Hello~
NM. (Requested I look at our Collab, and I decided to look at the taiko diff too. Since taiko modders are kind of hard to find. ;w; )
Keep in mind, these are my suggestions, don't change something I mentioned unless it seems good to you!
NM. (Requested I look at our Collab, and I decided to look at the taiko diff too. Since taiko modders are kind of hard to find. ;w; )
Keep in mind, these are my suggestions, don't change something I mentioned unless it seems good to you!
Yatagarasu
00:06:704 (4) - Unsnapped object.
00:49:058 (2) - Unsnapped object.
00:30:352 (3) - Move elsewhere, this rhythm has been mainly jumps until now, and a double here plays weirdly.
00:36:705 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - this looks really ugly. Overlapping doublet on such a short slider, is rather hard to read. I suggest moving these to be in a more circular formation. ( 00:37:411 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Move these elsewhere, basically.)
00:38:117 (4,5,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Move these in a circular formation, following the above point too.
00:38:823 (1,2,1,2) - Change the rhythm here. This would be a good place for a stream, since it gets more intense than the previous part. (The same pattern for something different is weird.)
00:56:999 (9) - Move this to underlap with the tail of 00:56:470 (8) - This looks more aesthically pleasing.
01:03:529 (1) - Fix this blanket. It's barely bigger than the approach circle.
01:20:117 (11,12) - Change these to something else. Like a stream. The rhythm changes here, making it more intense. It seems odd to have it play the same as 01:19:764 (9,10) -
00:49:058 (2) - Unsnapped object.
00:30:352 (3) - Move elsewhere, this rhythm has been mainly jumps until now, and a double here plays weirdly.
00:36:705 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - this looks really ugly. Overlapping doublet on such a short slider, is rather hard to read. I suggest moving these to be in a more circular formation. ( 00:37:411 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Move these elsewhere, basically.)
00:38:117 (4,5,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Move these in a circular formation, following the above point too.
00:38:823 (1,2,1,2) - Change the rhythm here. This would be a good place for a stream, since it gets more intense than the previous part. (The same pattern for something different is weird.)
00:56:999 (9) - Move this to underlap with the tail of 00:56:470 (8) - This looks more aesthically pleasing.
01:03:529 (1) - Fix this blanket. It's barely bigger than the approach circle.
01:20:117 (11,12) - Change these to something else. Like a stream. The rhythm changes here, making it more intense. It seems odd to have it play the same as 01:19:764 (9,10) -
Invective's Kantan
00:51:529 - Add d, the pause here is rather boring, and you have a change in rhythm approaching, so it's best to have some kind of note leading into it.
00:58:588 (23) - Delete, this isn't following the main rhythm. It's just following the kicks in the background, and sounds off when try to follow that anyways.
01:09:882 (37) - Change to d, the sound here is higher pitch than at 01:09:176 (36) -
01:21:176 (51) - Delete, this note doesn't really follow any rhythm. Also there's a lot of k's here.
01:25:411 - Add a d, the energy of the song is rising. Feels empty when there's nothing to compensate for that.
02:09:882 (125) - Change to k. You've used k every other time this sound occures.
02:59:293 (194) - Change to D. Like i said above, you've used D every other time this sound occured. As well as, there's a finish sound in the background here.
03:06:352 (205) - Change to k. The background sound is a different pitch here, than at 03:05:999 (204) -
00:58:588 (23) - Delete, this isn't following the main rhythm. It's just following the kicks in the background, and sounds off when try to follow that anyways.
01:09:882 (37) - Change to d, the sound here is higher pitch than at 01:09:176 (36) -
01:21:176 (51) - Delete, this note doesn't really follow any rhythm. Also there's a lot of k's here.
01:25:411 - Add a d, the energy of the song is rising. Feels empty when there's nothing to compensate for that.
02:09:882 (125) - Change to k. You've used k every other time this sound occures.
02:59:293 (194) - Change to D. Like i said above, you've used D every other time this sound occured. As well as, there's a finish sound in the background here.
03:06:352 (205) - Change to k. The background sound is a different pitch here, than at 03:05:999 (204) -