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Em overall i think the map is at a decent standard, but it requires a lot of polishing and fixing the basics, like NC's but for a beginner this is actually great quality i have to say though, but to get to the ranking standards you will have to fix a lot. Like imo you lack note emphasis you just place notes randomly not thinking about what sound is behind them like for example - 02:41:720 (1,2,3,4,5) - listen to each sound on these notes, they are different right? so they deserver different spacing to emphasise them a lot more, do this and you will see great changes in your map
but hey every one has to start somewhere right?
Good luck from me in this set, hope you take my word of advice not negatively, but positively and it makes you want to fix everything and become better! I don't say things to annoy people even if it sometimes looks like it

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- Your BG image is at a resolution of 1117x768 which differs from the recommended size of 1366x768, in tha case i would recommend you finiding a new BG image, since i could edit it to fit the appropriate size but, the image then would look distorted as hell, and anyway the BG doesn't really mean anything in my eyes :/
- You need to add Combo Colours, again i would give you them but at the current state the BG image doesn't fit the appropriate sizes so i won't, if you find a new one fitting the resolutions, catch me IG and il give you them
- Your folder size is greater than 10mb which is greater than the allowed size for a map without video, a couple of your hitsounds are over 1mb, like either find new ones or try to compress them into a smaller size
- Consider changing the Audio lead in to 2000 (osu notepad and where audio lead in is change that there to 2000)
- Consider adding bookmarks, where a new section of the song comes up or anything similar to that place a bookamark, it helps sometimes when modders come to it (personally i don't use it, but that's what i read they are for so people might be using them
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- imo you have too much, like in this section 00:57:800 (1,2) - you overuse the whistle finish parts, but when a part like this 01:01:569 (5) - you dont use that hitsound even though it's well deserved. You need to be careful when placing hitsounds since overusing the same one over and over again will lessen its effect and make it annoying after a while
- 00:08:457 (3) - these whistles on every slider, please get rid of that jesus it kills the nice music enirely, if you wantto use hitsounded slider whistle use it on more inense parts >_>
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- 00:21:493 (1) - NC for swag, makes it look like a new nice section is coming up
- 00:26:363 (3) - NC
- 00:32:324 (5) - ^ like you get the idea every stronger longer section of the son deserves to get emphasised
- 01:01:569 (5) - NC (there's a lot of mistakes in your way of doing NC's, just keep doing NC's every section, aka i.e. the big white tick unless something different pops up or something that you want to emphasise more. I won't mention a Nc again, you need to go and scout your map for those mistakes, since if i point out all of them it'll just basiclly be 'backseat' mapping)
- 01:04:397 - insert a note here please don't start a spinner with such a strong sound to it
- 01:37:950 (1) - you might as well stack this with 01:37:243 (4) - placement wise looks way nicer imo
- 01:50:516 (4,1) - you could blanket this
- 02:04:887 (2,3,4,5,6) - em this doent fit here, i would consider changing this to sliders or notes that fit the sounds better rather than a stream, 02:04:966 (3) - since the sound here could maybe be emphasised by a 1/4 slider
- 02:09:050 (2) - jesus the hitsounds on this are so over used, i strongly recommend deleting these hitsounds on this slider and adding one at the start of the slider only, or using a less intense hitsound
- 02:20:359 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - does this huge spacing really fit the intensity of the song?
- 02:41:720 (1,2,3,4,5) - add some jumps here rather than ruining the music intensity by doing that >_>
- 02:44:547 (7,8,9,10) - ^
- 03:20:044 (8) - touches the HP bar fix this
- 03:49:259 (9) - this section onwards you miss some drum hits that are there, sometimes you mapped them sometimes you didnt :/
- 03:51:851 (8) - this is a 1/8 slider not 1/12 also end the slider at 03:53:029 -
- 04:46:589 (1) - you could stack this at 04:45:961 (5) - and make the stream start from that point rather than leaving it at a weird overlap
- 04:59:940 (6) - NC for a change in the section

Good luck from me in this set, hope you take my word of advice not negatively, but positively and it makes you want to fix everything and become better! I don't say things to annoy people even if it sometimes looks like it
