beginners can get bored, too! Happens in the second chorus too!

[

Normal:]

00:03:615 (2) - Not sure your audience will know how to play this. Maybe try http://imgur.com/a/Nb9DV
Your chorus is very confusing. Are you mapping to the background music or vocals? You can't keep switching because it makes things very confusing for your audience, as they don't know what they are supposed to be paying attention to.
00:14:272 (4,5,6,7) - Too hard. Simplify this down. I would dump 00:14:983 (6) - for a circle at 00:15:160 - to keep following the music.
[list:1337]There are numerous things like this where 1/2 strings are just way too long for your target audience to understand. Think of normal as 1/1 mapping with an introduction to 1/2 patterns as opposed to what's happening here: 1/2 mapping with an introduction to 1/1 patterns.

00:17:114 (4) - If you're going to map vocals here, delete this.

00:22:798 (4) - ^

00:42:256 (4) - 1/2 slider here?

00:47:903 (4) - ^
00:53:550 (4) - ^

01:06:609 (1) - Don't copy and paste!! It's a minute long song! Be creative and map your second chorus! Never take the lazy way out, as it detracts from the quality. Now that I look, it also happens in your other difficulties. PLEASE redo this and map the full song! Your audience will really appreciate it.[

Hard:]

00:25:107 (3,4,1) - This overlap is really confusing. Move (1) somewhere else. Perhaps up?
[list:1337]00:48:962 (3,1) - Also confusing here. please try something else.

00:32:726 - Why so many useless inherited points? You didn't change anything?
01:05:373 (1,2) - Stack. This spacing will mess up your audience.[

Afteword:]

Please please please please PLEASE Don't copy and paste! Especially since the song is a minute long. If you're not going to do you best in anything you do, why do it?

SLM

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SLM 2017-03-21T11:11:39+00:00

PolkaMocha

PolkaMocha wrote:

[General:]
I HAVE THIS SONG JAMMED IN MY HEAD OMFG - CALCULATED
I can't hear your custom samples at all. - To me it's audible, It's probably cuz of the default normal sampleset, but I prefer using as it is.
I wish you would have used some custom colors. I feel these defaulty ones kind of take away from the personalization of the map. - ^ I like default ones as I said, so probably not changing this
[Easy:]
This is one intense easy mode haha.
00:18:535 - Your patterns get very repetitive here. Try to vary it up! Beginners can get bored, too! Happens in the second chorus too! - but I don't want to change the current flow going to the top right corner and reversing.
[Normal:]
00:03:615 (2) - Not sure your audience will know how to play this. Maybe try http://imgur.com/a/Nb9DV - changed a bit
Your chorus is very confusing. Are you mapping to the background music or vocals? You can't keep switching because it makes things very confusing for your audience, as they don't know what they are supposed to be paying attention to. - I switched between them what I think is more important at that part. I think it's not that confusing, since the rhythm is quite repetitive with little variations.
00:14:272 (4,5,6,7) - Too hard. Simplify this down. I would dump 00:14:983 (6) - for a circle at 00:15:160 - to keep following the music.
[list:1337]There are numerous things like this where 1/2 strings are just way too long for your target audience to understand. Think of normal as 1/1 mapping with an introduction to 1/2 patterns as opposed to what's happening here: 1/2 mapping with an introduction to 1/1 patterns.
- Since the Easy is kinda "hard" Easy, this long chain of 1/2s should be fine imo.
00:17:114 (4) - If you're going to map vocals here, delete this. - but imo the drum's too strong to just skip.
00:22:798 (4) - ^
00:42:256 (4) - 1/2 slider here? - Okay
00:47:903 (4) - ^ - kk
00:53:550 (4) - ^ - ^
01:06:609 (1) - Don't copy and paste!! It's a minute long song! Be creative and map your second chorus! Never take the lazy way out, as it detracts from the quality. Now that I look, it also happens in your other difficulties. PLEASE redo this and map the full song! Your audience will really appreciate it. - yep[Hard:]
00:25:107 (3,4,1) - This overlap is really confusing. Move (1) somewhere else. Perhaps up? - Hmm sure
[list:1337]00:48:962 (3,1) - Also confusing here. please try something else. - I think it should be ok since it's a slider.
00:32:726 - Why so many useless inherited points? You didn't change anything? - Fixed
01:05:373 (1,2) - Stack. This spacing will mess up your audience. - Hmm but I think stacking will be more confusing cuz of the 1/2 stack right before this. Probably will change this in other way.[Afteword:]
Please please please please PLEASE Don't copy and paste! Especially since the song is a minute long. If you're not going to do you best in anything you do, why do it? - Yep. Right now I'm remapping the 99% of the last diff (this really drains my hp ;-;) & partially for other diffs. Will update your mods with them.

Thanks for modding!!

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