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General
-DS changes very often, i dont think youre allowed to do that in a Normal diff (even marathon). i wont point out many spots for DS, but make sure that this is rankable.
Ani
00:02:214 (2) - 00:03:848 (1) - blanket?
00:05:480 (2,1) - stack?
00:31:602 (3,4,5) - make perfect triangle
00:33:235 (1,2) - blanket
00:38:949 (5,1) - move so that object spacing (NOT DS) is the same as 00:36:908 (2,3)
00:39:765 (1,2) - make these sliders have the same curvature
00:40:990 (3,4,5) - DS is very misleading, move 5 further away
00:43:030 (1,2) - fix blanket
00:47:724 - missed a lyric here
00:52:010 (6,1) - move further away for object spacing
00:55:071 (1,2) - rhythm here might be hard to play for your target audience, so keep that in mind
00:57:724 (3,4,5,6) - square?
01:01:806 (4,1) - stack?
01:08:337 (6,1) - ^
01:13:235 (2,4) - move to avoid overlap
01:15:684 (1,4) - overlap looks kinda meh
01:23:847 (3,4) - flow better if you move 4 to the right imo
01:41:398 (6,1) - move 1 up for object spacing
01:50:786 (1,2,3) - short sliders like this probably shouldnt be used in a Normal diff (but BPM is pretty low so you might be able to get away with it)
01:52:418 (3,4) - fix blanket
02:04:663 (1,2,3,4,5) - abrupt difficulty change, before there were plenty of breaks but now its a whole bunch of circles with 1/4 beat spacing apply this to other kiais as well
02:07:928 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
02:06:908 (6,7) - rhythm might be confusing, try turning these 02:06:296 (5,6,7) into a reverse slider apply this to other kiais as well
02:09:561 (5,6) - ^
02:43:030 (5,1) - separate more for object spacing
03:05:888 (5,6,1,3) - all these overlaps are confusing
03:15:684 (4,1) - get rid of overlap?
03:36:908 (1,2) - make 1 curve towards 2 instead of away from it
03:42:622 (1,2,3) - make reverse slider?
04:02:623 (2,3) - flow not good, angle 3 upwards instead of downwards
04:06:296 (3) - ctrl+h the slider so that the flow continues left towards 04:07:725 (4)
04:32:826 (2,3,4) - why change spacing here?
04:34:867 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - pattern is repetitive, overlaps dont look very appealing
05:13:541 (4,1) - i would think that many beginner players would miss this jump, decrease DS and/or simplify rhythm
05:43:439 (1,2,3) - make reverse slider?
05:45:071 (1,2,3) - ^
06:12:826 (1,1,1) - too many spinners is tiring, i would make 2 artsy sliders and keep the last spinner.
Good luck!
General
-DS changes very often, i dont think youre allowed to do that in a Normal diff (even marathon). i wont point out many spots for DS, but make sure that this is rankable.
Ani
00:02:214 (2) - 00:03:848 (1) - blanket?
00:05:480 (2,1) - stack?
00:31:602 (3,4,5) - make perfect triangle
00:33:235 (1,2) - blanket
00:38:949 (5,1) - move so that object spacing (NOT DS) is the same as 00:36:908 (2,3)
00:39:765 (1,2) - make these sliders have the same curvature
00:40:990 (3,4,5) - DS is very misleading, move 5 further away
00:43:030 (1,2) - fix blanket
00:47:724 - missed a lyric here
00:52:010 (6,1) - move further away for object spacing
00:55:071 (1,2) - rhythm here might be hard to play for your target audience, so keep that in mind
00:57:724 (3,4,5,6) - square?
01:01:806 (4,1) - stack?
01:08:337 (6,1) - ^
01:13:235 (2,4) - move to avoid overlap
01:15:684 (1,4) - overlap looks kinda meh
01:23:847 (3,4) - flow better if you move 4 to the right imo
01:41:398 (6,1) - move 1 up for object spacing
01:50:786 (1,2,3) - short sliders like this probably shouldnt be used in a Normal diff (but BPM is pretty low so you might be able to get away with it)
01:52:418 (3,4) - fix blanket
02:04:663 (1,2,3,4,5) - abrupt difficulty change, before there were plenty of breaks but now its a whole bunch of circles with 1/4 beat spacing apply this to other kiais as well
02:07:928 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
02:06:908 (6,7) - rhythm might be confusing, try turning these 02:06:296 (5,6,7) into a reverse slider apply this to other kiais as well
02:09:561 (5,6) - ^
02:43:030 (5,1) - separate more for object spacing
03:05:888 (5,6,1,3) - all these overlaps are confusing
03:15:684 (4,1) - get rid of overlap?
03:36:908 (1,2) - make 1 curve towards 2 instead of away from it
03:42:622 (1,2,3) - make reverse slider?
04:02:623 (2,3) - flow not good, angle 3 upwards instead of downwards
04:06:296 (3) - ctrl+h the slider so that the flow continues left towards 04:07:725 (4)
04:32:826 (2,3,4) - why change spacing here?
04:34:867 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - pattern is repetitive, overlaps dont look very appealing
05:13:541 (4,1) - i would think that many beginner players would miss this jump, decrease DS and/or simplify rhythm
05:43:439 (1,2,3) - make reverse slider?
05:45:071 (1,2,3) - ^
06:12:826 (1,1,1) - too many spinners is tiring, i would make 2 artsy sliders and keep the last spinner.
Good luck!