🕓⌛ TWENTY MINUTES ⌛🕓medium00:23:513 (1,2) - straight up flow is rather unpleasant. try to adjust this a bit. maybe like this
http://puu.sh/sRUEP/892db2d33c.jpg00:26:471 (5) - move the end point of the slider to the upper left for better transition with the next slider
00:30:696 (1,2) - flow could be better again. ugly shape but you get the idea
http://puu.sh/sRUJO/46ca73924e.jpg00:45:908 (4,5) - 02:47:598 (4,5) - 02:59:851 (1,2) - blankuuut
00:50:133 (5,1) - if the second slider would be further up flow would be better. rather harsh atm.
http://puu.sh/sRUN2/66aec8dc4c.jpg00:52:668 (4) - 3 reverses is prolly a bit problematic for a normal difficulty. not sure about this.
BOMB AWAY LOL
01:19:711 (4,1) - flooow please. anything like this is gud :
http://puu.sh/sRUV9/f187e20e98.jpgyou used a 8 beat combo pattern so remove 01:34:499 (1) -
01:42:527 (3,4,5) - these 3 together look aesthetically a bit unappealing. try blanketing 4 and 5
http://puu.sh/sRV0Y/38d7aab9e8.jpg02:06:189 (3,4) - reverse the curve of the slider for better flow
02:51:823 (5,1) - flow is really bad here try arranging them a bit better like so
http://puu.sh/sRV7W/fb699ba8a2.jpg02:58:584 (1) - reverse the shape then flow is better
http://puu.sh/sRVbL/a721d0aca7.jpg03:01:330 (4,5) - flip these, flow
http://puu.sh/sRVd2/090a1c4cea.jpg03:14:640 (3,4) - curve is a bit harsh here of the small slider which hurts the flow and transition try
http://puu.sh/sRVhq/178cc826b2.jpgboatkrab is high00:13:373 (4,1) - 00:34:499 (2,3) - and actually the whole first section.. dont think the sound is strong enough for a jump but ok :p the beginning is way too calm for jumps. try using jumps for emphasis on higher pitched vocals instead if you really want to add some. they'd be more appropriate there like 00:23:725 (5,1) - for example
00:49:922 (2,3) - vocal are too low for a jump here. jump between 00:48:865 (4,1) - would be more fitting
01:04:077 (5,1) - really awkward flow and transition here. idk how you could improve it but im sure you'll find a way. total eyesore and not smooth to play. 01:58:161 (4,1) - is better for example since the flow is more circular
01:15:485 (3,1) - spacing? lol
03:18:020 (1,2) - way too soft and calm here to have a jump. use normal ds make a jump here instead 03:19:499 (4,1) - for drums and vocal emphasis
03:26:471 (5) - add nc for next bar
really lovely these two diffs, im sure the other two are as well :p work more on flow on medium, redo jumps on high to accentuate the important and intense sounds rather than calm sections.