M4M from my queue!
Nice song choice. :3 Formatted with top-to-bottom reading in mind. So I might say something in Normal or Hard that applies to all diffs.
Good luck!
Nice song choice. :3 Formatted with top-to-bottom reading in mind. So I might say something in Normal or Hard that applies to all diffs.
Normal
Normal
- Consider revising new combos! I would put one at every downbeat at least, and most large sv changes should be NC’d.
- 00:17:096 (1,2) – Questionable object placement here. The reverse arrow will probably be hidden by most slider skins.
- 00:12:044 (1,2,3,4) – Maybe something like this instead?: https://puu.sh/rCLYx/e22adb71a2.mp4 Atm it looks kinda weird, and some objects could be placed slightly better.
- 00:22:149 – 00:39:833 – Feels really empty here. I think the player might get bored if there’s nothing much to click here. Consider Ncing at every downbeat as well, since the follow points look somewhat unappealing with such a long pause between notes.
- 00:44:886 (5,6) – Blanket!~
- 00:47:412 (1,2,3) – I’m confused as to what rhythm this is supposed to be following. Consider revising that part?
- 00:51:833 (5) – Double reverse sliders can throw players off, consider changing this to something else like two normal sliders.
- 00:57:517 (1,2) – Blanket!~
- 01:05:096 (7) – Really long multi-reverse slider. I think you can maybe make a more interesting pattern out of this. Especially considering the slider speed it may be hard for new players to keep up. Maybe something like this?: https://puu.sh/rCMuG/64df4378fd.mp4
- 01:08:886 (3,4) – This overlap looks unsightly. Maybe play around with it until you can get rid of it. I’d move 01:09:517 (4) to the left, personally.
- 01:10:781 (7,9) – Blanket these two? Or these two: 01:11:096 (8,9) ?
- 01:11:412 (9) – Another double reverse. ._.
- 01:17:096 (1) – I don’t know about stacking this under 01:16:307 (2). It could cause players to click too early since normal diffs are mostly about learning distance/tempo you know? If it’s so close players at this level may tend to click it as fast as possible.
- 01:24:675 (5,1) – Move 01:24:675 (5) to the right and blanket with 01:25:307 (1) to avoid overlap?
Hard
Hard
- Consider revising Ncs in this diff as well. Combos feel too long. Read what I said in Normal. Actually, do it for all difficulties.
- 00:04:465 (7) – The reverse tick misses the note I’m gonna assume you want to map. It’s on the red tick yet the reverse ticks is on a blue tick. How about this? https://puu.sh/rCMIC/a0b920802c.png
- 00:08:254 (1) – Double reverse. Could be two sliders or four circles, up to you, but I don’t really like the way it looks or plays. It seems too passive for the piano part. When playing I would have preferred to click more of the piano.
- 00:12:675 (3,4) – Blanket!
- 00:13:307 (5,6) - ^
- 00:14:254 (7) – I’d end this on a red tick instead of blue, easier and smoother to play.
- 00:17:096 (1,2) – Blanket! https://puu.sh/rCMTU/ea3e2379a1.png ?
- 00:17:570 (2,3) – Also idk about this stack, seems a little awkward to play. I don’t see a reason to stop flow here.
- 00:19:623 (1,2) - ^
- 00:25:939 (4) – Double reverse. ;-;
- 00:33:517 (5) - ^
- 00:39:833 (6,2) – I would try to change the shape of 00:40:939 (2) to avoid this overlap, but it’s up to you if you want to change it or not.
- 00:45:991 (5) – Ends on a very strong note. I’d remove the reverse tick and add something clickable at 00:47:412
- 00:51:202 (3,4) – Blanket!
- 00:54:991 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - – I’d do something like this instead: https://puu.sh/rCN7n/ab747791e3.png
- 00:57:517 (2,3) - Blanket?
- 00:58:465 (4) – Dunno about this stop here either. Breaks flow unnecessarily in my opinion.
- 00:59:728 (8,1) – Blanket!
- 00:57:991 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - Try this?: https://puu.sh/rCNh0/3a3c4d3a94.mp4
- 01:01:149 (4,6) – Not a fan of this overlap tbh.
- 01:02:254 (7,1) – Blanket!
- 01:07:307 (2,3) – Should be another like 01:06:991 (1) imo
- 01:08:886 (5,6) – Blanket!
- 01:10:781 (3,4) – Blanket?
- 01:14:570 (8,3) – Try stacking these somehow?
- 01:15:991 (4,5) – Again, not too big a fan of this overlap. ._.
- 01:17:728 (1,2) – Blanket!
- 01:18:833 (4) - ^
- 01:19:939 (1,2) - ^
- 01:20:728 (3,4) - ^
- 01:22:465 (1) – Ends on a pretty strong note. I’d put something clickable on the downbeat.
- 01:23:886 (1,2,3) – Symmetry! https://puu.sh/rCNs6/5e061053b2.png
- 01:27:833 (2,1) – Not a fan of this overlap either. ;-; 01:29:096 (1) also ends on a strong beat.
Insane+
Insane+
- Firstly, why insane + if there’s no insane? o.o
- 00:01:939 (1,2) – I’d ctrl+G these tbh, idk why but it looks better to me. (not both, one at a time xD)
- 00:04:465 (1) – Another double reverse asdjfasdf. I won’t mention any more but I strongly recommend changing these as they play weird and you map them to notes that could be better to play if they were clicked.
- 00:08:097 (2,3) – Inconsistent DS.
- 00:10:781 (1,2) – What is this massive jump for? o.o Consider nerfing?
- 00:22:781 (2,4) – Unsightly overlap. ;-;
- 00:27:833 (2,3) – Blanket?
- 00:29:096 (5,6,1,2) – These all overlap somehow. Maybe revise how you placed things in this part?
- 00:35:096 (2) – Misses piano on the red tick. Feels weird to play tbh, I’d end the slider on red rather than blue. I get that you’re mapping the vocals but this rhythm choice is questionable. x.x
- 00:37:623 (2,3) – Blanket!
- 00:41:412 (3,4,1,2,3,4) – Aaa this part screwed me up so much. If anything it should be spaced higher at the beginning and less towards the end since at the beginning the piano is more intense. Either way I didn’t like how that played when I tested it.
- 00:42:202 (4,1) – Inconsistent DS, unless it’s supposed to be a jump, in that case space it slightly more imo.
- 00:45:360 (3,5) – Blanket!
- 00:49:623 (7,8) – Wha? A triple would be fine here.
- 00:51:675 (5,6,7,8,9) – These jumps are pretty big for this section’s intensity. Nerf?
- 00:53:412 (4,5,6,7) – Horrible flow, will nearly always cause a combo break. In fact I might say it’s unplayable, but idk about that. What I would do: https://puu.sh/rCNUe/8f1a2edf8e.mp4
- All through the kiai time there are some flow breaks at the end of sliders where you have to stop to click a circle. I feel it plays weird and doesn’t really match the song very well. I’d consider moving those circles somewhere else.
- 01:03:517 (5,6) – Overlap. ;-;
- 01:10:149 (1,2,3,4,5,6) – About these… 01:10:465 (2,4) stack 4 with the end of 2. 01:10:465 (2,3) blanket these two? 01:11:097 (4,5) blanket these as well? 01:11:097 (4,6) stack 6 with 4’s end in a way that 01:11:412 (5,6) are symmetrical? This is hard to explain but in the end I get something like this: https://puu.sh/rCOah/d3fdea18aa.mp4
- 01:30:360 (7) – Now… I really don’t wanna pick on this because it’s really good but this: https://puu.sh/rCOcL/08ba8173c0.png . This just… idk it triggers me. You could also extend it to 01:32:886
Nowa’s Flower
Nowa’s Flower
- 00:13:781 (2) – Nazi blanket~
- 00:15:833 (1) – Removing this note would make this 00:15:991 (2,3,4) easier to play. (Also there’s no sound on that note. :3)
- 00:21:439 (2) – I’d lower this to even 10% volume.
- 00:32:096 – Note here?
- 00:41:412 (2,3,4,5) – Pretty big jumps for such a calm section. ._. Also 00:42:044 (1) why?
- 00:50:886 (4,2) – You could stack these.
- 01:27:754 (1) - https://puu.sh/rCOsG/32e044d9f2.png ?
- 01:30:360 (1) – Why reverse this? It looks weird if the reverse sits there. Maybe make the ending stand out a little more? Up to you really, I don’t think it looks too good. ._.
Good luck!