1. Sol Ciel (3.06 stars, 889 notes)

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00:11:505 (1,1,1,1) - I think this pattern isn't rankable, you should review the timing here, you can place a new timing point at 492 than make a 1/3 pattern because that one is totally unconsistent and unreadable correctly for the player

00:54:104 (1) - I think the distance snap is too high here reduce it a bit

02:07:928 (3) - Be carefull with the changing rythm, maybe a slider could be better imo

02:11:016 (4) - Same here

02:12:339 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - This is very difficult to read, you must make a visible différence between the 1/4 and 1/2 Distance Snap

02:26:457 (2) - https://imgur-archive.ppy.sh/zemhdrw.png this rythm should be easier

03:12:045 (1,2) - DS is different for every other patterns like this one, why did you changed that one ? and for the rest of this part, make 1 Constent DS between that reverse and slider, because this one is changing a lot and confusing the player and it's look kinda weird in editor

04:27:812 (1) - This is not following the voice with rythm

04:48:389 (1) - Kiai isn't needed on that bookmark

04:41:538 (1,2) - Replace on white tick the 1 and finish the 2 on the white tick

06:06:918 (3,4,5,6) - Wow, too spaced compared to other 1/4 patterns

06:09:271 (2) - Same

06:13:094 (1) - Same

Ponoyoshi wrote:

NM from my queue

only gonna respond to my parts

Sol Ciel

00:11:505 (1,1,1,1) - I think this pattern isn't rankable, you should review the timing here, you can place a new timing point at 492 than make a 1/3 pattern because that one is totally unconsistent and unreadable correctly for the player - yeah i changed but idk if it's good

00:54:104 (1) - I think the distance snap is too high here reduce it a bit - nerfed

03:12:045 (1,2) - DS is different for every other patterns like this one, why did you changed that one ? and for the rest of this part, make 1 Constent DS between that reverse and slider, because this one is changing a lot and confusing the player and it's look kinda weird in editor - made them all the same ds

04:27:812 (1) - This is not following the voice with rythm - it isn't supposed to

04:48:389 (1) - Kiai isn't needed on that bookmark - ??? it is needed, but i changed some stuff around

04:41:538 (1,2) - Replace on white tick the 1 and finish the 2 on the white tick - singer is off here, so the timing will be screwed. Changed it around tho

Relaxing beatmap, pretty clean globally

Good luck~

Ponoyoshi wrote:

NM from my queue

Sol Ciel

02:07:928 (3) - Be carefull with the changing rythm, maybe a slider could be better imo stacked these instead

02:11:016 (4) - Same here slider'd/

02:12:339 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - This is very difficult to read, you must make a visible différence between the 1/4 and 1/2 Distance Snap It's actualy 1/6 and 1/4 but yeah. Done making it more visible.

02:26:457 (2) - https://imgur-archive.ppy.sh/zemhdrw.png this rythm should be easier naaah, your suggestion is right. But it'll be quite undermapped since the vocal is strong enough to be mapped.

06:06:918 (3,4,5,6) - Wow, too spaced compared to other 1/4 patterns It is quite spaced but it's intentional and still easily play able who have some experiences on reading stuffs.

06:09:271 (2) - Same

06:13:094 (1) - Same

Relaxing beatmap, pretty clean globally

Good luck~

_Meep_ wrote:

ze mod by ze meep

00:04:281 (1,2,3) - These are off sync

00:05:544 (1,2) - ^

00:08:385 (2,3) - ^ etc. etc. I'll leave it up to you to fix - same as above, tbh i didn't do the timing, and im shit at timing, will get someone to check this

00:44:692 (1,2) - It feels better if you Ctrl+G this and ctrl+g them AGAIN individually to fit the tone of the bell - sure

01:03:516 (1,3) - Not aligned/parallel ;w; - fixed

01:15:281 (1,2,3) - This is a bit too close imo,tagged along with the slow AR and its pretty hard to read whether theres even a gap - yas o/

01:31:163 (5) - I dont see a need for this note to be a 3/4 - violin is really slow and dragging so i drag the slider

01:35:869 (2) - this too,and if its still a 3/4, the indication that its a 3/4 into the slider 01:36:457 (1) - is still quite vague imo - fixed spacing and changed rhythm, but keeping the 1/4 gap

04:49:565 (3,4) - blanket off - fixed

Sorry that its small,I don't see much problems with the diff. - thanks meep <3

Log Off Now wrote:

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damn this is a noice map

[Sol Ciel]

There are some minor blanket errors at the start

00:18:670 (1) - slider end to x222 y81
00:23:122 (1) - slider end to x294 y146
00:30:576 (1) - slider end to x269 y36 - all fixed
00:52:339 (2,3,4,5) - Not a fan of this square flow, as this is the only flow that feels 'forced' when compared to the rest of this section, also the jump between (5,6) is also a little bit awkward because of this, a more smooth curved or triangle shape would be preferred imo - changed to triangle
01:15:281 (1,2,3) - I like the idea behind this, although I think it could feel a bit more natural to play, maybe try something like this? - fixed
03:20:722 (3,4) - Fix parallel, it's the only one thats not perfectly parallel in this section - done
03:29:104 (3) - NC to further enhance the readability of this? - sure
04:11:874 (3,4,5) - Any reason why this doesn't get as much spacing emphasis as 04:09:687 (4,5) - no reason, fixed.
04:22:812 (4,2) - Fix stack - fixed
05:22:212 (3) - slider end to x195 y149 - not really sure what you mean here
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Nice map gl! (sorry if it seemed super aesthetics focused, it's pretty solid otherwise) - yay

_Meep_ wrote:

ze mod by ze meep

03:06:898 - Spinner should start here instead because of vocal,imo right


Sorry that its small,I don't see much problems with the diff.

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damn this is a noice map ayy <3

[Sol Ciel]

There are some minor blanket errors at the start

02:24:692 (3,4) - Blanket? ooh right
02:33:957 (3,4,5) - Try to keep visual distance between (4,5) the same since this creates a weird unnecessary movement to play atm fair enough
02:57:339 (2) - Angle this slider a bit more to the right for a smoother flow, atm it feels like you need to do a tiny adjustment to the left done
02:58:222 (5,6) - Parallels nice one
03:05:869 (1,1) - I understand why you put the spinner here, but I feel like it doesn't fit the vocal as good as it could do, I would try a rhythm like this and start the spinner here 03:07:045 (1) - instead to get the full vocal covered and clickable. agreed
06:03:389 (7,8,1) - I would actually have a lot more spacing here just because of how much the music/hitsounds emphasise the next note, but I guess doing that would mess up the consistency, so up to you I guess naah, your suggestion is good
06:27:212 (1) - This slider looks a bit strange XD, I would move the anchor point further down so it doesn't look as strange/out of place done
06:46:036 (1) - ^ ^



Nice map gl! (sorry if it seemed super aesthetics focused, it's pretty solid otherwise)

Nao Tomori wrote:

ello

this mod is going to be really shitty cuz this map is nice..
rip


[aurelion sol]
before anything, the ar seems really high for this slow, lower density mapping. most 3 star diffs have lower ar than this, and this one isn't incredibly technical or anything that requires this high ar.

00:26:673 (3) - not the same slider as 2 for some reason? also awkward overlap wit h00:27:550 (1) - but that's kind of unavoidable - unfixable overlap lo but fixed the same slider issue

00:31:458 (2,3,4) - these hitsounds seem really loud for the tiny music box theyre following, the set 99 that it switches to at 00:40:561 - :ok_hand:

00:34:693 (6) - this placement seemed kind of random, blanket something or stack or something idk its just in the middle of nowhere - yeah tbh, fixed

00:50:575 (3) - shouldn't this have a bit more spacing? with the strong vocal like 00:54:104 (1) - or 00:49:398 (1) - ctrl+g \o/

01:14:104 (3) - seems like the only time that the slider isn't a mirrored version of the other one. - fixed

04:16:874 (3) - why is this one only lower spacing randomly? all the other ones at least have a followpoint. - fixed

04:35:913 (1) - you could make this look a bit better by doing this : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6812406 since right now it looks somewhat "partitioned" - okay \o/

04:51:624 (4) - pretty large spacing here compared to similar other vocals imo. - fixed

04:56:624 - any reason this is kicksliders instead of a stream? stream was done here at 04:47:163 - which sounds pretty similar - yeah changed

05:02:506 (1) - weird to see this with no spacing emphasis when 05:04:859 (1) - gets a lot more, and all the other ones too. seems like an accident. - fixed too

sry for shit mod - tfw when applied everything

1. 00:17:969 (2,1) - The overlap here is not cool I think, you can just try to reverse the slider on the other side. It's just an exemple.
2. 00:55:281 (3,4,5) - Are you sure that those notes are parrallels on each other?
3. 01:57:045 (4,5,6) - Those notes like that on this part of the song is not needed I think, why not using longer sliders since its a slow part? Like you did here: 02:04:692 (1,2,3,4) -
4. 02:07:634 (2) - You should start the NC here, because the new rhythm is starting here c:
5. 02:10:575 (3) - Why not doing a reverse here? It can give more emphasis with the song I guess.
6. 02:47:045 (1) - That's so sad that the slider don't start on the same point as this note 02:46:163 (4) - you can try stacking it ;w;
7. 05:26:918 (2,3) - https://puu.sh/sQCyB/884c2a6c73.png Do something more spaced like that, I think it's more beautiful to see~
8. 05:47:212 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I don't really like the way they are packed on the border of the grid :/
9. 06:03:389 (7,8) - You can stack those two notes on this slider 06:03:683 (1) -
10. 06:12:800 (4) - Same for this note! Why the 5 is stacked, but not the 4?
11. 06:56:330 (1) - Why this is not mapped at the end? I think there is lot of potential!

Nao Tomori wrote:

ello eyy

this mod is going to be really shitty cuz this map is nice.. ty ty
rip


[aurelion sol]
before anything, the ar seems really high for this slow, lower density mapping. most 3 star diffs have lower ar than this, and this one isn't incredibly technical or anything that requires this high ar. Naah, I like 8.5 cause this map quite hard to read if I'm using AR lower than that.

01:46:310 - 01:48:075 - this suddenly ignores the violin, but you had 1/4 rhythms on it earlier which worked nicely. It is , but giving the player same plays for quite a long time gonna bore the players

01:59:986 (1) - not lined up with the "stream" thought I already have it

02:17:634 (4) - this looks a bit weird since the notes before it don't lead in to the slider properly. something like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6812371 would look a bit better and making the angles on those circles consistent would look even better than my shitty sketch right

02:35:869 (3) - weird movement here. you have to abuse slider leniency to do 1-2 but 3 is super close to 2, even though it also has emphasis. i recommend moving 3 a bit away from the end of 2. aight

03:04:398 (2,3) - weird to abandon the 1/1 + 1/1 slider rhythm that you'd been doing up to now, at 02:59:692 (2) - and 03:02:045 (2) - right

05:30:447 (6) - make these overlaps consistent size: 05:28:094 (6) - 05:37:212 (5) - theyre generally pretty consistent the one i started with is off-center yep

05:53:094 (3,4) - might look marginally nicer if you rotated them so the cursor can go straight into the slider: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6812559 this is Mir's

06:08:389 (1) - this does not sound strong enough to warrant a very large 1/4 jump going into it from a circle. i recommend moving 06:08:241 (8) - up or 1 down to lower the spacing here. - compare to 06:12:947 (5) - where it's stacked and it's a stronger vocal, 06:27:212 (1) - where slider leniency can be used.

06:51:624 (2) - this could look nicer with a little more spacing and a wider angle, like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6812452 (this is like a pixel movement or something) agreed

k

sry for shit mod It's not shit at all! Please be more confident with yourself!

Pachiru wrote:

[Shu-shu]

1. 01:57:045 (4,5,6) - Those notes like that on this part of the song is not needed I think, why not using longer sliders since its a slow part? Like you did here: 02:04:692 (1,2,3,4) - naaah, I want to give player different experiences while playing this map
2. 02:07:634 (2) - You should start the NC here, because the new rhythm is starting here c: nope, the current one is already correct. If you listen to the vocal carefully.
3. 02:10:575 (3) - Why not doing a reverse here? It can give more emphasis with the song I guess. Naah, I really want to click something on 02:11:457 (4) - so yeah
4. 02:47:045 (1) - That's so sad that the slider don't start on the same point as this note 02:46:163 (4) - you can try stacking it ;w; did this intentionally since I just like this kind of stack play
5. 05:26:918 (2,3) - https://puu.sh/sQCyB/884c2a6c73.png Do something more spaced like that, I think it's more beautiful to see~ sure
6. 06:12:800 (4) - Same for this note! Why the 5 is stacked, but not the 4? agree
7. 06:56:330 (1) - Why this is not mapped at the end? I think there is lot of potential! It is! But let's just see.

That's all for me, this is great map! And there is a huge work on the hitsounds! Good luck for ranking <3

Pachiru wrote:

[Shu-shu]

1. 00:17:969 (2,1) - The overlap here is not cool I think, you can just try to reverse the slider on the other side. It's just an exemple. - it's fine tbh
2. 00:55:281 (3,4,5) - Are you sure that those notes are parrallels on each other? - ya
3. 05:47:212 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I don't really like the way they are packed on the border of the grid :/ - ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ gonna have to deal with it cuz it's not a huge deal
4. 06:03:389 (7,8) - You can stack those two notes on this slider 06:03:683 (1) - is fine tbh since the part is pretty intense
5. 06:12:800 (4) - Same for this note! Why the 5 is stacked, but not the 4? - i changed this for shurelia after we talked about it
6. 06:56:330 (1) - Why this is not mapped at the end? I think there is lot of potential! O. K. read below

That's all for me, this is great map! And there is a huge work on the hitsounds! Good luck for ranking <3 - \o/

Mir wrote:

Okay the reason it isn't mapped to the end is because there's 102 bpm and 89 bpm at the same time and that's pretty much unmappable. We tried multiple ways to bridge the gap and nothing felt like it fit. If anyone has any suggestions feel free to post them, but as it stands it's probably gonna stay unmapped after then.

1. I get so many 100s on the 00:11:808 - until 00:30:576 - , asking for double check the timing wouldn't hurt anyone I guess
2. Your overall volume configuration http://puu.sh/sR3py/9419c237b0.png doesn't make sense, some of them like 5% volume are too low barely hearable and bad for feedback. Not sure who did your hitsound etc, but please reconsider this one. Also sampleset on this one should be same http://puu.sh/sRbUB/fa2caa3e07.png
3. Eventhough the Artist name already taken from the album cover, but when it comes to naming someone we actually prefer to use no spacing between surname and given name, so I think using 志方あきこ、霜月はるか、みとせのりこ is more appropriate imo. Since the usage of spacing on names only occured on business thing only afaik (like business card, album cover, etc)
4. Check aimod

1. 00:38:223 (2) - Nice slider art actually but you missed so many potential beat like orgel sound here 00:38:811 - and vocal here 00:39:399 - 00:39:693 - . So maybe you can slightly improve the rhythmical into http://puu.sh/sR9Bg/801ea9d85e.jpg so it can cover those beats
2. 00:46:163 (4) - Move slightly to right for a better diamond shape
3. 01:45:575 (10) - Reduce one reverse? I think it share same 1/8 drum with 01:40:869 (2,4,4) - not really sure why that one have an extra reverse
4. 02:12:339 (2,3,4,5) - Wrongly snaped I guess, it doesn't fit with music or the faint drum sound, I think it supposed to be 1/4 or sth like you did on 02:13:222 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -
5. 02:55:281 (3) - Compared to the other same patterning (e.g. 02:57:339 (2,3) - ), that one just too close with the previous 1/4 slider
6. 02:58:810 (1,2) - The overlapping really bad visually when play, maybe you can try another placement to avoid bad overlapping?
7. 03:19:104 (5) - Why use 1/6? shouldn't that on 1/8 instead like the rest?
8. 03:45:575 (1) - Such a weird ending if you end that slider on blue tick here 03:48:369 - literally that just an echo of the long vocal, the vocal itslef stop on the big tick 03:48:222 - so better to end the slider on big tick in this case
9. 04:27:812 (1,2,1) - The transition sounds not right imo, better recheck your timing here 04:28:413 - the offset seems weird rather too fast than it should be
10. 04:43:100 (1,2,3,1) - The stream shape better not a curve imo it flows weird on 04:42:163 (2,1,2,3,1) - . I think a shape like http://puu.sh/sRb4b/f30da89290.jpg could be play more natural
11. 04:44:663 (3,4) - Bad polarity imo, I think it could be replace with 4/6 with reverse like http://puu.sh/sRb9o/1b43adaf8f.jpg
12. 04:45:834 (4) - Why that one on 1/8? and how that slider end is weird imo, better check your timing I guess
13. 04:55:447 (1) - Try to extend to next blue tick 04:55:889 - , the transition on 1/8 here 04:55:815 - not good for vocal transition
14. 05:41:183 (1) - Due to vocal that slider should be stop on red tick here 05:43:389 - as the vocal really stop on that point

Kocari wrote:

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[Sol Ciel]

02:07:634 (2,3,4) - People might misread this spacing since it's so close in resemblance to 02:04:692 (1,2) - The most effective in my point of view would be somewhere around 1.5. It's easy enough to read it and has a great effect in spacing because of the strong beats each note contains sure
02:07:634 (2,3) - Another reason why is this is played at a 1/6 but this is played at a 1/4 02:08:810 (5,6) - but all of them have the same visual spacing. it's actually 1/3 but yeeah. should be fine now
02:12:339 (2,3,4,5) - Imo giving the players a better visual would help make these patterns play better. Especially with the 2nd portion 02:13:222 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Starting with stacks will help players adapt to what it sounds like in a split moment before playing that specific rhythm. Since spacing is nearly the same as the 1/6 02:13:222 (1) - Also space a little further so it's easy to change to as well not gonna do the stack thing but yeah, i made them more visually noticeable

Mako Sakata wrote:

Hello from the other side jakarta ma bandung ga jauh2 amat lah wqwqw
Sugestion,

General

1. I get so many 100s on the 00:11:808 - until 00:30:576 - , asking for double check the timing wouldn't hurt anyone I guess yeah
2. Your overall volume configuration http://puu.sh/sR3py/9419c237b0.png doesn't make sense, some of them like 5% volume are too low barely hearable and bad for feedback. Not sure who did your hitsound etc, but please reconsider this one. Also sampleset on this one should be same http://puu.sh/sRbUB/fa2caa3e07.png aaaaa, done adjusting the HS volume and fixed the other one
3. Eventhough the Artist name already taken from the album cover, but when it comes to naming someone we actually prefer to use no spacing between surname and given name, so I think using 志方あきこ、霜月はるか、みとせのりこ is more appropriate imo. Since the usage of spacing on names only occured on business thing only afaik (like business card, album cover, etc) I got your point but uuh gonna try to follow the "Hymnnote" more to avoid some disturbance . I'll consider it tho.
4. Check aimod the unsnapped stuff is just something that we can't fix

Diff

1. 01:45:575 (10) - Reduce one reverse? I think it share same 1/8 drum with 01:40:869 (2,4,4) - not really sure why that one have an extra reverse fair enough
2. 02:12:339 (2,3,4,5) - Wrongly snaped I guess, it doesn't fit with music or the faint drum sound, I think it supposed to be 1/4 or sth like you did on 02:13:222 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - naaah, there's faint yet quite clear drum sounds that says it's a 1/6 stuff. I'm trying to follow that.
3. 02:55:281 (3) - Compared to the other same patterning (e.g. 02:57:339 (2,3) - ), that one just too close with the previous 1/4 slider CTRL + G'd
4. 02:58:810 (1,2) - The overlapping really bad visually when play, maybe you can try another placement to avoid bad overlapping? is it? I've seen this kind of overlap on the other new maps too , So I might want to try that. Aaaandd also it plays pretty fine

Double check the timing is highly recomended before pushing this any further, gl~

Battle wrote:

[General]
04:50:741 - Maybe check timing from this point on? They sound a bit early and it sounds like the music speeds up a bit did check and it should be fine

[Sol]
00:00:492 - Recommend making this section at least 10% for semi-adequate feedback, in addition to this I feel like you should make the finishes like 00:01:123 (3) - into whistles instead, finishes are a bit too much for this vocal-only section hmm , but i prefer this one since it emphasize the "wa" sounds better
00:00:807 (2) - Whistle here if you plan to make it consistent with 00:05:544 (1,2,3) - actually, I removed the whistle on (2) instead haha, My bad.
00:16:847 - to 00:27:727 - Please make these larger than 5% in volume, there's little to no feedback, and since the music is slightly louder, it doesn't feel like players clicks are making sounds at all, leading to confusing feedback done , my bad.
00:39:987 - Overall I'm pretty sure you can just bump up the volume by 10% for each section my bad
02:07:045 (1) - Making this a 1/1 slider instead makes the transition from 1/3 to regular 1/4 rhythm smoother, it's still pretty awkward but it at least makes it not AS awkward give them more distance so it'll be less awkward , Trying to keep the rhythm tho
02:15:281 (3,4) - Looks pretty similar to how 1/2 is spaced like 02:16:457 (1,2) - , try to make it more distinct done
02:22:339 (3,4,5) - It's weird how you allow space between 02:21:163 (1,2) - when it's 1/4 but not space for this, feels inconsistent fixed too, thanks for buff
02:53:222 - mm pause feels awkward since 02:51:751 (1,2) - both start on vocals but the vocal here is ignored well, I want to give something different since the vocal kiai part is super long and also this one trying to follow the BGM more.
02:54:986 (2,3) - Having the 1/4 sliders spaced one way and then another seems really awkward my bad
02:59:692 (2,3,4) - You keep switching off for how you want to space these, try to make it consistent, if you want to space it less, that's fine but it should be relatively the same or just noticeable difference instead of something really obvious imo should be k now
04:08:437 - You can help make this section have a bit more feedback by adding whistles on significant orgel noises such as the beats on 04:10:312 - 04:10:937 - 04:12:812 - agree
04:22:812 (4) - Seems like you're following strings, rhythm suggested follows it a bit better

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05:28:094 (6,1) - This overlap isn't very appealing, try to like it up similar how you did it at 05:30:447 (6,1) - ya


GL~

Shurelia wrote:

Mako Sakata wrote:

Hello from the other side jakarta ma bandung ga jauh2 amat lah wqwqw Lool
Sugestion,

General

1. Check aimod the unsnapped stuff is just something that we can't fix Actually you can fix that one by manually edit its timestamp on notepad, I think pishi do that a lot on some of his map. But in case you're not understand how, better ask someone experienced to help

Yeah, I'll try to ask someone (again). Thank you thank you.

Kocari wrote:

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[Sol Ciel]

Timing was a little off to my ear. It seemed rather delayed for the first couple seconds - will get a check
01:18:222 (2,4) - You can make these the same. The violin element in the music helps making this part better than holding on to it like that - makes sense, will do~
01:21:751 (4) - I believe you can make this slider the same as 01:20:575 (2) - Basically same as ^ - done
01:26:163 - Such a strong piano sound. I believe the rhythm here is more on the lines of http://puu.sh/sQUUp/fb2fec5e41.jpg - good catch but this rhythm feels lacking, changed to a triple instead
01:31:016 (4,5) - I think using the same spacing as before with the stacks like this is better than creating a space where it doesn't feel as great. Since the spacing 01:31:163 (5,1) - already gives a great emphasis - not really sure what you mean but i found a better way to do this specific part
05:56:624 (1,2) - Spacing problems to this 05:57:800 (4,5) - moved it closer

Mako Sakata wrote:

Hello from the other side
Sugestion,

General

1. Check aimod - the beginning snapping issues are unavoidable due to bpm changes mid-slider. if it can be fixed in the next timing check it will be, but for now we can't really do anything about it

Diff

1. 00:38:223 (2) - Nice slider art actually but you missed so many potential beat like orgel sound here 00:38:811 - and vocal here 00:39:399 - 00:39:693 - . So maybe you can slightly improve the rhythmical into http://puu.sh/sR9Bg/801ea9d85e.jpg so it can cover those beats - changed slightly
2. 00:46:163 (4) - Move slightly to right for a better diamond shape - i made a kite! \o/
3. 03:19:104 (5) - Why use 1/6? shouldn't that on 1/8 instead like the rest? - no this is 1/6 if you listen closely
4. 03:45:575 (1) - Such a weird ending if you end that slider on blue tick here 03:48:369 - literally that just an echo of the long vocal, the vocal itslef stop on the big tick 03:48:222 - so better to end the slider on big tick in this case - i think this is fine because i like how it goes off of the tick to emphasize the vocal fadeout. If it's a big problem I'll change it but I like this.
5. 04:27:812 (1,2,1) - The transition sounds not right imo, better recheck your timing here 04:28:413 - the offset seems weird rather too fast than it should be - nothing i can do since i'm shit at timing, but it will be fixed.
6. 04:43:100 (1,2,3,1) - The stream shape better not a curve imo it flows weird on 04:42:163 (2,1,2,3,1) - . I think a shape like http://puu.sh/sRb4b/f30da89290.jpg could be play more natural - this is fine, it follows a circular motion which flows nicely with the vocals
7. 04:44:663 (3,4) - Bad polarity imo, I think it could be replace with 4/6 with reverse like http://puu.sh/sRb9o/1b43adaf8f.jpg - done
8. 04:45:834 (4) - Why that one on 1/8? and how that slider end is weird imo, better check your timing I guess - because the singer sings off and it's weird and i don't know what im doing send help (but i won't fix it because it is accurate at least from what i can hear)
9. 04:55:447 (1) - Try to extend to next blue tick 04:55:889 - , the transition on 1/8 here 04:55:815 - not good for vocal transition - nice catch, done
10. 05:41:183 (1) - Due to vocal that slider should be stop on red tick here 05:43:389 - as the vocal really stop on that point - it fades out over that red note so this is okay for now unless it becomes a big problem

Double check the timing is highly recomended before pushing this any further, gl~

Battle wrote:

[General]
04:50:741 - Maybe check timing from this point on? They sound a bit early and it sounds like the music speeds up a bit

[Sol]
00:37:634 (1) - Extended slider doesn't really work here since there's a beat audible on the red tick, which you had at least mapped with the 1/2 sliders like 3,4 before this - i get what you mean and i do realize i skip that red beat, but i want the violin to be encompassed fully, since it's especially strong here i skipped it intentionally and mapping it would feel like overdone rhythm for the idea i'm going with here
00:38:223 (2) - mm I kinda dislike that it's going over the things on the white ticks, but I feel it should at least end on 00:39:399 - instead since it feels awkward to have the second syllable of "asa" clickable instead of the first - fixed in a previous mod, thanks for catching that too though!
01:17:634 (1,2) - It sounds more natural if this ends on the red ticks, string instruments are present, and although I can't hear their exact snapping, 1/2 sliders make it at least feel like the strings are being played instead of being ignored, (3,4) is fine tho - most of these are fixed in kocari's mod, thanks for noticing these too though :3
04:22:812 (4) - Seems like you're following strings, rhythm suggested follows it a bit better - actually i don't think this rhythm does, i did fix it according to kocari's mod though, so this part should be less of an issue

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06:03:389 (7,8,1) - Spacing lol - fixed lol


GL~

Anxient wrote:

ar tonelico?! in 2016?! cuz f aniem,cory,meem song in 2k16

Sol Ciel
01:44:398 (4) - dont forget to NC! o, right
01:44:986 (7) - ^ this one is not necessary
01:50:281 (6) - looks better if you move it up a bit tbh http://puu.sh/sTnmj/aed2b8bdec.jpg yes
01:57:634 (1) - i think you can play more riskier coz its 1/3 + 102 bpm. try doing this ot improve emphasis, apply to all similar parts in the part.http://puu.sh/sTnoF/c3d51639ef.jpg thanks for the buff yo
02:14:104 (1) - try being more bold with low bpm maps ;3 you can make stuff more interesting if you risk a little http://puu.sh/sTnPj/cbdafdc151.jpg thanks again
02:15:869 (4) - ctrl g for flow + better entry to 02:16:457 (1) - not every flow has to be linear. just sayin right
02:34:398 (5) - i think you can improve this part by doing something like this? displays more impact http://puu.sh/sTnTA/5bd32e835e.jpg naah, can't do that at here, since I don't have any reason to do that
02:42:339 (1) - i think its better if you made this a straight slider, like these two 02:41:751 (5,6) - you like 'em straight , I like 'em curved
02:52:928 (3,4) - i think theres a better rhythm for this? http://puu.sh/sTnYT/7b9b4385cf.jpg hmmmm, I like it but I still prefer the current one
02:55:722 (4,5) - maybe? .w. nay
05:44:271 (2) - try doing it like this instead. more stylistic and works better with emphasis for 05:44:859 (1) - imo this.. what?
06:10:594 (7) - try this? http://puu.sh/sTojU/1e763ca402.jpg did something similar llike yours intead
06:12:800 (4,5) - why .w. just make it like you usually would to emphasize 1 moar
06:30:153 (2) - ctrl g to give 06:30:447 (3) - a slight emphasis? sure

good luck uwu

1. not sure if the timing got checked or not but i think that the timing is kinda off at some point like 00:08:702 - 04:09:062 - 04:33:413 - 04:51:918 -
2. the aimod report about unsnapped on sliderend can only be fixed by editing .osu btw kinda complex if you want more detail you can try contact me but would be better to make sure timing are all fine first lol
3. 05:07:212 - i think it would be better to start kiai here instead 05:07:212 - cus this part 04:48:389 - feel more like a calm bulidup part to transist the actual verse there

1. 00:53:810 (7,2) - minor but stack to improve aesthetic a bit
2. 01:18:810 (3,4) - the 1/4 spacing here is really different from the one you introduce here 01:17:634 (1,2) - which can make the player confuse and think it's the 1/2 spacing instead imo due to how high the spacing ii there , i think it would be better to make the 1/4 spacing there consistent with 01:17:634 (1,2) - just like what you did here 01:21:163 (3,4) - that will make player a bit less confused
3. 02:12:634 (5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - I think the rhythm in the music still 1/6 here , i don't hear any beat on 1/4 , you can try this rhythm
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4. 02:47:928 (3,4,5,6) - make these spacing a bit more consistent with 1/4 spacing before would make thing looks more consistent which make the flow feel better imo
5. 02:52:928 (3,4) - the weird rhythm gap here play pretty awkward imo , i don't think the 1/4 beat here 02:53:369 - standout much that it need to be mapped much , imo mapping the red tick here instead 02:53:222 - would give quite a better impact on the rhythm here and make the rhythm flow a lots better so i think this rhythm would work better
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6. 02:55:281 (3,4) - 02:57:634 (3,4) - same
7. 03:02:045 (2,3) - the blue tick beat there doesn't deserve high spacing imo it doesn't sound very emphasized tbh so i think just low spacing 02:59:692 (2,3) - would be enough now ( for consistent tho lol)
8. 03:04:398 (2,3) - uhh similiar i still think this is a bit too high tho
9. 03:10:869 (2,3) - not a good rhythm transition tbh it's a similiar case like 02:52:928 (3,4) - imo 1/4 gap are always something that will make player feel really awkward when playing them due to the nature of it being something that kinda hard to recognize imo unless the song really called for it a lots , i think the longer slider would can emphasis beat on 2 better with the hold feeling also improve rhythm transition a lots too so i think this rhythm would work better
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10. 03:13:222 (2,3) - 03:15:575 (2,3) - 03:17:928 (2,3) - 03:20:281 (2,3) - 03:22:634 (2,3) - 03:24:986 (2,3) - 03:27:339 (2,3) - same
11. 04:45:834 (4) - should start on white tick , i think that where the beat start
12. 04:48:389 (1) - can improve curve here a bit to make it curve well with stream
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13. 05:27:212 (3,4) - 05:29:565 (3,4) - 05:31:918 (3,4) - 05:36:624 (3,4) - 05:38:977 (3,4) - same as 02:52:928 (3,4) -
14. 05:41:183 (1) - i think ending this at white tick sound better for me and make the rhythm transition here 05:41:183 (1,2) - sound better too
15. 06:02:212 (4,5) - i think make the spacing consistent with the 1/4 spacing before would make looks more consistent so the flow will ge better imo
16. 06:10:153 (6,7,1) - use spacing like 06:07:800 (7,8,1) - ? to make them consistent so it make patterning a bit more solid currently it looks random a bit
17. 06:28:683 (3,4,5) - the flow here is the only flow that flow different from the others similiar rhythm like 06:23:977 (3,4,5) - 06:33:389 (3,4,5) - , i think that make thing feel inconsistent and weird for some reason i think with the same flow it make the patterning here feel more solid so try to ctrl+g 06:28:977 (4) - ?