Hi
Placeholder for NM
[General]
Dam Tags
[Easy]
00:52:389 (4) - consider moving this a bit to the right for better looking
00:58:315 (2) - wat a shift from obtuse angular flows to acute angular flow here :thinking:
01:49:797 (1) - moving this a bit left for better looking with 01:48:315 (3) - ?
02:44:611 - I hear a bass kick here
[Normal]
00:40:167 (1,2,3,4) - Considering this rhythm is exactly the same as 00:34:241 (1) - , this pattern is tidier and simpler than the first one imo, I think it's better to use simpler patterns in the first place so that it's more comfortable for beginners to play.
[Hard]
01:38:500 (2) - doesn't look really good here, maybe move it down a bit for symmetry?
01:39:426 (1) - imo you can emphasize the 'GO!' by not stacking it
[No.1]
01:13:871 (7) - weird spacing and curve angle imo
01:19:797 (7) - ^
01:24:611 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - lol
01:28:315 (3) - consider moving this to the right and down for better looking?
01:37:019 (3,4) - weird flow
01:45:352 (1) - move the slider head a bit up? since right now it looks like it's pointing towards the gap between 6 and 3
01:45:722 - ignored this snare?
01:50:908 (5) - I think this one looks better if you make a triangle there
02:02:389 (3,4,5,6,7) - so straight lol
02:18:685 (1,2,1,2,1) - :face_palm:
02:21:834 (4,5) - spacing imo
welp good luck, have been listening to this for a week, gonna stop now
[General]
Dam Tags
[Easy]
00:52:389 (4) - consider moving this a bit to the right for better looking
00:58:315 (2) - wat a shift from obtuse angular flows to acute angular flow here :thinking:
01:49:797 (1) - moving this a bit left for better looking with 01:48:315 (3) - ?
02:44:611 - I hear a bass kick here
[Normal]
00:40:167 (1,2,3,4) - Considering this rhythm is exactly the same as 00:34:241 (1) - , this pattern is tidier and simpler than the first one imo, I think it's better to use simpler patterns in the first place so that it's more comfortable for beginners to play.
[Hard]
01:38:500 (2) - doesn't look really good here, maybe move it down a bit for symmetry?
01:39:426 (1) - imo you can emphasize the 'GO!' by not stacking it
[No.1]
01:13:871 (7) - weird spacing and curve angle imo
01:19:797 (7) - ^
01:24:611 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - lol
01:28:315 (3) - consider moving this to the right and down for better looking?
01:37:019 (3,4) - weird flow
01:45:352 (1) - move the slider head a bit up? since right now it looks like it's pointing towards the gap between 6 and 3
01:45:722 - ignored this snare?
01:50:908 (5) - I think this one looks better if you make a triangle there
02:02:389 (3,4,5,6,7) - so straight lol
02:18:685 (1,2,1,2,1) - :face_palm:
02:21:834 (4,5) - spacing imo
welp good luck, have been listening to this for a week, gonna stop now