Ani00:16:092 (2,1) - possibility for blanket. i recommend you do this for visual
sure00:20:174 (1,2) - i think this jagged slider is a bad idea, coz the song is very smooth = not very suitable. better if you use smooth sliders instead.
alright00:32:418 (5) - i think a blanket is better. plus, this slider fits better into the previous pattern than it used to.
http://puu.sh/rPw6K/7b26ff7a31.jpg yes00:34:051 (2,3) - move both of these in a way where [2 and 3] will blanket 00:33:235 (1) - [slider end]. looks better visually and gets rid of the annoying
aight00:32:418 (5,2) - near overlap.
00:40:377 (2,4) - blanket possibility.
done00:45:888 (6) - i think its better if you stacked it with [5], so 00:46:296 (1) - gets more emphasis. its a bit louder than usual so best if you emphasized this. plus, [6] sounds a lot like [5] imo so this is better.
agreed00:46:296 (1) - this is too close to 00:45:479 (5) - imo; to a point that it nearly overlaps. imo its better to do this something like this. 00:47:112 (2,3) -. tip of mine would be to make the distance gradually increase coz i think it gets a bit louder with every beat.
http://puu.sh/rPwn4/5d2d4d79ba.jpg, final:
http://puu.sh/rPwpV/d2d588b2c3.jpg should be k now00:52:010 (6) - i think this is too close to [5]. flip this and move to x273 y155. it might work for you. end result
http://puu.sh/rPxet/ea5bb0c6d8.jpg lovely00:53:643 (2) - i think its better if you give this shorter distance from [1 to 2] for emphasis on 00:54:051 - [url]coz of the sound in 3.[/url]http://puu.sh/rPxgQ/fc99b9d8a7.jpg
did something similar00:55:071 - this sound is way too unnoticeable for it to be a clickable object, when 00:55:275 - a louder sound is unclickable. i think its better if you did this instead.
http://puu.sh/rPxm0/d8a0f3a898.jpg good idea01:04:255 (5,6) - i think its better if you ctrl g these two. like, highlight theem both and then ctrl g. imo [5] has more emphasis and i think that should be treated accordingly ;p
truee01:10:786 (3,1) - avoidable overlap. looks weird imo
meh01:17:316 (5) - methinks its better if you put in x419 y192 coz its more neater and theres blanket opportunity with 01:18:133 (6) -
lovely01:31:602 (4) - better if you stack this in 01:31:194 - sliderend instead for emphasis on 01:32:010 - .
awesomee01:33:235 (2) - make same DS?
aww01:36:500 (2) - ^
.75 and .72 isn't noticeable much imo 01:52:418 (3) - i think this can be better by shirnking to 3/4 size and add a hitcircle in 01:53:235 - .
http://puu.sh/rPy8b/10bbee1df5.jpg let's try it01:57:112 - i think i hear something in here. ya think its enough to warrant a triple?
nope, used 0% HS sound and i didn't hear anything02:00:582 (1) - rotate by -21 degrees from position. i think it looks better
http://puu.sh/rPyS1/f9f36dcc7b.jpg dnoe02:05:684 - i think this part can be more creative, rather than only using streams. heres what i did, to give you an idea.
http://puu.sh/rPyV6/1e5c2e1324.jpg tried this but it kinda not ok for me since I really want to click something (5)02:08:949 - same applies here.
same02:34:051 (1,2,3) - considering that these sound about as loud, i think its better to use same DS.
okay02:43:030 (5,1) - visual space this normally like this 02:42:214 (4,5) - . imo looks weird as is, coz the near overlap looks unnatural. just move the entire pattern,
http://puu.sh/rPz5w/d6acdba253.jpg ookay02:45:071 (3) - looks too angled, compared to this 02:43:847 (1,2) - . try not to deviate too much from the previous angle so it doesnt appear random, even if it isnt your intention.
http://puu.sh/rPz9V/be08fcdf47.jpg should be k now03:05:888 (5) - i think its better if you had it repeat once. theres a small sound 03:06:296 - (harp?). also plays less weirdly imo.
sure03:08:337 (5,6) - same as the 1st mod. this is a super chill song so i dont think its a good idea to use jagged sliders. doesnt reflect the song that well imo
yeaah03:20:990 (4,5,6) - blanket chance?
hhm, I moved it elsewhere instead03:25:479 - 03:25:684 - that transition though. use fade in or something lol. this looks so jarring
I'll let exam know.03:29:561 - clickable beat over here. please dont use sliderends for strong(er) beats. use this rhythm?
http://puu.sh/rPznA/86404ea196.jpg I used different rhythm instad but make it clickable03:40:990 (3) - same
same03:56:500 - same as the above mod. make it 3/4 in length and add a hitcircle on the top for emphasis. suits the map better.
done04:03:643 - no triple?
naah04:07:725 (4) - make this horizontal legnth and place on x243 y182. coz as it is rn, it could be misread as a 1/2
http://puu.sh/rPzvU/2bfa0825ca.jpg moved this else where04:09:765 - 04:13:030 - same as above. i think stream only is boring lol. this song deserves better ;~;
same04:25:888 (3) - over emphasized. ctrl g fixes this.
sure04:34:867 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - lol? this looks random. try putting in something more creative, coz this looks boring ;w;
hmm, this looks and plays fine 05:10:786 (1,2) - better blanket?
done05:14:867 - i think its better if you did this instead, so you dont waste the beat 05:15:684 - in here.
http://puu.sh/rPzVN/319e2d8adf.jpg sure05:21:398 - threading dangerously, i am. but i gotta make a proposal; maybe its better if you shortened this to 1/2 and added a double at the end? so you hit all the available beats.
http://puu.sh/rPA1b/29259713a5.jpg suree05:26:092 (5,6,7) - lol, make it the same DS? why is it differentr lmao
seems it trolled me05:31:194 - same here ;w;
05:32:010 (5) - same.
same