hello sora owo
mod here :3
[4K goddess]
00:19:396 - i'm sure the tick should be here instead of 00:19:082 - ? there's an additional sound there.
01:15:469 - not sure, i don't feel a kick here.
01:32:590 - add tick hs?
01:37:616 - also missing tick? same sound as 01:36:359 -
01:41:071 - maybe you can try different type of burst? like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6337912
01:42:014 - you can add one more LN to give accent to the rising sound and beginning of ln pattern, like: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6337939
02:03:061 (123061|2,123218|1) - turn these to LN to give emphasis to the 1/2 beast sound? don't know what it is called xd
02:04:631 - i was sort of hoping you'd make it jack pattern like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6337989 , bcause: 1. these patterns are supposed to be harder from time to time, but it is in fact easier than 01:43:584 - 2. if you also apply it at ln section at 02:09:815 - , etc, it will allows smoother transition to the chord pattern at 02:13:584 - , which i find a bit sudden when your pattern before is easier.
02:07:773 - hmm, these have 5LNs, but at 02:12:799 - are 4? D:
02:22:851 (142851|3,143008|1) - i sort of wanting this to be a 1/2 LNs just for a bit twist there.. it also have a quite distinct different sound with 02:22:223 (142223|3,142380|0,142537|1,142694|2) -
03:02:747 - not try to map 1/6? i know you want to focus on the kick there, but surprisingly add 1/6 as a twist fits there xd https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6338260
03:34:788 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6338098 try make the 1/6 different from before? bcause they have different PR, but they all same pattern.
04:17:511 (257511|0) - move to col 2?
05:47:668 - 05:48:296 - ,etc. not try to map the bell sound ? it will give more fitting ending imo.
rank it already :3
good luck -w-)/
mod here :3
[4K goddess]
00:19:396 - i'm sure the tick should be here instead of 00:19:082 - ? there's an additional sound there.
01:15:469 - not sure, i don't feel a kick here.
01:32:590 - add tick hs?
01:37:616 - also missing tick? same sound as 01:36:359 -
01:41:071 - maybe you can try different type of burst? like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6337912
01:42:014 - you can add one more LN to give accent to the rising sound and beginning of ln pattern, like: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6337939
02:03:061 (123061|2,123218|1) - turn these to LN to give emphasis to the 1/2 beast sound? don't know what it is called xd
02:04:631 - i was sort of hoping you'd make it jack pattern like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6337989 , bcause: 1. these patterns are supposed to be harder from time to time, but it is in fact easier than 01:43:584 - 2. if you also apply it at ln section at 02:09:815 - , etc, it will allows smoother transition to the chord pattern at 02:13:584 - , which i find a bit sudden when your pattern before is easier.
02:07:773 - hmm, these have 5LNs, but at 02:12:799 - are 4? D:
02:22:851 (142851|3,143008|1) - i sort of wanting this to be a 1/2 LNs just for a bit twist there.. it also have a quite distinct different sound with 02:22:223 (142223|3,142380|0,142537|1,142694|2) -
03:02:747 - not try to map 1/6? i know you want to focus on the kick there, but surprisingly add 1/6 as a twist fits there xd https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6338260
03:34:788 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6338098 try make the 1/6 different from before? bcause they have different PR, but they all same pattern.
04:17:511 (257511|0) - move to col 2?
05:47:668 - 05:48:296 - ,etc. not try to map the bell sound ? it will give more fitting ending imo.
rank it already :3
good luck -w-)/