Hi! I am here cause ezek asked me to do it.
[Easy]
[Hard]
[Easy]
- 00:10:737 (1,2) - I don't like this pattern, it makes your mapset feels visually weird. I can give you two options, or you move (2) above (1) so it would be like that https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6430955 or you move (2) to the left so you can make a blanket.
- 00:21:325 (3) - Honestly it would be better if you add a reverse to this slider as 00:23:090 (3) - is not worth clicking on a easy diff imo.
- 00:49:561 (1,2) - Could you explain why this part have a gap like that?
- 01:12:502 (5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - Revise your comboing in this entire section, you forgot to NC a note and all the rest got messed up. You have to NC this one 01:12:502 (5) - remove on this one 01:14:266 (1) - add on this one 01:16:031 (4) - and so on so you can have a default of two downbeats per NC.
- 01:31:913 (3,4,1) - Don't you think it'd be better to make this slider paralell with (3)? The way you placed it seems kinda weird imo.
- 02:07:208 (1) - This is not consistent with your previosu pattern where you did like that 00:23:090 (1) - here. I'd suggest or adding a reverse to 02:06:325 (4) - as I suggested or just leave 02:07:208 (1) - as a single note in case you didn't appyl my suggestion. Same here: 00:53:090 (1).
- 02:16:031 (1) - Seems a weird shape compared to the other ones you did like that. Like: 01:44:266 (3) - 02:00:149 (1) etc.
- 02:44:266 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - Is there any reason on the song that you used whistles for this whole section instead of the claps?
- 03:01:913 (3) - You never used a 3/1 slider before and honestly song doesnt seem different there, so I'd just make it 2/1 and then add a circle.
[Hard]
- 00:08:972 (1,2,3,1) - What are you exactly trying to follow with those gaps in the rhythm? The vocals? Instrumentals?
- 00:16:031 (1,2,3) - Why is your spacing different from 0.9x here?
- 00:24:413 (3,4,5,6) - It is the same rhythm used on insane, even being stacked, it still seems harsh for a hard diff. If you apply the changes, apply to all other parts you did that too.
- 00:42:502 (1) - This shape looks VERY weird, it would have been much easier use a red node there.
- 01:13:384 (5) - You forgot a whistle here
- 01:30:149 (1) - I'd use 0.9x spacing for this section as it seems a normal part of the song. Same here: 02:44:266 (1) - cuz you did the same here 00:16:031 (1).
- 02:18:237 (3) - Any reason for being stacked under the slider?
- 02:58:384 (1,2,3,4) - It is kinda hard to know the spacing here as they look the same, move (2) apart and unstack (3) and (4) so it gets easier to know it is 1/2.