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Toyosaki Aki & Kanae Itou - Saiai Darling!

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Akunosu
475 posts
Joined October 2015
Topic Starter
Akunosu
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on miércoles, 29 de marzo de 2017 at 7:37:54 p. m.

Artist: Toyosaki Aki & Kanae Itou
Title: Saiai Darling!
Source: To Love-Ru Trouble Darkness 2nd
Tags: nana momo deviluke
BPM: 133
Filesize: 15144kb
Play Time: 03:35
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.61 stars, 215 notes)
  2. Hard (3.07 stars, 455 notes)
  3. Normal (2.12 stars, 318 notes)
Download: Toyosaki Aki & Kanae Itou - Saiai Darling!
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Easy : 100% by me
Normal : 100% by me
Hard : 100% by me

Storyboard by me :D


TempestDH

Modders
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Last edited by Akunosu , edited 114 times in total.
Luel Roseline
1,034 posts
Joined February 2014
Luel Roseline
Well...I told you before when I start the mod your beatmap...

(Someone)'s diff is only allow to guest diff. Please fix them.
Metaku
524 posts
Joined August 2015
Metaku
Hi! From mod queue.


General

  1. I love the storyboard! Really well done and looks nice as well.
  2. You could've mapped more to the vocals, there are many sections where there are strong vocals and you've left the beat empty
  3. You can remove to love ru trouble darkness 2nd and saiai darling from the tags as they aren't needed
  4. Kiai is inconsistent, try moving the last kiai to 03:13:563 (1) - and the first one to 00:43:789 (1) - so they would all start on downbeat
Normal

  1. You're spacing is very inconsistent which will be hard for newer players, consider evening it out a bit.
  2. You should work on your blankets. Especially on easier diffs it's important that your map looks as clean and polished as possible.
  3. 00:15:819 (2) - Just shorten this to red tick, there's no sound on the white tick so it'd make much more sense this way
  4. 00:17:172 (4,5) - You could blanket this better
  5. 00:23:037 (2) - Shorten to red tick
  6. 00:29:353 (1,2,3) - Try to even out the spacing here
  7. 00:32:511 (1,2,3) - same here
  8. 00:41:308 (3,4) - Consider making these into 2 1/2 sliders so you could map the white tick in middle of 3
  9. 00:44:240 (2,3,4) - Spacing. Won't mention these again, just try to fix your spacing.
  10. 00:46:947 (1,2) - you should change the order here so you could map the long slider to the vocals (circle where the slider starts and then the slider to the next red tick)
  11. 00:50:556 (3) - 00:54:616 (1) - You could've put more notes in this section :/
  12. 01:03:638 (4) - This should be on the red tick before
  13. 01:09:954 (2,4) - Do something about this overlap, it's not very attractive
  14. 01:52:360 (1,2) - This is a good pattern for this part, you should use something similar in other corresponding parts
  15. 02:15:593 (1) - Should start on the red tick before
  16. 02:26:195 (2) - This slider doesn't really follow anything, try to map it as something else
  17. 02:36:345 (5) - This is probably fine but avoid using these in normal diffs
  18. 02:55:518 (1) - Nice slider art but could use some polishing
  19. 03:18:977 (4) - Again red tick
  20. 03:23:262 - Skipped a vocal here (You skip them way too often ;_;)
Hard

  1. Some slider shapes you use are rather... Interesting. You could try to simplify them or otherwise make them look more attractive
  2. 00:20:105 (1) - Yes please do it like this in normal diff as well
  3. 00:48:977 (1) - vocals ;_;
  4. 00:50:330 (4,5,6,7,8) - 4 is not stacked
  5. 00:51:007 (1,2) - This doesn't look very nice imo, 00:51:909 (3,4) - is much better
  6. 00:52:811 (5,6,7) - This pattern doesn't flow very well, consider swapping places of 6 and 7
  7. 00:56:420 (4) - You should make the downbeat clickable
  8. 01:01:383 (3) - These again, just move to red tick also move nc from 01:00:932 (1) - here
  9. 01:03:413 (1) - No real need for nc here
  10. 01:14:917 (7) - move to the previous blue tick
  11. 01:35:217 (2,3) - You could just stack these
  12. 01:39:729 (5) - vocals
  13. 01:46:947 (1,2) - You could blanket these
  14. 01:59:127 (4,5) - Fairly good blanket here, just move the last anchor of 4 a tiny bit down and it's good.
  15. 02:02:962 (5) - Please add a note here, you're missing vocals again ;_;
  16. 02:25:744 (2,3) - Not really a good choice here, you'll miss a strong sound on the blue tick before 3
  17. 03:05:894 (8) - you could stack this with 03:04:992 (6) -
  18. 03:15:142 (2) - make the downbeat clickable
  19. 03:29:804 (2) - End on previous blue tick

A lot of things to fix I probably missed some too but still doing well for your 2nd map, good luck! :)
Akunosu
475 posts
Joined October 2015
Topic Starter
Akunosu

Metaku wrote:

SPOILER
Hi! From mod queue.


General

  1. I love the storyboard! Really well done and looks nice as well.
  2. You could've mapped more to the vocals, there are many sections where there are strong vocals and you've left the beat empty
  3. You can remove to love ru trouble darkness 2nd and saiai darling from the tags as they aren't needed
  4. Kiai is inconsistent, try moving the last kiai to 03:13:563 (1) - and the first one to 00:43:789 (1) - so they would all start on downbeat
Normal

  1. You're spacing is very inconsistent which will be hard for newer players, consider evening it out a bit.
  2. You should work on your blankets. Especially on easier diffs it's important that your map looks as clean and polished as possible.
  3. 00:15:819 (2) - Just shorten this to red tick, there's no sound on the white tick so it'd make much more sense this way
  4. 00:17:172 (4,5) - You could blanket this better
  5. 00:23:037 (2) - Shorten to red tick
  6. 00:29:353 (1,2,3) - Try to even out the spacing here
  7. 00:32:511 (1,2,3) - same here
  8. 00:41:308 (3,4) - Consider making these into 2 1/2 sliders so you could map the white tick in middle of 3
  9. 00:44:240 (2,3,4) - Spacing. Won't mention these again, just try to fix your spacing.
  10. 00:46:947 (1,2) - you should change the order here so you could map the long slider to the vocals (circle where the slider starts and then the slider to the next red tick)
  11. 00:50:556 (3) - 00:54:616 (1) - You could've put more notes in this section :/
  12. 01:03:638 (4) - This should be on the red tick before
  13. 01:09:954 (2,4) - Do something about this overlap, it's not very attractive
  14. 01:52:360 (1,2) - This is a good pattern for this part, you should use something similar in other corresponding parts
  15. 02:15:593 (1) - Should start on the red tick before
  16. 02:26:195 (2) - This slider doesn't really follow anything, try to map it as something else
  17. 02:36:345 (5) - This is probably fine but avoid using these in normal diffs
  18. 02:55:518 (1) - Nice slider art but could use some polishing
  19. 03:18:977 (4) - Again red tick
  20. 03:23:262 - Skipped a vocal here (You skip them way too often ;_;)
Hard

  1. Some slider shapes you use are rather... Interesting. You could try to simplify them or otherwise make them look more attractive
  2. 00:20:105 (1) - Yes please do it like this in normal diff as well
  3. 00:48:977 (1) - vocals ;_;
  4. 00:50:330 (4,5,6,7,8) - 4 is not stacked
  5. 00:51:007 (1,2) - This doesn't look very nice imo, 00:51:909 (3,4) - is much better
  6. 00:52:811 (5,6,7) - This pattern doesn't flow very well, consider swapping places of 6 and 7
  7. 00:56:420 (4) - You should make the downbeat clickable
  8. 01:01:383 (3) - These again, just move to red tick also move nc from 01:00:932 (1) - here
  9. 01:03:413 (1) - No real need for nc here
  10. 01:14:917 (7) - move to the previous blue tick
  11. 01:35:217 (2,3) - You could just stack these
  12. 01:39:729 (5) - vocals
  13. 01:46:947 (1,2) - You could blanket these
  14. 01:59:127 (4,5) - Fairly good blanket here, just move the last anchor of 4 a tiny bit down and it's good.
  15. 02:02:962 (5) - Please add a note here, you're missing vocals again ;_;
  16. 02:25:744 (2,3) - Not really a good choice here, you'll miss a strong sound on the blue tick before 3
  17. 03:05:894 (8) - you could stack this with 03:04:992 (6) -
  18. 03:15:142 (2) - make the downbeat clickable
  19. 03:29:804 (2) - End on previous blue tick

A lot of things to fix I probably missed some too but still doing well for your 2nd map, good luck! :)
ok, thanks for modding, updating beatmap :D
Kensuke
1,856 posts
Joined April 2014
Kensuke
hi :D
[General & Storyboard]
  1. Gap between Normal and Hard is very far. D:
  2. Distance Snap in Normal diff isn't consistent. You can ask this problem with BN. :lol:
  3. 00:07:699 - 00:13:112 - These font sprites look so dark. You should make it brighter.
  4. flash.png You can make it loop. :D
That's all. I can't mod the map :) But I like your storyboard. It's like S i R i R u's storyboard. ;)
Good luck!
Mentai
472 posts
Joined June 2016
Mentai
From my queue, gonna go in-depth on your hard diff

I have no SB experience so I will not be modding that


Hard
00:14:917 (1,2) - we have our first opportunity to blanket something, this slider end should blanket the 2 slider

00:18:751 (1,2) - blanket here as well

00:24:616 (3,4) - at 00:17:398 (5,6) ds .8 was used, but now ds 1.1 was used in the newest combo, but it feels like there is no change in emphasis, especially considering the following pattern has lower ds than thew combo following 00:17:398 (5,6)

00:27:323 (4,5) - blanket suggestion https://puu.sh/rqdZC.jpg
you will have to alter the 6 circle to maintain consistent ds as well

00:29:804 (2,3) - blanket is off

00:32:059 (9) - i think this circle needs to be more emphasized by a higher ds because of the incredibly strong backbeat at this section

00:33:864 (5) - same as above

00:38:375 (3) - another blanket suggestion, you will again have to alter the ds of the note afterwards to maintain consistent ds https://puu.sh/rqedk.jpg

00:40:856 (3,6) - there is actually no sounds here to emphasize, highly recommend removing these (“Well timed silence has more eloquence than speech.”)

00:45:593 (1,2) - blanket please

00:50:781 (5) - seems like an accident, just fit it into the line, the emphasis is self intuitive by the stream

00:51:909 (3,4,5) - not proper blanket, the slider's curvature is to blame

00:53:714 (7) - meaning of this circle? i see nothing it could be mapped to

00:54:616 (1,2) - blanket by pulling the 1 back

00:58:676 (4,5) - keep at ds 1.2, just blanket it better

01:03:638 (2,3) - what is the purpose of this slider stack, seems really awkward just to look at

01:09:954 (3,4) - why stack the 4, 01:09:052 (1,2) had the same sound and emphasis, and even same hitsound. There's no reason to tuck the note away

01:14:804 - highly reccomend removing 01:14:917 (7) and adding a 1/4 slider to tackle both the dominant backbeat on the blue tick, and maybe hitsound the slider end to also emphasize the voice on the white tick

01:15:368 - start spinner here

01:31:608 (4,5) - blanket

01:39:503 (1,2) - blanket

01:42:435 (2) - again, immense backbeat, emphasize this please, your ds is actually getting lower

01:44:240 (6) - same, at least un-overlap for emphasis

01:47:623 (2) - x192 y164 for proper blanket

01:50:105 (5) - this note doesn't deserve 1.4 emphasis, this one does 01:50:330 (1)

01:54:165 (5) - again unnecessary note

01:57:548 (6) - x252 y192, to blanket

01:59:127 (4,5,6) - I was gonna mod thew blankets and spacing here, but i actually have no idea what rhythm you are following. Please remap this

02:06:120 (6) - x336 y160, to blanket

02:11:082 (2,3) - figure out a compromise to blanket this

02:13:112 (2,3,4) - again, I have no idea what rhythm you are following, why is it mapped this way?

02:24:390 (1,2,3,4,5) - very un-aesthetically pleasing, please make a nicer slider and ctrl+shift+f to make into a well formatted and spaced stream

02:31:157 (2) - why are you stacking such a strong beat, it should be emphasized with ds

02:32:962 (3) - same as above

these two circles would be a great place to utilize your soft-hitclap.wav a little more

02:34:541 (1) - soft-hitclap.wav

02:36:571 (3) - ^, also emphasize with higher ds

02:38:375 (3) - ^

02:39:503 (2) - if you are following the bass rhythm, move this circle to the blue tick right after it, 02:39:616

02:39:277 (1,2,3) - that being said, please normalize the spacing between these 3, as they are a rhythm witch the exact same rhythmic value, and then further emphasize the circle after it

02:41:984 (3) - ^^

02:43:789 (3) - it's almost insulting to hide this under the slider end, after even using 1.6 ds. please fix

02:53:939 (6) - why does this beat exist?

03:04:315 (4,6) - awkward overlap, suggest moving the slider down

03:09:954 (1,2) - blanket these in some way

03:16:496 (1,2) - needs a blanket, and more emphasis, especially with an emphasis hitsound https://puu.sh/rqgQ9.jpg

03:18:074 (4) - remove whistle, seems arbitrary


In general, you understand the basics of ds, but noiw you must manipulate it to give the subtle emphasis or large emphasis you need to make your beatmap breath. Also, lots of aesthetic mistakes, blanketing is essential if you want to go for a ranked mapset

Also a 2 diff set is too small I think, I suggest an Easy or Beginner diff to add onto it, and you'll be good to go

Good luck
Lumario
245 posts
Joined March 2016
Lumario
Normal diff:
00:30:932 (2,3) - Try to sync them with the vocals.
00:41:308 (3,4) - Minor thing move them a bit apart so they don't overlap [Aesthetics :3]
01:37:924 (1,2,3,4) - I think something like this would be more fitting
SPOILER
02:04:090 (2) - Move this one to the next white tick. (seemed more fitting to me)
02:54:841 (5) - Remove this one. (flow)

Hard diff:
Did not find anything too outstanding except:
00:50:330 (1,2,3,4,5) - Make this stream more curved [Again aesthetics :3]

Well that's it I guess, hope I helped :)
Luma
Hikomori
840 posts
Joined November 2015
Hikomori
Hola!

Mod de mi queue

[General]
  1. Por lo que me decias de si te podia ayudar en la star count de la dificultad normal, es simplemente que la dificultad es como un facil. Lo que tienes que hacer es poner mas objetos y hacerlo un poco mas ''frenetico''
[Begginer]
  1. 00:22:134 (1) - hace contacto con el circulo anterior, muevelo un poco para solucionarlo (obiamente xdxd)
  1. 00:32:961 (4) - es mejor que hagas ese slider asi. Te quedara mas limpio
  1. 00:38:374 (3) - no me gusta como ha quedado ese circulo contactando con el slider, creo que seria mejor que lo movieses
  1. 00:49:201 (5) - este slider es mu raro y no queda muy bien. haz otro si quieres
  1. 00:56:419 - ahi pon un spinner, quedara mejor
  1. 01:02:284 (2) - haz que ese circulo se junte con 01:04:540 (5). asi no contactaria con el otro slider y quedaria mejor
  1. 01:42:434 (1) - mueve este circulo mas cerca del slider asi no quedaria mal que hagan ese contacto raro con el otro circulo
  1. 01:56:870 (3,6) - estos dos contactan
  1. 01:59:577 (1) - mueve este circulo al principio del slider 02:01:382 (5)
  1. 02:23:487 (4) - mueve ese circulo al final del slider 02:21:231 (1)
  1. 02:23:938 (5) - mueve ese circulo un poco para que no contacte con 02:23:487 (4)
[Normal]
  1. 00:35:442 (3) - este slider contacta con el siguiente
  1. 00:39:276 (4) - contacta con el slider anterior
  1. 01:37:923 (1) - este slider es un poco, ''feo''
  1. 02:51:908 (1,3) - estos sliders no se suelen utilizar mucho y quedan un poco mal
[Hard]
  1. 00:20:780 (2) - haz que ese circulo se ponga encima del anterior
  1. 00:23:713 (2) - este slider es un poco ''feo''. creo que deberias cambiarlo
  1. 00:32:510 (3) - ^
  1. 00:33:637 (4) - este circulo contacta con el slider siguiente
  1. 01:40:179 (2) - haz que ese circulo se ponga encima del anterior
  1. 01:46:043 (4) - este slider es un poco raro, deberias cambiarlo
  1. 01:49:201 (2) - deberias poner este circulo encima del slider anterior
  1. 01:50:329 (1) - ^
  1. 02:26:419 (4) - contacta con el slider
  1. 02:32:735 (2) - pon este circulo encima del anterior
  1. 02:43:111 (2) - haz que este slider sea como mas, ''bonito''?


No encontre nada mas xd
Akunosu
475 posts
Joined October 2015
Topic Starter
Akunosu

- Frontier - wrote:

hi :D
[General & Storyboard]
  1. Gap between Normal and Hard is very far. D:
  2. Distance Snap in Normal diff isn't consistent. You can ask this problem with BN. :lol:
  3. 00:07:699 - 00:13:112 - These font sprites look so dark. You should make it brighter.
  4. flash.png You can make it loop. :D
That's all. I can't mod the map :) But I like your storyboard. It's like S i R i R u's storyboard. ;)
Good luck!
ok, thanks for modding of SB :)

Mentai wrote:

From my queue, gonna go in-depth on your hard diff

I have no SB experience so I will not be modding that


Hard
00:14:917 (1,2) - we have our first opportunity to blanket something, this slider end should blanket the 2 slider

00:18:751 (1,2) - blanket here as well

00:24:616 (3,4) - at 00:17:398 (5,6) ds .8 was used, but now ds 1.1 was used in the newest combo, but it feels like there is no change in emphasis, especially considering the following pattern has lower ds than thew combo following 00:17:398 (5,6)

00:27:323 (4,5) - blanket suggestion https://puu.sh/rqdZC.jpg
you will have to alter the 6 circle to maintain consistent ds as well

00:29:804 (2,3) - blanket is off

00:32:059 (9) - i think this circle needs to be more emphasized by a higher ds because of the incredibly strong backbeat at this section

00:33:864 (5) - same as above

00:38:375 (3) - another blanket suggestion, you will again have to alter the ds of the note afterwards to maintain consistent ds https://puu.sh/rqedk.jpg

00:40:856 (3,6) - there is actually no sounds here to emphasize, highly recommend removing these (“Well timed silence has more eloquence than speech.”)

00:45:593 (1,2) - blanket please

00:50:781 (5) - seems like an accident, just fit it into the line, the emphasis is self intuitive by the stream

00:51:909 (3,4,5) - not proper blanket, the slider's curvature is to blame

00:53:714 (7) - meaning of this circle? i see nothing it could be mapped to

00:54:616 (1,2) - blanket by pulling the 1 back

00:58:676 (4,5) - keep at ds 1.2, just blanket it better

01:03:638 (2,3) - what is the purpose of this slider stack, seems really awkward just to look at

01:09:954 (3,4) - why stack the 4, 01:09:052 (1,2) had the same sound and emphasis, and even same hitsound. There's no reason to tuck the note away

01:14:804 - highly reccomend removing 01:14:917 (7) and adding a 1/4 slider to tackle both the dominant backbeat on the blue tick, and maybe hitsound the slider end to also emphasize the voice on the white tick

01:15:368 - start spinner here

01:31:608 (4,5) - blanket

01:39:503 (1,2) - blanket

01:42:435 (2) - again, immense backbeat, emphasize this please, your ds is actually getting lower

01:44:240 (6) - same, at least un-overlap for emphasis

01:47:623 (2) - x192 y164 for proper blanket

01:50:105 (5) - this note doesn't deserve 1.4 emphasis, this one does 01:50:330 (1)

01:54:165 (5) - again unnecessary note

01:57:548 (6) - x252 y192, to blanket

01:59:127 (4,5,6) - I was gonna mod thew blankets and spacing here, but i actually have no idea what rhythm you are following. Please remap this

02:06:120 (6) - x336 y160, to blanket

02:11:082 (2,3) - figure out a compromise to blanket this

02:13:112 (2,3,4) - again, I have no idea what rhythm you are following, why is it mapped this way?

02:24:390 (1,2,3,4,5) - very un-aesthetically pleasing, please make a nicer slider and ctrl+shift+f to make into a well formatted and spaced stream

02:31:157 (2) - why are you stacking such a strong beat, it should be emphasized with ds

02:32:962 (3) - same as above

these two circles would be a great place to utilize your soft-hitclap.wav a little more

02:34:541 (1) - soft-hitclap.wav

02:36:571 (3) - ^, also emphasize with higher ds

02:38:375 (3) - ^

02:39:503 (2) - if you are following the bass rhythm, move this circle to the blue tick right after it, 02:39:616

02:39:277 (1,2,3) - that being said, please normalize the spacing between these 3, as they are a rhythm witch the exact same rhythmic value, and then further emphasize the circle after it

02:41:984 (3) - ^^

02:43:789 (3) - it's almost insulting to hide this under the slider end, after even using 1.6 ds. please fix

02:53:939 (6) - why does this beat exist?

03:04:315 (4,6) - awkward overlap, suggest moving the slider down

03:09:954 (1,2) - blanket these in some way

03:16:496 (1,2) - needs a blanket, and more emphasis, especially with an emphasis hitsound https://puu.sh/rqgQ9.jpg

03:18:074 (4) - remove whistle, seems arbitrary


In general, you understand the basics of ds, but noiw you must manipulate it to give the subtle emphasis or large emphasis you need to make your beatmap breath. Also, lots of aesthetic mistakes, blanketing is essential if you want to go for a ranked mapset

Also a 2 diff set is too small I think, I suggest an Easy or Beginner diff to add onto it, and you'll be good to go

Good luck
ok, Thanks for the advices :D

Lumario wrote:

Normal diff:
00:30:932 (2,3) - Try to sync them with the vocals.
00:41:308 (3,4) - Minor thing move them a bit apart so they don't overlap [Aesthetics :3]
01:37:924 (1,2,3,4) - I think something like this would be more fitting
SPOILER
02:04:090 (2) - Move this one to the next white tick. (seemed more fitting to me)
02:54:841 (5) - Remove this one. (flow)

Hard diff:
Did not find anything too outstanding except:
00:50:330 (1,2,3,4,5) - Make this stream more curved [Again aesthetics :3]

Well that's it I guess, hope I helped :)
Luma
Ok Luma, I already corrected it, thanks

[A L P H A] wrote:

Modding
Hola!

Mod de mi queue

[General]
  1. Por lo que me decias de si te podia ayudar en la star count de la dificultad normal, es simplemente que la dificultad es como un facil. Lo que tienes que hacer es poner mas objetos y hacerlo un poco mas ''frenetico''
[Begginer]
  1. 00:22:134 (1) - hace contacto con el circulo anterior, muevelo un poco para solucionarlo (obiamente xdxd)
  1. 00:32:961 (4) - es mejor que hagas ese slider asi. Te quedara mas limpio
  1. 00:38:374 (3) - no me gusta como ha quedado ese circulo contactando con el slider, creo que seria mejor que lo movieses
  1. 00:49:201 (5) - este slider es mu raro y no queda muy bien. haz otro si quieres
  1. 00:56:419 - ahi pon un spinner, quedara mejor
  1. 01:02:284 (2) - haz que ese circulo se junte con 01:04:540 (5). asi no contactaria con el otro slider y quedaria mejor
  1. 01:42:434 (1) - mueve este circulo mas cerca del slider asi no quedaria mal que hagan ese contacto raro con el otro circulo
  1. 01:56:870 (3,6) - estos dos contactan
  1. 01:59:577 (1) - mueve este circulo al principio del slider 02:01:382 (5)
  1. 02:23:487 (4) - mueve ese circulo al final del slider 02:21:231 (1)
  1. 02:23:938 (5) - mueve ese circulo un poco para que no contacte con 02:23:487 (4)
[Normal]
  1. 00:35:442 (3) - este slider contacta con el siguiente
  1. 00:39:276 (4) - contacta con el slider anterior
  1. 01:37:923 (1) - este slider es un poco, ''feo''
  1. 02:51:908 (1,3) - estos sliders no se suelen utilizar mucho y quedan un poco mal
[Hard]
  1. 00:20:780 (2) - haz que ese circulo se ponga encima del anterior
  1. 00:23:713 (2) - este slider es un poco ''feo''. creo que deberias cambiarlo
  1. 00:32:510 (3) - ^
  1. 00:33:637 (4) - este circulo contacta con el slider siguiente
  1. 01:40:179 (2) - haz que ese circulo se ponga encima del anterior
  1. 01:46:043 (4) - este slider es un poco raro, deberias cambiarlo
  1. 01:49:201 (2) - deberias poner este circulo encima del slider anterior
  1. 01:50:329 (1) - ^
  1. 02:26:419 (4) - contacta con el slider
  1. 02:32:735 (2) - pon este circulo encima del anterior
  1. 02:43:111 (2) - haz que este slider sea como mas, ''bonito''?

No encontre nada mas xd
gracias por el modding, actualizando beatmap :D
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miradzin
240 posts
Joined April 2015
miradzin
Mod
Hard
00:37:472 (5,6) - A triple here shoud be fine.
00:45:592 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Sounds a little weird, try this:http://puu.sh/s5BmV/47fac0ff21.jpg
00:50:104 (3,1,2,3,4,5) - I think the stream should begin here.
00:51:006 (1) - Try making a 1/2 reverse slider here.
01:01:607 (1) - The finish hitsound here sounds weird.
01:03:412 (1,2) - Make a 1/1 slider here.
01:14:803 (7) - Make this a circle instead of a slider.
01:44:464 (1,2,3,4,5) - Try something like this: http://puu.sh/s5BN9/43f272023f.jpg
02:11:081 (2,3) - 1/1 slider should be here and then the circle.
02:12:209 (5,1,2) - To be honest a 1/1 reverse slider should be better, like this: http://puu.sh/s5Dd1/3eb66e74c7.jpg
02:15:592 (1,2) - Change those into a 1/1 slider only.
02:17:397 - Add a circle here.
02:27:096 (5) - It should be here: 02:26:983
02:27:547 (6) - I think without this slider is better.
Well there are some more issues to be fixed, but I'll end it here, just follow my instructions, there are some mistakes in the rhythm, you need to know where and when use sliders correctly.
GL with the map :D
Affirmation
2,548 posts
Joined March 2015
Affirmation
Q

[General]
Beginner Normal Hard? Where is Easy diff?

[Hard]
00:39:840 - 00:39:953 - 00:40:066 - add beats
00:50:104 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - AHrd to play for beginners, make kickslider.
03:08:825 - add a beat

Good luck
Lily Bread
1,228 posts
Joined December 2014
Lily Bread
as request

[Easy]
OD5 and HP5 are too high for an easy diff. try AR3 or AR2, OD2 or OD1, HP2 or HP1.

we should use 1 DS in Easy diff from start to end.
http://puu.sh/sk3ZQ/1e931952f9.jpg
i found that your DS is different in this diff, so i suggest you to make them same. such as 0.80.

[Normal]
OD5 HP5 also too high for Normal. OD4 and HP4 are better.
in Normal diff, it's better to use 1 DS, too.

00:25:743 (1,2) - this pattern is too hard in normal diff. circle shouldn't be under a slider's tail in normal diff (but it's ok if it's above a slider's head).

00:27:547 (4) - 1/1 slider repeat twice is a bit weird in modern maps. we often use 1/1 slider * 2 in this case.

[Hard]
OD should be 6, and AR can be 7 or 8.

02:13:788 - here has a strong vocal, so what about to make - 02:13:562 (2) - into a 1/2 slider?
http://puu.sh/sk4jg/02ebe50aae.jpg

gl
Akunosu
475 posts
Joined October 2015
Topic Starter
Akunosu

miradzin wrote:

Mod
Hard
00:37:472 (5,6) - A triple here shoud be fine.
00:45:592 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Sounds a little weird, try this:http://puu.sh/s5BmV/47fac0ff21.jpg
00:50:104 (3,1,2,3,4,5) - I think the stream should begin here.
00:51:006 (1) - Try making a 1/2 reverse slider here.
01:01:607 (1) - The finish hitsound here sounds weird.
01:03:412 (1,2) - Make a 1/1 slider here.
01:14:803 (7) - Make this a circle instead of a slider.
01:44:464 (1,2,3,4,5) - Try something like this: http://puu.sh/s5BN9/43f272023f.jpg
02:11:081 (2,3) - 1/1 slider should be here and then the circle.
02:12:209 (5,1,2) - To be honest a 1/1 reverse slider should be better, like this: http://puu.sh/s5Dd1/3eb66e74c7.jpg
02:15:592 (1,2) - Change those into a 1/1 slider only.
02:17:397 - Add a circle here.
02:27:096 (5) - It should be here: 02:26:983
02:27:547 (6) - I think without this slider is better.
Well there are some more issues to be fixed, but I'll end it here, just follow my instructions, there are some mistakes in the rhythm, you need to know where and when use sliders correctly.
GL with the map :D
ok, thanks for modding :D

Neoskylove wrote:

Q

[General]
Beginner Normal Hard? Where is Easy diff?

[Hard]
00:39:840 - 00:39:953 - 00:40:066 - add beats
00:50:104 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - AHrd to play for beginners, make kickslider.
03:08:825 - add a beat

Good luck
Ok, thanks for light modding :D

Lily Bread wrote:

"mod"
as request

[Easy]
OD5 and HP5 are too high for an easy diff. try AR3 or AR2, OD2 or OD1, HP2 or HP1.

we should use 1 DS in Easy diff from start to end.
http://puu.sh/sk3ZQ/1e931952f9.jpg
i found that your DS is different in this diff, so i suggest you to make them same. such as 0.80.

[Normal]
OD5 HP5 also too high for Normal. OD4 and HP4 are better.
in Normal diff, it's better to use 1 DS, too.

00:25:743 (1,2) - this pattern is too hard in normal diff. circle shouldn't be under a slider's tail in normal diff (but it's ok if it's above a slider's head).

00:27:547 (4) - 1/1 slider repeat twice is a bit weird in modern maps. we often use 1/1 slider * 2 in this case.

[Hard]
OD should be 6, and AR can be 7 or 8.

02:13:788 - here has a strong vocal, so what about to make - 02:13:562 (2) - into a 1/2 slider?
http://puu.sh/sk4jg/02ebe50aae.jpg

gl
ok, thanks for modding and advices :D
xpcppo
24 posts
Joined February 2014
xpcppo
hi from my queue ;) here is my suggest


[easy]
01:02:284 (1) - the distance between yellow5 and green2 need fix

[normal]
00:31:607 - add a circle
01:02:284 (1) - not in a straight line
00:36:344 - add o circle
01:47:397 - same
02:13:562 (2,3,4,5,6) - change shpae

[hard]
01:33:186 (4,5) - in a straight line is good
01:58:901 - add a circle
02:51:908 (1) - change anlge like u did behind



thats all nice song :D
Chocobo
104 posts
Joined June 2013
Chocobo
Hi, from my queue.
Sorry to be soooooooooooooo late;
General
. nice SB;
. mapping does not fit the rhythm very well, I'll try to point out some of them;
. need to check AImod;
Hard
. SV 1.9 can be a bit fast for such a low BPM;
. Rhythm seems quite strange in kiai time, missing a lot of sounds;
layout issues:
. RIP corner, no notes there;
. 00:46:269 (3,4,5) - such placement seems unclean, use more blanket to make them better;
. 00:54:615 (1,2) - blanket;
. 00:55:066 (2,3,4,5) - can rotate 4-5-6 a little;
. 00:56:758 (7,8) - there are many similar issues like this in this diff, it's not wrong but make the map unaesthetic;
. 02:01:607 (2,3) - as above;
. 01:00:705 (1,2,3,4) - not a good flow;
. 02:04:991 (4) - some drag sound like this can be map with a shape, avoid always using simple sliders;
Rhythm:
. 00:29:577 - missing note, hear the sound "hu" i ni
. 00:30:479 - as above;
. 00:32:284 (1,2,3) - overmapping, there's nothing here that needs such emphasize;
. 00:32:735 - missing note;
. 00:38:825 (7,8,9) - I suggest change this to note 7 note 8 and slider 9, since there are two very obvious drum sounds at 00:38:825 - and 00:39:051 - ;
. 00:47:171 - the slider should begin at here;
. 00:57:322 - slider starts here;
PS. if u really want to follow the drum here 00:57:096 - , u can use a single note to express this;
. 01:59:352 - ^
. 01:57:773 - compare to the similar section: 00:43:788 - try to keep the consistency of them;
. 02:09:502 - also, look back to 00:57:322 - can do something the same as above;
. 02:43:111 (2) - slider should begin here: 02:43:224 - just as 02:39:276 (1,2) - ;
02:43:562 - and ends here;
NC:
. 00:57:322 (9) - NC;
. Try to add NC every few measures, they are rather randomly now;
Noraml
. 00:24:164 - missing note;
. 00:25:743 (1,2) - unclean, try to be symmetrical;
. 00:28:901 (8,1) - blanket;
. 00:31:607 - missing note;
. 00:55:968 (5,6) - blanket;
. 01:08:149 (5,6,1) - really unclean;
. 03:18:750 (4,5,6,7) - blanket;
The whole map set gives me a sense of very old maps, like those uploaded in year 2010;
Although I can see a lot of efforts during mapping, this set still needs polishing, and even some rework.
Hope my moddings may help;
Good luck~
Akunosu
475 posts
Joined October 2015
Topic Starter
Akunosu

xpcppo wrote:

hi from my queue ;) here is my suggest


[easy]
01:02:284 (1) - the distance between yellow5 and green2 need fix

[normal]
00:31:607 - add a circle
01:02:284 (1) - not in a straight line
00:36:344 - add o circle
01:47:397 - same
02:13:562 (2,3,4,5,6) - change shpae

[hard]
01:33:186 (4,5) - in a straight line is good
01:58:901 - add a circle
02:51:908 (1) - change anlge like u did behind



thats all nice song :D
Ok, corrected, thanks for modding :D
Akunosu
475 posts
Joined October 2015
Topic Starter
Akunosu

Chocobo wrote:

Hi, from my queue.
Sorry to be soooooooooooooo late;
General
. nice SB;
. mapping does not fit the rhythm very well, I'll try to point out some of them;
. need to check AImod;

Hard
. SV 1.9 can be a bit fast for such a low BPM;
. Rhythm seems quite strange in kiai time, missing a lot of sounds;
layout issues:
. RIP corner, no notes there;
. 00:46:269 (3,4,5) - such placement seems unclean, use more blanket to make them better;
. 00:54:615 (1,2) - blanket;
. 00:55:066 (2,3,4,5) - can rotate 4-5-6 a little;
. 00:56:758 (7,8) - there are many similar issues like this in this diff, it's not wrong but make the map unaesthetic;
. 02:01:607 (2,3) - as above;
. 01:00:705 (1,2,3,4) - not a good flow;
. 02:04:991 (4) - some drag sound like this can be map with a shape, avoid always using simple sliders;
Rhythm:
. 00:29:577 - missing note, hear the sound "hu" i ni
. 00:30:479 - as above;
. 00:32:284 (1,2,3) - overmapping, there's nothing here that needs such emphasize;
. 00:32:735 - missing note;
. 00:38:825 (7,8,9) - I suggest change this to note 7 note 8 and slider 9, since there are two very obvious drum sounds at 00:38:825 - and 00:39:051 - ;
. 00:47:171 - the slider should begin at here;
. 00:57:322 - slider starts here;
PS. if u really want to follow the drum here 00:57:096 - , u can use a single note to express this;
. 01:59:352 - ^
. 01:57:773 - compare to the similar section: 00:43:788 - try to keep the consistency of them;
. 02:09:502 - also, look back to 00:57:322 - can do something the same as above;
. 02:43:111 (2) - slider should begin here: 02:43:224 - just as 02:39:276 (1,2) - ;
02:43:562 - and ends here;
NC:
. 00:57:322 (9) - NC;
. Try to add NC every few measures, they are rather randomly now;

Noraml
. 00:24:164 - missing note;
. 00:25:743 (1,2) - unclean, try to be symmetrical;
. 00:28:901 (8,1) - blanket;
. 00:31:607 - missing note;
. 00:55:968 (5,6) - blanket;
. 01:08:149 (5,6,1) - really unclean;
. 03:18:750 (4,5,6,7) - blanket;

The whole map set gives me a sense of very old maps, like those uploaded in year 2010;
Although I can see a lot of efforts during mapping, this set still needs polishing, and even some rework.
Hope my moddings may help;
Good luck~


Don`t worry, I really helped me your suggestions, thanks very :D
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Chalwa
1,105 posts
Joined August 2014
Chalwa
Hello! Mod from my queue!
I'm really sorry I'm late, but i wrote a message and you know all.
You said only Hard diff mod, so ok :)
General
  1. Soft-hitfinish2.wav: you haven't used this hitsound ever, so remove it
  2. You haven't used this images in storyboard, so remove it too:
    SB\circle.png
    SB\Screen_blur.png
    SB\Lyrics\25-L-Momo&Nana.png
    SB\Lyrics\9-L-Momo&Nana.png
  3. soft-hitfinish.wav have a 6ms delay click!! It's too high! I made for you new file with no delay click2!
Hard
  1. 00:14:916 (1) - I think you can put 1/1 slider here, cause this 00:15:367 vocal is strong
  2. 00:16:946 (4) - You can make this slider curved. Make curve at 304/336 and end at 328/304. You can make it, cause after thi part you have many curved sliders and it will fit more to song
  3. 00:21:231 (5,6) - Make it one slider for better look?
  4. 00:36:570 (1,2,3,4) - Make here something like this?
  5. 00:38:149 (1) - Imo you can make a little down curve here for better transitio
  6. 00:40:179 (1,2) and 00:41:307 (3,4) - Reversed 1/1 sliders will fit more than circle and 1/2 slider.
  7. 00:41:983 - I'm really confused why you didn't map this part. My sugestion is:
  8. 00:50:104 (5,6) - Ctrl + G thi two for better rhtyhm
  9. 00:57:998 - You can put a circle here, cause it's "ooo" here
  10. 01:03:412 (2) - Imo my slider is beter than yours :P ;)
  11. 01:05:203 and 01:05:329 - Imo you can put here notes stacked with 01:05:442 (1), unstack 01:05:667 (2) and stack it with 01:05:893 (3) slider
  12. 01:06:344 (4,5,6) - If you approve mod above stack 01:06:570 (5) with 01:06:795 (6)
  13. 01:15:592 (5) - This slider looks really ugly, so make it like on screen:
  14. 01:33:186 (4) - Copy 01:32:284 (1) and rotate about ~220 degrees
  15. 01:38:600 (2) - Fix DS here
  16. 01:48:073 (4) - I think you can make end of this slider at 344/264 for better transition and make a little circular flow here
  17. 01:49:201 (2) - Fix DS too
  18. 01:54:164 - The same like 00:41:983
  19. 02:04:991 (4) - Try to make this slider symmetrical
  20. 02:09:502 - You can put here two 1/4 double-repeats sliders for better rhythm
  21. 02:52:810 (3,4) - Copy 02:51:908 (1,2) and try to DS
  22. 03:03:186 (4) - Remove first slider node pls
  23. 03:14:239 (3) - Move end to 144/336 for make it parallel with slider before
Ok that's all...
It was a short look, cause busyyyy...
GOOD LUCK!
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Chalwa
1,105 posts
Joined August 2014
Chalwa
fck double post >.<
Alex3i2
397 posts
Joined January 2016
Alex3i2
Hi begginner NM
Hard : 00:20:329 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6674850
00:42:886 - Nothing here?
00:57:998 (2) - Circle?
01:04:540 (4,5) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6674906
01:28:675 (3,4) - stacked ? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6674930
01:51:231 (3,4,5,6) - uhmm this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6674945
01:55:066 - nothing here too?
02:52:810 (3,4) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6674958
03:03:186 (4) - slider looks bad , try to adjust it
03:23:036 (3) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6674968


Just opionions
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Alex3i2
397 posts
Joined January 2016
Alex3i2
Sorry for double post , osu lag :-s
CuteFunnyCat
80 posts
Joined February 2014
CuteFunnyCat
Hi im form the mod que.

Easy:

Blanket issues:
00:47:848 (2,3) - You could blanket this like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6675240 this.

Normal:

Overlap issues:
00:35:442 (6,7,8) - They are too together.
01:48:299 (7,1) - Overlap.
02:39:276 (4,5) - ^

Spacing difference:
00:46:946 (1,2) - Spacing difference.
01:01:156 (2,3) - ^
01:01:156 (2,3) - ^
01:01:156 (2,3) - ^

Hard:

Overlap issues:
01:07:923 (3,1) - Overlap.

This is all for my mod the map seems prety good.
CuteFunnyCat
80 posts
Joined February 2014
CuteFunnyCat
osu bugs did not let me post. Sorry
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CuteFunnyCat
80 posts
Joined February 2014
CuteFunnyCat
osu bugs did not let me post.
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CuteFunnyCat
80 posts
Joined February 2014
CuteFunnyCat
osu bugs did not let me post.
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CuteFunnyCat
80 posts
Joined February 2014
CuteFunnyCat
osu bugs did not let me post.
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CuteFunnyCat
80 posts
Joined February 2014
CuteFunnyCat
osu bugs did not let me post.
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CuteFunnyCat
80 posts
Joined February 2014
CuteFunnyCat
osu bugs did not let me post.
Akunosu
475 posts
Joined October 2015
Topic Starter
Akunosu

Chalwa wrote:

Hello! Mod from my queue!
I'm really sorry I'm late, but i wrote a message and you know all.
You said only Hard diff mod, so ok :)
General
  1. Soft-hitfinish2.wav: you haven't used this hitsound ever, so remove it
  2. You haven't used this images in storyboard, so remove it too:
    SB\circle.png
    SB\Screen_blur.png
    SB\Lyrics\25-L-Momo&Nana.png
    SB\Lyrics\9-L-Momo&Nana.png
  3. soft-hitfinish.wav have a 6ms delay click!! It's too high! I made for you new file with no delay click2!
Hard
  1. 00:14:916 (1) - I think you can put 1/1 slider here, cause this 00:15:367 vocal is strong
  2. 00:16:946 (4) - You can make this slider curved. Make curve at 304/336 and end at 328/304. You can make it, cause after thi part you have many curved sliders and it will fit more to song
  3. 00:21:231 (5,6) - Make it one slider for better look?
  4. 00:36:570 (1,2,3,4) - Make here something like this?
  5. 00:38:149 (1) - Imo you can make a little down curve here for better transitio
  6. 00:40:179 (1,2) and 00:41:307 (3,4) - Reversed 1/1 sliders will fit more than circle and 1/2 slider.
  7. 00:41:983 - I'm really confused why you didn't map this part. My sugestion is:
  8. 00:50:104 (5,6) - Ctrl + G thi two for better rhtyhm
  9. 00:57:998 - You can put a circle here, cause it's "ooo" here
  10. 01:03:412 (2) - Imo my slider is beter than yours :P ;)
  11. 01:05:203 and 01:05:329 - Imo you can put here notes stacked with 01:05:442 (1), unstack 01:05:667 (2) and stack it with 01:05:893 (3) slider
  12. 01:06:344 (4,5,6) - If you approve mod above stack 01:06:570 (5) with 01:06:795 (6)
  13. 01:15:592 (5) - This slider looks really ugly, so make it like on screen:
  14. 01:33:186 (4) - Copy 01:32:284 (1) and rotate about ~220 degrees
  15. 01:38:600 (2) - Fix DS here
  16. 01:48:073 (4) - I think you can make end of this slider at 344/264 for better transition and make a little circular flow here
  17. 01:49:201 (2) - Fix DS too
  18. 01:54:164 - The same like 00:41:983
  19. 02:04:991 (4) - Try to make this slider symmetrical
  20. 02:09:502 - You can put here two 1/4 double-repeats sliders for better rhythm
  21. 02:52:810 (3,4) - Copy 02:51:908 (1,2) and try to DS
  22. 03:03:186 (4) - Remove first slider node pls
  23. 03:14:239 (3) - Move end to 144/336 for make it parallel with slider before
Ok that's all...
It was a short look, cause busyyyy...
GOOD LUCK!
All corrected :D, except for first, thanks for el hitsound corrected :oops: and thanks for modding :)
Akunosu
475 posts
Joined October 2015
Topic Starter
Akunosu

TwillghtSparkle wrote:

Hi begginner NM
Hard : 00:20:329 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6674850
00:42:886 - Nothing here?
00:57:998 (2) - Circle?
01:04:540 (4,5) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6674906
01:28:675 (3,4) - stacked ? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6674930
01:51:231 (3,4,5,6) - uhmm this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6674945
01:55:066 - nothing here too?
02:52:810 (3,4) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6674958
03:03:186 (4) - slider looks bad , try to adjust it
03:23:036 (3) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6674968

Just opionions
ok, good mod helped me :oops:, very thanks for mod :D
Akunosu
475 posts
Joined October 2015
Topic Starter
Akunosu

CuteFunnyCat wrote:

Hi im form the mod que.

Easy:

Blanket issues:
00:47:848 (2,3) - You could blanket this like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6675240 this.

Normal:

Overlap issues:
00:35:442 (6,7,8) - They are too together.
01:48:299 (7,1) - Overlap.
02:39:276 (4,5) - ^

Spacing difference:
00:46:946 (1,2) - Spacing difference.
01:01:156 (2,3) - ^
01:01:156 (2,3) - ^
01:01:156 (2,3) - ^

Hard:

Overlap issues:
01:07:923 (3,1) - Overlap.

This is all for my mod the map seems prety good.
uhm... I don't understand the Normal: (space difference), but the others if I help me :), thanks for modding :D and the spam xD
_Meep_
1,707 posts
Joined April 2014
_Meep_
From my queue
momo is here so i am here ;3
omg nana's smirk HAHAHAH(no offense this artstyle just makes her already-bossy attitude become more asshole)

Hard <3
00:19:878 (5) - copy paste 00:19:427 (4) - and ctrl+H,then rotate it by -30 degrees and ctrl+G,gives better symmetry than the current slider
I pity lala shes in the BG of the storyboard but not in the song ;w;
00:41:758 - Considering 'Stop' sounds like a really sharp sound,I suggest adding a note here rather than the slider repeat

01:27:096 - OMAIGAWD BEST MOMO BG <3
01:44:464 (1,2) - blanket properly please~
01:51:683 (5,6) - Make this same DS as 01:51:457 (4,5) - ?
01:59:577 (7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2) - 10 single notes in a hard mode is pretty much a killer for those who do not have stamina,maybe try adding a slider on 02:00:028 - and 02:00:479 -
02:01:607 (2) - Make this a kickslider maybe?
02:03:073 - You could've mapped a note here
02:04:991 (4) - This slider looks bad imo -.- just use a normal curve
02:06:795 - from here,I'd like the rhythm changed to:

02:09:502 (2,3) - Line them up so it's easier to play
02:30:254 - woah woah whats with the badass but unrelated BG o-o
02:32:058 (1) - Make this a 3/4 repeat slider?
02:35:667 (1) - this too
02:37:021 (5,6,7,8,1) - I don't really hear a very distinct sound that plays a 5 note burst here,hard diff players may have trouble dealing with this as the beats may not be too loud,thus their fingers don't really want to tap or feel like tapping,consider changing this to a reverse slider
03:27:998 (5) - Why is this so much closer to 03:27:886 (4) - than the notes before?

short mod,sorry xd song is quite long
momo is love,momo is life
Akunosu
475 posts
Joined October 2015
Topic Starter
Akunosu

_Meep_ wrote:

From my queue
momo is here so i am here ;3
omg nana's smirk HAHAHAH(no offense this artstyle just makes her already-bossy attitude become more asshole)

Hard <3
00:19:878 (5) - copy paste 00:19:427 (4) - and ctrl+H,then rotate it by -30 degrees and ctrl+G,gives better symmetry than the current slider
I pity lala shes in the BG of the storyboard but not in the song ;w;
00:41:758 - Considering 'Stop' sounds like a really sharp sound,I suggest adding a note here rather than the slider repeat

01:27:096 - OMAIGAWD BEST MOMO BG <3
01:44:464 (1,2) - blanket properly please~
01:51:683 (5,6) - Make this same DS as 01:51:457 (4,5) - ?
01:59:577 (7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2) - 10 single notes in a hard mode is pretty much a killer for those who do not have stamina,maybe try adding a slider on 02:00:028 - and 02:00:479 -
02:01:607 (2) - Make this a kickslider maybe?
02:03:073 - You could've mapped a note here
02:04:991 (4) - This slider looks bad imo -.- just use a normal curve
02:06:795 - from here,I'd like the rhythm changed to:

02:09:502 (2,3) - Line them up so it's easier to play
02:30:254 - woah woah whats with the badass but unrelated BG o-o
02:32:058 (1) - Make this a 3/4 repeat slider?
02:35:667 (1) - this too
02:37:021 (5,6,7,8,1) - I don't really hear a very distinct sound that plays a 5 note burst here,hard diff players may have trouble dealing with this as the beats may not be too loud,thus their fingers don't really want to tap or feel like tapping,consider changing this to a reverse slider
03:27:998 (5) - Why is this so much closer to 03:27:886 (4) - than the notes before?

short mod,sorry xd song is quite long
momo is love,momo is life
xD, all corrected, thanks for mod Momo's fan :oops:
Yijun_old_1
65 posts
Joined June 2016
Yijun_old_1
hi

[Easy]

[notice]
00:27:998 (4) - you could probably blanket this slider better

will continue mod later {{BUZY}}
Yijun_old_1
65 posts
Joined June 2016
Yijun_old_1
hello

[Easy]

00:27:998 (4) - you could have blanketed this slider better like this

the mp3 is way shorter than the part you mapped. consider mapping the whole song

[Normal]

00:49:878 - the circle is placed on a section where there is no significant sound

02:13:562 (2) - this pattern is just aesthetically un-pleasing so maybe this would look more proper.

[Hard]

nothing really but if i notice anything i'll update this mod
Yijun_old_1
65 posts
Joined June 2016
Yijun_old_1
hello

[Easy]

00:27:998 (4) - you could have blanketed this slider better like this

the mp3 is way shorter than the part you mapped. consider mapping the whole song

[Normal]

[notice]
00:49:878 - the circle is placed on a section where there is no significant sound
Akunosu
475 posts
Joined October 2015
Topic Starter
Akunosu

Yijun wrote:

hello

[Easy]

00:27:998 (4) - you could have blanketed this slider better like this

the mp3 is way shorter than the part you mapped. consider mapping the whole song

[Normal]

00:49:878 - the circle is placed on a section where there is no significant sound

02:13:562 (2) - this pattern is just aesthetically un-pleasing so maybe this would look more proper.

[Hard]

nothing really but if i notice anything i'll update this mod
all ok Yijun, thanks for modding :oops:
fLaw
24 posts
Joined April 2015
fLaw
Mod for Hard difficulty

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01:04:540 (4) - because this and 01:04:878 (5) are fast doubles, it'd help to read by having them opposite ways. Like here > http://i.imgur.com/pFFXzKd.png
01:09:276 (2) - This singer's pitch on this note is lower than the previous note. I'd suggest not stacking these notes to reflect that > http://i.imgur.com/BbT81Lg.png
01:10:179 (5) - Same thing on this note > http://i.imgur.com/E93UGjH.png
01:10:855 (1,2,3,4) - The way each word is held for 1/4 a note would flow better as two sliders, like here > http://i.imgur.com/FLYE5pA.png
01:46:043 (4,5) - I would say make these two notes a single slider, again because of the singing
02:03:186 (1) - This note isn't spaced with 1.0x spacing like most of the notes are. Makes it run together a bit much with the 5 burst
02:31:156 (2) - Same with these, except its placed a bit further. Makes it a bit harder to read the rhythm here.
02:40:179 (4,5) - You could make these into a slider, maybe one that is the opposite of 02:41:081 (1)
03:20:216 (5) - Again with opposite fast doubles. Not too important tho imo
03:24:389 (1) - I would say make this two separate notes instead of a slider, because two words are sung here
03:25:292 (3) - ^Same with this slider
-----------------

Thats all from me ^^
Other than that, I think this was a great difficulty.
The only general thing I would point out is how most of the notes are clustered around the middle. If you use Ctr+A you'll see that pretty much all the corners are empty. Not saying you have to put a lot of notes in the corner, just something to think about for future 8-)
Akunosu
475 posts
Joined October 2015
Topic Starter
Akunosu

fLaw wrote:

Mod for Hard difficulty

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01:04:540 (4) - because this and 01:04:878 (5) are fast doubles, it'd help to read by having them opposite ways. Like here > http://i.imgur.com/pFFXzKd.png
01:09:276 (2) - This singer's pitch on this note is lower than the previous note. I'd suggest not stacking these notes to reflect that > http://i.imgur.com/BbT81Lg.png
01:10:179 (5) - Same thing on this note > http://i.imgur.com/E93UGjH.png
01:10:855 (1,2,3,4) - The way each word is held for 1/4 a note would flow better as two sliders, like here > http://i.imgur.com/FLYE5pA.png
01:46:043 (4,5) - I would say make these two notes a single slider, again because of the singing
02:03:186 (1) - This note isn't spaced with 1.0x spacing like most of the notes are. Makes it run together a bit much with the 5 burst
02:31:156 (2) - Same with these, except its placed a bit further. Makes it a bit harder to read the rhythm here.
02:40:179 (4,5) - You could make these into a slider, maybe one that is the opposite of 02:41:081 (1)
03:20:216 (5) - Again with opposite fast doubles. Not too important tho imo
03:24:389 (1) - I would say make this two separate notes instead of a slider, because two words are sung here
03:25:292 (3) - ^Same with this slider
-----------------

Thats all from me ^^
Other than that, I think this was a great difficulty.
The only general thing I would point out is how most of the notes are clustered around the middle. If you use Ctr+A you'll see that pretty much all the corners are empty. Not saying you have to put a lot of notes in the corner, just something to think about for future 8-)
thanks for modding and thanks for advice :D
YukiZura-
762 posts
Joined October 2015
YukiZura-
from mod queue - Bye Bye 2016
sorry late lol xD

Hard

00:18:299 - i think you should put 1/6 reverse slider here cuz there is a strong sound i heard

00:46:495 (4,5,1) - blanket this together
01:09:953 - nc here?
00:59:577 (2) - move a little bit up the slider that i highlight cuz the distance blanket you made not nice enough ^^
example
01:30:479 - same like this one 00:18:299 -
02:34:089 - i dont hear any sound here?
03:28:675 - move this a little bit up since you made this slider like this 03:27:998 -
example

goodluck ^^
<3
Akunosu
475 posts
Joined October 2015
Topic Starter
Akunosu

YukiZura- wrote:

from mod queue - Bye Bye 2016
sorry late lol xD

Hard

00:18:299 - i think you should put 1/6 reverse slider here cuz there is a strong sound i heard

00:46:495 (4,5,1) - blanket this together
01:09:953 - nc here?
00:59:577 (2) - move a little bit up the slider that i highlight cuz the distance blanket you made not nice enough ^^
example
01:30:479 - same like this one 00:18:299 -
02:34:089 - i dont hear any sound here?
03:28:675 - move this a little bit up since you made this slider like this 03:27:998 -
example

goodluck ^^
<3
I thought you had my request rejected :cry:, well,I already corrected it, thanks for modding :)
O-Moei
O-Moei
Hi !

Hard
I bet you want to keep the spacing as their reading movement, so please check AIMod spacing issues

01:59:126 (6,7,1) - I suggest keep follow the vocal here to equalize with 00:47:171 (1) -

01:59:577 (7,1) - Swap NC

01:10:855 (1,2,3,4) - Why it's different with 02:23:036 (1,2,3,4) - ?

00:55:968 (6,7,8) - Not really everyone's taste, but maybe make this like 02:08:600 (1) - and 03:11:758 (1) -

02:44:464 - Pull the break timing to 02:44:690 -

03:27:998 (5) - NC

Good luck !
Akunosu
475 posts
Joined October 2015
Topic Starter
Akunosu

O-Moei wrote:

Hi !

Hard
I bet you want to keep the spacing as their reading movement, so please check AIMod spacing issues

01:59:126 (6,7,1) - I suggest keep follow the vocal here to equalize with 00:47:171 (1) -

01:59:577 (7,1) - Swap NC

01:10:855 (1,2,3,4) - Why it's different with 02:23:036 (1,2,3,4) - ?

00:55:968 (6,7,8) - Not really everyone's taste, but maybe make this like 02:08:600 (1) - and 03:11:758 (1) -

02:44:464 - Pull the break timing to 02:44:690 -

03:27:998 (5) - NC

Good luck !
it is already corrected, ty :D
x incoming
93 posts
Joined September 2015
x incoming
General
  1. Your storyboard has suggestive themes at 01:27:096 - you need to give a warning on beatmap page
  2. Some AiMod problems
Hard
  1. 00:15:818 (2) - New combo here since the notes aren't a pattern together (change this for every time in the map)
  2. 00:16:946 (1) - With a new combo here instead
  3. 00:23:036 (2) - New combo here too, because it is confusing at 00:24:615 (3,4) when you expect same wait pattern
  4. 00:41:307 (1) - New combo to show wait, like here 01:02:735 (1)
  5. 01:02:735 (1) - I think just a normal slider would sound better here
  6. 01:03:412 (2) - New combo again here for reasons said already
  7. 01:05:216 (6,7,1) - I don't think you should curve the stream here, stack it neater
  8. 01:10:855 (1,2,3,4) - For this section you map to vocals but here is strange, try 3 sliders then 1 note on white tick instead
  9. 01:12:660 (1) - But here you start on instrument as slider instead of a single note and then sliders for vocals
  10. 01:50:329 (1,2) - The vocals sound like you should make the slider at (1) instead and because (2) ends on a beat
  11. 02:02:510 (4,5,6,7,8) - You miss a beat here 02:03:082 to start slider on vocals, it's confusing and too challenging. Suggestion is to replace with repeat slider
  12. 02:14:916 (5) - Odd repeat slider again, better as just single slider
  13. 02:17:397 - Here is better place for repeat slider
  14. 02:24:389 (5) - I can't hear these beats in the song
Last edited by x incoming , edited 1 time in total.
x incoming
93 posts
Joined September 2015
x incoming
double post because forum messed up oops :o
Akunosu
475 posts
Joined October 2015
Topic Starter
Akunosu

Toehoe wrote:

General
  1. Your storyboard has suggestive themes at 01:27:096 - you need to give a warning on beatmap page
  2. Some AiMod problems
Hard
  1. 00:15:818 (2) - New combo here since the notes aren't a pattern together (change this for every time in the map)
  2. 00:16:946 (1) - With a new combo here instead
  3. 00:23:036 (2) - New combo here too, because it is confusing at 00:24:615 (3,4) when you expect same wait pattern
  4. 00:41:307 (1) - New combo to show wait, like here 01:02:735 (1)
  5. 01:02:735 (1) - I think just a normal slider would sound better here
  6. 01:03:412 (2) - New combo again here for reasons said already
  7. 01:05:216 (6,7,1) - I don't think you should curve the stream here, stack it neater
  8. 01:10:855 (1,2,3,4) - For this section you map to vocals but here is strange, try 3 sliders then 1 note on white tick instead
  9. 01:12:660 (1) - But here you start on instrument as slider instead of a single note and then sliders for vocals
  10. 01:50:329 (1,2) - The vocals sound like you should make the slider at (1) instead and because (2) ends on a beat
  11. 02:02:510 (4,5,6,7,8) - You miss a beat here 02:03:082 to start slider on vocals, it's confusing and too challenging. Suggestion is to replace with repeat slider
  12. 02:14:916 (5) - Odd repeat slider again, better as just single slider
  13. 02:17:397 - Here is better place for repeat slider
  14. 02:24:389 (5) - I can't hear these beats in the song
it's ok, thanks for advices of NC, and modding :lol:
PyroBear
144 posts
Joined October 2015
PyroBear
[Hard]
  1. 00:42:886 - why isn't this mapped? The same goes for 01:55:066
  2. 00:56:419 (7) - NC
  3. 03:14:916 (1,2,3) - Confusing spacing imo, either stack (1) with (2,3) or space them apart.
  4. 03:20:780 (1,3) - These should be a 1/2 slider instead of a circle.
  5. 03:31:607 (1) - You should map this instead of putting a spinner.
That's all I have since a well made map and there's a lot of mods already.
Akunosu
475 posts
Joined October 2015
Topic Starter
Akunosu

PyroBear wrote:

[Hard]
  1. 00:42:886 - why isn't this mapped? The same goes for 01:55:066
  2. 00:56:419 (7) - NC
  3. 03:14:916 (1,2,3) - Confusing spacing imo, either stack (1) with (2,3) or space them apart.
  4. 03:20:780 (1,3) - These should be a 1/2 slider instead of a circle.
  5. 03:31:607 (1) - You should map this instead of putting a spinner.
That's all I have since a well made map and there's a lot of mods already.
Thanks for modding Pyrobear, it's done :D
Jonarwhal
1,227 posts
Joined November 2013
Jonarwhal
IRC NM
12:56 Jonawaga: hello Acnos~
12:57 Acnos: hi! :D
12:57 Jonawaga: how are you? ^_^
12:59 Acnos: I'm fine, and you? :)
12:59 Jonawaga: I'm fine >w<
13:00 Jonawaga: wanna mod?
13:00 *Jonawaga is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1094486 Toyosaki Aki & Kanae Itou - Saiai Darling! [Easy]]
13:00 Acnos: yes :)
13:00 Jonawaga: okay!
13:01 *Jonawaga is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1094486 Toyosaki Aki & Kanae Itou - Saiai Darling! [Easy]]
13:01 Jonawaga: 00:21:683 (5,1) - fix the snapping
13:01 Jonawaga: 00:41:081 (2) - remove this
13:01 Jonawaga: 00:41:532 (3) - move this to 00:41:307 - here
13:03 Jonawaga: 00:56:419 (3) - here, try this rhythm: https://imgur-archive.ppy.sh/TYjnJea.jpg
13:04 Acnos: ok, it's done
13:04 Jonawaga: all that?
13:04 Jonawaga: 01:12:660 - you missed an NC here, so 01:12:209 (5) - change this to 2 circels and NC the second
13:05 Jonawaga: 01:53:487 - same as before
13:06 Jonawaga: 02:08:600 (3) - same as before
13:07 Jonawaga: 02:27:547 (1,1) - In Easy, you generally need 4 beats of rest after a spinner
13:08 Jonawaga: In this BPM, I think you should use at least 3~4 beats, not just 2
13:10 Jonawaga: 02:59:126 - 50% is too quiet for the volume here, please raise it so I can hear the objects better
13:10 Jonawaga: 03:11:758 (3) - same as 02:08:600 (3) -
13:10 Jonawaga: 03:18:525 (3,4) - fix DS
13:11 Jonawaga: that's all for Easy
13:11 Jonawaga: tell me when to move on~
13:19 Acnos: https://puu.sh/t8QPt/b8c1320d9c.jpg
13:19 Acnos: it's fine?
13:19 Jonawaga: for the spinner?
13:20 Acnos: yes
13:20 Jonawaga: https://imgur-archive.ppy.sh/jjsuEMz.jpg
13:21 Jonawaga: spinner recovery is the section I marked in red
13:21 Jonawaga: the time the player has to recover from the spinner
13:21 Jonawaga: Easy players need more time for recovery, so I would recommend you make it 3~4 beats between the spinner and the next object
13:33 Acnos: Ya esta :D
13:33 Acnos: it's don :D
13:33 Acnos: *done
13:33 Jonawaga: puedo mirar?
13:36 Acnos: how??
13:36 Acnos: uploading??
13:36 Jonawaga: yes
13:36 Acnos: ok
13:36 Jonawaga: of course jajaja
13:38 Acnos: it's done :D
13:38 Jonawaga: the upload?
13:40 Acnos: yes
13:40 Jonawaga: oh
13:41 Jonawaga: 02:27:547 (1,1) - you didn't fix the spinner ;-;
13:43 Acnos: you told me 4 beats, no?
13:43 Acnos: and Leave a little rest
13:43 Jonawaga: I only see 2 beats
13:44 Jonawaga: to get 4 beats of rest you either need to remove 02:31:156 - this or end the spinner 02:29:352 - here
13:46 Acnos: ayaaa, I think 4 hit circles xD
13:46 Acnos: sorry
13:46 Jonawaga: oh jejeje
13:46 Jonawaga: debo explicar mas
13:48 Acnos: that's my fault, sorry
13:48 Acnos: beats is the lines whites, no?
13:48 Jonawaga: yes
13:48 Acnos: ok thanks :D
13:48 Jonawaga: denada
13:49 Acnos: is the only mistake, no??
13:49 Jonawaga: creo que
13:50 Jonawaga: Normal ahora?
13:50 Acnos: yes pls :D
13:50 Jonawaga: 00:16:720 - whyis this a reverse slider?
13:51 Jonawaga: 00:16:720 - no puedo escuhar nada aqui
13:52 Jonawaga: quizas https://imgur-archive.ppy.sh/6w4lzZo.jpg este es mejor
13:52 Jonawaga: 00:18:525 (1,2) - los cambia a mismo, por favor
13:53 Jonawaga: https://imgur-archive.ppy.sh/uPY6rFQ.jpg
13:53 Jonawaga: lo ves mejor en mi opinión
13:54 Jonawaga: 00:20:329 (3) - move a 00:20:329 (3) - aqui
13:55 Jonawaga: 00:27:547 (3,4,5,6,7) - demasiado circles, es demasiado dificil para Normal >.<
13:56 Jonawaga: 00:34:765 (4,5,6,7,8) - demasiado 1/2 aqui, retira unas 1/2 ritmas
13:56 Jonawaga: 00:41:758 (4) - cambia a un circle
13:58 Jonawaga: termine?
13:59 Acnos: wait
14:02 Acnos: 00:20:329 (3) - Where do I move it?
14:02 Jonawaga: 00:20:104 - aqui
14:03 Acnos: ok
14:03 Jonawaga: https://imgur-archive.ppy.sh/5kKD1xC.jpg quizas
14:04 Jonawaga: segue las voces, verdad?
14:06 Acnos: yep
14:06 Jonawaga: >.<
14:06 Jonawaga: you overmapped some parts
14:06 Jonawaga: and you missed a lot of vocals
14:07 Jonawaga: you may have to remap this difficulty at some point
14:07 Jonawaga: 00:23:036 (2) - this slider missed the vocal sound 00:23:261 - here, and instead it ends 00:23:487 - here, where there's no sound
14:08 Jonawaga: 00:27:322 - you missed a very clear vocal here, but 00:27:547 - you mapped this, which has no vocal
14:09 Jonawaga: 00:27:547 (3,4,5,6,7) - and you should never use 5 1/2 circles in a row in Normal, it's too hard for a Normal player
14:10 Jonawaga: entiendo?
14:12 Acnos: I'm going to fix everything
14:13 Jonawaga: owo
14:13 Acnos: In difficulty normal...
14:13 Acnos: Is necesary the "flow"?
14:13 Jonawaga: flow is always necesary in Normal and Easy
14:13 Jonawaga: it can be broken a little in higher difficulties
14:14 Acnos: ok, is necesary Avoid "overlap"?
14:15 Jonawaga: generalmente, yes
14:15 Jonawaga: but you can break it higher difficulties because it looks better
14:16 Jonawaga: a veces lo ves mejor
14:18 Jonawaga: por exemplo, 00:45:260 (5) - esta mapa ves muy bien con overlap
14:18 Jonawaga: dsvuieaw
14:18 *Jonawaga is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/990396 USAO - Dynamite (Extended Mix) [TWERK]]
14:18 Jonawaga: esta mapa jajaj
14:19 Acnos: perdon, por demorar, I'm little busy ;(
14:20 Jonawaga: no hay una problema :)
14:20 Jonawaga: hasta luego?
14:20 Acnos: Can you tell me if my difficulty hard is fine?, pls
14:20 Acnos: no, todavia xD
14:20 Jonawaga:  7oh
14:21 Acnos: the difficulty normal, I'm going to remap all
14:22 Jonawaga: bueno suerte
14:22 Jonawaga: hard tiene una porblema un poco complicada
14:23 Acnos: cual?
14:23 Jonawaga: press ctrl+a
14:23 Jonawaga: y mire a la cosa
14:23 Acnos: ok?
14:24 Acnos: select all?
14:24 Jonawaga: si y mire
14:24 Jonawaga: https://imgur-archive.ppy.sh/y1tMI6X.jpg
14:24 Jonawaga: esta es un poco extrena
14:25 Jonawaga: compara con un mapa de rank
14:25 Acnos: I don't understand :/
14:25 Jonawaga: compara a https://imgur-archive.ppy.sh/dglKqvs.jpg
14:26 Acnos: Is full?
14:26 Acnos: :O
14:26 Acnos: Is full!!
14:27 Jonawaga: yeah
14:27 Acnos: then, I have to full?
14:27 Jonawaga: hmm
14:28 Jonawaga: it's hard to explain
14:28 Jonawaga: because you didn't fill it, your map seems cluttered in certain places
14:30 Jonawaga: for example, before 00:54:615 (1) - this slider, you never went farther to the right
14:30 Jonawaga: https://imgur-archive.ppy.sh/nkKbHNK.jpg
14:31 Jonawaga: you don't have to completely fill the map, but if you work on making the patterns take advantage of the space you have, then it will have several advantages
14:31 Jonawaga: the player moves around more, there is less overlap, etc.
14:33 Acnos: ahh, es verdad xD
14:33 Jonawaga:  >w<
14:33 Acnos: entonces tambien corregire eso
14:33 Acnos: muchas gracias
14:33 Jonawaga: denada
14:34 Acnos: tengo que irme, mañana te puedo pedir ayuda?
bueno suerte
Metaku
524 posts
Joined August 2015
Metaku
Just checked back on the map for the first time since modding it :D Looking good! Wish you luck with it :)
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