StarForYou wrote:
那一天
人類終於回想起了
曾經一度被他們所支配的Gee
還有被囚禁於鳥籠中的那份Fy
[Geeneral]
-There's an alternative BG with 1366x768, you may consider to use this => http://puu.sh/soj8W/17cf0f8121.png ok
-Close widescreen support ok
-Tags that may considered to add: television, gee -_
[Easy]
-00:43:130 (1) - The red anchor seems awkward since it didn't change the shape a lot and the flow the tail is not smooth and weird :/ Maybe a simple curved slider or straight slider would fit here I think its fine, just wanna reverse the flow to the right here :v
-01:21:648 (1) - Same...... ^
-02:45:722 (1) - NC and make it a bit oblique (? => http://puu.sh/soyof/58b3eb45db.png ok
-Why so many 01:21:648 (1) - slider in the map For me they are really awkward and strange... I dun think its strange lol, 2 strong beats land on the sliders' heads and ends.
[Normal]
-00:34:241 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1) - Nah This is too messy. You may change 00:35:722 (1,2,3) - to this
-00:41:648 (1,2,3) - Same :thinking:
-01:00:537 (3,4) - Maybe convert them to slider since they look awkward when playing, also, notes in right down corner is hard to play for newbie ok
-01:11:648 (1,2,3) - I don't think those is needed to be emphasized, maybe use a simple reverse slider to deal with the sound => http://puu.sh/soxFf/a835a4acf5.png ok
-01:14:241 (1,2) - Maybe change the pattern since the current is too messy... => http://puu.sh/soxHt/4711cc04f3.png And there is my solution: http://puu.sh/soxLd/8b8ce9070c.png I've consistently used these patterns throughout the map and its just 1 stack so I think its fine.
-01:31:463 (6) - Maybe ignore this beat since you are following the rhythmic instrument(idk name(rip my music knowledge)) but not the drum. And the pattern that you are using is kinda messy so maybe ignore this beat => http://puu.sh/soxTv/1443ed2e72.png Rearranged pattern
-01:39:426 (1) - Don't stack them to improve the readability ok
-01:45:352 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3) - The sound is too dense...Try to make the simpler just like what I've provided above Removed note 4 to make a consistent 3 combo pattern here
-01:54:611 (1) - This slider looks awkward ._. Maybe try another shape just like => http://puu.sh/soy8E/f4219bb4e8.png ok
-02:06:093 (1,2,3) - , 02:12:759 (3,4) - Separate them to make it more readable ok
[Hard]
-OD6 maybe, OD7 is too high for Hard, unless your map has a extreme bpm
-00:54:982 (1) - The blanket can be improved fixed
-01:02:389 (1) - The current one is so monotonous and tui, try this => http://puu.sh/sokKn/d5fe84d10c.png ok
-01:15:722 (1,2,3,4) - This is a bit messy for me :/ Why not => http://puu.sh/soxe9/d0482915dc.png ok
-01:23:871 (4) - So tui, try => http://puu.sh/soxjO/3519a28388.png ok
-01:29:056 (1,2,3,4) - As well. This kind of pattern is messy, and too old style
-01:31:278 (4) - So tui again, => http://puu.sh/soxkx/2529fb4033.png
-02:04:611 (1,2,3,4) - You may consider using other pattern, you know, 02:05:722 (4) - , so gee idk, I'll keep for now
-02:09:426 (2) - Blanket 02:09:056 (1) - fixed
[No. Gee]
-00:38:315 (7) - Maybe only for me, you can place the slider further to fit what distance you did in 00:43:871 (6,7,8,9) - and 01:22:389 (3,4) - ok
-00:39:611 (1) - Remove NC Used to emphasize the sudden large jumps in the song
-00:40:167 (1,2) - The circle is suddenly too close compared with 00:34:241 (1,2) - Intentional, cuz the music calmed down after the big jump
-01:00:908 (1) - The note should be placed further to match the distance that you developed in 01:00:167 (3,4,5,6) - I think its fine since the music changes suddenly, so I've expressed that suddenness with spacing and a NC
-01:02:759 (5) - Maybe set a green line here with vol 60 since the sound is starting intense ok
-01:12:389 (3) - Seem you missed a lot sound here, maybe use a stream to replace the slider http://puu.sh/sok6w/b7294b7281.png I just want to emphasize the 3 strongest sounds there, if I add a note, the sliders will be devalued imo
-01:15:722 (1,2,3,4) - I don't understand the spacing of these slider :thinking: You make a relatively large spacing in 00:37:204 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - but you didn't make the same thing here :/ Look at it as a whole pattern and not just that part lol, this helps players get into reading 01:17:204 (1,2,3,4,5) - , which has much lower intensity. The first part's music doesnt go silent thus they should differ in pattern as well.
-01:18:130 (1) - Remove NC Emphasizing the sudden big jump in the music
-01:17:389 (2,3) - Maybe ctrl g these notes to make a bigger contrast with 01:17:945 (5,1,2) - I think the current pattern expresses the song better
-01:18:130 (1) - Remove NC lol this is the same timestamp as the previous :v
-01:35:537 (3) - The shape is a bit awkward, try this => http://puu.sh/sokkH/92ad252cca.png fixed
-01:37:019 (3) - Same => http://puu.sh/sokmO/4cea9e977f.png Copy pasted from ^
-01:51:093 (6) - Using notes can emphasize the sudden stop feeling better ok
-01:54:982 (2,3) - Not really suggesting using this spacing in such quiet part. Maybe you can reverse the slider to express the sound instead of using this pattern here I'll try to space further instead
-02:18:685 (1,2,1,2,1) - Are you serious man? These notes are so ugly orzzzzzzzz Making a star shape stream looks a lot better! http://puu.sh/sokxD/03db81f53e.png And btw the NC is not necessary :/ Star shape looks better in terms of aesthetic but I dun think it expresses the song as well as like the parallelogram does, cuz I think this part of the music requires more cursor movement.
-02:43:500 (3) - x=210, y=236 and 02:43:685 (4) - x=274, y=124 can make a perfect square But I used ctrl shft D LOL
-PP map confirmed :^) It wasnt intentional ;w;
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