Hazu- wrote:

Revisa bien los hitsounds en 00:10:599 - No coinciden en Normal, Hard e Insane
/me hides

Underforest wrote:

Hazu- wrote:

Revisa bien los hitsounds en 00:10:599 - No coinciden en Normal, Hard e Insane
/me hides

yo veo bien todo

Gero wrote:

~ Bubbled ~

1. バージョン should be romanised as Version, any other references?
2. Why Kyoko Narumi? Surname should be Narumi.
3. Why not MeniMeni ManiMani? As shown in p/5516651 .

1. 00:21:508 (1,2) - The rhythms around here seem to be following vocals mostly as what I've understood. Leaving 00:21:800 in the slide and expressing 00:21:898 didn't felt natural accordingly, even there is a real beat over there. If you intended a transition of rhythm, then 00:21:898 could've been done along a hitsound to support the music. But actually I think there could be a better way to express the vocal lines better without creating some polarity issues.

1. 00:12:157 (1,2) - The beat of (2) feels pretty weak. Are you sure about this jump?

1. official romanised can't be found so i think バージョン can be romanised as ver. cus TVversion make it looks somewhat silly , that was all my assumption
2. i didn't care about the surname name so that was my mistake , https://twitter.com/narumi_kyoko should be narumi kyoko tbh
3. no space for menimenimanimani cus i stick with what said at the song list on album cover , not the album title

CelsiusLK wrote:

1. no space for menimenimanimani cus i stick with what said at the song list on album cover , not the album title

CelsiusLK wrote:

1. official romanised can't be found so i think バージョン can be romanised as ver. cus TVversion make it looks somewhat silly , that was all my assumption

1. 00:29:495 (2) - Fairly speaking, having two completely different sounds on the same object is not the best idea when it comes to mapping. I do get the idea of simplifying rhythms due to this being the lowest difficulty in the set, although I find it weird. Might just be, though, but using a different rhythm is recommended.

1. 00:10:599 (1,2,3) - Clicking this perfectly can be a bit tricky for newbie players as you only use it once throughout the whole difficulty. I'd find it more suitable if you make (1) a repeat slider and then adding a circle on 00:11:378 - . I doubt someone will tell you anything about not mapping the other hit on the blue tick.

1. 00:22:287 (2) - Really weird to see that being mapped as a 1/4 repeat slider when on the highest difficulty it's just a common 1/2 slider without any repeat. Taking the idea of the Insane wouldn't actually be bad and it'd make it consistent throughout the difficulties mentioned.

1. 00:02:417 (3,4,1) - Mostly something personal, but the flow here seems a tad linear. As I stated, it's really personal, although here are some variations that will work a bit better and will add some emphasis/less clunkiness to the current pattern: one two. That's, of course, without changing the current placement of the following patterns, because you can do soooo many things with this haha.
2. 00:03:781 (1,2,3,1) - Tip: Whenever you do a back-and-forth, try to make it according to the song. Right there, what would've made sense is stacking/overlapping 00:03:781 (1,3) - for vocals instead of the rhythm change on 00:03:976 (2,1) - . Also, now that we are in this pattern, visually speaking, 00:05:729 (6,1,2) - that flow is not that good. Why "visually", though? In a way it does affect gameplay, you know... players will most likely expect (2) to be on the top-right-side of the screen rather than linearly snapped to (6). Try placing (2) on x292 y34 (for example) and see the difference! Or even x429 y88.
3. 00:05:534 (5,6,1) - This is linear as well, even more linear than the very first pattern I mentioned. Although, with the current placement I can only suggest you to place (1) on top of (5).
4. 00:08:164 - Adding a circle there would fit both vocals and the little audible drum.
5. 00:21:508 (1,2) - Since you hadn't really used any variation like this in the whole map (maybe I'm mistaken), it'd be cool to make (1) a 1/2 slider in order to avoid players from hitting 100s on (2).
6. 00:29:495 (1,2,3) - Oh, minor, placing NCs on (2) and (3) might work to indicate they are no longer 1/2 patterns.

CelsiusLK wrote:

idk why the japanese tiltle メニメニマニマニ (TVバージョン) doesn't use the space but if the japanese title doesn't use space I would not use the space for romanised too to make them consistent
well if the romanised use space , should the japanese title use space too or ?

anyways what would be the best metadata to use ?

1. First object on Easy since it started on a very weird angle.
2. Hitsounds across difficulties for consistency.
3. A pattern in Normal, rhythm was kind of vague.
4. Couple of things on Insane, some distances to make it less overdone-y.

HappyRocket88 wrote:

Congratulations for first insane ranked! \w/

Sotarks wrote:

HappyRocket88 wrote:

Congratulations for first insane ranked! \w/

half tv size tho xd