Nyantiaz wrote:

ok

Easy:
00:00:662 - maybe remove this slider? explained reasons above

Normal:
nothing wrong with this! very nice job

Hard:
nothing wrong with this either! awesome!

Insane (or party WHATEVER):
00:12:936 - space this stream a little less ok

and nice! Very few issues, pretty awesome map! liar

thanks ♥

hi underforest

omg 'party' nm mod for follower on instagram DO IT


this is a nice mapset I like it, no GDs, it would be your first ranked map with no GDs if you get this ranked, right?

well nm because so short why not


not gonna shoot star though, I'm saving up my stars instead of shooting (look at my sassou toujou!Neko-san map please, spammed 53 kudosu on it already)


--Easy--

00:05:923 (3,4) - this angel change is quite intense for an easy or you could just move (4) up idk but do something please

00:07:481 (1,2) - curve these two for nazi aesthetical flow reasons
00:19:949 (1,2) - ^
00:25:403 (4,1) - I know there's quite a bit of spacing between these notes but still don't stack maybe idk
00:27:546 (1) - starting on a red tick in easy HMMM IRREGULAR RYTHYM WHY DON'T YOU CHECK PISHIFATS CHANNEL YOU NOOB
00:27:546 (1,2) - holy shet more irregular rythym
00:27:546 (1) - start this slider on 00:27:351 - here please

--Normal--

00:00:662 (1) - maybe I wouldn't suggest mapping the whistle in the beginning, if you are just make it one circle please
00:02:806 (1) - omg, curve this for flow and aesthetics more nazi suggestions
00:05:144 (3,1) - this flow and look why so many nazi suggestions
00:17:612 (3,1) - MORE NAZI SUGGESTIONS THIS FLOW IS HARD
00:21:508 (1,2,3) - make 1 and 3 the same shape



--Hard--

00:00:662 (1,2) - again I just don't like the idea of mapping this whistle, and if your gonna map it make it one circle 00:00:662 - here and make 00:00:857 (2) - that a 1/2 slider please
00:06:605 (3,4) - more spacing?
00:08:260 (3,4) - curve this please PLEASE PLEASE
00:11:183 (2) - put the middle anchor in the middle of the slider and MORE IRREGULAR RYTHYM YOU NOOB
00:19:073 (3,4) - again curve these please
00:23:845 (3,4) - again curve these it plays so WEIRD
00:25:403 (4,5) - more sv on this maybe?


--Party--

I honestly don't think 'party' is a good name but maybe 'loli' or 'kawaii' would fir better because of the bg and song idk

00:07:092 (2,1) - I think blanket here would be too hard
00:25:793 (6) - would play better if middle anchor was taken out




Good Luck

Whirl wrote:

hi underforest

omg 'party'


this is a nice mapset I like it, no GDs, it would be your first ranked map with no GDs if you get this ranked, right?

yes, this is actually... going for rank

okay

you got a star from me


because your a great kind person




and also I rich with stars asf

Whirl wrote:

(you fricking killed me in pm)

yeah i did

will be on your mod soon

Whirl wrote:

hi underforest

omg 'party' nm mod for follower on instagram DO IT


this is a nice mapset I like it, no GDs, it would be your first ranked map with no GDs if you get this ranked, right?

well nm because so short why not


--Easy--

00:05:923 (3,4) - this angel change is quite intense for an easy is not very very hard xd

look at this if you don't know what the frick i'm talking about

or you could just move (4) up idk but do something please

00:07:481 (1,2) - curve these two for nazi aesthetical flow reasons is not nazi, i don't found nothing wrong here
00:19:949 (1,2) - ^ same
00:25:403 (4,1) - I know there's quite a bit of spacing between these notes but still don't stack maybe idk stack is allowed for this case
00:27:546 (1) - starting on a red tick in easy HMMM IRREGULAR RYTHYM WHY DON'T YOU CHECK PISHIFATS CHANNEL YOU NOOB i'm following vocal
00:27:546 (1,2) - holy shet more irregular rythym nope
00:27:546 (1) - start this slider on 00:27:351 - here please no need

--Normal--

00:00:662 (1) - maybe I wouldn't suggest mapping the whistle in the beginning, if you are just make it one circle please explained reasons of why I can't do this
00:02:806 (1) - omg, curve this for flow and aesthetics more nazi suggestions fixed
00:05:144 (3,1) - this flow and look why so many nazi suggestions is going rectal so no problem with it
00:17:612 (3,1) - MORE NAZI SUGGESTIONS THIS FLOW IS HARD fixed
00:21:508 (1,2,3) - make 1 and 3 the same shape ok



--Hard--

00:00:662 (1,2) - again I just don't like the idea of mapping this whistle, and if your gonna map it make it one circle 00:00:662 - here and make 00:00:857 (2) - that a 1/2 slider please it doesn't fit for it
00:06:605 (3,4) - more spacing? i'll think about it
00:08:260 (3,4) - curve this please PLEASE PLEASE ok
00:11:183 (2) - put the middle anchor in the middle of the slider and MORE IRREGULAR RYTHYM YOU NOOB o... k
00:19:073 (3,4) - again curve these please no need
00:23:845 (3,4) - again curve these it plays so WEIRD same
00:25:403 (4,5) - more sv on this maybe? i'll think about it


--Party--

I honestly don't think 'party' is a good name but maybe 'loli' or 'kawaii' would fir better because of the bg and song idk resolved via irc

00:07:092 (2,1) - I think blanket here would be too hard why? it haves a really good flow imo
00:25:793 (6) - would play better if middle anchor was taken out intentional




Good Luck

thanks for the mod ♥

just me being a nazi xd

partyparty

00:00:857 - try something like this

LOL that's it.

fixed so that's why gave kudosu

meni


[Party]

1. 00:02:319 (2,3) - ctrl+h/make it face the direction the slider is going. feels weird it went the other way around.
2. 00:05:825 (5,1) - this one however, tilt it some 20 degrees ccw so it doesn't look wonky.... or prolly that's just me
3. actually these two^ applies to all the slider+2 1/4 circles you have but i dun wanna tell all of them one-by-one.
4. 00:21:508 (1,2,1,2,3) - not sure how can i best explain this but this section feels bizarre and it took me a few tries to process it right. this kind of "vacancy" when the entire diff has been mostly dense(esp in 00:10:598 (1,2,3,4,5) - where the music is also just as bumpy) feels weird. maybe turn 00:21:508 (1) - into a 1/2 slider, pull the end of 00:21:799 (2) - back to the blue tick before it and then, put a 1/4 slider(or 2 circles?) on 00:22:092 - ....or prolly that's just me as well

[Hard]

1. 00:08:650 (4) - nothing necessary but maybe move this wee bit up to level it with (3)
2. 00:11:183 (2,3) - mayb NC this separately as well since they land on similarly strong beats.
3. and speaking similar beats remove the clap on 00:11:767 (3) -
4. 00:22:286 (2) - kinda doubt this since there's nothing in the music that suggest for a 1/4 but wtvr
5. 00:28:131 (3,5) - maybe you could also NC these as well

dunno if these are of any help but eh ¯\_(ツ)_/¯

domSaur wrote:

meni


[Party]

1. 00:02:319 (2,3) - ctrl+h/make it face the direction the slider is going. feels weird it went the other way around. intended
2. 00:05:825 (5,1) - this one however, tilt it some 20 degrees ccw so it doesn't look wonky.... or prolly that's just me ok
3. actually these two^ applies to all the slider+2 1/4 circles you have but i dun wanna tell all of them one-by-one.
4. 00:21:508 (1,2,1,2,3) - not sure how can i best explain this but this section feels bizarre and it took me a few tries to process it right. this kind of "vacancy" when the entire diff has been mostly dense(esp in 00:10:598 (1,2,3,4,5) - where the music is also just as bumpy) feels weird. maybe turn 00:21:508 (1) - into a 1/2 slider, pull the end of 00:21:799 (2) - back to the blue tick before it and then, put a 1/4 slider(or 2 circles?) on 00:22:092 - ....or prolly that's just me as well intended too

[Hard]

1. 00:08:650 (4) - nothing necessary but maybe move this wee bit up to level it with (3) not fix cause rhythm dense
2. 00:11:183 (2,3) - mayb NC this separately as well since they land on similarly strong beats. it doesn't look nice
3. and speaking similar beats remove the clap on 00:11:767 (3) - intended too
4. 00:22:286 (2) - kinda doubt this since there's nothing in the music that suggest for a 1/4 but wtvr listen on 25-50% playback
5. 00:28:131 (3,5) - maybe you could also NC these as well intended

dunno if these are of any help but eh ¯\_(ツ)_/¯

thanks ♥

nice bg

Man i didn't expect you did very well on insanes, even you said that you're inexperienced with it

KuranteMelodii wrote:

Man i didn't expect you did very well on insanes, even you said that you're inexperienced with it

lul ty

[easy]

1. 00:00:662 (1) - isn't opening with 1/2 slider a bit too surprise for beginner ?
2. 00:29:494 (2,3) - I think doing something like this work better for beginner
   SPOILER

   

[normal]

1. 00:09:819 (3) - I think place this right after (2) tail would make flow better , try move to around x188 y56
2. 00:29:494 (4) - nc cus 2nd downbeat so it consistent with your nc pattern previously ?

[hard]

1. 00:09:819 (3,4) - why not try this rhythm so it can cover the snare beat there too ?
   SPOILER

   
   
   looks solid but can add some jumps to make better spread with insane
   

[insane]

1. 00:03:195 (2,3,4) - kinda hard to catch with the current structure , try move to around x408 y288 ? i think that would make flow better
2. 00:05:533 (4,5,1) - the thing you do at the tail is a bit off imo lol , try adjust like this ?
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:07:871 (2,3) - a bit to much spacing for the low vocal there , i think maybe move 00:08:066 (3) - to around x188 y24 would be better also would make 00:08:066 (3,1) - has higher spacing than 00:07:871 (2,3) - which make more sense with the song here
4. 00:09:819 (1,2,3) - huh? ctrl+h and readjust so it will flow better ? current feel a bit off imo
5. 00:10:209 (3,4) - can reduce spacing here a bit so it make 00:10:403 (4,1) - a bit bigger spacing which will make the impact on (1) feel better

currently insane has lots of jumps while hard has none so you can work a bit to improve on spread there by adding some jumps in hard
after you fix that , try poke me back

fixed everything except this

CelsiusLK wrote:

[easy]

1. 00:00:662 (1) - isn't opening with 1/2 slider a bit too surprise for beginner ? it isn't and actually I can't convert this to a circle or drain time will drop to 29 seconds (unrankable)
   

are you sure the title is （TV ver.）

i found the screenshot from the album here

and it shows メニメニマニマニ (TVバージョン) instead

so shouldn't the it be


the "ver." there was obviously a translated of バージョン since there is no official romanised (I guess)

might be not 100% sure lol tho

lol you're right, changed

yea

CelsiusLK wrote:

yea

thank you :3

Some nazi :d
~Hard~
00:28:910 (4,5) - A little overlap with the accuracy meter (if enabled) :d

wajinshu wrote:

Some nazi :d
~Hard~
00:28:910 (4,5) - A little overlap with the accuracy meter (if enabled) :d

I honestly don't think it's a problem tho

;w;

Hola, vengo de #modreqs.

General

1. Es bastante innecesario tener dos Timing Points al inicio, ya que la única razón por la cual los haz añadido es debido a los cambios de SV en la ultima dificultad, esto se soluciona fácilmente con un Offset negativo.
   En este caso lo mas factible seria usar: -4985 para evitar que con el modo Nightcore suene de manera de-sincronizada, recuerda re-colocar todo de nuevo ya que con el cambio del Offset es probable que algunas lineas y notas queden Unsnapped. (Así que ya sabes que hacer).
2. 00:08:260 - Que te parece añadir un Finish aquí en todas las dificultades para mantener la consistencia, ya que en el fondo se escucha un sonido de énfasis ademas de que la voz es bastante notable en este punto en especifico.
3. 00:09:819 - Lo mismo.
4. 00:00:662 - En realidad no me molestan en absoluto los sonidos Soft pero estoy bastante seguro de que estas notas sonarían mucho mejor con el Whistle Normal, así que podrías usar la herramienta Addtions para eso sin necesidad de cambiar a Sampleset Normal.

Easy

1. 00:27:351 - En lo personal no es gran cosa, pero al parecer estas siguiendo el segundo sonido en esta parte cuando en la canción sucede lo contrario, ya que estas ignorando el sonido anterior lo cual puede ser un poco confuso para los jugadores no experimentados, así que me gustaría que intentaras algo como esto en su lugar. (Un cambio de patrón tampoco seria mala idea.)

Normal

Te recomiendo darle un resnap a esta dificultad debido a que hay dos sliders que están Unsnapped por 1 o 2 ms.

1. 00:26:183 (5) - Se te olvido añadir un combo en este circulo, es la única dificultad la cual ignora completamente el cambio de estrofa.

Hard

• 00:03:585 (3,4,5) - 00:06:702 (4,5,6) - 00:12:741 (2,3) - 00:16:053 (4,5,6) - 00:19:170 (4,5,6) - Te aconsejo reducir el Spacing de estas notas un poco debido a que no hay necesidad de resaltar o crear Mini-Jumps en una dificultad como esta, ademas de que es un poco incomodo de mover el Mouse por el cambio repentino entre esas notas.

Insane

1. 00:01:149 - ¿Que te parece silenciar el final de este Slider? Suena mucho mejor con el volumen bajo en esta parte. (Volumen de 5% o 10% quedarían perfecto).
2. 00:02:514 - Al revisar la dificultad varias veces me he percatado de que en algunas partes eres consistente al seguir las líricas pero en algunas no lo cual es un poco extraño ¿No lo crees? ¿Que opinas sobre usar este ritmo aquí?
3. 00:25:793 (6) - Si escuchas con atención te daras cuenta que el sonido 1/6 sigue siendo constante despues de haberlo terminado un poco antes, así que te recomiendo aumentar una repetición mas a este Slider.
4. 00:02:709 - Aquí esta siendo ignorada completamente la voz cuando 00:05:825 - en esta parte si fue asignada.
5. 00:05:144 - De hecho en esta parte podrias añadir un Stream sin problema alguno, hay sonidos bastantes notables en 1/4 si escuchas con cuidado.
6. 00:12:449 - Tal vez un triple encajaría perfecto aquí. (Creo que ya entendiste a lo que me refiero.)
7. 00:10:598 (1,2,3,4,5) - Genial.

Me gustaría que revises con más detalle la ultima dificultad, hay muchos ritmos que son ignorados y otros que si son asignados, lo mismo sucede con tus patrones de NCs (Hay muchos patrones de 2 y algunos hasta 8). Y por obvias razones esto puede traer problemas a la hora de estar en la Qualified Section.

Llámame cuando hayas hecho los cambios necesarios.

Gero wrote:

Mod incoming.

great

I heard a bubble

arregle todo el mod e hice lo posible para seguir el ritmo de las vocales, mas le subi el ar a 9 por los streams

Just posting about the offset for further BNs

Gero wrote:

In this case the offset can fit in -4985 so Nightcore Mod won't desynchronize.

Insane
00:25:404 (1,2,3,4) - the pattern is very easily misreadable and the spacing reflect the rhythm at all

fixed

[Easy]

1. 00:09:820 (4,1) - Blanket could be improved here ;w;
2. 00:12:157 (2) - This shape can be made softer if the first point were moved a bit to the left, something like that: http://puu.sh/rA0kG/ef05f1148e.jpg
3. 00:27:352 (1,2) - Would feel so better if they were aligned in the grid symmetrically http://puu.sh/rA03q/0173d9db5c.jpg Apart from that, I feel that 00:29:495 (3) - would feel better as an 3/4 slider with/without a reverse, while with the reverse would probably break your consistency of finish the diff in the same spot while withotu would feel questionable as the gap to (4). It would get something like that and I am honestly not sure about it XD http://puu.sh/rA0el/4f9eea156f.jpg.

[Normal]

1. 00:29:495 (1) - Same issue about the Easy, but on Normal, it can be made with no worries. I recommend you short this slider to 3/4 as it feels a pretty much weird rhythm ignoring that strong beat in the blue tick.

I am aware those are minor things but they make the map feel a bit better. Overall it is a good set, good luck with it!

fixed all except first point on easy

just saying that i changed hard ar from 7 to 7.5 as suggested gero in-game
map should be ready now

Revisa bien los hitsounds en 00:10:599 - No coinciden en Normal, Hard e Insane
/me hides

Hazu- wrote:

Revisa bien los hitsounds en 00:10:599 - No coinciden en Normal, Hard e Insane
/me hides

yo veo bien todo

Underforest wrote:

Hazu- wrote:

Revisa bien los hitsounds en 00:10:599 - No coinciden en Normal, Hard e Insane
/me hides

yo veo bien todo

Insane 00:10:891 - Hay whistle y finish
Normal 00:10:891 - Solo whistle
----
Insane 00:11:476 - Hay whistle y finish
Hard y Normal 00:11:476 - Solo whistle
----
Insane 00:11:768 - Hay whistle, finish y clap
Normal 00:11:768 - Hay whistle y finish

xd
Quizá se me pasó alguno mas, pero bueh

tal vez no actualizaste el mapa, reactualizalo

Gero wrote:

~ Bubbled ~

thanks

general
the first slider on easy and normal are a bit noisy due to sliderslide sound , solution : add silent sliderslide for them

hard
00:23:066 (4) - you forget to nc , solution : nc

insane
00:02:417 (3,4) - flow weird and not structure like 00:05:534 (5,6) - etc , solution : move 00:02:612 (4) - to x144 y204
00:24:625 (1,2,3,4,1) - jumps is really large compare with others jumps in this diff , no need to make jumps this big to emphasis the intense of the instrument here it will just make thing unbalance , solution : decrease spacing

others diffs are fine , solution : don't do anything to others diffs

you finished reply to mods , solution : call me back