Yijun wrote:

hello

[Easy]

00:27:998 (4) - you could have blanketed this slider better like this

the mp3 is way shorter than the part you mapped. consider mapping the whole song

[Normal]

00:49:878 - the circle is placed on a section where there is no significant sound

02:13:562 (2) - this pattern is just aesthetically un-pleasing so maybe this would look more proper.

[Hard]

nothing really but if i notice anything i'll update this mod

fLaw wrote:

Mod for Hard difficulty

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01:04:540 (4) - because this and 01:04:878 (5) are fast doubles, it'd help to read by having them opposite ways. Like here > http://i.imgur.com/pFFXzKd.png
01:09:276 (2) - This singer's pitch on this note is lower than the previous note. I'd suggest not stacking these notes to reflect that > http://i.imgur.com/BbT81Lg.png
01:10:179 (5) - Same thing on this note > http://i.imgur.com/E93UGjH.png
01:10:855 (1,2,3,4) - The way each word is held for 1/4 a note would flow better as two sliders, like here > http://i.imgur.com/FLYE5pA.png
01:46:043 (4,5) - I would say make these two notes a single slider, again because of the singing
02:03:186 (1) - This note isn't spaced with 1.0x spacing like most of the notes are. Makes it run together a bit much with the 5 burst
02:31:156 (2) - Same with these, except its placed a bit further. Makes it a bit harder to read the rhythm here.
02:40:179 (4,5) - You could make these into a slider, maybe one that is the opposite of 02:41:081 (1)
03:20:216 (5) - Again with opposite fast doubles. Not too important tho imo
03:24:389 (1) - I would say make this two separate notes instead of a slider, because two words are sung here
03:25:292 (3) - ^Same with this slider
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Thats all from me ^^
Other than that, I think this was a great difficulty.
The only general thing I would point out is how most of the notes are clustered around the middle. If you use Ctr+A you'll see that pretty much all the corners are empty. Not saying you have to put a lot of notes in the corner, just something to think about for future

YukiZura- wrote:

from mod queue - Bye Bye 2016
sorry late lol xD

Hard

00:18:299 - i think you should put 1/6 reverse slider here cuz there is a strong sound i heard

00:46:495 (4,5,1) - blanket this together
01:09:953 - nc here?
00:59:577 (2) - move a little bit up the slider that i highlight cuz the distance blanket you made not nice enough ^^

example

01:30:479 - same like this one 00:18:299 -
02:34:089 - i dont hear any sound here?
03:28:675 - move this a little bit up since you made this slider like this 03:27:998 -

example

goodluck ^^
<3

O-Moei wrote:

Hi !

Hard
I bet you want to keep the spacing as their reading movement, so please check AIMod spacing issues

01:59:126 (6,7,1) - I suggest keep follow the vocal here to equalize with 00:47:171 (1) -

01:59:577 (7,1) - Swap NC

01:10:855 (1,2,3,4) - Why it's different with 02:23:036 (1,2,3,4) - ?

00:55:968 (6,7,8) - Not really everyone's taste, but maybe make this like 02:08:600 (1) - and 03:11:758 (1) -

02:44:464 - Pull the break timing to 02:44:690 -

03:27:998 (5) - NC

Good luck !

Toehoe wrote:

General

1. Your storyboard has suggestive themes at 01:27:096 - you need to give a warning on beatmap page
2. Some AiMod problems

Hard

1. 00:15:818 (2) - New combo here since the notes aren't a pattern together (change this for every time in the map)
2. 00:16:946 (1) - With a new combo here instead
3. 00:23:036 (2) - New combo here too, because it is confusing at 00:24:615 (3,4) when you expect same wait pattern
4. 00:41:307 (1) - New combo to show wait, like here 01:02:735 (1)
5. 01:02:735 (1) - I think just a normal slider would sound better here
6. 01:03:412 (2) - New combo again here for reasons said already
7. 01:05:216 (6,7,1) - I don't think you should curve the stream here, stack it neater
8. 01:10:855 (1,2,3,4) - For this section you map to vocals but here is strange, try 3 sliders then 1 note on white tick instead
9. 01:12:660 (1) - But here you start on instrument as slider instead of a single note and then sliders for vocals
10. 01:50:329 (1,2) - The vocals sound like you should make the slider at (1) instead and because (2) ends on a beat
11. 02:02:510 (4,5,6,7,8) - You miss a beat here 02:03:082 to start slider on vocals, it's confusing and too challenging. Suggestion is to replace with repeat slider
12. 02:14:916 (5) - Odd repeat slider again, better as just single slider
13. 02:17:397 - Here is better place for repeat slider
14. 02:24:389 (5) - I can't hear these beats in the song

1. 00:42:886 - why isn't this mapped? The same goes for 01:55:066
2. 00:56:419 (7) - NC
3. 03:14:916 (1,2,3) - Confusing spacing imo, either stack (1) with (2,3) or space them apart.
4. 03:20:780 (1,3) - These should be a 1/2 slider instead of a circle.
5. 03:31:607 (1) - You should map this instead of putting a spinner.

PyroBear wrote:

[Hard]

1. 00:42:886 - why isn't this mapped? The same goes for 01:55:066
2. 00:56:419 (7) - NC
3. 03:14:916 (1,2,3) - Confusing spacing imo, either stack (1) with (2,3) or space them apart.
4. 03:20:780 (1,3) - These should be a 1/2 slider instead of a circle.
5. 03:31:607 (1) - You should map this instead of putting a spinner.

That's all I have since a well made map and there's a lot of mods already.

Metaku wrote:

Just checked back on the map for the first time since modding it Looking good! Wish you luck with it

1. Most of the sliders in the map don't blanket the notes properly. Some examples are 00:47:848 (2,3) - and 01:39:276 (3,4) . Blanketing is a stylistic choice but you do it properly in the other diffs which makes it look especially sloppy here. I recommend going over all the notes carefully and making sure everything is blanketed properly.
2. 00:51:006 (1,2,3,4) - This is really low note density, especially for a chorus section. It would be more acceptable in a verse or during a bridge but it seems undermapped here
3. 02:03:186 (1,2,3) - ^ see above
4. 03:11:758 (3) - You could make this slider follow the beat, ie make it shorter so that it ends on the red tick. It would break up the (1,2) (1,2) repetition and is simple enough for an easy diff

1. 00:56:419 (6) - Try making this slider follow the beat, ie make it shorter so that it ends on the red tick.
2. 02:31:156 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3) - This entire section is basically spinning around in a big clockwise circle, which can get boring. I recommend changing up the flow so that it's less repetitive.

1. Try adding some more hitsounds in the Easy and Normal diffs. I only really notices any in the Hard diff

30201102 wrote:

[Easy]

1. Most of the sliders in the map don't blanket the notes properly. Some examples are 00:47:848 (2,3) - and 01:39:276 (3,4) . Blanketing is a stylistic choice but you do it properly in the other diffs which makes it look especially sloppy here. I recommend going over all the notes carefully and making sure everything is blanketed properly.
2. 00:51:006 (1,2,3,4) - This is really low note density, especially for a chorus section. It would be more acceptable in a verse or during a bridge but it seems undermapped here
3. 02:03:186 (1,2,3) - ^ see above
4. 03:11:758 (3) - You could make this slider follow the beat, ie make it shorter so that it ends on the red tick. It would break up the (1,2) (1,2) repetition and is simple enough for an easy diff

[Normal]

1. 00:56:419 (6) - Try making this slider follow the beat, ie make it shorter so that it ends on the red tick.
2. 02:31:156 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3) - This entire section is basically spinning around in a big clockwise circle, which can get boring. I recommend changing up the flow so that it's less repetitive.

[General]

1. Try adding some more hitsounds in the Easy and Normal diffs. I only really notices any in the Hard diff

Gyeoul wrote:

Sorry for taking so long to reply...
This was posted on my modding queue, but honestly there's not much I can suggest you. The only thing I'd point out is that imo some of the clap hitsounds didn't fit very well, such as from 00:29:352 to 00:36:570, for example (they sound too loud, I'd continue with the previously used hitsounds), but that's nothing "unrankable" or anything.
Very lovely storyboard!

psdt: sorry for reply you late

• 
  [General]

1. I point out that Storyboard lyrics are wrong
   
   SB

   
   そのつづきをおしえて
   
   にふん まえ
   
   唇が熱い
   
   そんなみつめないで
   
   じゅんあいおんど
   
   5℃じょうしょう

• 
  [Easy]

1. 00:18:073 - Why are not you picking up the sound here?
2. 00:25:292 - ^
3. 00:34:765 (6) - There is no sound in the reverse
   If I am, I will erase (7) and extend (6)
   
4. 00:47:397 (1,3) - Let's stack
5. 00:53:713 (3,1) - If it is not blanket, the flow is bad
   Please place it so that there is (1) at the end of (3)
6. 01:46:946 (1) -
   00:34:765 (6)same
7. 01:57:322 (3,4) - Not blanket
8. 02:04:991 (1) - Let's put delete NC because combo number is short
9. 02:19:427 (1) - ^
10. 02:23:036 (1) - ^
11. 02:24:389 (3) - Add NC

Yasaija 714 wrote:

From Queue

• 
  [General]

1. I point out that Storyboard lyrics are wrong
   
   SB

   
   そのつづきをおしえて
   
   にふん まえ
   
   唇が熱い
   
   そんなみつめないで
   
   じゅんあいおんど
   
   5℃じょうしょう

• 
  [Easy]

1. 00:18:073 - Why are not you picking up the sound here?
2. 00:25:292 - ^
3. 00:34:765 (6) - There is no sound in the reverse
   If I am, I will erase (7) and extend (6)
   
4. 00:47:397 (1,3) - Let's stack
5. 00:53:713 (3,1) - If it is not blanket, the flow is bad
   Please place it so that there is (1) at the end of (3)
6. 01:46:946 (1) -
   00:34:765 (6)same
7. 01:57:322 (3,4) - Not blanket
8. 02:04:991 (1) - Let's put delete NC because combo number is short
9. 02:19:427 (1) - ^
10. 02:23:036 (1) - ^
11. 02:24:389 (3) - Add NC

I am not good at Normal and Hard

Good luck!

wow, you helped me a lot with lyrics. thanks

Toyosaki Aki wrote:

Hi~
as random (&quick) mod
osu! needs more Toyosaki Aki :3

SB

• 
  there are some mistakes,

1. 00:00:931 - where is 松岡嗣 from? → 伊藤かな恵 is correct
   
2. 00:09:164 - same as above
   
3. some Lyrics're wrong, plz use this :3
   
   Lyrics

   着信の声聴くだけでJin×Jin 染まる頬
   ときめきのハートメーターKyun×Kyun成長中です
   
   ふいに止めた言葉その続きを教えて
   恋愛モード2分前
   コ・ド・ウ☆Non Stop！
   
   最愛Darling！ぎゅっと ココロ抱きしめて！
   あなたのために色づいたクチビルが熱い
   最高Darling！お願い ずっとそばにいたい！
   青春限定Dictionary Loveの意味を探そう
   答えはあなたが知っています…
   
   不注意で不意打ちしたりDoki×Dokiさせるよね
   情けないとこあるけどDan×Zen頼れる人
   
   そんな見つめないで「好き」が透けてしまうわ
   純愛温度B: 5℃上昇
   ビ・ネ・ツ☆Everyday！
   
   最愛Darling！だって 思春期ロマンス！
   ねぇTo LOVEるも一緒ならたからものになる
   最高Darling！あげたいっ 真心もぜんぶ！
   胸の奥のセキュリティ開くための鍵は
   いつでもあなたが持っています…
   
   この世でいちばんアイシテル
   いつか大事なキスしてね
   あったかい想いひとつになる?
   
   最愛Darling！ぎゅっと ココロ抱きしめて！
   あなたのために色づいたクチビルが熱い
   最高Darling！お願い ずっとそばにいたい！
   青春限定Dictionary Loveの意味を探そう
   答えはあなたが知っています…

Hard

1. 00:20:329 (1,2,3,4) - would make them square?
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 01:01:382 (4,1) - blanket can be nicer to look
3. 02:32:058 (1,2) - same as above
4. 02:37:472 - add circle? way to be clickable really fit the music since there is loud bass drum

GoodLuck!

Toyosaki Aki wrote:

GoodLuck!

EDIT:
Sorry, I found my mistake lol
純愛温度B: 5℃上昇 → 純愛温度5℃上昇

Aerith123 wrote:

Here u go! HM Request from Hytex's Queue

Easy
-00:21:231 add finish for 4 and 5
-00:28:449 same
-00:37:021 add clap in here
-00:37:923 same
-00:38:825 same
-00:41:758 add whistle

Normal
-00:37:021 add clap
-00:37:923 add clap
-00:38:374 same
-00:39:276 same
-00:39:728 add clap
-00:40:179 add finish
-00:40:630 add whistle
-00:41:307 add finish
-00:41:532 add finish
-00:41:758 add whistle

Hard
Nothing's wrong in here Everything is fine

1. Overall feels like you think you're not experienced enough with object placements and then decided to use DS on everything which isn't bad but it screwed up more intense parts, like choruses. Those parts are more intense but you still decided to map them in the same ways as you did with others, my point is the song has different intensity in each section of the song, and your mapping is not reflecting that.
   
   1. Like, to make your mapping more intense in choruses or other intense parts, you can just try spacing objects differently in more intense parts, use more dense rhythms, or whatever. Something is needed to indicate the difference of your mapping between sections that have different intensities and there are many ways to do that
2. 00:48:976 (1) - Don't land sliderends on strong sounds pls.
3. 02:17:622 (1,2,3) - Ctrl+G rhythm works better (the same rhythm as other choruses), idk if this are meant to be a variation but I'd prefer having rhythms clickable on vocals. Same applies to other stuff you did this too.
4. 03:26:194 (1,2,3) - Vocal plays differently from 03:24:389 (1,2,3,4,5,6) so a different rhythm should be used here.

Electoz wrote:

[Hard]

1. Overall feels like you think you're not experienced enough with object placements and then decided to use DS on everything which isn't bad but it screwed up more intense parts, like choruses. Those parts are more intense but you still decided to map them in the same ways as you did with others, my point is the song has different intensity in each section of the song, and your mapping is not reflecting that.
   
   1. Like, to make your mapping more intense in choruses or other intense parts, you can just try spacing objects differently in more intense parts, use more dense rhythms, or whatever. Something is needed to indicate the difference of your mapping between sections that have different intensities and there are many ways to do that
2. 00:48:976 (1) - Don't land sliderends on strong sounds pls.
3. 02:17:622 (1,2,3) - Ctrl+G rhythm works better (the same rhythm as other choruses), idk if this are meant to be a variation but I'd prefer having rhythms clickable on vocals. Same applies to other stuff you did this too.
4. 03:26:194 (1,2,3) - Vocal plays differently from 03:24:389 (1,2,3,4,5,6) so a different rhythm should be used here.

Overall hitsounding should be improved, like there are loud drums, snares or whatever on 00:50:329 (6) yet you don't even hitsound it.
And honestly vocal is so easy to map and follow with rhythms, try to take advantage of that more.

There's nothing outright wrong with the map but the major problem lies on my first point, I just did a quick skim so feel free to ask me if I worded anything too complicated.
Good luck~

Rad- wrote:

Hi, from my queue.

Easy

I have noticed that thru your map that you have some objects like these 00:17:622 (4) - where distancing isnt really exact, possibly because you have grid snapping, so use the top right box for placing objects in their right place using the x and ys, in this case should be x= -4, this is all to have a more precise map, which looks better and some cases fixes the inconsistent spacing.
00:32:961 (5) - NC
01:02:284 (2,5) - Fix distancing on this for example with the help i said from the start.
01:30:254 - Add a circle here for consistency, just like you did ont he start of the map, and also because there is a very strong beat that shouldn't be ignored.
01:37:472 - ^
01:45:141 (5) - NC
02:15:818 (1) - Remove NC, you didn't add one on the first kiai so keep it consistent
02:24:389 (1) - Remove NC
03:22:585 (1) - Remove NC
03:26:194 (1) - remove NC
03:31:607 (6) - NC

Normal

I noticed some uncertainty about the frequency on used new combos on this difficulty, some parts like 00:43:788 - to 00:51:006 - are very short but then 00:51:006 - to 00:58:224 - are longer and then you even have them mixed like 01:41:532 - to 01:48:750 wouldn't hurt to keep only one type since music doesn't really change that much on these parts to have necessity for alot of changes in combos.
01:59:352 (4) - This object should be placed on 01:59:126 - Instead to represent the stronger beat and not have an awkward pause in rhythm
02:28:449 (1,1) - Distance after spinner is too close for a Normal, delete circle 1 at least

Hard

00:17:397 (2) - Fix distance
00:23:036 (1) - remove NC, you didnt add one here 00:15:818 (2) - so keep it consistent
00:32:961 (1) - Claps sound a bit weird here but i will talk about this after the mod
00:48:976 (1,2) - Switch NC - It's best to change after the bigger white tick rather than just before in these cases of sliders
00:59:352 (1) - Remove NC, keep it consistent like previous part of kiai time
01:00:028 (7,1) - Switch NC
01:01:607 (1) - Also in this case, you can leave the new combo as the slider ends AFTER the big white tick and not on this point exactly
01:02:735 (1) - Replace with 2 circles or one slider without repeating, theres really no justification to use a blue tick on this part, and 2 circles would actually give more feedback for the player because fits more to the song, also remove the NC
01:06:344 (1,1) - Remove these 2 NCs
01:14:013 (1,2) - Switch Nc
01:29:126 (4) - Nc, like you did on the start
01:32:284 (1,2) - Switch NC
01:36:344 (4) - NC
01:50:329 (1,2) - Also wanna point out that these and 00:38:149 (1,2) - don't need to switch NC's are because the next object is the same and i can see you clearly change combo to a different singer.
02:16:720 (4,5) - Hard to follow a bit, i suggest changing the position to something like:


02:17:397 (6) - Not sure what you did here but is clearly not following the song, its just supposed to use the blue tick and red tick as a triple, just like you did here 01:05:216 (5,6,1) -
02:26:645 (6) - NC
02:53:713 (5) - NC
03:20:667 - Add a circle here to make a triple just like before, consistency
03:31:607 (5) - NC

Overall i'd say to also fix the hitsounding, claps should be placed on 2/4 and 4/4s on the beat and not some 1/4 and 3/4's like ive seen here on normal for example 03:22:585 (1,2,3,4,5) -
And on the parts where it's a kick sound effect for claps, its better to change it to something more noticeable, like a snare, as kicks are all parts of the music's 1/4 beats.

Hope it helps!

ok, I already change to hitsound las you told me, also, I already corrected it all
Thanks for taking your time to help me with my beatmap
I'm sorry for reply very late, the thing is, I'm busy in this days but I think since now not

Thanks for modding

1. easy and normal combo colours are the same but looks like hard not, you need to fix this
2. ^ the same happens with kiai, do you have any gd here? if not, just add same kiais in all diffs for consistency
3. i strongly recommend you to add source in japanese so romanized title can be added in tags, you give more chances to find the song easily
   
   source: To LOVEる-とらぶる-ダークネス 2nd
   then add some tags: to love ru darkness season 2 -trouble-Darkness
   
4. since you added song's title in japanese, you should do the same with artists: 豊崎 愛生&伊藤 かな恵 (Toyosaki Aki & Itou Kanae)

1. 00:14:916 (1) - i really think a finish hitsound is way more better than just clap, if you pref you could even use both
2. 01:52:359 (1) - green line seems to be unsnapped, check it in case im wrong

1. 00:48:525 (2) - better if you put this on the right imo, of course you need to keep distance, i just think it would flow better like this
2. 01:52:359 (1) - green line is also unsnapped here

1. 00:37:472 (3,4,5) - this is a bit overmapped, this one 00:37:698 (5,6) - just be the triple instead
2. 02:37:472 (1) - another green line is not snapped well here
3. 03:19:201 (2,3) - the flow is really weird here, maybe try to do ctrl+g with 2?
4. 03:33:186 (1) - i really miss something to click here, just add a finish note and then the spinner