1. 00:59:324 (1) - move to somewhere x200, good to emphasize
2. 01:01:824 (4) => ~x68
3. 01:06:824 (1) => ~x480

1. 00:03:386 (1) - make it more vertical! this awkward anti flow is sooo not supposed to be in this song and not in the platter diff.
2. 00:15:261 (3) - ^
3. 00:46:824 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - No and once again no. Why? RC: 1/3 and 1/4 hyperdashes may be used singularly (not in conjunction with other dashes or hyperdashes) if the BPM is less than 120. I can count these HDes as 200bpm+ 1/4 hdashes! So remove every single one dash in this pattern.

Myle wrote:

Secret Santa mod!
[Salad]

1. 00:59:324 (1) - move to somewhere x200, good to emphasize done
2. 01:01:824 (4) => ~x68 why not
3. 01:06:824 (1) => ~x480 x441 is enough

wip
[Platter]

1. 00:03:386 (1) - make it more vertical! this awkward anti flow is sooo not supposed to me in this song and not in the platter diff. Remapped first two sections
2. 00:15:261 (3) - ^ I think this one fits, since the triple is on a sharp note. I've removed the hyperdash for this one too so it's less hard
3. 00:46:824 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - No and once again no wow rude. Why? RC: 1/3 and 1/4 hyperdashes may be used singularly (not in conjunction with other dashes or hyperdashes) if the BPM is less than 120. I can count these HDes as 200bpm+ 1/4 hdashes! So remove every single one dash in this pattern. Changed to normal dashes, it would lose all emphasis if it was walkable

welp that's it. sorry for such a short mod, couldn't find any issues, pretty calm and short song for finding any! good luck!

-Nya- wrote:

Heyo~ NM from my queue.

General:

1. The dimensions of your image are a bit weird. Usually 1024X768, 1366X768, 1920X1080, 1920X1200 are used. Highly consider using any one of these dimensions instead. That's the largest available size for the image on the internet, I'll leave it for now because I'd need waifu2x or something which I'd prefer to avoid because of the colour shading.

Platter:

1. 00:02:292 (6,1) –Consider adding a hyperdash here. The beat on the head of this slider: 00:02:449 (1) – is quite strong so it’ll support the hyperdash and also the slider marks the beginning of a new section of the song so it’ll be great to emphasize that more. I had this before, but removed it for a reason I can't remember, added + changed opening piano hitsounds a little
2. 00:08:074 (4,1) –The hyperdash here doesn’t really make much sense imo since there isn’t really any specific strong beat on the head of 00:08:386 (1) – The music is quite calm here Moved 00:08:386 (1,2,3) - left, which moved the hyperdash to the next point, also fixing it.
3. 00:09:324 (2) –Are sliders like these actually allowed? Very common mapping technique to curve slider droplets. As long as it looks curved ingame it's fine
4. 00:09:949 (1) –Same as here: 00:02:292 (6,1) – Adding a hyperdash would be great because of the strong beat on the head of (1) This applies to all similar cases. ^ for this one, will apply the rest as I go.
5. 00:15:261 (3,1) –There is no hyperdash here which is inconsistent with the previous similar patterns: 00:04:011 (3,1) - 00:07:761 (3,4) - 00:11:472 (3,1) – etc. Add a hyperdash here as well: 00:15:261 (3,1) – for consistency. Initially removed because the anti-flow was really strong, but it seems to fit because this triple sounds slightly different. Re-added
6. 00:16:042 –You can add a circle here since there’s a clear beat on this tick. I chose not to map this because I wanted the sliders to emphasise the piano better.
7. 00:18:074 (3,1) –You added a hyperdash here but for other similar patterns with the same beat on the head of (1) you didn’t: 00:03:074 (3,1) - 00:06:824 (3,1) - 00:10:574 (3,1) – etc. There’s inconsistency then. Either remove the hyperdash on 00:18:074 (3,1) – or add hyperdash on the others. Up to you. I suggest the first option cause the second option might cause too many hyperdashes for a Platter diff. This applies to all similar cases. I intended to map more hyperdashes on this part but stopped for some reason and never removed them until now. Removed both
8. 00:32:292 (6,1) –Consider adding a bit more spacing here? Not necessarily a hyperdash but just make it a bit more challenging. It has an important beat on the head. I'm really challenged for space on this combo, just remapped a little instead and moved the hyperdash
9. 00:41:511 (3,1) –A hyperdash has to be placed here for consistency with the rest of the similar patterns. Added, idk why it wasn't there in the first place
10. 00:47:449 (1,2) –Increase the spacing here a bit? It looks rather small for such a strong beat on the head of (2). Done, might need more
11. 00:49:949 (1,2) -^
12. 00:52:136 (2,3) –Imo the hyperdash should rather be here and not here: 00:52:449 (3,1) – since the beat on 00:52:449 (3) – is much stronger than the beat on 00:52:761 (1) – It’s also inconsistent with 00:55:105 (3,1) –
13. 00:54:949 –This beat sounds very important and should rather be mapped out imo so it can be emphasized more. It shouldn’t be a slider’s end. So perhaps something like this instead:
    
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    Or three circles. Changed around a little
14. 00:57:449 (3,4) –Not really sure if a hyperdash is needed here… Just pointing this out since I can’t remember seeing any other places where you placed two hyperdashes after each other. How did that get there
15. 01:01:824 (3) –Consider mapping out the beats that can be heard in the middle of this slider. It’ll be cool and will fit for a Platter diff. I like that idea, I'll see if it can work because I'd also need to add it at 00:51:824 (1) - if I do
    
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16. 01:07:292 (7,1) –The distance between the object and the spinner is ¼ and it must be ½. I consider removing: 01:07:214 (6,7) – or try something different. I'll fix this when the BPM is fixed Fixed
17. 00:08:074 (4) –NC has to be placed here for consistency with previous similar sliders. K
18. 00:21:824 (1) –Remove NC here. I guess you accidentally made a mistake here. I think I self modded this out while going through the other points, fixed
19. 00:48:699 (1) –Rather remove this NC. It just looks out of place. K
20. 00:51:824 (1) –Remove NC here then add NC here: 00:52:449 (3) – and remove NC here: 00:52:761 (1) – K
21. Your NC’ing patterns in the kiai looks pretty inconsistent and I’m not sure where you’re going to change rhythms/patterns. Just go over the kiai again and try to spot any NC’ing inconsistencies. You can poke me in-game if you struggle. NCs should be one of the last things that need to be fixed in CtB, not a priority until near bubble, but good to fix for now
22. 01:07:449 (1) –You ended the spinner too early. It has to end on: 01:10:261 – This applies in the Salad diff as well. Might have self modded this, already fixed

I feel this diff still has a few inconsistencies regarding some of the patterns as well as the NC’ing patterns.

Salad:

1. 00:09:949 (1,2,1) –Why such low spacing here? It’s inconsistent with the previous patterns Upped spacing
2. 00:05:105 (1,1) –The number of beats that have to be between the object and spinner in a salad diff with a BPM lower than 240 has to be 1 beat. Right now it’s ½. Personally I would remove the spinner to fix this problem. This applies to all similar cases. You made sure there’s a beat between the object and spinner here: 01:06:824 (1,1) – so this is correct. Replaced all those spinners with the rhythm instead, could use some mods for that part now
3. 00:46:199 (4) –I think you should add NC here otherwise it’ll look a bit inconsistent with previous patterns. k
4. 00:49:324 (1) –Rather remove NC here. I don’t think this should be a combo on its own. You also don’t want NC patterns to be too small otherwise the fruit will hop off the plate too early and too much. It’s also inconsistent with 01:01:824 (4) – Removed
5. 00:57:449 (2) –The NC should be placed here for consistency with previous NC’ing patterns and also because the beat on (2) is much stronger. So remove NC here: 00:56:824 (1) – and add it here: 00:57:449 (2) – instead. This applies to all similar cases. Fixed NC issues
   Salad mods applied

There’s still some NC’ing inconsistencies, but the rest of the diff looks nice. Redid NCs completely, should be better

If you have any questions regarding my mod, feel free to poke me in-game. Good Luck~

- Magic Bomb - wrote:

Secret Santa. Also my last mod of 2016, of course.

[General]

Whilst I know you don't like mapping cup difficulties, maybe get a GD of one? I just think it'd be appreciated for a more accepting spread here. A rain would also maybe be possible, there's definitely potential for streams in the kiai for a rain. Never considered a rain :thinking: Wait I did consider this, but it would have to have really high note density to match the piano and would be quite streamy, which I am not very good at currently. I really can't see myself mapping a rain for this + it doesn't match the song since it's should be calm. I'll bother someone for a cup though
BPM feels doubled during 192bpm part, 96bpm sounds a lot better. If I did that, it would change from 3/3 to 4/4 timing. I'll change it once you confirm that, since 64 doubled isn't 96

[Salad]

Before I go into the mod, I'd just like to say that this difficulty has far too many dashes for a salad. Keep in mind, a salad is meant to be an introduction to dashes, so it shouldn't have lots of them. A lot of my mod will focus on reducing the number of dashes and strong movements. There was a lot less dashes before I removed the spinners on salad because ranking criteria, removed the dashes everywhere where there was spinners

00:01:511 (4) - Distance to this seems far too far for a normal non-dash, and a dash certainly doesn't sound right here considering how early on it is. S shaped now
00:02:449 (1) - Same issue to this, but this one could actually fit well with a dash for emphasis on the change in section, so try higher distancing. added
00:04:324 (1) - Bit too weak of a sound to have a dash to in a salad, and far too difficult without dashing, reduce this distance a bit. Fixed by moving most of the first pattern over, fixes previous point too
00:05:574 (3) - Assuming it's meant to be a dash to this but it's currently possible without dashing, increase distancing a bit. Removed dash instead, that pattern was added in recently without too much thought just to replace the spinner
00:08:074 (1) - If it's meant to be a dash to this, increase it to x:32 to make it more readable as a dash. k, also move next slider for playability
00:11:824 (1) - Again, a bit difficult for a non-dash, but this doesn't sound like it should have a dash in a salad, reduce it slightly. done
00:13:074 (3) - Increase it a bit to add a dash to it, as it seems was intended. Actually changed my mind about dash removing, I'll make them bigger because it fixes flow issues if I was to do small spacing
00:15:574 (1) - This one isn't that strong, definitely doesn't deserve a dash to it on this kind of difficulty, reduce distancing. removed, it was initially strong because it was a sharp pitch
00:19:324 (1) - Reduce distance, too strong for a non-dash right now, but note isn't strong enough for a dash in this type of difficulty. k
00:20:574 (3) - Could increase a bit to add a dash to it as intended. this is getting repetitive
00:23:074 (1) - Difficult to do without dashing, reduce it slightly. Ye
00:23:542 (2,3,4) - Distance from 2 to 3 and 3 to 4 are both very strong,far too strong for non dash movements, let alone in conjunction with each other. Decrease distance to the first and increase the distance to the second for consistency. Was thinking that after going through the mod
00:26:824 (1) - Distance to this is pretty strong for a non-dash, reduce it slightly. repeat
00:28:074 (3) - Increase distance to add a dash as intended. k
00:30:574 (1) - Could have a dash to this considering the background rhythm getting higher pitch here, but would still not recommend it here and to just have a normal movement. Dash would be a nice highlight, made it bigger so it's clear it's a dash
00:34:324 (1) - Difficult for a non-dash, reduce it slightly. rinse and repeat
00:35:574 (3) - Increase to add a dash as intended here. k
00:38:074 (1) - Decrease this distance, a bit too difficult for a non-dash here. k
00:39:324 (3) - Increase distance to it to add a dash as you intended here. k
00:41:824 (1) - Decrease it, too difficult for a non-dash. k
00:43:074 (3) - Increase distance to add a dash as intended (this is getting pretty repetitive isn't it). pretty sure i said that a while ago
00:45:574 (1) - Again, this shouldn't really be a dash, and it's far too difficult for a non-dash, reduce it.
00:47:449 (1) - Hmm, distance on this one could be higher for a dash, but at the same time I wouldn't recommend a dash to the next note, to avoid having too many, so move it a bit to the left and curve it more to the right. hmm fixed
00:50:886 (2) - Again, try getting rid of the dash to this, to avoid too many dashes in a salad.
00:53:386 (2) - Again, maybe get rid of the dash to lower number of dashes.
00:55:886 (2) - ^.
After this you may want to follow the same pattern, but the dashes in the 2nd half of the kiai make more sense because of the increase in pitch in the background instrument.
01:00:886 (2) - You don't actually have this one as a dash, so you could either reduce it to make it more uncomfortable or increase it to make it a dash, your choice.
01:02:449 (1) - Would definitely increase distance here for a dash, this note definitely calls for it.

[Platter]

Interesting gimmicks with the sliders and spinners, it's unique in a nice way in my opinion. I try

Having a HDash to each chime seems a bit much to me, but with the way you did the drums in this difficulty, instead of doing strong movements you did sliders, which means you can't really add HDashes to those. In fact, a lot of these HDashes are unrankable, as 1/6 HDashes at 64bpm is the equivalent of 1/3 HDashes at 128bpm, but this is due to a strange rule, and so I feel these should be fine. wait are the fine or not

00:08:386 (2) - Dash to it would be nice, maybe x:300. Initially had none to avoid too many hypers, but seems fine
00:09:949 (1) - Maybe start with a curve to make the movement after the HDash more comfortable flowing. The point of these patterns is visual repetitiveness, really breaks aesthetics if I do this. not enough space to turn slider to the right either
00:14:011 (2) - I'd try like x:268 to make these backforth antiflows a bit less stressful for a platter player. Snapped to 1.8x, same thing
00:50:574 (2) - Lower HDash strength would be nice, x:184 works great. Lowered
00:52:449 (1) - HDash to this would make a lot more sense than the HDash to 2, as this is a stronger note. Update 2 weeks later: Remapped the entire kiai time
00:54:949 (3,1) - Again here, 3 is a stronger note than 1, so the HDash to 3 would make more sense.
01:02:449 (1,2) - More cases where 1 is stronger than 2, so this HDash pattern seems strange.
01:03:386 (3,4) - ^
01:05:261 (2) - Note isn't that strong, doesn't really deserve a HDash in my eyes. Remapped this section
01:05:886 (3,4) - HDash to 3 would make more sense. it would but I'd need to do a full screen hdash in order to make it one because the bpm is low

Alright, done. Me too

Weber wrote:

Salad

00:49:949 (1,2,3,4) - Curious as to why this pattern is different in rhythm/placement from every other pattern in the kiai, where most follow a parallel curved slider and this deviates from that. Just as well, I don't think the head of 00:51:199 (3) - really lands on any significant note in the song like all of the other patterns do for the most part. This is different because 3 maps the background piano better, sounds weird if it starts halfway through the slider. Basic antiflow is used to emphasise this. Forgot to do this same pattern at 01:00:886 (2,3) -, fixed that.

Can't play platter lul

Good luck!

Weber wrote:

JBHyperion's Cup

00:32:449 (5) - I'd consider making this a normal hitcircle instead of a slider as there isn't really a distinct beat at 00:32:761 - like there is at 00:32:449 - and it comes off a little weird. There's a lower-pitch piano or whatever the heck that is sound there, similar to 00:39:949 (1) - so I feel this is justified
01:07:449 (1) - Consider lengthening the slider by one beat so the map ends where the music actually starts to fade out. You mean spinner? lol Discussed with Sinnoh, sounds good so gonna do for all diffs

Can't play platter lul Webad

Good luck!

Paranoid Grapes wrote:

lake, mi zu umi, mizu umi

cup

00:24:949 (1) - with the way the map was flowing, i think that you should move this slider a bit to the left more as the last slider went close to the right border. (for example http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7159931 Meh, would create a weird flowstop with 00:24:011 (2) - and I really want the direction change there for the drum sound. I feel this is fine, it's not too close to be uncomfortable

00:41:824 (1,2) - imo the flow break here feels really awkward and might catch a new player off guard. This break pattern was used all throughout the map though, ehy is it suddenly a problem now? The player will hardly not be expecting this

00:44:636 (2) - i think that this note is unneeded as there is no drum noise or anything that plays here. There's a clear rimshot drum sound here, I feel this is justified

Paranoid Grapes wrote:

lake, mi zu umi, mizu umi

salad

woops i responded to cup as if it was salad, no wonder it didn't make sense
00:09:792 (4) - eh this might be intentional but i think this note looks better if it was more in the middle between the sliders because of how condensed this pattern is. something like x=180 ye

00:16:824 (2,1) - the jump to (2) to (1) is insane for this level in my opinion because of the direction change of the slider and the fact that there isnt a long break before the jumps like at 00:20:261 (2,3) . nerf'd

01:02:449 (1,2) - increase the distance of these for a little as it feels like the jump is weaker. kk

01:04:949 (1,2) - ^, dosent feel as powerful as the jumps in the beginning of the kiai like 00:47:449 (1,2) (or you can nerf the jumps in the beginning of the kiai) did both

good platter

celerih wrote:

On my way to red mod reply town (Why do I always end up modding for QATs/BNs ;-;)

[Hyperion's Cup]
00:00:574 (1) - Maybe change the slider so it requires more movement? This part is kinda more important than the rest (with the exceptions of the kiai) Increased SV a little for more curve, but since this is right at the start of the map I want to ease the player in gently
00:20:261 (2) - Where the song is similar to here, you had sliders like this one almost vertical. I don't really see a reason to have it differently here Good point, fixed
00:41:824 (1) - Increase the spacing on this circle, since this note in the song really stands out Made it 1.4x instead of 1.2x

This is all I found. Good luck with the set

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Nelly wrote:

First time ever im using M4M

General

1. According to Ranking Criteria your background should be either 1024x768 or 1366x768 because your background is using 1200x800. RC states that it has to be smaller than 1920x1200, this is the largest available size for the image, extra will just be scaled to fit, not an issue
2. The title clearly says Lake Romanised section is only meant to be used for romaji of a Japanese title. Ranking criteria is cancer when it comes to this part, and I agree it would be much better if the title was just Lake

Salad

1. 00:31:511 (1) - You could make a 1/6 part instead of putting a slider. Maps the background synth well, want it less dense than platter, fine as is since it's one of my favourite parts. (But forgot to remove NC and added a hitsound, so changed that)

Platter

1. There is so many spinners and I dont get it why, you could make these simular patterns from Salad and it will make it better than spamming a spinner. This diff is okay for me. There was spinners on salad before, but they were removed because I forgot that you need way more space between spinner start/end and circles, so the spinners could only be like, 1/2 a beat maximum size on salad. I would prefer spinners there but the ranking criteria prevents this.

Nelly wrote:

First time ever im using M4M

Hyperion's Cup

1. 00:17:449 (1) - Make it curvy. In-game it looks like a straight slider. Done here and 00:06:199 (1) - also
2. 00:44:949 (3) - ^ This is literally a burai, I can't curve it anymore without maxing SV and that would be kinda awkward going into the kiai. I'll keep this one

Good mapset and sorry for these useless suggestions, I hate modding maps. Rip

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1. Rip combo colours on salad

1. I can't mod your maps pls stop making good maps

1. Feels like this salad has way too many dashes. Yes in the kiai there is 'breaks' in between those long sliders, but on a bigger picture there's dashes almost every measure - since salad players only got introduced to dashing on this difficulty itself, dashes every measure can be quite tough to maintain the accuracy, despite the consistency. And yes I know you need a leeway into platter, but the current amount seems a bit too much. You could try to just make dashes on every measure instead of every instance of the sound like at 00:48:386 (2) -.
2. 00:09:324 (3,4,1) - Instead of making these have the same distances I would indicate a clearer distance from (4) to (1) that it is a dash - the same visual distance for salad players can be seen as confusing and they can easily mess up their movement here. Try to reduce the distance from (3) to (4) so that the clear indication is there.
3. 00:24:324 (4,1) - Although you don't necessarily need to dash here it feels somewhat intimidating for me. Would reduce the distance a tad bit.
4. 00:30:261 (4,1) - You don't make dashes to the 1/12 pianos until now, and you only made this one a dash throughout the whole map. To keep the consistency I would remove the dash here.
5. 00:31:511 (2) - Since this is a salad and all I would instead use a repeated slider or something to emphasize further but that's your choice really.
6. 00:31:511 (2,1) - Oh and if you are going to apply the above, you should add a dash here as this is a part transition. Heck you made it 00:16:824 (2,1) - here so you should keep the consistency.
7. 00:47:449 - The whole kiai feels very repetitive and lacking of variation. If you take a look only once or twice you used anti-flow, and others are just going from left to right, then right to left, and so on. You certainly could have done more here. Yes, the song's repeating so the repeating pattern is justified, but such a less variation would just result in a boring gameplay. You could try out a pattern like this or anything alike - but this pattern can get challenging when it has a dash, so that's another reason why I asked you to reduce down the number of dashes.

1. Nice sliders and spinners
2. 00:08:386 (2) - Could use a lower distance as the hyper from the previous notes makes this note easier to be missed.
3. 00:09:167 - Piano's pitch is quite strong for a note, and since your main focus is on the piano you should add a note here to emphasize it.
4. 00:09:949 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Why did you suddenly increase the overall distance? The pitch certainly got lower when compared to 00:02:449 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - so this doesn't make sense to me. Use the same distance as the previous patterns - a sudden increase really makes an unintended difficulty spike and makes every movement very ambiguous.
5. 00:15:886 - Why don't you emphasize the piano here? You did it at 00:08:386 (2) - so I don't see a reason why you should keep this out.
6. 00:49:324 (1,2) - Quite a far distance which could induce a dash - you don't do this later in the kiai so reduce the distance.
7. 01:04:949 (1,2,1,2) - Maybe opt for a different pattern here cause you are basically repeating the same movement as 01:02:449 (1,2,1,2) - . You could use a pattern like this, but whatever pattern you use is up to you - just try to give more variation.

Sc4v4ng3r wrote:

I hear this song again after like 11 years or something lmao

[General]

1. Rip combo colours on salad rip

[Hyperion's Cup]

1. I can't mod your maps pls stop making good maps

[Salad]
edit: fixed all

1. Feels like this salad has way too many dashes. Yes in the kiai there is 'breaks' in between those long sliders, but on a bigger picture there's dashes almost every measure - since salad players only got introduced to dashing on this difficulty itself, dashes every measure can be quite tough to maintain the accuracy, despite the consistency. And yes I know you need a leeway into platter, but the current amount seems a bit too much. You could try to just make dashes on every measure instead of every instance of the sound like at 00:48:386 (2) -. Changed almost all of them, I left the final ones after the bookmark because it matches the change in music
2. 00:09:324 (3,4,1) - Instead of making these have the same distances I would indicate a clearer distance from (4) to (1) that it is a dash - the same visual distance for salad players can be seen as confusing and they can easily mess up their movement here. Try to reduce the distance from (3) to (4) so that the clear indication is there. haha screw you grapes it was like that before
3. 00:24:324 (4,1) - Although you don't necessarily need to dash here it feels somewhat intimidating for me. Would reduce the distance a tad bit.
4. 00:30:261 (4,1) - You don't make dashes to the 1/12 pianos until now, and you only made this one a dash throughout the whole map. To keep the consistency I would remove the dash here.
5. 00:31:511 (2) - Since this is a salad and all I would instead use a repeated slider or something to emphasize further but that's your choice really.
6. 00:31:511 (2,1) - Oh and if you are going to apply the above, you should add a dash here as this is a part transition. Heck you made it 00:16:824 (2,1) - here so you should keep the consistency.
7. 00:47:449 - The whole kiai feels very repetitive and lacking of variation. If you take a look only once or twice you used anti-flow, and others are just going from left to right, then right to left, and so on. You certainly could have done more here. Yes, the song's repeating so the repeating pattern is justified, but such a less variation would just result in a boring gameplay. You could try out a pattern like this or anything alike - but this pattern can get challenging when it has a dash, so that's another reason why I asked you to reduce down the number of dashes.

[Platter]

1. Nice sliders and spinners
2. 00:08:386 (2) - Could use a lower distance as the hyper from the previous notes makes this note easier to be missed. I'll assume you meant to write something else but fixed
3. 00:09:167 - Piano's pitch is quite strong for a note, and since your main focus is on the piano you should add a note here to emphasize it. Good idea
4. 00:09:949 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Why did you suddenly increase the overall distance? idk I made this diff like half a year ago The pitch certainly got lower when compared to 00:02:449 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - so this doesn't make sense to me. Use the same distance as the previous patterns - a sudden increase really makes an unintended difficulty spike and makes every movement very ambiguous. I probably did it cause the catcher momentum was going with flow, but changed to normal 1.8x
5. 00:15:886 - Why don't you emphasize the piano here? You did it at 00:08:386 (2) - so I don't see a reason why you should keep this out. ???
6. 00:49:324 (1,2) - Quite a far distance which could induce a dash - you don't do this later in the kiai so reduce the distance. fix
7. 01:04:949 (1,2,1,2) - Maybe opt for a different pattern here cause you are basically repeating the same movement as 01:02:449 (1,2,1,2) - . You could use a pattern like this, but whatever pattern you use is up to you - just try to give more variation. Added a mixup

Ayy cool set and song, maybe call me back after once you get a few more mods. I'm still not quite sure about platter cause I never encountered this kind of movement before so I would need more opinion from the community. Haven't found anyone that doesn't like the flow yet, shouldn't be an issue
GL!

[ Hyperion's Cup]
00:16:199 (2,3,4,5) - I prefer exchange 3 and 5.
No other wrong on Cup(I thought.).
[ Salad]
00:11:824 (1) - Make it like 00:04:324 (1) .Yes I thought put a reverse slider like this one is too strange in a light-music.Like 00:04:324 (1) plz.
00:14:636 (3) - Not a good slider.
00:25:886 (3) - Not a good slider too.Put the end of slider at X:136?
00:41:824 (1) - Prefer Ctrl+H.
00:51:199 (3) - Strange in CtB.
[ Platter]
00:17:449 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Such part like these before can also make players strange.But especially this part,Stright sliders like these are quite unwelcome in Ctb.Make them in 45° will be better.Or change the putting like 00:21:199 (1,2,3,1,2,3) .Don't make it by ds.
00:23:074 (1) - Those stright sliders are better by putting them in different ways.So this reverse slider...Ctrl+G?
Mainly problems are on those stright sliders.If you put them like 00:32:449 (1,2,3,1,2,3) ,Fantastic!But if you put them like 00:28:699 (1,2,3,1,2,3) ,Yeah they are bad.

Sinnoh wrote:

like shit

sxy62146214 wrote:

Hi-Speed Modding
M4M on this map. wait where did this m4m come from did jbh ask
OK
[ Salad]
00:11:824 (1) - Make it like 00:04:324 (1) .Yes I thought put a reverse slider like this one is too strange in a light-music.Like 00:04:324 (1) plz. Fixed
00:14:636 (3) - Not a good slider. why though
00:25:886 (3) - Not a good slider too.Put the end of slider at X:136? It's there to keep even spacing, using too many of the same kind of slider is repetitive
00:41:824 (1) - Prefer Ctrl+H. If anything should it should be 00:38:074 (1), but I'm keeping it simple for Salad
00:51:199 (3) - Strange in CtB. Emphasises the piano fine
[ Platter]
00:17:449 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Such part like these before can also make players strange.But especially this part,Stright sliders like these are quite unwelcome in Ctb.Make them in 45° will be better.Or change the putting like 00:21:199 (1,2,3,1,2,3) .Don't make it by ds. There's nothing that specifically makes them bad, the movements are pretty much the same and it would be boring if all sliders were identical Also, Deconstruction Star is considered to be one of the best loved maps, and does stuff like this but to a much higher extreme https://osu.ppy.sh/b/710613 02:39:226 (1) -
00:23:074 (1) - Those stright sliders are better by putting them in different ways.So this reverse slider...Ctrl+G? I made it vertical instead, more lenient and follows the theme
Mainly problems are on those stright sliders. The entire first half is straight sliders lol If you put them like 00:32:449 (1,2,3,1,2,3) ,Fantastic!But if you put them like 00:28:699 (1,2,3,1,2,3) ,Yeah they are bad. Mentioned above, style isn't something to fix[/notice]

Sinnoh wrote:

like shit

↑Better than me,at least

GL!

1. 00:03:386 (2) - Might sound quite nitpicky but after this slider the piano sound at this note's repeat(which is repeated throughout the whole song until the chorus) doesn't get emphasized at all. I would suggest you to break this slider down into 2 circles, each at 00:03:386 - and 00:04:011 - respectively as you look like you are following the drums later on anyways.

1. 00:16:199 (1) - Remove NC for consistency
2. 00:22:761 (4,1) - Doesn't quite feel like a dash tbh. And even if this was intended, the previous section(at 00:08:074 (1) - ), which had a similarly pitched piano with this, had a dash, so it goes off consistency. You should add one here.
3. 00:37:761 (4,1) - Same like above, you should add a dash here.
4. 00:38:542 - Why not add a slider like you did at 00:23:542 (2) - ? The kick here is again prominent so it could be a nice addition.
5. 00:46:199 (1) - You didn't add NC after the 1/12 slider(at least for the majority) so remove NC.
6. Kiai is perfect however, I like the way you fixed the movements

1. 00:42:683 (1,1) - Why not try to place the slider more to the left? Right now the banana's stream is towards the left, so if players were staying at the left side for more score, they will have to do a farther dash than the other slider dashes - which could be quite hard to do.

Sc4v4ng3r wrote:

Just a quick mod before I icon, set looks really great lol

[Salad]

1. 00:16:199 (1) - Remove NC for consistency k
2. 00:22:761 (4,1) - Doesn't quite feel like a dash tbh. And even if this was intended, the previous section(at 00:08:074 (1) - ), which had a similarly pitched piano with this, had a dash, so it goes off consistency. You should add one here. Done
3. 00:37:761 (4,1) - Same like above, you should add a dash here. same
4. 00:38:542 - Why not add a slider like you did at 00:23:542 (2) - ? The kick here is again prominent so it could be a nice addition. fixed + ctrl-h'd everything after it again
5. 00:46:199 (1) - You didn't add NC after the 1/12 slider(at least for the majority) so remove NC. k
6. Kiai is perfect however, I like the way you fixed the movements idk what I changed but i did stuff

[Platter]

1. 00:42:683 (1,1) - Why not try to place the slider more to the left? Right now the banana's stream is towards the left, so if players were staying at the left side for more score, they will have to do a farther dash than the other slider dashes - which could be quite hard to do. Missed that because changes of previous sections change bananas, fixed

Call me back.

1. 00:58:699 (3,4,1,2,3,4) - Kinda dull for having 6 sliders in a row, actually in kiai you usually started every measure with either a 1/1 repeat slider + circle or a 2/1 slider + circle so I was expecting those rhythms here.
2. 01:02:449 (1,2,3,4,5) - 01:04:949 (1,2,3,4,5) - mm you used the exactly the same rhythm between these two measures, not that it's a problem but I'm just asking whether this is intentional cuz you made a rhythm variation earlier on 00:47:449 (1,2,3,4) - 00:49:949 (1,2,3,4,5) but not here.

1. 00:46:199 (2,3,4) - In Platter, you used a different rhythm between 00:46:199 (1,2,3,4) - 00:46:824 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) because the latter one has a denser rhythm, so I would like to see the same kind of rhythm simplification in Salad as well, would be better if 00:46:199 (2) - 00:46:824 (4) are mapped with a different rhythm.
2. Mainly my concern is how you emphasize 00:04:324 (1) - 00:11:824 (1) - 00:15:574 (1) - etc (there's more but the rhythm is repetitive so you get the idea). In Platter you made hyperdashes on these rhythms, but in this difficulty I don't know what is your intention on these objects as some of them aren't even a dash yet some are, stuff like 00:11:511 (4,1) is clearly walkable and a dash is definitely required for 00:22:761 (4,1) so I expect more consistency in terms of spacing emphasis on these objects.

1. Just a personal taste but having to dash these 00:19:011 (3,1) - 00:22:761 (3,1) - 00:26:511 (3,1) - 00:30:261 (3,1) to the left 4 times in a row feels kinda repetitive, in other sections 00:02:449 - 00:32:605 there are mixes between left and right but not the section I brought up. You can easily Ctrl+H some sets of the objects in this section 00:17:449 to fix this though it's optional and not a must to fix so I’ll leave that to you.