Hi!
[General]
you need combo colors
[Easy]
I don't think a CS 4.3 Easy is okay. CS 4 is pushing it, but ideally you want CS3 to CS3.5, newer players aren't good aimers so bigger circles help them out quite a bit.
Aside from that this map is generally pretty fine. It's a simple style so it's hard to mess up. I guess I have a few concerns.
00:37:042 (1,2) - While the big spacing makes poor flow not a big problem (there's a lot of this kinda thing earlier in the map I didn't mention), this I don't really like. The motion here is just really unintuitive for the player. Keep in mind, as 1 star map only the most beginner of beginners are really going to be legitimately playing this so I think you should have a more straightforward flow here.
http://imgur.com/a/it2A9 This flow isn't friendly.
00:40:735 (1,2) - In my opinion flow like this is what you should use more of in your map. Doing this everywhere would require you to replace a lot of your notes, so when you buff the CS (which you should do!), consider having more straightforward flow in this map.
00:44:427 (1,2) - It's especially noticeable for circles. Look at this picture to get an idea on what I think a better placement for 2 would be -
http://imgur.com/a/A4nFm Red is what the player currently does, and black is what is desired.
00:51:811 (1) - I think this spinner is too long for an Easy, the players don't have the stamina to pull this off.
00:59:196 (1,2,1) - Good flow!
01:04:734 (2) - You could try to make this shape symmetrical.
01:06:580 - I totally expected the next slider to start here. You've used 2/1 gaps the entire map and suddenly you switch to 3/1, it's offputting. I would have this slider start on 01:06:580 - and end where it does now, and then have the next one start on 01:08:427, and etc.
[Normal]
CS 4.5 normal is a bit...eh.
00:35:196 (3) - I wouldn't end sliders in a normal on blue ticks. This messes up the players rhythm because now they have, what, a 5/4 gap to the next note? A normal player isn't going to be able to properly read that. Just end this on 00:35:657, there's a clap there anyway.
00:42:580 (3) - ^
01:00:119 (3) - For a similar reason to above involving weird gaps, I would extend this to 01:00:580, for a couple of reasons. 1) more intuitive rhythm, and 2) I think the clap is more important than the sound on 01:00:465. Applies to this entire kiai pretty much so if you fix it here fix it everywhere.
01:01:965 (3,4) - Very similar flow concept to what I pictured above (
http://imgur.com/a/A4nFm )
Much better flow overall than the Easy, good job!
[Hard]
00:09:119 (6,1) - This noticeable shrink in spacing doesn't really fit imo. I'd keep it consistent.
00:07:504 (1,4) - If you could reshape this into a curve that blankets itself it would look much nicer.
00:11:196 (1) - ctrl+j the shape for better flow
00:18:004 (1) - shouldn't the NC be on 00:18:580 (2) - since it's the downbeat? I'm not sure what your current NC pattern is following since you're not NCing for vocals or by measures.
00:26:080 (7) - this breath starts on 00:25:965 - actually so I think the note should go there.
00:35:196 (5) - NC should be here
00:42:580 (5) - ^
00:44:427 (4) - ^
00:35:542 (1,2) - Blanket, perhaps?
00:46:273 (2) - Okay so stick to NCing on downbeats for this section, it fits much better than your current pattern (which I can't even tell what its following)
00:51:811 (1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - This is MUCH harder than the rest of the map lol, you might want to lighten it up a bit? Maybe add some kicksliders are something to help the player with downtime.
00:53:196 (1) - Inconsistent NC
00:56:657 (4) - Inconsistent lack of NC
00:58:504 (3) - This is part of "Sexy", 00:58:273 (2) - This is part of the drum, so if you're mapping 00:58:504 (3) - as part of the vocal it would fit that you have to map 00:58:042. Also since I know this song I totally expected to be able to click on 00:58:042 - lol
Kiai looked good!
[Passion]
00:02:888 (4) - Hm, wouldn't it be better for this to end on 00:03:234? Matches the rhythm you've set up already, as earlier in the map you mapped these blue ticks ( 00:01:387 (5) - for example ), so switching off that is a bit offputting.
00:10:273 (4) - ^
00:06:810 (5,6) - Equal intensity, so equal spacing perhaps?
Just a general concern in that I don't like your NC pattern. I can't recognize what it's following. Why not stick to just NCs on downbeats?
00:25:965 - I get you're following vocals but skipping a downbeat like this is uncomfortable to play.
00:35:196 (5) - should have the NC. Apply for all parts like this in this section of the map.
00:57:350 (7) - You NC'd this in the hard, do it here too for consistency.
00:58:504 - Pretty minor but you mapped this in the hard so its weird to ignore it here. TBH I'd just map 00:58:042 - and 00:58:504 - because like I said in the Hard I know the song so I expect to be able to click those lol
01:01:042 (2,4) - Clean up this blanket, this pattern relies on a good blanket to look good.
Again, NCs feel random. put NCs on the downbeats, its consistent and fits the song.
01:05:657 (1,2) - This is spaced like it would be a 1/4 gap but its a 1/2 one which could be a reading issue.
Fun kiai.
Good luck, let me know if you have any questions.