Chalwa wrote:

Hello! Mod from my queue!
I'm really sorry I'm late, but i wrote a message and you know all.
You said only Hard diff mod, so ok
General

1. Soft-hitfinish2.wav: you haven't used this hitsound ever, so remove it
2. You haven't used this images in storyboard, so remove it too:
   SB\circle.png
   SB\Screen_blur.png
   SB\Lyrics\25-L-Momo&Nana.png
   SB\Lyrics\9-L-Momo&Nana.png
3. soft-hitfinish.wav have a 6ms delay click!! It's too high! I made for you new file with no delay click2!

Hard

1. 00:14:916 (1) - I think you can put 1/1 slider here, cause this 00:15:367 vocal is strong
2. 00:16:946 (4) - You can make this slider curved. Make curve at 304/336 and end at 328/304. You can make it, cause after thi part you have many curved sliders and it will fit more to song
3. 00:21:231 (5,6) - Make it one slider for better look?
4. 00:36:570 (1,2,3,4) - Make here something like this?
5. 00:38:149 (1) - Imo you can make a little down curve here for better transitio
6. 00:40:179 (1,2) and 00:41:307 (3,4) - Reversed 1/1 sliders will fit more than circle and 1/2 slider.
7. 00:41:983 - I'm really confused why you didn't map this part. My sugestion is:
8. 00:50:104 (5,6) - Ctrl + G thi two for better rhtyhm
9. 00:57:998 - You can put a circle here, cause it's "ooo" here
10. 01:03:412 (2) - Imo my slider is beter than yours
11. 01:05:203 and 01:05:329 - Imo you can put here notes stacked with 01:05:442 (1), unstack 01:05:667 (2) and stack it with 01:05:893 (3) slider
12. 01:06:344 (4,5,6) - If you approve mod above stack 01:06:570 (5) with 01:06:795 (6)
13. 01:15:592 (5) - This slider looks really ugly, so make it like on screen:
14. 01:33:186 (4) - Copy 01:32:284 (1) and rotate about ~220 degrees
15. 01:38:600 (2) - Fix DS here
16. 01:48:073 (4) - I think you can make end of this slider at 344/264 for better transition and make a little circular flow here
17. 01:49:201 (2) - Fix DS too
18. 01:54:164 - The same like 00:41:983
19. 02:04:991 (4) - Try to make this slider symmetrical
20. 02:09:502 - You can put here two 1/4 double-repeats sliders for better rhythm
21. 02:52:810 (3,4) - Copy 02:51:908 (1,2) and try to DS
22. 03:03:186 (4) - Remove first slider node pls
23. 03:14:239 (3) - Move end to 144/336 for make it parallel with slider before

Ok that's all...
It was a short look, cause busyyyy...
GOOD LUCK!

TwillghtSparkle wrote:

Hi begginner NM
Hard : 00:20:329 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6674850
00:42:886 - Nothing here?
00:57:998 (2) - Circle?
01:04:540 (4,5) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6674906
01:28:675 (3,4) - stacked ? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6674930
01:51:231 (3,4,5,6) - uhmm this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6674945
01:55:066 - nothing here too?
02:52:810 (3,4) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6674958
03:03:186 (4) - slider looks bad , try to adjust it
03:23:036 (3) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6674968

Just opionions

CuteFunnyCat wrote:

Hi im form the mod que.

Easy:

Blanket issues:
00:47:848 (2,3) - You could blanket this like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6675240 this.

Normal:

Overlap issues:
00:35:442 (6,7,8) - They are too together.
01:48:299 (7,1) - Overlap.
02:39:276 (4,5) - ^

Spacing difference:
00:46:946 (1,2) - Spacing difference.
01:01:156 (2,3) - ^
01:01:156 (2,3) - ^
01:01:156 (2,3) - ^

Hard:

Overlap issues:
01:07:923 (3,1) - Overlap.

This is all for my mod the map seems prety good.

_Meep_ wrote:

From my queue

momo is here so i am here ;3
omg nana's smirk HAHAHAH(no offense this artstyle just makes her already-bossy attitude become more asshole)

Hard <3
00:19:878 (5) - copy paste 00:19:427 (4) - and ctrl+H,then rotate it by -30 degrees and ctrl+G,gives better symmetry than the current slider
I pity lala shes in the BG of the storyboard but not in the song ;w;
00:41:758 - Considering 'Stop' sounds like a really sharp sound,I suggest adding a note here rather than the slider repeat

01:27:096 - OMAIGAWD BEST MOMO BG <3
01:44:464 (1,2) - blanket properly please~
01:51:683 (5,6) - Make this same DS as 01:51:457 (4,5) - ?
01:59:577 (7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2) - 10 single notes in a hard mode is pretty much a killer for those who do not have stamina,maybe try adding a slider on 02:00:028 - and 02:00:479 -
02:01:607 (2) - Make this a kickslider maybe?
02:03:073 - You could've mapped a note here
02:04:991 (4) - This slider looks bad imo -.- just use a normal curve
02:06:795 - from here,I'd like the rhythm changed to:

02:09:502 (2,3) - Line them up so it's easier to play
02:30:254 - woah woah whats with the badass but unrelated BG o-o
02:32:058 (1) - Make this a 3/4 repeat slider?
02:35:667 (1) - this too
02:37:021 (5,6,7,8,1) - I don't really hear a very distinct sound that plays a 5 note burst here,hard diff players may have trouble dealing with this as the beats may not be too loud,thus their fingers don't really want to tap or feel like tapping,consider changing this to a reverse slider
03:27:998 (5) - Why is this so much closer to 03:27:886 (4) - than the notes before?

short mod,sorry xd song is quite long
momo is love,momo is life

Yijun wrote:

hello

[Easy]

00:27:998 (4) - you could have blanketed this slider better like this

the mp3 is way shorter than the part you mapped. consider mapping the whole song

[Normal]

00:49:878 - the circle is placed on a section where there is no significant sound

02:13:562 (2) - this pattern is just aesthetically un-pleasing so maybe this would look more proper.

[Hard]

nothing really but if i notice anything i'll update this mod

fLaw wrote:

Mod for Hard difficulty

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01:04:540 (4) - because this and 01:04:878 (5) are fast doubles, it'd help to read by having them opposite ways. Like here > http://i.imgur.com/pFFXzKd.png
01:09:276 (2) - This singer's pitch on this note is lower than the previous note. I'd suggest not stacking these notes to reflect that > http://i.imgur.com/BbT81Lg.png
01:10:179 (5) - Same thing on this note > http://i.imgur.com/E93UGjH.png
01:10:855 (1,2,3,4) - The way each word is held for 1/4 a note would flow better as two sliders, like here > http://i.imgur.com/FLYE5pA.png
01:46:043 (4,5) - I would say make these two notes a single slider, again because of the singing
02:03:186 (1) - This note isn't spaced with 1.0x spacing like most of the notes are. Makes it run together a bit much with the 5 burst
02:31:156 (2) - Same with these, except its placed a bit further. Makes it a bit harder to read the rhythm here.
02:40:179 (4,5) - You could make these into a slider, maybe one that is the opposite of 02:41:081 (1)
03:20:216 (5) - Again with opposite fast doubles. Not too important tho imo
03:24:389 (1) - I would say make this two separate notes instead of a slider, because two words are sung here
03:25:292 (3) - ^Same with this slider
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Thats all from me ^^
Other than that, I think this was a great difficulty.
The only general thing I would point out is how most of the notes are clustered around the middle. If you use Ctr+A you'll see that pretty much all the corners are empty. Not saying you have to put a lot of notes in the corner, just something to think about for future

YukiZura- wrote:

from mod queue - Bye Bye 2016
sorry late lol xD

Hard

00:18:299 - i think you should put 1/6 reverse slider here cuz there is a strong sound i heard

00:46:495 (4,5,1) - blanket this together
01:09:953 - nc here?
00:59:577 (2) - move a little bit up the slider that i highlight cuz the distance blanket you made not nice enough ^^

example

01:30:479 - same like this one 00:18:299 -
02:34:089 - i dont hear any sound here?
03:28:675 - move this a little bit up since you made this slider like this 03:27:998 -

example

goodluck ^^
<3

O-Moei wrote:

Hi !

Hard
I bet you want to keep the spacing as their reading movement, so please check AIMod spacing issues

01:59:126 (6,7,1) - I suggest keep follow the vocal here to equalize with 00:47:171 (1) -

01:59:577 (7,1) - Swap NC

01:10:855 (1,2,3,4) - Why it's different with 02:23:036 (1,2,3,4) - ?

00:55:968 (6,7,8) - Not really everyone's taste, but maybe make this like 02:08:600 (1) - and 03:11:758 (1) -

02:44:464 - Pull the break timing to 02:44:690 -

03:27:998 (5) - NC

Good luck !

Toehoe wrote:

General

1. Your storyboard has suggestive themes at 01:27:096 - you need to give a warning on beatmap page
2. Some AiMod problems

Hard

1. 00:15:818 (2) - New combo here since the notes aren't a pattern together (change this for every time in the map)
2. 00:16:946 (1) - With a new combo here instead
3. 00:23:036 (2) - New combo here too, because it is confusing at 00:24:615 (3,4) when you expect same wait pattern
4. 00:41:307 (1) - New combo to show wait, like here 01:02:735 (1)
5. 01:02:735 (1) - I think just a normal slider would sound better here
6. 01:03:412 (2) - New combo again here for reasons said already
7. 01:05:216 (6,7,1) - I don't think you should curve the stream here, stack it neater
8. 01:10:855 (1,2,3,4) - For this section you map to vocals but here is strange, try 3 sliders then 1 note on white tick instead
9. 01:12:660 (1) - But here you start on instrument as slider instead of a single note and then sliders for vocals
10. 01:50:329 (1,2) - The vocals sound like you should make the slider at (1) instead and because (2) ends on a beat
11. 02:02:510 (4,5,6,7,8) - You miss a beat here 02:03:082 to start slider on vocals, it's confusing and too challenging. Suggestion is to replace with repeat slider
12. 02:14:916 (5) - Odd repeat slider again, better as just single slider
13. 02:17:397 - Here is better place for repeat slider
14. 02:24:389 (5) - I can't hear these beats in the song

1. 00:42:886 - why isn't this mapped? The same goes for 01:55:066
2. 00:56:419 (7) - NC
3. 03:14:916 (1,2,3) - Confusing spacing imo, either stack (1) with (2,3) or space them apart.
4. 03:20:780 (1,3) - These should be a 1/2 slider instead of a circle.
5. 03:31:607 (1) - You should map this instead of putting a spinner.

PyroBear wrote:

[Hard]

1. 00:42:886 - why isn't this mapped? The same goes for 01:55:066
2. 00:56:419 (7) - NC
3. 03:14:916 (1,2,3) - Confusing spacing imo, either stack (1) with (2,3) or space them apart.
4. 03:20:780 (1,3) - These should be a 1/2 slider instead of a circle.
5. 03:31:607 (1) - You should map this instead of putting a spinner.

That's all I have since a well made map and there's a lot of mods already.

Metaku wrote:

Just checked back on the map for the first time since modding it Looking good! Wish you luck with it

1. Most of the sliders in the map don't blanket the notes properly. Some examples are 00:47:848 (2,3) - and 01:39:276 (3,4) . Blanketing is a stylistic choice but you do it properly in the other diffs which makes it look especially sloppy here. I recommend going over all the notes carefully and making sure everything is blanketed properly.
2. 00:51:006 (1,2,3,4) - This is really low note density, especially for a chorus section. It would be more acceptable in a verse or during a bridge but it seems undermapped here
3. 02:03:186 (1,2,3) - ^ see above
4. 03:11:758 (3) - You could make this slider follow the beat, ie make it shorter so that it ends on the red tick. It would break up the (1,2) (1,2) repetition and is simple enough for an easy diff

1. 00:56:419 (6) - Try making this slider follow the beat, ie make it shorter so that it ends on the red tick.
2. 02:31:156 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3) - This entire section is basically spinning around in a big clockwise circle, which can get boring. I recommend changing up the flow so that it's less repetitive.

1. Try adding some more hitsounds in the Easy and Normal diffs. I only really notices any in the Hard diff

30201102 wrote:

[Easy]

1. Most of the sliders in the map don't blanket the notes properly. Some examples are 00:47:848 (2,3) - and 01:39:276 (3,4) . Blanketing is a stylistic choice but you do it properly in the other diffs which makes it look especially sloppy here. I recommend going over all the notes carefully and making sure everything is blanketed properly.
2. 00:51:006 (1,2,3,4) - This is really low note density, especially for a chorus section. It would be more acceptable in a verse or during a bridge but it seems undermapped here
3. 02:03:186 (1,2,3) - ^ see above
4. 03:11:758 (3) - You could make this slider follow the beat, ie make it shorter so that it ends on the red tick. It would break up the (1,2) (1,2) repetition and is simple enough for an easy diff

[Normal]

1. 00:56:419 (6) - Try making this slider follow the beat, ie make it shorter so that it ends on the red tick.
2. 02:31:156 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3) - This entire section is basically spinning around in a big clockwise circle, which can get boring. I recommend changing up the flow so that it's less repetitive.

[General]

1. Try adding some more hitsounds in the Easy and Normal diffs. I only really notices any in the Hard diff

Gyeoul wrote:

Sorry for taking so long to reply...
This was posted on my modding queue, but honestly there's not much I can suggest you. The only thing I'd point out is that imo some of the clap hitsounds didn't fit very well, such as from 00:29:352 to 00:36:570, for example (they sound too loud, I'd continue with the previously used hitsounds), but that's nothing "unrankable" or anything.
Very lovely storyboard!

psdt: sorry for reply you late

• 
  [General]

1. I point out that Storyboard lyrics are wrong
   
   SB

   
   そのつづきをおしえて
   
   にふん まえ
   
   唇が熱い
   
   そんなみつめないで
   
   じゅんあいおんど
   
   5℃じょうしょう

• 
  [Easy]

1. 00:18:073 - Why are not you picking up the sound here?
2. 00:25:292 - ^
3. 00:34:765 (6) - There is no sound in the reverse
   If I am, I will erase (7) and extend (6)
   
4. 00:47:397 (1,3) - Let's stack
5. 00:53:713 (3,1) - If it is not blanket, the flow is bad
   Please place it so that there is (1) at the end of (3)
6. 01:46:946 (1) -
   00:34:765 (6)same
7. 01:57:322 (3,4) - Not blanket
8. 02:04:991 (1) - Let's put delete NC because combo number is short
9. 02:19:427 (1) - ^
10. 02:23:036 (1) - ^
11. 02:24:389 (3) - Add NC

Yasaija 714 wrote:

From Queue

• 
  [General]

1. I point out that Storyboard lyrics are wrong
   
   SB

   
   そのつづきをおしえて
   
   にふん まえ
   
   唇が熱い
   
   そんなみつめないで
   
   じゅんあいおんど
   
   5℃じょうしょう

• 
  [Easy]

1. 00:18:073 - Why are not you picking up the sound here?
2. 00:25:292 - ^
3. 00:34:765 (6) - There is no sound in the reverse
   If I am, I will erase (7) and extend (6)
   
4. 00:47:397 (1,3) - Let's stack
5. 00:53:713 (3,1) - If it is not blanket, the flow is bad
   Please place it so that there is (1) at the end of (3)
6. 01:46:946 (1) -
   00:34:765 (6)same
7. 01:57:322 (3,4) - Not blanket
8. 02:04:991 (1) - Let's put delete NC because combo number is short
9. 02:19:427 (1) - ^
10. 02:23:036 (1) - ^
11. 02:24:389 (3) - Add NC

I am not good at Normal and Hard

Good luck!

wow, you helped me a lot with lyrics. thanks