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roastin queue[Storyboard]
01:33:228 - maybe make that little downbeat effect expand outward
from the moon/planet 04:06:828 to 05:12:657 - no spectrum?
All i wanted to say.
[Alone]
map seems to have some weird flow, idk if that's what you're going for.
00:24:657 (1) - should be split into 2 repeating sliders?
00:56:543 (2) - the beat in the music is here at the red tick, maybe shift the slider here and put a circle on the white tick where the slider use to be? Kinda weird to have loud beat on a sliderend.
00:59:285 (3) - loud beat on sliderend again
00:59:628 (4) - Missing out beat on the red tick. Try a 1/2 repeating slider?
01:00:143 (5,1) - maybe stack or not overlapping would look nicer
01:05:114 (2) - ^
01:04:943 - beat here, should put a circle
01:09:057 - ehh I know you're mapping to the echoing sound but there's a loud beat on the red tick here that I would recommmend to not avoid
01:10:085 - sound on red tick sounds louder than the big white tick imo, maybe shift the slider on the red tick and put circle on the big white tick. Try this pattern instead:
https://i.gyazo.com/a2e771701bd0f84c6bd ... a58255.jpg01:30:485 (1,2) - ^ similar issue
04:04:543 (2) - ^
01:23:628 (1) - try rotating 45 degrees clockwise and blanket with 01:22:943 (5) Cleaner flow and bigger spacing to emphasize the new combo
01:29:457 (2) - Loud beat on sliderend again
01:40:085 (1,2,3,4) - the gaps/pauses in the rhythm is really awkward tbh, before you had a regular 1/2 beat but then all of the sudden there are sudden pauses when there's nothing in the music that supports those pauses
01:45:571 (1,2,3) - ^
01:52:685 (2,3) - double feels random, but i guess it works
02:02:628 (3) - y not just 2 circles?
02:15:914 (2,1,2) - sharp angle
02:28:428 (2,3,4,1,2,1,2,1) - weird & awkward pattern to play since it deals with very sharp and very wide angle jumps
02:58:771 (1,2,3) & 02:59:285 (1,2,3) - make these straight triples, looks better
03:19:514 (2) - Should this also be a slider? similar sound as 03:19:943 (1,2,1) -
03:20:943 (1) - Try moving to x89 y105 so that the sliderend of the previous slider perfectly inside the body of this slider. Looks cleaner imo
04:16:513 (2) - Delete. I think I only hear a triple here in the music that starts on the red tick
04:20:628 (2) - ^
04:20:200 (6,7) - That looks like a double, space them out normally
04:22:514 (4) - Delete. I don't hear anything here.
04:23:285 (1) - Why is this a 1/6 slider, It should just be a normal 1/4 slider
04:24:657 (1) - ^
04:26:885 - There's a sound to map
04:27:400 - 04:27:914 - 04:28:428 - Are the one's you want to place the 1/2 slider on (listening to the electric sound) so 04:27:743 (2,3) - should be swapped
04:31:171 (7,8) - Should just be spaced imo. If you're going to do that kind of fake double pattern, you should do it consistently throughout the song instead of just a random spot in the song
04:48:485 (4,1) - imo should just be a slider on the red tick. I know the voice starts closer to the blue tick, but it just feels a little weird for the slider to start on the blue tick.
05:09:400 (4,5) - blanket? (make slider less curvy if current blanketting makes spacing too small.
05:14:543 (3,1) - little misstack here
05:31:171 (4,5) - Try to stack sliderend inside the sliderbody
That's it. Good luck with the map.
M4M map: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/478294 or https://osu.ppy.sh/s/561679nvm you modded my Styx Helix remix map C: