wajinshu wrote:

Some nazi :d
~Hard~
00:28:910 (4,5) - A little overlap with the accuracy meter (if enabled) :d

1. Es bastante innecesario tener dos Timing Points al inicio, ya que la única razón por la cual los haz añadido es debido a los cambios de SV en la ultima dificultad, esto se soluciona fácilmente con un Offset negativo.
   En este caso lo mas factible seria usar: -4985 para evitar que con el modo Nightcore suene de manera de-sincronizada, recuerda re-colocar todo de nuevo ya que con el cambio del Offset es probable que algunas lineas y notas queden Unsnapped. (Así que ya sabes que hacer).
2. 00:08:260 - Que te parece añadir un Finish aquí en todas las dificultades para mantener la consistencia, ya que en el fondo se escucha un sonido de énfasis ademas de que la voz es bastante notable en este punto en especifico.
3. 00:09:819 - Lo mismo.
4. 00:00:662 - En realidad no me molestan en absoluto los sonidos Soft pero estoy bastante seguro de que estas notas sonarían mucho mejor con el Whistle Normal, así que podrías usar la herramienta Addtions para eso sin necesidad de cambiar a Sampleset Normal.

1. 00:27:351 - En lo personal no es gran cosa, pero al parecer estas siguiendo el segundo sonido en esta parte cuando en la canción sucede lo contrario, ya que estas ignorando el sonido anterior lo cual puede ser un poco confuso para los jugadores no experimentados, así que me gustaría que intentaras algo como esto en su lugar. (Un cambio de patrón tampoco seria mala idea.)

1. 00:26:183 (5) - Se te olvido añadir un combo en este circulo, es la única dificultad la cual ignora completamente el cambio de estrofa.

• 00:03:585 (3,4,5) - 00:06:702 (4,5,6) - 00:12:741 (2,3) - 00:16:053 (4,5,6) - 00:19:170 (4,5,6) - Te aconsejo reducir el Spacing de estas notas un poco debido a que no hay necesidad de resaltar o crear Mini-Jumps en una dificultad como esta, ademas de que es un poco incomodo de mover el Mouse por el cambio repentino entre esas notas.

1. 00:01:149 - ¿Que te parece silenciar el final de este Slider? Suena mucho mejor con el volumen bajo en esta parte. (Volumen de 5% o 10% quedarían perfecto).
2. 00:02:514 - Al revisar la dificultad varias veces me he percatado de que en algunas partes eres consistente al seguir las líricas pero en algunas no lo cual es un poco extraño ¿No lo crees? ¿Que opinas sobre usar este ritmo aquí?
3. 00:25:793 (6) - Si escuchas con atención te daras cuenta que el sonido 1/6 sigue siendo constante despues de haberlo terminado un poco antes, así que te recomiendo aumentar una repetición mas a este Slider.
4. 00:02:709 - Aquí esta siendo ignorada completamente la voz cuando 00:05:825 - en esta parte si fue asignada.
5. 00:05:144 - De hecho en esta parte podrias añadir un Stream sin problema alguno, hay sonidos bastantes notables en 1/4 si escuchas con cuidado.
6. 00:12:449 - Tal vez un triple encajaría perfecto aquí. (Creo que ya entendiste a lo que me refiero.)
7. 00:10:598 (1,2,3,4,5) - Genial.

Gero wrote:

Mod incoming.

Gero wrote:

In this case the offset can fit in -4985 so Nightcore Mod won't desynchronize.

1. 00:09:820 (4,1) - Blanket could be improved here ;w;
2. 00:12:157 (2) - This shape can be made softer if the first point were moved a bit to the left, something like that: http://puu.sh/rA0kG/ef05f1148e.jpg
3. 00:27:352 (1,2) - Would feel so better if they were aligned in the grid symmetrically http://puu.sh/rA03q/0173d9db5c.jpg Apart from that, I feel that 00:29:495 (3) - would feel better as an 3/4 slider with/without a reverse, while with the reverse would probably break your consistency of finish the diff in the same spot while withotu would feel questionable as the gap to (4). It would get something like that and I am honestly not sure about it XD http://puu.sh/rA0el/4f9eea156f.jpg.

1. 00:29:495 (1) - Same issue about the Easy, but on Normal, it can be made with no worries. I recommend you short this slider to 3/4 as it feels a pretty much weird rhythm ignoring that strong beat in the blue tick.

Hazu- wrote:

Revisa bien los hitsounds en 00:10:599 - No coinciden en Normal, Hard e Insane
/me hides

Underforest wrote:

Hazu- wrote:

Revisa bien los hitsounds en 00:10:599 - No coinciden en Normal, Hard e Insane
/me hides

yo veo bien todo

Gero wrote:

~ Bubbled ~

1. バージョン should be romanised as Version, any other references?
2. Why Kyoko Narumi? Surname should be Narumi.
3. Why not MeniMeni ManiMani? As shown in p/5516651 .

1. 00:21:508 (1,2) - The rhythms around here seem to be following vocals mostly as what I've understood. Leaving 00:21:800 in the slide and expressing 00:21:898 didn't felt natural accordingly, even there is a real beat over there. If you intended a transition of rhythm, then 00:21:898 could've been done along a hitsound to support the music. But actually I think there could be a better way to express the vocal lines better without creating some polarity issues.

1. 00:12:157 (1,2) - The beat of (2) feels pretty weak. Are you sure about this jump?

1. official romanised can't be found so i think バージョン can be romanised as ver. cus TVversion make it looks somewhat silly , that was all my assumption
2. i didn't care about the surname name so that was my mistake , https://twitter.com/narumi_kyoko should be narumi kyoko tbh
3. no space for menimenimanimani cus i stick with what said at the song list on album cover , not the album title

CelsiusLK wrote:

1. no space for menimenimanimani cus i stick with what said at the song list on album cover , not the album title

CelsiusLK wrote:

1. official romanised can't be found so i think バージョン can be romanised as ver. cus TVversion make it looks somewhat silly , that was all my assumption

1. 00:29:495 (2) - Fairly speaking, having two completely different sounds on the same object is not the best idea when it comes to mapping. I do get the idea of simplifying rhythms due to this being the lowest difficulty in the set, although I find it weird. Might just be, though, but using a different rhythm is recommended.

1. 00:10:599 (1,2,3) - Clicking this perfectly can be a bit tricky for newbie players as you only use it once throughout the whole difficulty. I'd find it more suitable if you make (1) a repeat slider and then adding a circle on 00:11:378 - . I doubt someone will tell you anything about not mapping the other hit on the blue tick.

1. 00:22:287 (2) - Really weird to see that being mapped as a 1/4 repeat slider when on the highest difficulty it's just a common 1/2 slider without any repeat. Taking the idea of the Insane wouldn't actually be bad and it'd make it consistent throughout the difficulties mentioned.

1. 00:02:417 (3,4,1) - Mostly something personal, but the flow here seems a tad linear. As I stated, it's really personal, although here are some variations that will work a bit better and will add some emphasis/less clunkiness to the current pattern: one two. That's, of course, without changing the current placement of the following patterns, because you can do soooo many things with this haha.
2. 00:03:781 (1,2,3,1) - Tip: Whenever you do a back-and-forth, try to make it according to the song. Right there, what would've made sense is stacking/overlapping 00:03:781 (1,3) - for vocals instead of the rhythm change on 00:03:976 (2,1) - . Also, now that we are in this pattern, visually speaking, 00:05:729 (6,1,2) - that flow is not that good. Why "visually", though? In a way it does affect gameplay, you know... players will most likely expect (2) to be on the top-right-side of the screen rather than linearly snapped to (6). Try placing (2) on x292 y34 (for example) and see the difference! Or even x429 y88.
3. 00:05:534 (5,6,1) - This is linear as well, even more linear than the very first pattern I mentioned. Although, with the current placement I can only suggest you to place (1) on top of (5).
4. 00:08:164 - Adding a circle there would fit both vocals and the little audible drum.
5. 00:21:508 (1,2) - Since you hadn't really used any variation like this in the whole map (maybe I'm mistaken), it'd be cool to make (1) a 1/2 slider in order to avoid players from hitting 100s on (2).
6. 00:29:495 (1,2,3) - Oh, minor, placing NCs on (2) and (3) might work to indicate they are no longer 1/2 patterns.

CelsiusLK wrote:

idk why the japanese tiltle メニメニマニマニ (TVバージョン) doesn't use the space but if the japanese title doesn't use space I would not use the space for romanised too to make them consistent
well if the romanised use space , should the japanese title use space too or ?

anyways what would be the best metadata to use ?

1. First object on Easy since it started on a very weird angle.
2. Hitsounds across difficulties for consistency.
3. A pattern in Normal, rhythm was kind of vague.
4. Couple of things on Insane, some distances to make it less overdone-y.