From your M4M Queue
Really like the song and the map, good luck ranking it, i expect to eventually see it qualified one day
Alone
00:05:457 (1,1,1) - 3 different slider shapes to represent the same sound, personally i would just stick with the curve that you had on the first one and rotate it 120 degrees every time but if you did it for variation thats fine
00:16:428 (1) - Could probably space this a little more to emphasise it
00:18:828 (3) - maybe go for a normal stack and not a half stack like this as this is the only place in the slow part where this occurs, if it was reoccuring then sure have it for consistency but imo doesnt fit
00:27:400 (1) - Rotate maybe like 25 degrees?
00:30:143 (1,2) - Would highly recommend keeping the same pattern from 00:27:400 (1,2) -
00:41:457 - move up a little bit to fit in the centre of the slider a bit better
00:53:971 (3,4) - Blanketed a little off
01:00:143 (5) - Some players might see this as a 1/4 note into a slider as you used something similar at 00:54:828 (1,2) -
01:40:685 (3) - Might play more comfortably if this was 2 notes like before
01:41:714 (2,3) - i feel the spacing here might be a little too much
01:47:114 (2,3,4) - the slight curve on this feels a little off since you have used mostly straight things throughout the diff
02:19:514 (1) - nc isnt needed
02:25:857 (1,1) - ncs are probs not needed but if for aesthetics then its fine since its consistent across the diff
02:27:400 (3,4) - These sliders are kinda questionable, they are very close to burai sliders which are unrankable, might need to get a nominator or a QAT's opinion on these
03:01:000 (1) - The tail of the slider is ending up too close to the start, seperate it a little
03:03:743 (1) - Might look better if the slider tick is where as least 1 red anchor point is
03:23:971 (1,2) - More spacing away from 03:22:943 (1) - maybe?
03:38:714 (1,2) - These look odd imo
04:00:828 (6) - Not sure i agree with this slider repeat going over such an important sound
04:07:171 (2,3,4) - imo 3 linear notes dont represent the start of a kiai well in the song well
04:31:171 (7,8) - This is very close to the same spacing you use for your 1/4 just a few moments ago, i would suggest adding some spacing
00:16:428 (1) - Could probably space this a little more to emphasise it
00:18:828 (3) - maybe go for a normal stack and not a half stack like this as this is the only place in the slow part where this occurs, if it was reoccuring then sure have it for consistency but imo doesnt fit
00:27:400 (1) - Rotate maybe like 25 degrees?
00:30:143 (1,2) - Would highly recommend keeping the same pattern from 00:27:400 (1,2) -
00:41:457 - move up a little bit to fit in the centre of the slider a bit better
00:53:971 (3,4) - Blanketed a little off
01:00:143 (5) - Some players might see this as a 1/4 note into a slider as you used something similar at 00:54:828 (1,2) -
01:40:685 (3) - Might play more comfortably if this was 2 notes like before
01:41:714 (2,3) - i feel the spacing here might be a little too much
01:47:114 (2,3,4) - the slight curve on this feels a little off since you have used mostly straight things throughout the diff
02:19:514 (1) - nc isnt needed
02:25:857 (1,1) - ncs are probs not needed but if for aesthetics then its fine since its consistent across the diff
02:27:400 (3,4) - These sliders are kinda questionable, they are very close to burai sliders which are unrankable, might need to get a nominator or a QAT's opinion on these
03:01:000 (1) - The tail of the slider is ending up too close to the start, seperate it a little
03:03:743 (1) - Might look better if the slider tick is where as least 1 red anchor point is
03:23:971 (1,2) - More spacing away from 03:22:943 (1) - maybe?
03:38:714 (1,2) - These look odd imo
04:00:828 (6) - Not sure i agree with this slider repeat going over such an important sound
04:07:171 (2,3,4) - imo 3 linear notes dont represent the start of a kiai well in the song well
04:31:171 (7,8) - This is very close to the same spacing you use for your 1/4 just a few moments ago, i would suggest adding some spacing
Really like the song and the map, good luck ranking it, i expect to eventually see it qualified one day