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Thanks for modding!AyanokoRin wrote:
Hey there, from M4M qEasy00:33:407 (2,3) - same thing as below with the slider shape contradicting (3)’s placement - some flow change should work fine since it's on a downbeat
01:00:937 (1,2,3,4) - why did you stop using red slider anchors ? It’s the same part of the music - it's for some variety, also it's a new phase
Same as the extra, the second kiai is pretty much the first but with ctrl+h so everything I said in there works for that part as wellNormal00:04:833 (1) - not obligatory but I’d personally put a circle there and start the spinner afterwards - i think current one works better for diff-spread wise issue.
00:12:293 (5,6) - 00:12:649 seems of same importance as the 2 previous ticks so I don’t understand that slider rhythm-wise - I did like this cause of the vocal 00:12:293 (5) - 'oh' 00:12:471 (6) - 'baby'
00:17:267 (5,6) - same thing with slider shapes and flow - it's intended to have unnatural flow here.
00:28:457 (1,1) - not a bad idea. However, I don’t know if this is possible in a normal considering players might be surprised by a second spinner - yeah.. gonna ask about this very soon
01:02:878 (5,6) - I just thought about it but it’s also applicable to other 1/2 stacks earlier in the map ; I’m not sure this is rankable for a normal ? I recall there being a page somewhere with the rules per difficulty tier but I just can’t find it so yeah I’d ask a BN/QAT for confirmation
- you mean this? t/517731 it is fine to use stacksStacks are acceptable, but avoid switching between 1/1 and 1/2 stacks repeatedly.Again since the 2nd kiai is just 1st one but ctrl+h it would be a waste of time to talk about it since I’d be repeating myself. Do consider really mapping it though.Second Beatoverall there’s very few difference between spacings in kiais vs non-kiais, and this leads to not having a feeling of intensity when playing the kiai ( while there should be ). Might wanna either nerf the non-kiai or buff kiais, up to you. - imo it has enough spacing difference between them. At kiai, almost every notes are spaced about 6 follow points (even more at sliders) while at non-kiai, maybe around 40%?(I don't know exactly cause I didn't count lo) of them are spaced 5 follow points, only few are spaced 6 follow points and rest are spaced less.
00:01:103 (1) - I’m not fond of starting somewhere else than a downbeat, especially when the music starts later ( at 00:01:458 (2) ). Technically not wrong, so up to you whether you delete that or not. - umm yeah I think current one works better than starting at downbeat, since i'm mainly focusing on lyrics at this diff.
00:09:807 - I don’t understand why this is empty ? It just breaks the rhythm for no reason - ^ as I said above, it's because I'm focusing on the vocals. (especially more at kiai)
00:10:872 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - rather underwhelming ; don’t be afraid of doing 1/2/1/2 lines ( example ) - ^ I did like this to refer to the vocal
00:15:313 (6,7,1) - rip flow - changed a bit
00:50:348 (5,6) - why stack when the rest of the pattern is jumps and it’s the same sound ? - cuz 00:50:348 (5) - and 00:50:525 (6) - 's pitch is same, 00:50:701 (7) - 's pitch is different.
00:52:819 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - straight lines flow horribly at this spacing because snapping and then going in the same direction is really awkward. - okay, will change when I get some idea
00:56:701 (1,2) - flows weirdly as well. I know there’s slider leniency and stuff, but aesthetically speaking it’s not the best option ( ideally you want your circles to kind of follow the slider shape, I suggest you take a look at Pishifat’s video on slider flow for better explanation ) - imo not every notes have to be natural flow, I intended uncomfortable flow here, also I've watched pishi's video as well.
01:03:584 (6) - red ticks sliders aren’t ideal, especially when they leave the downbeat ( big white tick ) non clickable with a sound on it ( here, guitar ). Try 2 circles instead of slider ? - as I said above, I'm mainly following the vocal and vocal 01:03:760 - here is pretty weak.
Not much to say about second kiai since it’s just the 1st one with ctrl+h so yeah same mistakes in there as in the beginning I guess - yeah I always check both at once when I'm applying mods lo
There we go, overall I noticed a lot of consistency mistakes, so look out for that.
also map your 2nd kiai - think it works fine.also I'm too lazy ;-;
Good luck with the rest of your mapping :>
thx for mod~AyanokoRin wrote:
Hey there, from M4M q
=Left’s Insane=00:45:231 (4,1) - this flows very badly very nice i think 00:52:466 (1,2,3,4,5) - I don’t understand the difference in this pattern and 00:35:525 (1,2,3,4,5) ? The music doesn’t change, so the map shouldn’t change as well my free to use another slider,circle use in same rhythm
00:47:878 (6,3) - overlap u can't notice it while playing
00:48:760 (3,4) - The placement of 00:49:289 (4) is contradictory to what 00:48:760 (3) ‘s shape implies ; you’d want (4) somewhere under (3) don't have to
00:59:525 - leaving a downbeat ( big white tick ) like this while there’s a sound on it is awkward, plus starting a slider on a red tick is weird rhythm-wise, try 2 circles mapping skill
01:00:937 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3) - why such a big burst of singletaps ? just circle pattern.
01:22:819 (1,2,3,4) - underwhelming, ctrl+g (3) and (4) ( especially considering you did this at 01:25:642 (1,2,3,4) so it gets consistent that way )k ill consider it
Good luck with the rest of your mapping :>
h4d0uk3n1 wrote:
Hi, small random mod, hope you don't mind.
green - just a suggestion
yellow? - not sure
orange - this could be better, i think
red - i totally don't like it
Cute song c:
Second beat
- 00:08:386 (3) - i wouldn't make this so fast, it doesn't emphasize anything - lowered sv a bit
00:25:437 (3) - ^ (it applies to all next similar sliders) - ^- 00:29:167 (1) - no NC - it's for better readability
- 00:31:819 (2,1) - 2 reverse arrows are almost impossible to predict for player, so I would change this to 1 circle and two 1/2 sliders - they're fine at higher diffs.
- 01:03:584 (6) - i don't think slider fit there.. And jumping section should start here 01:03:760 - - it's because the vocal at there is weak so I made it sliderend.
- 01:06:231 (4,5) - would make another slider instead of 2 circles, cause there is second repetitive sound
- 01:31:113 - 01:31:289 - 01:31:466 - 01:31:642 - 01:31:819 - why not make objects here? :3 - cuz that's the end of the map
- changings of SV throughout the whole difficulty are pretty random, i would try to organize them according to the sounds
- um, is the second kiai section is just a ctrl+c ctrl+v ctrl+h of the first one? - why not? the music is totally same so imo copying gives more logic
Thanks for modding! and the stars(wut)!PhantomHunt3r wrote:
hello, a m4m from your queue. plz don't disregard me ;w; - lol why would I?EasyI'm not really good at modding things below 2* sooooooo-
00:18:535 (1) - try avoiding kick sliders, it will interrupt the flow with the new players, kick sliders normally come in Hard try replacing with something like this: https://puu.sh/tGU1g/4be53128c6.png - umm it's not a kickslider tho
00:27:061 (1) - here is the same thing as above but this slider makes no sense, put the end here 00:27:416 and place a note one tick to the right and keep a note here 00:28:126 - it is for simplifying the rhythm at the end of the kiai.
01:15:432 (2) - change this into this, and make it flow able, I just threw this together https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7190928 - I think no
like I said, I suck at modding anything below 2* ;w; sorry if this was no help - no problem! I still appreciate it.Normal00:28:482 (1,1) - I don't see the point of these two spinners, this sounds like on fluent motion into the next beat - idk well about this, might change in the future.
00:35:373 - there is a beat here, maybe note? - nop cuz the vocal ended
00:54:609 (7) - maybe place a slider here that ends 00:54:962 maybe? - nop
00:58:667 - there needs to be a note here, pretty major beat, try shoving the slider back a tick and making it longer - no cuz of the vocal
01:05:020 (4) - I think there needs to be a spinner here, sounds like there is one and it should end 01:06:256 maybe? - no cuz the recovery time is not enough for a Normal
a little tip, on the second kiai, try using more of the middle. I noticed you use the edges more then the middle. just a tip, you don't have to so itHard00:25:107 (3,4,5,1) - this seems hard to read for people I sure didn't notice the three notes if it wasn't for the approach circles - think it's fine cuz there is auto stack doing work
00:25:107 (3,4,5,1) - try flipping these around to fit flow into the note after it - the flow is ok i think,
01:05:903 (3,4) - this sounds like a repeat slider (basically connect the two sliders) - umm no cuz i don't want to use 2 times repeating slider at Hard diff
01:12:962 - I know this is over mapping, but look into a note here, it would make it flow a little better - if I put a note here it will break the concept with other parts.
01:24:432 (3,4,5,1) - same thing as the first mod of this difficulty, its hard to read
01:29:197 (1,2,3,4,1) - maybe make these into a slider? - umm... nosecond beatfirst thing I noticed, I didn't find any correlation to the main song, just pointing that out. I may be wrong though
00:01:128 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - remap this, I don't know why it is so hard for me to grasp it into words but it bugs me that this is here - I don't see any problem?
00:07:167 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6) - to much emphasis here buddy, calm the spacing down plz - it's fine imo
00:25:107 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2) - ^
00:48:432 (2,3,4,5,6) - try spacing these out into a triangle and a slider or a star it doesn't "fit in" - it is referring to the guitar sound
00:51:609 (3) - no overlaps please - it's an intended overlap so..
01:07:491 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6) - try using a different pattern, the same thing 5 times in a setting makes it predictable and easy, try doing something different, look at airman for example. they used different patterns of the same shape... probably because it was BlueDragons and Ztrot's BUT you know what I mean - okay, I'll consider it.
01:06:609 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,1,2) - do I smell some copy paste? - yes
overall its a good map, some kinks you could work out but it has much potential
Hello, overall its a good map set, Good Luck in the future with your map Sorry I didn't apply much, but thank you!
Santtu wrote:
Hi! M4M from your queue
Please mod this: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/474417General
- All difficulties are really decent. Almost found nothing to mention! Just minor things ☆~
Easy
- If you wanted to, you could stack 01:00:962 (1,4) - - sure. fixed
Normal
- 00:56:726 (4) - Blanket would be improved a bit. - fixed
Hard
- 01:19:138 (4,1) - To my mind, since you don't make this kind of jump anywhere else, this is bit random. Maybe you could just keep 1,3x. - true, but since I used opposite going flow at 01:17:903 (1,2,3,4) - and 01:19:138 (4) - 's head is close to 01:19:491 (1) - , think it's fine as it is.
Second Beat
- 00:09:832 - I don't come up with any reason to leave this empty since there is a vocal sound and melody. - at this diff I'm trying to refer to the vocal as much as possible, and the vocal is very weak here (I didn't even notice that here has a vocal before I searched for the lyrics). But maybe I'll change this in the future.
- 01:09:256 - ^
Good luck!!!!
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Thanks! but I'm sure that +25 is pretty accurate,Dereku wrote:
+4.SLM wrote:
mp3 changed; offset +25
Offset: All -21
EasyThats it from me.Normal
- what about set slider tick rate on 2, to emphasize some sounds on red ticks for example 00:08:766 - 00:10:897 - and etc
- 00:04:325 (1) - should it be soft slider end?
- 01:03:785 (1,2) - what about make spinner instead which ends here 01:05:020 - to emphasize this sound?
- 00:48:256 (4,5) - this moment sounds special and I dont like fact that you ignored this 00:48:785 - sound, may be try this reverse slider?
Hard
- 00:34:844 (7) - make please two 1/2 sliders instead, they are fits more, because of strong vocal on white ticks and that feels weird that you follow in priority vocal 00:32:726 - here then follow instrumental here 00:35:550 - but ignoring this 00:35:373 - sound, same here 00:46:138 (7) -
- 00:36:962 (5) - NC, new part
- 00:42:609 (5) - ^
- 00:48:256 (5) - ^
Lift's Insane
- 00:31:315 (1) - hard to see this circle under this 4 sliders, I could suggest you unstack it
- 01:05:726 (2,3,4) - may be stack them? confusing spacing imo, you use jump for 1/2 and stacking
- 01:28:138 (1,2) - copy 01:28:844 (4,5) - paste please xd
Second Beat
- Good dif
- 00:07:167 - ctrl+c 01:06:609 - ctrl+v ctrl+h =w=b
- this half screen jumps dont fits for spread of difs imo... after insane they are too big
- 00:01:839 (3,4) - uncomfortable to play something like this should be better imo
- 00:05:746 - I think this is still should be soft part
- 00:14:094 (2) - ctrl+g please
- 00:16:936 (2) - ^
- 00:31:844 (2,1) - stack please
- 00:36:962 (1,2) - uncomfotable jump imo, this plays better imo
- 00:42:785 (2) - I am not sure, but try ctrl+g and restack circle with slider end also 00:43:138 (3,4) - ctrl+g
- 00:48:256 (1,2) - place them in double too
- 00:56:020 (3,4) - thats not looks like 1/2
- for 2nd kiai there should be similar suggestions as before
WISPG_G wrote:
hi, m4m from your queueEasyThats it from me.Normal
- what about set slider tick rate on 2, to emphasize some sounds on red ticks for example 00:08:766 - 00:10:897 - and etc - nice, but i think 1 is better.
- 00:04:325 (1) - should it be soft slider end? - fixed
- 01:03:785 (1,2) - what about make spinner instead which ends here 01:05:020 - to emphasize this sound? - that's too short imo
- 00:48:256 (4,5) - this moment sounds special and I dont like fact that you ignored this 00:48:785 - sound, may be try - umm no, I think current straight forward rhythm is better, & consistency with other parts.this reverse slider?
Hard
- 00:34:844 (7) - make please two 1/2 sliders instead, they are fits more, because of strong vocal on white ticks and that feels weird that you follow in priority vocal 00:32:726 - here then follow instrumental here 00:35:550 - but ignoring this 00:35:373 - sound, same here 00:46:138 (7) - - that's because I'm starting 1/1 at downbeats. I'll consider it.
- 00:36:962 (5) - NC, new part
- 00:42:609 (5) - ^
- 00:48:256 (5) - ^ - okay
Lift's Insane
- 00:31:315 (1) - hard to see this circle under this 4 sliders, I could suggest you unstack it - changed
- 01:05:726 (2,3,4) - may be stack them? confusing spacing imo, you use jump for 1/2 and stacking - changed a bit
- 01:28:138 (1,2) - copy 01:28:844 (4,5) - paste please xd - not necessary I think
Second Beat
- Good dif
- 00:07:167 - ctrl+c 01:06:609 - ctrl+v ctrl+h =w=b
- this half screen jumps dont fits for spread of difs imo... after insane they are too big
- 00:01:839 (3,4) - uncomfortable to play something like this should be better imo - umm.. no
- 00:05:746 - I think this is still should be soft part - no cuz at this diff i'm using continuos 1/2s.
- 00:14:094 (2) - ctrl+g please - okay
- 00:16:936 (2) - ^ - okay
- 00:31:844 (2,1) - stack please - stacking this feels awkward imo
- 00:36:962 (1,2) - uncomfotable jump imo, this plays better imo - it's intended to be uncomfortable so keeping
- 00:42:785 (2) - I am not sure, but try ctrl+g and restack circle - okay with slider end also 00:43:138 (3,4) - ctrl+g - not this
- 00:48:256 (1,2) - place them in double too - it's refering to the huitar sound
- 00:56:020 (3,4) - thats not looks like 1/2 - umm wut
- for 2nd kiai there should be similar suggestions as before - done
Good luck!
You can check it itself in game. Just play your Second Beat diff with that offsets.SLM wrote:
Thanks! but I'm sure that +25 is pretty accurate,
Are you sure with +4?
Thanks for modding!!Chalwa wrote:
Hello. From queue.
[General][Easy]
- Fine.
[Normal]
- 00:41:903 (2) - I think after smooth part wirth curve sliders before this straight really doesn't fit here, so better thing which you can make here copy 00:39:785 (3) slider, make Ctrl + J. Now it looks nicer i think. - hmm okay
[Hard]
- 00:16:581 (3) - You skipped here very important beat 00:16:759 - here, which is a bit weird, because i can hear this sound is stronger than 00:16:581 -. You can make here circle on 00:16:581 - and then put 1/2 slider. Now it sounds better. - Actually there are lots of other 1/1 sliders skipping the drum snare, probably not gonna change but I might have to think about this more.
Sorry for shitty mod, take my star.
- 00:35:550 (1) - In my opinion you should to Ctrl + G this slider, cause it will be more consistency with 00:34:844 (3,4) pattern and i think 00:35:550 (1,2) jump is close enough and nice to aim. - nice suggestion but the current one plays pretty well also so keeping it.
- 00:50:373 (4) - What do you think about make this slider parallel with 00:49:667 (1)? I think it looks more aesthetics, cause now 00:50:373 (4) slider is a bit randomely to be honest. - sure
Very nice map, i hope it will get ranked...
GOOD LUCK!!!
c:Pachiru wrote:
#whenranked?
Thank youAkitoshi wrote:
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NormalHard
- 00:28:482 (1) - uhm why spinner while the instruments are still not that calm yet? Even your Easy was mapped on this part. Maybe keeping consistency on lower diff would be great here i guess - fixed
- 00:32:726 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 00:35:550 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 00:40:667 (5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 1/2 beat chains are way too long as Normal, I recommend you to make some 1/1 gap here because they are actually harder than your kiai sections tbh - I don't think it should be a problem, but changed slightly anyway
- 01:27:785 (1) - same as first one - fixed
Second Beat
- 00:31:315 (1,2) - I would like to swap NC for the switching rhythm, as the different instrument starts on 00:31:844 - - no cuz I want follow points to appear towards (2).
nice map, but am I the only one who feels copy-pasted on some part??? Maybe BN's don't approve with that copypaste method so ye
- 00:08:411 (3) - I suggest to make this rounded slider downward instead for the flow with 00:08:766 (1) - , like blanketing the 00:09:121 (3) - maybe raise the sliderhead upward so ur tail won't go offscreen - I kinda intended this flow, soooo
- 00:25:462 (3) - 01:07:844 (3) - 01:24:785 (3) - same ^
- 00:27:416 (3,3) - this overlaps looks kinda off atm since they're both visible, maybe at least make sth parallel with those sliders - okay
- 01:26:726 (3,3) - ^ - fixed
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/506291 pls mod only 1 diff as my mod is very short
gl and have a star~
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- Good dif
PolkaMocha wrote:
[General:][Easy:]
- I HAVE THIS SONG JAMMED IN MY HEAD OMFG - CALCULATED
I can't hear your custom samples at all. - To me it's audible, It's probably cuz of the default normal sampleset, but I prefer using as it is.
I wish you would have used some custom colors. I feel these defaulty ones kind of take away from the personalization of the map. - ^ I like default ones as I said, so probably not changing this[Normal:]
- This is one intense easy mode haha.
00:18:535 - Your patterns get very repetitive here. Try to vary it up! Beginners can get bored, too! Happens in the second chorus too! - but I don't want to change the current flow going to the top right corner and reversing.00:17:114 (4) - If you're going to map vocals here, delete this. - but imo the drum's too strong to just skip.
- 00:03:615 (2) - Not sure your audience will know how to play this. Maybe try http://imgur.com/a/Nb9DV - changed a bit
Your chorus is very confusing. Are you mapping to the background music or vocals? You can't keep switching because it makes things very confusing for your audience, as they don't know what they are supposed to be paying attention to. - I switched between them what I think is more important at that part. I think it's not that confusing, since the rhythm is quite repetitive with little variations.
00:14:272 (4,5,6,7) - Too hard. Simplify this down. I would dump 00:14:983 (6) - for a circle at 00:15:160 - to keep following the music.
[list:1337]There are numerous things like this where 1/2 strings are just way too long for your target audience to understand. Think of normal as 1/1 mapping with an introduction to 1/2 patterns as opposed to what's happening here: 1/2 mapping with an introduction to 1/1 patterns.
- Since the Easy is kinda "hard" Easy, this long chain of 1/2s should be fine imo.00:42:256 (4) - 1/2 slider here? - Okay
- 00:22:798 (4) - ^
01:06:609 (1) - Don't copy and paste!! It's a minute long song! Be creative and map your second chorus! Never take the lazy way out, as it detracts from the quality. Now that I look, it also happens in your other difficulties. PLEASE redo this and map the full song! Your audience will really appreciate it. - yep[Hard:]
- 00:47:903 (4) - ^ - kk
00:53:550 (4) - ^ - ^00:32:726 - Why so many useless inherited points? You didn't change anything? - Fixed
- 00:25:107 (3,4,1) - This overlap is really confusing. Move (1) somewhere else. Perhaps up? - Hmm sure
[list:1337]00:48:962 (3,1) - Also confusing here. please try something else. - I think it should be ok since it's a slider.
01:05:373 (1,2) - Stack. This spacing will mess up your audience. - Hmm but I think stacking will be more confusing cuz of the 1/2 stack right before this. Probably will change this in other way.[Afteword:]
- Please please please please PLEASE Don't copy and paste! Especially since the song is a minute long. If you're not going to do you best in anything you do, why do it? - Yep. Right now I'm remapping the 99% of the last diff (this really drains my hp ;-;) & partially for other diffs. Will update your mods with them.